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as currently shani had given up on relationships but he need someone who can soothe him, who can again make him believe in relationship. here is my imagination what should happen further. hope u like it.

It was Sabha organized in Suryalok, every dev including shani should be present there on tridev's order coz they have to make some important announcement. All devas including shani were present there

Shani was standing in d corner silently but two eyes were constantly watching him, which shani knew but he purposely was not looking in that direction. It was chaya who was constantly staring shani. Vishvkarma & yami came to shani started talking to him.

Yami - I m so happy that u return to suryalok , now our family is complete

Shani - how can a murderer become a part of ur family Suryaputri yami, shocking yami , that shani is addressing her as stranger, Vishwakarma signaled her not to talk in this matter

Chaya came to vishwkarma to ask why tridev kept d sabha, seeing chaya approaching them , shani left d place ignoring chaya.

Indra & rahu were wondering what so important that tridev kept this sabha in suryalok ??

Indra pata nhi ab tridev ab kya karne vale hai , jo ye sabha suryalok mai rakhi hai

Rahu - mahadev apni Samadhi se bhara aa gaye hai , unhe apke karnamo ke bare mai to pata hi ho ga, kya pata ussi ke liye ye sabha rakhi gayi hai, to sajh ho jayi ye . suna hai abhi ke liye mahadev karamphaldata hai.

Tridev appeared in suryalok , everyone greet them. Indra as usual started to butter tridev but mahadev starred him to stay silent.

Mahadev - I happy that u all came to suryalok on my invitation before mahadev could complete

Indra again interfere to know why sabha is kept . naradaji asked him to be silent & let mahadev speak.

Mahadev for past 10 yrs lot of changes had happen starring shani, even suryadev lost his human form , as when suryadev lost his human form lot of darkness is spread around but now when d yagna done for him is completed successfully its time that surydev should return in his human form.

Everyone was happy including shani but indra was shocked that suryadev is returning spoiling his plans of becoming most powerful, coz how much powerful indra was but he was no match to suryadev, neither he can ever challenge suryadev.

R - ab kya karenge aap devraj ??? surya to phir se uday hone wala hai

Tridev combine their energies , a huge ball of fire emerged near d throne of suryadev from it lot of light coming out in resulting everyone blinking their eyes as they were not able to open their eyes, suddenly that huge ball bursted , coz of that burst a small ball of fire got detached from it, Fell away from that huge ball of fire. Suryadev's background music was played in d background , a male shadow was shown emerging with folded hands & flames & smoke surrounding him. The tall , strong & well build man who emerged from flames had opened his eyes & stepped out the ball of fire, he was none other Suryadev.

Happiness was no bound of Suryadev's family , including Shani, everyone was happy excluding Indra whose plans got failed, Chaya was crying tears of happiness. Suryadev started 2 descending stairs With Suryadev's BG in d background. Suryadev greeted tridev & thanked them 2 giving him his human form back, uniting him back 2 his family.

Indra came forward & says after so much wait we finally got u back Varna we had almost lost u coz of someone else mistake( taunting Shani), Before Indra could finish Suryadev move towards his family. He wiped chaya's tears , asked how is she , chaya nodded that she is fine.Chaya introduces yam, Yami to Suryadev, he hugged tightly both d twins.Shani was watching all this from a distance

Yami- with Ur arrival r family is now completed.

Suryadev - nodded happily. He looked around, then he looked at chaya & questioned where is Shani ? Before chaya could answer, Indra interfer & said why do u want to meet d person who was responsible of Ur condition & murderer of Bhadra & Sangya, hearing this Suryadev & other Dev were shocked, hearing all this Shani started 2 move out of Suryalok, when suddenly d bangle of Bhadra who he use 2 carry always in his pocket fell down , started rolling to d place where small ball of fire was still lighting, Near d staircase of Suryadev's throne, Shani went to pick d bangle but as soon he touched d bangle, that small ball of fire bursted catching everyone's attention. Smoke & flames were surrounding d ball, large amount of light & fragrance of sandalwood was spreading in d atmosphere. Everyone was very keenly looking towards Suryadev's throne, slowly slowly a female figure started 2 immerge b/w d flames with folded hands & closed eyes.

Mahadev - Suryadev who had been gifted a daughter by destiny for always following ur Dharam. Suryadev smiles

Now that female figured had opened her eyes , stepped out of flames, seeing her everyone was shocked , she was one flawless beauty which universe never had. Tridev , Surya, chaya , yam - Yami, Vishwakarma smiled , Indra was shocked 2 see her beauty coz none of his Apsara s were of her match, Shani who was standing near d staircase felt a strange attachment towards her coz she was constantly looking him with soft smile on her lips. Fair skin , large black eyes, long hairs, red lips, fragrance of sandalwood surrounding her can catch anyone's attention. She started descending d stairs, Constantly staring Shani , u can hear in d background Suryadev's voice where he is giving boon to chaya's unborn baby that she will be more tejasvi than him. She was now finally standing in front of Shani.

