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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

sorry for short and ita late comment 😛


well not much Di you comment on one it's enough for me and it's not difficult for me Di as I often write my school or college friends name on it and yes there is nothing left but still it's my story so have to be some twist isn't it Di and no need to apologize Di you comment it's enough I don't mind about late comment so don't worry and at last thanks for wonderful comment Di.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 43
Awesome Awesome awesome...
Jalal's proposal and their dance..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 44
Another Beautiful and lovely update...all eyes on AkDha...
All are ready for the marriage of ja and Jo..
Well jalal made a good decision...
Mirza and Jo tease Ja..Ha ah..
Their kiss and song..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 45
Nice update Rashmi...
I just love the answer of(handsome face) samrat when his mother was going to slap him ..Ha ha..
Jodha ...a understandable lover...
Salima...a caring and worried lover...
Shivani and Mirza childish and cute...always ended in messing the house...
Ja and Abdul to Goa...😔
Is there some twist waiting for us Rashmi?
Something gonna happen in Goa...?I felt this during salima and Abdul convo..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Chapter 45

Nice update Rashmi...
I just love the answer of(handsome face) samrat when his mother was going to slap him ..Ha ha..
Jodha ...a understandable lover...
Salima...a caring and worried lover...
Shivani and Mirza childish and cute...always ended in messing the house...
Ja and Abdul to Goa...😔
Is there some twist waiting for us Rashmi?
Something gonna happen in Goa...?I felt this during salima and Abdul convo..

hey thanks for your wonderful comment Dear and don't worry there will nothing wrong happen with them okay but there is twist on way guys just wait dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 46
(after they left Jodha Salima Mirza Shivani left to college where Salima left to her class and Jodha Mirza Shivani goes to canteen and started waiting for there devil friends).

Mirza said : oh come on Jodha why are you sad they will be back in some day don't worry.

Jodha said : I am not worried Mirza it's just that after meeting with you all it is first time that I will not see him for few days that's why.
Shivani said : so just from now you started missing Jalal Bhai not bad.

Mirza said : wow what a love but Shivani will you miss me to like she is missing my Bro if I will stay away from you.

Shivani said : no never and why will I miss you idiot as I know you are not going anywhere.

Mirza said : what the hell you don't love me right.

(they were talking when Ajay Priya Ankit Shilpa Jack Rose comes there and hugged them first and wish good morning to each other then Ajay ask Mirza).

Ajay said : who don't love you Mirza.

Mirza said : hey you all come we were waiting for you all.

Priya said : yes we are here but leave all that tell me who don't love you.

Mirza said : Shivani.

Jack said : you are such a idiot you know I mean she propose you and confessed her love to you and you are saying she don't love you really you are stupid.

Mirza said : so when I ask her she will miss me like Jodha is missing my Bro so why deny it.

Rose said : what why Jodha what happen why are you missing him did you both had fight and he is staying away from you tell me.

Ankit said : yes what happen just yesterday he propose you and you spend time alone to isn't it. then what happen now.

Shilpa said : come on tell me did he hurt you if it's yes then we will not leave him for sure.

(listening there nonstop words she get angry but still with calm voice)>

Jodha said : guys guys take a break and give me time to answer youy then talk about hurting him.

(Samrat Aman Ajit Vivek Siya Manvi Nisha who comes there listen there talk sit besides them and then Samrat in worried voice).

Samrat said : then answer us why you look sad.

Jodha said : actually he and Abdul Bhai goes out for some case and don't know when they will come back so I was just missing him nothing much.

Vivek said : oh come on don't be sad if they will get to know then they will feel bad for you Jodha so stay strong and let's don't attend class today and go out to cheer your mood what say.

Ajit said : yes it will be good idea as our exams are coming so maybe we will not get time to have fun so let's go out today.

Aman said : I agree.

Ajay said : but where should we go.

Priya said : for shopping.

Shilpa said : yes it will be good.

Ankit said : no no shopping we don't want to become slave for you girls.

Rose said : what did you just say let me show you what slave means.

Jack said : stop it Darling as you know we are thinking to cheer Jodha mood isn't it and you know she don't like shopping much isn't it so it will not be good idea.

Nisha said : so we should go to watch movie.

Siya said : yes it will be great idea.

Jodha said : no guys just drop the topic to bunk class as you know we should now focus on our studies so let's go and attend class and don't worry I am fine okay.

Samrat said : then why your voice is still low you are still sad isn't it.

Jodha said : no Samrat actually I am thinking about something else.

Ajit said : and what are you thinking.

Jodha said : look here they both just left today morning and I am missing them now what about those family whose father husband brother friend left to protect our country will not there family miss them to our brave soldiers how difficult this is for them isn't it just think Jalal and Bhai will have all the facilities they don't have to worried for food Light or transport and I will able to talk to them by cell isn't it but what about those soldiers who live there half of life in some small Bunkers with no connection with family by cell less food without light or proper transport I feel sad for them for saving thousands of people life they sacrifice there life without regret for our best future they leave there family future behind for our happiness they left there family in pain and sorrow will not they love there family to will not they want to enjoy festivals and holidays with there family to will not they want to spend there life with there love guys.

