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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

oh god guys have patience there is still time for there marriage she still didn't forgive him dear and tell me are you all bore of this story that you all want climax now have patience but thanks for comment dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome awesome Rashmi..
Love this Update..So now all are in India in palace for the Marriage...
Dada and Dadi is always behind Jo And Jalal. Ha ha...why so...?but I am OK with that...
They wanted marry all the couple... Surprising twist...
Kabir and bakshi will accept easily...For me surprise is Veer readily accepted the Marriage...Happy for all..
So all are going to get married except our AKDHA...
Well they need time...kids are super Happy...
I like mama and Mami..
Convo between Jo and Ja is my favourite...
Wow...Jalal called her baby girl after a long time...I love the way Jalal's hilarious answers to Jo...So cute..
Awesome Rashmi...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Awesome awesome Rashmi..

Love this Update..So now all are in India in palace for the Marriage...
Dada and Dadi is always behind Jo And Jalal. Ha ha...why so...?but I am OK with that...
They wanted marry all the couple... Surprising twist...
Kabir and bakshi will accept easily...For me surprise is Veer readily accepted the Marriage...Happy for all..
So all are going to get married except our AKDHA...
Well they need time...kids are super Happy...
I like mama and Mami..
Convo between Jo and Ja is my favourite...
Wow...Jalal called her baby girl after a long time...I love the way Jalal's hilarious answers to Jo...So cute..
Awesome Rashmi...

thanks for such a awesome comment dear and you will come to know later in the story that why veer agree to marry Priya and why Dada Daadi are behind Jodha Jalal till then have Patience dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 43
(after sometime Jalal again in calm voice).

Jalal said : and I forget to say you are looking gorgeous today Baby girl that I just wanted to...never mind.

(listening this Jodha get irritated and in irritated voice).

Jodha said : why the hell you don't leave me why are you behind me.

Jalal said : after knowing that I love you still Baby girl you are questioning me I can't believe it.

Jodha said : stop calling me that and this is not love you are forcing me you just want me you don't care what I want what my dreams are you just think about yourself I don't trust you are not the person who deserve trust that to by me and for me trust respect are most important in any relation and neither I trust you respect you so forget about love.

(listening this Jalal get angry but he don't want to do anything to her which may hurt her so he compose himself very hardly and in calm voice).

Jalal said : fine you are right I agree with your opinion about myself that I am selfish person who don't care about others emotion and I am not trust worthy person to... okay but tell me do you love Ajay Ritu Veer Priya Kabir who loves you so much and care about you... just think with open mind that is it possible that they will let me near you...after knowing that I am selfish is it Possible that after knowing what person I am they will forgive me easily... and make me there friend and trust me to do you think they are fool to believe a person who only hurt them... they are more mature and smart than you... they know that I am really change that's why they forgive me and make me there friend ...and now they trust me to and you can't able to forgive me... why why ...tell me why yes I admit that I hurt you... but that was past... I am now change I just need your forgiveness... nothing else it is so...much difficult for you to forgive me for once tell me.

(listening this Jodha was crying and sit on floor and hugged her knees tight and looked at floor and all the time Jalal was looking at her after sometime Jodha without looking at him in low yet firm voice).

Jodha said : I know not giving you chance is really bad... you are change and everyone believe in that but..but...I can't able to forget those days when you force yourself on me the way you torture me whenever I saw you... I remember all these things and... more ever I can't able to forget the way you shot my Bhai and Veer..I can't I can't I just want to away from you I can't forgive you ...for that I know... I know it's wrong but ...but I am helpless I can't trust you I know you are really trying very hard to make me believe that you are change... but I can't because I am scared of you you scared me I hate to admit that you make me feel weak...and now your acts are making me feel ...guilty to I am not the person who can stay angry at anyone for long time but you change this Please stay away from me I need time I don't want to see you or neither wanted to hear your voice Please I beg you ..go.. go away from me.

(shock would be an understatement to describe Jalal current situation he was feeling guilty to hear her words after few minutes he to sit on floor besides her and in soft voice).

Jalal said : I never knew that I hurt you this much... I was just thinking about myself but never knew that it's difficult for you to forgive me heck no girl can forgive me for my action than how can you but now I promise I will not bother you I will be here but just for this wedding after going back I will be away from you just for one week you have to bear me I promise here to I will try to be away from you will you accept this.