To be continued...

Edited by deepikagupta9 - 8 years ago

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luvd it sply tapti prt... waiting fr u to continue😛

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Wow.
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Please Do Write More.

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The girl who just came out of ball of fire , who catch hold everyone's attention was now standing in front of shani with soft smile playing on her lips. Shani don't know but he to was feeling a strange attachment towards her as if he knew her . this girl now turned towards tridev & seeked their blessing , now she turned towards suryadev & bend down to touch his feets , suryadev blessed her, she turns to chaya , bend to touch her feets but chaya pulled her in to hug, tears were running down chaya's cheeks , currenty chaya after hugging that girl was having sense of satisfaction. Chaya introduced her to yam & yami , yami excitedly hugged her that now she finally has a sister, girl took blessing from vishwkarma & naradji, gurur brahispathi , indra was standing a like a statue totally lost in his own world, rahu tickle him 2 reply when that girl did pranipat to him, she again turned toward shani , started moving , she was facing shani , she bends down to touched his feets a tear rolled down from her eyes on shani's feet making shani confused. when that girl touched shani's feet , automatically tears started forming in shani's eyes , he closed his eyes 4 a min to experience d sense of satisfaction he was feeling, it was like his 10 yr wait is finally over. shani came back in d real word by voice of mahadev.

Mahadev - today is a very auspicious day suryadev got his human form back, even destiny gifted us , a tejasvi daughter. As a person is also ways known from his or her karam but name has its own importance, so what name should we give to this girl, (looking towards shani)

Everyone was thinking what name should be given to her. Bhadra shani in his mind was recalling d moment when bhadra's naamkaran ceremony was held. Everyone suggested mahadev should only give her name.

Mahadev - taap , as she is born out of taap of tejasvi surya , is as tejasvi as surya so her name will be " TAPTI".

Shani slowly whispered tapti with sweet smile playing on his lips as he was memorizing her name, shani too don't know why is he feeling so happy & satisfied , everyone was happy with d name including that girl. Everyone started cheering for tapti. " SURYAPUTRI TAPTI KI JAI " SURYAPUTRI TAPTI KI JAI.

Tapti was now standing near d staircase of suryadev's throne, facing d sabha. Tapti start to address sabha.

Tapti - I thank tridev 4 making me part of devlok & surya parivar, I thank suryadev 4 accepting me as part of his family ( surya dev smiles), I thank all devas 4 accepting me as part of devlok(bhadra challenging all devas & mahadev flashbacks was shown ) but before I start my new journey I would like to apologize tridev & all devas forgave me & my deeds if I had ever hurted u all in past time( lump was formed in her throat , tears start foaming in her eyes)

Everyone questionly looked each other , then toward tapti, shani was closely noticing every thing (bhadra challenging all devas & mahadev flashbacks was again shown through shani's thinking ), tridev looked each other , nodded & smiled.

Kakol - tapti why r u apologizing , what for ?? coz u just took birth recently , then how u hurted tridev & devas.

Shani was keenly looking towards tapti.

Tapti - yes I took birth recently , but it had been always said na " BODY GET DESTROYED, BUT SOLE IS IMMOTAL, some karam we do knowingly , some unknowingly but at d end its ur karams only, maybe in some past birth I had hurted someone( looking towards shani).

Narayan took charge in his hands & said

Narayan - yes tapti maybe u had done some mistakes in ur past life but truth is destiny gave u second chance, so live in ur present & make sure u don't repeat ur mistakes as past will always remain past.

Tapti sadly looks towards shani, then towards tridev. Tridev blesses everyone & disappears.

Shani was standing in d balcony of suryamahal looking out , lost in himself. Lot of things were running in his minds , flashbacks of bhadra was running infront of his eyes , tapti's words " body can be destroyed, soul is immortal ", "may be in some past birth i hurted someone " were ecoing in his ears making his confuse , restless & question himself " WHO IS TAPTI "?? Why i m getting so attached 2 her ??? On d other tapti was standing in d hall of suryamahal near d staircase alone remembering d moments of bhadra & shani, while remembering tears started forming in her eyes & she slowly said

" BHAI "

suddenly shani turned backwards look towards d suryamahal hall as he felt someone just called him with d name he waited 2 listen from past 10 yrs, automatically a name came out of his mouth

" BHADRA "

Edited by deepikagupta9 - 8 years ago

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Tridev on kailash

Brahmdev - bhadra ne brahmand (universe) ke liye apne jivan ki ahuti de di , aur uske baad shani ka dyan rakhne vala koi nhi rha. Uske is mahan balidan ko kuch logo shani ke virud upyog kiya aur shani ko virakt hone pe majboor kardiya, jab chaya ne usse apna rishta thoda to shani ka rishto pe se yakeen uth gaya aur karamphaldata ki mrityu ho gayi.

