Is life a Dream? S#2 pt3/4/pg15/11 nov

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Concept - i posted on GHSP forum


Part 1

One girl lying on hospital bed and crying own fate, again from her, becoming mother happiness snatch by that man, another girl try to console her but failing, how she console her when she also bearing same pain... his own husband sleeping with younger brother wife in same roof.. and she not able to voice any word against him ...that's not mean she never try, she tried but in raising of voice she get slap or punishment in form of apart from own child..

Mother can bear any punishment for child, her child have no mistake, if he get Father like him...

Rubina please stop crying

Rubina : kaise Anika di

Anika : why you not run from this hell

Rubina : jaayu kaha mein

Dev jis narak se mujhe bahar nikal ke laaye the

Wo jagah aur ye jagah kuch alag toh nhi

Waha hazaro hai di

Aur yaha bs ek

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Rubina never forget Dev, his late husband, who take out from hell, where girls sold for one night, Dev give her own name and respect in society, she loves him so much, after sudden death of him, make her shatter once again...

Up to till she dance only in late night parties or club but today first time, she standing in mid of group of man in sorts dress for selling own self for one night... biding raising with passing time, she try to cover own self from scarf, but feel some one hand on her bare waist, he pull closer and snatch scarf from her neck and going kiss , she close the eyes tightly and more tears fall down from her eyes, she feel someone covered her, she open the eyes and seen him first time...

He gently wipes her tears and said kuch nhi honga

.

That day is best day of my life di, I get him...

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One Widow Remarriage event arrange by our Current CM Vikram Sethi, only due to his struggle and work , today many girls get new life...

Now we request to sir, he said few words on this

Vikram : first thanks to all of you

Who come here in this marriage?

I respect women and today our party proves this with this event

Hum aange bhi ase hi kaam krte rahenge

Dhayawad

Ab hume jaane ki aap sb anumati de

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Aryan bte

.

Papa

Vikram pick Aryan and kissed on both cheek and give chocolates to him...

Vikram : aapki mumma aur chachi kaha hai

Aryan : wo chachi ki tabiyat thik nhi thi

Toh hospital gye hai

Vikram : ok

Now you go and do study

.

Aryan : ok

.

Vikram take out mobile and call to Abhinav...

Vikram : kaam ho gya

Abhi : ji sir

Vikram : abhi dono ko ghar laayo

Abhi : par sir abhi madam week hai

Aur doctor ne one day hospital me rhehne ko kaha hai

Vikram : I don't want News leak to media

Smjhe tum

Toh abhi dono ko ghar laayoo

Abhi : yes sir

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From one home, police dragging out one man from house for hitting own wife... her wife failed case against him for Physical persecution... one reporter come to lady and try to take interview of her...

Madam from how many months it's going on

Aap dono ki shaadi ko kitne saal huye hai

Aapne phle kbhi awaaz kyun nhi uthayi

.

Jaisa aap dekh rhe hai

Ye aurat bol tak nhi paa rhi hai

Aap smjh sakte

Aur dekh sakte hai

Ispe kya bitti hongi

.

.

Mrs. Surveen your call

.

Rakesh baki ka interview tum smbhal lo

I have to go home...

*********

So mujhe aane me aaj thoda late ho gya

He pick vase and throw in her direction, she sit and try to come closer to him...

You know my work na

He stand and held her wrist and said I seen your so called work on TV

He pressed her cheek and asked

Tumhe bhi meri complain krni hai

She denied and tries to remove his hand, but he pressed more tightly and said well

Now go and make food

Mujhe bhook lagi hai

.

Hmm

Surveen

Ji

He pull her by hair and said us cameraman ko mein dobara tumhare karib na dekhu

He touch your hand na

Surveen : jai wo galati se

Mein usse mike de rhi thi

.

Aahh

Jai please leave my hand

Dard ho rha hai

He throws her on floor and left to room...

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Precap : Mr sethi I want that bridge tender

Mil jaayenga Mr. khurana

Par uske badle hume kya milenga

5% of profit

Mr. Khurana

2000 crore ka tender hai

Itna toh hum bhi jaante hai

Cost 50-60% hi jaati hai

.

Then what you want Vikram

.

Maan I want 20%

.

My company does best work

.

I know this

.

After that you asking so much

Rubi darling now you tell to him, if he wants this tender

He has to fulfill our condition

.

Maan pull rubi own side, make her sit own lap...

Don't forget vikram

I know what relation you both sharing

Vikram : kamine tu aa gya apne aukad pe

Maan : chl 150 crore profit tera

Vikram : par

Maan : bs

Aur ha

Today I want her

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note : i want to show many sides of society, ab sb geet aur maan pe show nhi ho sakta tha, and i also not able to write on geet , this type scene, so i added more characters... 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Index

part 1 on page 1

PART 2 ON PAGE 7

Part 3 on page 15

part 4 on page 15
Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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My other work

Completed stories list on page 16

Completed story link start from page 16 to 18

Ongoing Story List on Page 22

Category (SS + OS +FF ) list on page 20
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Is life a Dream? Season 2





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Looking interesting
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Waiting for maan n Geet part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well disgusting men in our society worse then monster I hated those men
Every women has hided their pain
But I don't know about geet life but like Anika she too suffering because of maan
But more suffer is Rubina I hate Vikram and maan
One more where is this first season
Uska Kiya Howa itni new story Hai mujko old story samaj nahi arhi mein Kon si read Kar rahi thi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats for new season
teriffic update

continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story..
Waiting for maaneet meeting..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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many characters with different shade
nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariya20

Well disgusting men in our society worse then monster I hated those men
Every women has hided their pain
But I don't know about geet life but like Anika she too suffering because of maan
But more suffer is Rubina I hate Vikram and maan
One more where is this first season
Uska Kiya Howa itni new story Hai mujko old story samaj nahi arhi mein Kon si read Kar rahi thi

first season maaneet pe tha full

so end ho gya dear

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