Samrat said : you are right and for that they deserve special treatment from us we can't help them much but we can make something for them isn't it.

Ajit said :yes we are youth present of this country we can make many changes by giving vote to good leader or participate in politics or by becoming Doctor and save life of others or becoming Engineer give our country best infrastructure or by becoming Lawyer help to give justice to others and make our law powerful or by becoming Businessmen and invest lot of money in our country so that we can make our country free from loan which India has taken from other country to and help others to make our country perfect.

Aman said : yes we people can do lot of think for our country either than making new Political Party for our own benefit.

Vivek said : yes you know guys in India 37 political party present and many more which we don't know and 25 Party members get a chance to be participate in L.S or R.S and no one do any good for our country either then Debating and taking advantage of Poor people who don't have strength to fight for justice or there right.

Ajay said : and look how strange it is that if some Political or some popular men get die then the whole country get to know about it but if some normal men die there will be no news.

Priya said : you know guys 1.34 billion and 2 Lakh refugee people live in India and 2.81 crore cases are pending in Indian Court and there 5,000 Judges to see them how will people will get justice because of such a poor speed of our law and top of that there are to and we can't even imagine as we already know how rapidly the crime growth is increasing like kidnapping rape violence trafficking murder smuggling or terrorist attack.

Shilpa said : yes and more ever we can't deny the other problem like increasing of Study, law procedure, medical treatment, food or some basic facility like proper home food etc... and what to say about natural disasters this all those problems are enough to snatch our peace.

Rose said : but guys we can do something regarding this I mean I am not saying that we can change whole country but still we can start from somewhere isn't it.

Siya said : but guys what can we do I mean what are we going to do.

Nisha said : I think first we need to attend class then we will discuss about that.

Manvi said : how mean Nisha how serious topic we are discussing and you are talking about class really.

Mirza said : then what wrong she said as we all know we can't do anything don't you guys read newspaper or watch news that how some college students are protesting by breaking furniture of college or by shouting slogan and what are there reason dress code dearness of college fee or some missing or accident or harassing tell me guys isn't it wrong I mean I admit they are really not acceptable but still what is the profit for protesting you will go against law then police will come and beat you then for someday the Media will highlight the news and then everything will get end tell me do they get there right do they get justice take the latest example of 5 or 6 year boy was killed in school washroom and we still don't know how and who killed come on guys there is nothing we can do rather than listening and debating with each other.

Shivani said : you all guys are right in your point of view but but no country is perfect every country has his own problem population, crime, dearness corruption, terrorist attack, or fights that doesn't mean they don't have anything good I mean our country is powerful to we are doing progress to now many country are investing in our country we are able to show those coward terrorist hell by our Indian army isn't it and our law is no less to look how great decision is taken by court recently isn't it so don't feel so bad and if in India so many people are bad then many people are good to isn't it like well leave all that and let's go to our class.

Jodha said : you are right we should feel proud in our country which has suffer so much but still didn't get broken we should feel proud on our soldier for there sacrifice and bravery and we should leave for class or else we will get late.

(listening this everyone nodded there head and goes to there class and other side Jalal Abdul reach Goa and goes to one hotel where they are going to meet there co partner for case and when they enter the hotel they goes to one table and sit on chairs which were there and started waiting for them after sometime Two beautiful girls and two Handsome boys comes there and goes to Meet Jalal and Abdul).

Boy Said : hey I hope we are not late right.

Abdul said : no we just come here now so not much late.

Boy said : well first let me Introduce our self I am Sahil and he is Abhay and she is Divya and Kriya and we all are going to help you in this case.

Jalal said : and I am Jalal and he is Abdul.

Jiya said : we know you Handsome don't need to introduce yourself and maybe with progress of our case we can make good relation to what say Handsome.

(saying this she give him smile).

Abdul said : be professional Miss Jiya.

Divya said : why you are getting angry young Boy little flirting will not harm isn't it.

(saying this she wink at Abdul which make him angry but he didn't said anything but how can Jalal act calm so he in angry voice).

Jalal said : what the hell you both are officer or not it's this the way to talk with your senior Disgusting.

Sahil said : please ignore them sir they are like this only let's discuss the plan what say.

Abdul said : better they keep there mouth shut now.

Jiya said : oh my my you both didn't recognize us we knew it.

Jalal said : why do we meet before.

Jiya said : yes in fact we study at the same college remember.

Abdul said : no we don't and we study at the same college that to didn't make any difference as now you both are officer so behave like them only or else we very well know how to handle this case without you both get it.

Jalal said : leave it let's discuss the case.

(then they all start discussing the case and Both Jalal Abdul get surprise of Jiya and Divya way of handling as few minutes back they both were flirting with them and now they are back to there officer mood and they like it after done with there discussion they goes to keep an eye on there pray and like this whole day get finish and all goes to hotel room to take rest and other side Jodha finish her class so she goes to parking area and started waiting for Salima Mirza Sjhivani and after sometime they come).