Narayan - bhadra ek pavitra aatma thi , jo sabse jyada is brahmand mai shani se pyar karti thi , aur uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti thi. Shani ne karamphal data ka pad tyagne ke baad bhi kabhi apne kartavy se vimukh nhi hua, mushkil ke samay bhi kabhi uchit marg nhi choda.

Mahadev - shani ne apne kartavy nibhate hue bhadra ko bachane ki puri koshish ki par kal chakra kuch aur hi manjoor tha. Shani ke kartavy palan ko dekhte hue hi kal chakra ne bhadra ko tapti ke roop mai shani ko vapas kiya hai. Ab tapti hi shani aur chaya ke beech ki dor banegi aur shani ka rishto pe yakeen vapas layegi aur uske marg par bhi. Sabse balwan samay hota hai , jo har jakhm ki dava hota hai.

Suryamahal

Tapti was standing alone , was searching shani in d hall , she was no t aware that 2 eyes constantly staring her, it was indra who was staring her.

Rahu - devraj kya kabhi apne koi sundar stree(woman) nhi dekhi ??? Jo itni der se tapti ko ghur rhe hai.{ in his mind rahu is thinking why d hell i m with this idiot indra }.

Indra stares angrily rahu , who leaves indra alone. Indra was thinking 2 approach tapti seeing her alone , started 2 move towards tapti when chaya comes 2 tapti spoiling indra's plan.

Chaya - putri tumhare aane se har taraf prasanta(happiness) hai, ab hamara parivar pura ho gaya.

Tapti stares with her big eyes chaya , a word came out from her mouth.

" MATA "

Chaya's world got seemed stopped with this one word of tapti , mata word was ecoing her ears ( bhadra calling her mata by touching her heart flasback shown ) tears started forming her eyes, ( shani was witnessing all this by standing on d entrance of d hall ) before chaya could say anything 2 tapti , she felt a hand on her shoulder, it was suryadev smiling, chaya controlled herself.

Suryadev - we r lucky 2 have tapti as a daughter after kal chakra snatched bhadra from us ( tapti lowered her eyes ), where is shani ?? I met everyone but not with shani , who was that young guy standing near d staircase ???

Chaya - dev wo shani tha (avoiding suryadev's gaze)

Suryadev - vo shani tha , vo apne pita mila bhi nhi , kya vo abhi bhi mujh se naraz hai ki maine ...

Before suryadev complete indra interfer

Indra - ap shani se kyu milna chahte hai , jisne apko 10 saalo tak apne parivar se dur kiya , jisne apki putri bhadra aur patni sangya ki hatya ki , suryalok & indralok mai itna aatank machaya.

Indra suddenly stopped speaking by seeing shani is standing behind him, (seeing shani behind him , indra's condition was like uske pairo tale zameen khisak gayi ho ) tapti was shocked hearing all this that people think so bad 4 shani , kakol, yami & vishwakarma were feeling bad 4 shani, but Shani was not getting affected coz now he is got quite used to it, Shani turned 2 leave but was stopped by Suryadev voice.

Suryadev - kya ???? Kya kaha Devraj hatyara( murderer)? U r calling Shani murderer really , Devraj mujhe lagta aapki smaranshakti( memory) thozi kamzoor hogaya hai , hogi ki bhi kyu nhi aap itna kaam ho karte rehte hai.

Everyone including Indra was shocked at Suryadev's reaction

Suryadev - aap hi hamesha Sabse jyada chintith(worried) rehte the ki Bhadra Brahmand ke liye khatra hai, Hume uska anth kardena chaiye, aur ab aap Shani Ko hatyara keg rahe hai.

Indra - ha Suryadev par vo Devi chaya...

Before he could complete Suryadev interfer again

Suryadev - Devi chaya Ko much pe chod dijiye , unka Maan mata ka , isliye unhone Shani Ko apradhi samjha par apne kyu ShaniKo apradhi samjha ??? ( Suryadev started cornering Indra ) , Maine dekha Shani ka Dard Bhadra ke anth ke Baad, Shani Bhadra Ko bahut pyar karta that par phir bhi usne apna kartavya chuna. Aap ne kaha ki Shani be Devi Sangya ki hatya ki , smaran hai vo aapne hi Sangya Ko Devi pad se hataya tha, Sangya ka mai parityaag Kar Chuka, vo Sangya ke Karam the Jingo ne Shani Ko majboor Kar diya uska anth karne ko, Shani ne har har Sangya Ko mauka diya sudharne ka aur Sangya ne har mauke ke fayada uthaya aur apne apko nhi sudhara, Sangya ki mrityu par mujhe khed hai , par iska Doshi Shani nhi sangya khud thi.

