Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Finally after a long time which is like ages 😳

hi ruppu kaisi ho ?

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

i am good
what about u ?
are u done with ur imp work ?
i love all ur stories dear
ha this one is a bit special as this is ur 1st story 😉

Hahaha is that so??😉 Thanks!!
Yeah this is my first baby but my mood changes you know and so are the inclination! 😃
All are my babies but currently I am more inclined to two specific one's. Can you guess which one?? 😉

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Finally after a long time which is like ages 😳

😃 hi ruppu!!!!!! 🤗

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hahaha is that so??😉 Thanks!!
Yeah this is my first baby but my mood changes you know and so are the inclination! 😃
All are my babies but currently I am more inclined to two specific one's. Can you guess which one?? 😉

as of now i can guess only one and that is predistined 😉

correct me if i am wrong 😛

Edited by Khushibloom - 8 years ago

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#845

bye bye for now baby

ghar jaakar aathi hoon IF pe 😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#846

Fantastic news I'll be waiting for this update

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#847

RES for ch34

Chapter 34 : Breaking the ice!!

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"Ohhh!! Aap itney bhole ho?? Kuch jaise dikhta hi nahin hain aapko hain naa???" She was back in her mocking enaction with a broad sarcastic smile, "Srif mujhe daantna aata hain...Baki khud jo...Chaddo... She stopped that mocking smile and folded her arms over her chest, "Mujhe toh baat bhi nahin kaarni...Aur abhi aap kyun aaye ho mere paas?? Pichle tin din mein maine khana khaya ya nahi, pucha bhi hain aapne??" She pursed her lips with a slight crook while Maan was perplexed with her burning complaints.

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"Mishty...I was very busy...Please try to understand Jaan..." He again tried to hold her shoulders to get jerked off again hence giving a sad puppy eye look he simply forwarded the food towards his maddened wife again!!!

"Accha??? Australia mein kaun sa office hain aapka jo aap itney busy thhey?? Areh uff hatao ye khana...Babaji ke sau fek ke marungi main ye...Aur phir agar annya ka aapmaan huwa na toh woh aap pe hain..." She sounded rude, serious, angry and extremely adamant while to the point in addition!

But Maan too comprehended her very thoroughly! More than anything else he knows the shades of her wraths exceedingly well! As well as the most probable causes too!

"Areh baapre...Nahin nahin theek hain...ye lo rakh diya..." He cautiously put the food away and took a tissue to wipe his fingers, "Woh Rahul D costa uncle, sam ke dad unko blueprints mein kuch correction kaarni thi and you know the time difference between Australia and India right?? So I had to make video conference with Sasha and Adi..." Maan filled her in on the other side of the coin but then Geet disrupted him at the end, "Sasha...Uff ak aur chudail..." She involuntarily escaped a murmur while scrunching her face!

"Haan wahi..." Maan just said with the flow and then enlarged his eyes with her outrageous yet funny remark, "What???..." Cumbersome silence for a few moments! . . . . .

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Precap : "Aaj kiya date hain??" He jerked her closer and made her shocking retina meeting his naughty dark browns!

"july 26th...Kyun??? OHHH..."as she was speaking her memory hit her and she remembered as well as found out it was 14 roses to be precise!

"Aaj toh...Aapko yaad tha???" Geet sounded awfully surprised with the sudden revelation as her loving husband indeed remembers his promises!!!

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Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#848

Am first but comment very late 😭
Net issue
Ok toh babaji yeh dono abi lar rahai k romance Kar rahai ha
Geet toh bhhut gusaa Hai baap Rey
An kiya kar ga ga maan
How much I missed thier rotna Mana
And maan naughtiness with geet glaring
Uff

Edited by hira2010 - 8 years ago

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#849

K got email about your post hope getting update soon

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#850

Omg omg omg you ud
1st of all welcome back ipti
I was already half depressed without u
Oh i loved this ud so so much ofcrse
How can i not? Maan is so much loving n caring
1 thing which i want 2 say 2day that is the chemistry the relation this version of ur maaneet shares it is just beyond beautiful
Maan's love has always been the highlight as he is still trying 2 patao his wifey who is stll miffed
Par geet bilkul sahi hai n i hav ful faith in u which u proved true k bilkul nai khicha like other stories jaha geet ya to asani se man jati hai ya toh janam tak ruthi rehti hai
Geet melt ho chuki hai par she doesnt want to surrender hmm ab kia kare maan babua ka jadu hi kuch aisa hai
The ud was hilariously romantic n cute 2 b honest
That jhaadu wala scene he he he i laughed out loudly
Sasha ko chudail bulaya geet ne n maan ne agree bhi kar dia that was supr funny
Then when she says khana fek k marungi maan is like baapre shant shant
Phir geet ne to maan k muh pe maske wali bat bhi keh di
So funny n phir agaya maan apni lafanga avtar me
Dadi wala scene was best geet ka reaction dekne layk thi
Anthr funny banter when he says wanna do that again come baby rofl
Dialoges have won me over kash i cd like more times
Maan ko aise reflexs hi kyu ati hai 😆
So ab geet ne to fire se khela hai ab to uski khair nai
Want some hot hot ud now boht ho gai judai
Cant wait 4 next after this super amazing ud
Thnx baby 4 pm
Love u

Edited by curtus - 7 years ago