Jodha said : thank's Jalal for understanding but I am not saying to forget everyone or leave everyone just for me they are your friends and family now and you can stay here as much as you want but just stay away from me.

(saying this she stand up and give him small smile and listening her Jalal to smile but only he knew how painful it is for himself after few minutes).

Jodha said : let's go everyone will be waiting for us.

Jalal said : yes you are right let's go.

(then he to get up and both goes to see what there friends are doing but how can Jalal stay mum when he have Jodha besides him walking with him so he in calm voice).

Jalal said : can I ask you question it's personal but I can't help myself from asking you pleas don't mind okay.

(she didn't answer but Jalal knew she is listening so he continue).

Jalal said : do you still love Veer I mean you both loved each other in past so much and now you both break up with each other and act like just friends.

(she still didn't said anything and keep walking).

Jalal said : come on answer me.

Jodha said : it's doesn't matter that I love him or not the matter of facts are Priya loves him and now both are going to get married in week isn't'.

Jalal said : so you still feel for him.

Jodha said : it's none of your concern and why the hell do you care it's my life my feeling my thoughts.

(listening this Jalal lost his cool and without thinking he grabbed her hands and pinned her to nearby wall and looked at her and after one minute staying at the same position he in stern voice).

Jalal said : I do care Baby girl ...your thoughts your dream your life decision your feeling... all matter to me because I love you...and you dare not to forget that maybe... I agree that I will try to be away from you...but ... but I will never let you move on with any other person you have to be mine at the end... take as much time you want to take...but at the end if you ever want to be with anyone then the...person have to be only me get that straight in your mind.

(listening his words Jodha again get scared of him and try to get out of his grip but can't able to so she give in and seeing her like this Jalal smirk and then in husky voice).

Jalal said : Just like you get it that you can't get out from my grip same like in future to you will never be able to get out from my love Baby girl always remember that because in my life I will never have any girl except you and same with you Baby girl there will be no boy in your life except me.

(saying this he kissed on her both cheek softly and wipe the tears which were falling from her eyes like water fall and again in calm voice).

Jalal said : never let those precious tears come out from your eyes again I hate to see them in your eyes now let's go.

(Saying this he left her hands and getting free from him she without waiting for second run away from him as fast as she could and Jalal looked at her till she get out of his sight and he to goes behind her and other side Jodha collided with Ajay who was coming to see where Jodha is because all of them were going together to see the palace and after Twenty minutes when he didn't see her he come to check on her and collided with her).

Ajay said : what is this Angel where were you.

(but then looking at her he get worried to see fear in her eyes so without saying anything he hugged her tight and rub her back and after few minutes he in soft voice).

Ajay said : what happen Angel why are you scared what's wrong tell me you are making me worried.

(other side Jalal who was coming behind her saw Ajay talking with Jodha so he hide behind Pillar and start listening there talk).

Ajay said : angel will not you tell me what's bothering you.

(saying this he break the hug and looked at her face carefully after few minutes).

Jodha said : nothing wrong Bhai I am fine.

Ajay said : you know you can't lie to me then why you try.

Jodha said : I ..am ...I ...am not..

(before she say anything Ajay stop her and in soft voice).

Ajay said : don't don't do that I know you are lying now but never mind if you don't wanna share then it's okay but remember I am always there for you okay if you ever need me now go everyone are waiting I will come after few minutes okay go now.

(listening this Jodha nodded her head in yes and goes to join everyone leaving thoughtful Ajay behind).

Ajay pov : what is bothering her did someone said something which offend her or Jalal did something with her because he was not with us to oh god did I make wrong decision to trust him oh god I swear if he did something I will not leave him but where is that idiot.

(he looked around and saw him hiding behind one pillar he goes there and punh him tight on his tummy because of that Jalal cried in pain).

Jalal said : Aa..h...re you mad why the hell you punch me.

Ajay said : didn't I told you if you dare to hurt her I will make you suffer now tell me what you did to her that she was scared and lying to me.

Jalal said : I didn't do anything.

Ajay said : as if I will believe you tell me now or else.

Jalal said : great just great if you can't believe me then how will she believe me you both brother sister can't forgive right and why not she can't forget the way I shot you and you can't forget how I hurt your sweet sister isn't it.

Ajay said : well what to do you yourself is responsible that we can't trust you isn't it.

Jalal said : so what I am change now and I am trying to make everyone believe on me isn't it.