Hearing Suryadev some were shocked ( indra , Rahu ), some were happy ( Yami, Vishwakarma, Kakol , other gud devas ) , some were confused that Suryadev is supporting Shani ( chaya, yam & Shani himself)

Indra - par Suryadev aap to Devi Sangya ki raksha Kar rhe the Shani se aur ab aap...

Suryadev again interfer

Suryadev - ha , Mai Sangya ki raksha Kar rha tha , isliye nhi ki Mai Shani Ko galat man rha tha , par isliye kyunki Mai majboor tha Sangya ki raksha karne ke liye kyunki usne meri Sharan magi thi, aur Mai Janta that ki Mai adharam ka saath de rha hu. Mujhe pata hai ki Shani ne mujhe ki baat ka sand diya. Bhadra Ko kabhi apni putri nhi Maana , aur usko uska Adhikar nhi deneka ( looking towards Shani )tapti & chaya had tears in their eyes. Mujhe Shani ka dand manjoor hai. Aap ne kaha Shani ne Suryalok or indralok Mai aatank majaya , main nhi manta agar isme koi bhi sachai hai to aap mujhe uska saboot lake dijiye Mai khud Shani Ko dand Dunga.

Hearing all this Shani starts to Move out of Suryalok but suddenly stopped in his track , he turned back & found tapti holding on Shani's shawl same way as Bhadra use to hold, He again started moving but got stopped again with tapti's one word

" BHAI "

Edited by deepikagupta9 - 8 years ago

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

so touching and beautifully wrttn... indra lost in tapti😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

@ Deepika Beautifully Written. Bhadra's Back As Tapti.
Your A Better Writer Then The Cvs.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thnks 2 all 4 liking my story. Sorry 4 grammatical mistakes

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" BHAI "

This word was echoing in shani's ears , shani couls not believe he was again listening this word after 10 yrs.

Shani - " BHAI " tumne mujhe bhai kaha ?

Tapti - ha, maine aapko bhai kaha ,

but before tapti could complete shani left surya mahal's hall with tears in his eyes with tapti kept looking with longing eyes.

Shani's jungle house

" BHAI " this word was haunting shani with bhadra & tapti's flashbacks running before his eyes, making him confused, restless. Shani shouted in pain , fell down on his knees .

Shani kyu ho rha hai mere saath aisa, kyu ??? kyu mujhe tapti se itna lagav ( attachment ) ho rha hai, kyu??? Mai to usse janta bhi nhi. Shayad ...nhi , ab shani kisi se rishta nhi banaye ga, kabhi nhi.

Suryalok in tapti's room

Tapti was looking out from d window with tears in her eyes , she was remembering each & every moment she spent with shani as bhadra , after her birth as tapti what ever happened in surya sabha, all d accusations which indra put shani was haunting her. She sat down on floor crying & remembering shani.

Tapti bhai mujhe maaf kar dena , " BHAI ".

Surya mahal hall

Surya dev was thinking what all had happened after his return, he got tridev blessings, he got his family back , he got tapti but did he lost shani again ??? he questioned himself, suryadev went to shani's room but he found it empty.

Suryadev shani where is he ??? at this time he should be in his room, then...

Surya dev asked d guards that where is shani but guards remained mum. He felt a hand on his shoulder, it was yami & vishwakarma

Yami - pitashri , I know where is shani .

Suryadev's room

Yami started narrating everything to suryadev, what happened after him turning into shakti punj , what happened after 10 yrs when shani entered rang bhoomi of suryalok, while surya dev was listening everything with close eyes.

Yami pitashri , shani ke saath injustice hua hai , ab bas aap hi kuch kar sakte hai, maine bahut koshish ki par shani suryalok lautne se saaf mana kar diya, shayad ab shani bhi thak gaya hai ( tired) apne aap ko har bar sahi sabit karte karte aur is bar to mata chaya ne apna samband shani se thod diya.

Vishwkarma shani ne to mahadev se bhi apna rishta thod liya hai. In 10 saalo mai bahut kuch parivartit hogaya , shai ke jane ke baad adharma bhaut bhar gaya , praniyo ke maan se shani ka darr hi nikal gaya hai, koi bhi ab shani ka aadar ( respect ) nhi karta, usko koi naam bhi nhi leta. Mujhe to nhi shani kuch bhi galat kar sakta hai , jaise ki uske bare mai maine baatain suni hai , isme mujhe indra aur rahu ka hath lagta hai.

Suryadev bas!( raising his hand 2 stop) bahut sun liya maine , itna sab ho gaya mere jane ke baad, aur chaya , usne kaise mana liya , ki shani bhadra ka hatyara hai , mata hu , bhadra uski putrid hai , par shani bhi to putr hai aisa putr jis pa ke koi bhi mata garvit ho gi. Mujhe chaya se baat karni ho gi.