Jodha said : Shivani Mirza I am thinking till Jalal and Bhai come back why you both don't stay at our home like this we will be with each other what say.

Shivani said : I don't have any problem but I need to take dress to stay at your house so I need to go there to.

Mirza said : and I need to see that My house is clean or not and I need to take something to.

Jodha said : oh okay then let's go to both of your house then after taking your things or dress we will go to our home okay.

Mirza said : okay so let's go.

( then they all sit in Jodha car and she start it and goes to Shivani house then Mirza and after taking everything they goes back to there house and after having dinner with lot of teasing with goes to there room to sleep but Jodha unable to sleep so she called Jalal and within few minute he pick that).

Jodha said : hello Jalal how are you did you eat Dinner.

Jalal said : yes I had eat my Dinner Jaan and I am fine to did you miss me Jaan.

Jodha said : so much.

Jalal said : me to you know today was so tiring after reaching here we discuss the case then follow those criminal and keep and eye on them it was so tiring and boring without you Jaan anyway how was your day.

Jodha said : same here boring and bad without you leave all that focus on your case then finish that fast and come back okay.

Jalal said : yes I will try Jaan but I am not sure but leave all that you know there are two girls who are our partner in this case and to my discomfort they flirt with me and Abdul but but your caring brother snap them within a minute and you know they are beautiful and really smart like there sharpness.

Jodha said : are you telling me or trying to make me jealous look if you dare to get close with them then remember I have my own followers to isn't it.

Jalal said : don't you dare to get close with any other men Darling or else no one will save that boy and you from me you are mine and only mine no one have right to lay there eyes on you so forget about getting close to you Darling.

Jodha said : oh really don't forget Jalal my friends will hurt you enough if you dare to hurt me.

Jalal said : are you trying to scare me Darling but never mind I will handle them.

Jodha said : okay leave all that and sleep now okay bye.

Jalal said : fine good night Darling and Have a Sweet dreams love you bye.

Jodha said : love you to bye.

(then both of them cut the call other side Abdul and Salima were talking on cell)

Salima said : are you fine did you had your lunch and Dinner on time.

Abdul said : don't worry Sweet heart I am fine just missing you and I had my lunch and Dinner on time don't worry tell me about yourself you are fine or not.

Salima said : yes I am don't worry and like you I was missing you to.

Abdul said : I understand Sweet heart but I am helpless as you know it's important or else I never leave you alone.

Salima said : hey don't feel bad and I understand this and I am fine to you just take care of yourself okay and come back soon.

Abdul said : I will and please take care of Jodha and Shivani.

Salima said : don't worry I will take care of them and you know Shivani is staying in my house till you come so don't worry.

Abdul said : oh and what about Mirza.

Salima said : well after seeing his home is clean or not he to come with us to stay at our home till you and Jalal come back so don't worry about him to okay.

Abdul said : when you are there to take care of them then I don"t need to worry about them now i will call you later bye good night Sweet heart.

Salima said : good night and take care of yourself bye.

(then both of them cut the call and sleep and next morning Mirza Salima Shivani Jodha goes with college and started concentrating on there study and with teasing eacjh other and hanging out with friends to so they are now comfortable but still miss Jalal Abdul and at the night Talk to them to and other side Jalal Abdul Sahil Abhay Jiya Divya focus on there mission and caught many Drug smuggler but still they did'n t caught the leader so they all are busy but in between Jiya Divya don't leave any Chance to flirt with them first they didn't like but then thinking it's not serious they to enjoy with them like this to and in night when Jalal Abdul talk with Salima Jodha so they tease them by talking about Divya and Jiya so they get jealous but Jodha and Salima are no less to they to tease them by talking About Samrat and one of the Professor over all they all were enjoying there time).

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Me first
Loved double bonanza
Oh Jalal n Abdul teasing Jodha n Salima but they also do not spare them 😆
The dialogue mentioned in former chapter about our forces was super awesome👏

Edited by Rahiramesh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Me first
Loved double bonanza
Oh Jalal n Abdul teasing Jodha n Salima but they also do not spare them😆
The dialogue mentioned in former chapter about our forces was super awesome👏

oh thanks dear for comment I am glad you like it I thought many of you will get bore reading it but thanks actually my one friend father in army and he often stay away from his family because of our country but whenever he come I meet him to and I get surprise that he never regret to choose army as his job but I saw him feeling bad when he watch TV and read a news like student protest against army that always make him feel bad so I thought to take my thoughts and frustration out in this story and I am happy that you like it dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update Rashmi...
Jodha is missing jalal...and as usual her friends non stop questioning..Ha ha...They never leave a chance for the queries.
O... 2 girls flirting with our heroes...love the phone convo between ja and Jo...both are making each other jealous...
Same goes with salima and Abdul...
Life of army soldiers are well explained dear..surely they deserve more respect and love from our people.. They are really great...I like this kind of issues in your story dear...
Loved it...

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