Ajay said : that's the problem you are trying why don't you understand you don't have to change you don't have to show you don't have to become love sick puppy just live like you live in past with your family as a good son as a good brother as a good friend we just want to see the real you not a fake one who is living in guilt or dying to get love from my Angel.

Jalal said : fine I will not do anything stupid now I promise.

(listening this Ajay again punch him on his tummy very tightly and he again shout in pain).

Jalal said : what the ...why you punch me again.

Ajay said : because you said you will not do anything stupid from now it means you did something
her now didn't you.

Jalal said : you are crazy you know.

Ajay said : no I mad for my Angel and to tell you the truth I will kill you if you dare to do anything to her now let's go.

(listening this Jalal shook his head in disbelief and started going with him to join everyone and after ten minutes they meet everyone).

Ritu said : kids careful you may fall from here come down.

Jaden said : no it's so beautiful and we can see whole Jaipur from here.

Ritu said : yes you can but careful don't jump you will fall now come here and go with Kaka to your room and eat your lunch now go.

(listening this kids come towards Ritu and then goes with Kaka without argument as they all were tired now after kids left everyone sit on chairs which were present on terrace).

Veer said : well your palace is so huge I always knew that Indian Architect are best and now I can see that to thanks for this.

Priya said : but Ritu we read in history that every palace have there story isn't it.

Salima said : yes I heard one of Amer Rajput princess married to Mughal emperor isn't it.

Abdul said :yes but it was just political alliance nothing else.

Kabir said : what do you have to say about it Bhabhi.

Ritu said : well you all are right but not one guys many Rajput princess marry to Mughal for political reason.

Bakshi said : but none Muslim princess marry to Rajput Prince or king I always think why.

Abdul said : yes in fact I heard Rajput always respect women then why the hell they let there daughters or sister married to cruel Mughal king and if Mughal never respect women then why they didn't marry there daughter or sister to Rajput.

Ajay said : well guys there is no doubt they respect women but like you all know it was just political alliance nothing else.

Kabir said : still how could they make there daughters or sister some toy how unfair it was with them isn't it.

Ritu said : guys did you all heard the news when some terrorist hijack Indian Airline in that plane there were 176 and 15 crew were present but just for saving them our government release there men because they didn't left any option for us isn't it so same as that time guys because of the perfect Policy Divide and Rule Mughal rule in India but with Rajput there was no need to use this policy as they already were divided and always fight with each other but Mughal didn't wanted to fight with them so they use this alliance or else they have to fight and I don't need to tell that they already capture half of India before winning Rajput kingdom and if they all will fight with them then the consequence will be worst isn't it so for saving there land and People they accept that alliance and guys I don't know it was right or not as there were no solid proof which can prove that whatever I said is right or wrong.

Kabir said : but that was wrong I mean they accept that alliance but they destroyed there future with that isn't it look we all know what Mughal history is But do we know what Rajput history was except few Like Chandra Gupt Ashok Prithviraj Mahrana Pratap there family history we hardly know any of Rajput king isn't it.

Abdul said : yes in fact we don't even hear any of Rajput queen and even if we knew we hardly can tell there real name but with Mughal we can take every queen Name like Rukaiya Nurjahaan Mumtaaj but we can't tell the real name of Rajput princess who were married to Akbar we say her name was Heer Harka or god know what how strange it's sound.

Ajay said : well it's right but what to say these new kings Hardly care about there royal tradition or history we all know about Mughal because they had written everything about themselves we know about Chandragupt because of his Guru Chankya we know about Pritiviraaj because of his friend Chandrbardayi Book Prithviraaj Raso we Know about Mewar King Mahrana pratap because he was most important king who fought with Mughal till his last breath but never bow his head front of Mughal we know about Mughal Queen and Princess because they help King on Politics but with Rajput neither we know there real history with proper proof neither there name and if by chance we got to know about some of Queen so other people started commenting on that I hope you all understand now.
Ritu said : well you all are right but let it go guys it was past and there is nothing which can answer all of our doubts or question and now it's late let's go and have our lunch what say.

Bakshi said : yes you are right let's go but still guys I really feel bad for those beautiful Princess I mean I heard that if King get kill by there enemy then all the royal ladies burn there bodies on fir so that no other men can see or touch them just thinking about that I feel bad and look how those King marry them with there enemy.

Kabir said : true very true.

Ritu said : well guys do you know your names are same as those Mughal king and there family Member.

Salima said : what the hell are you Saying.

Ajay said : yes she is right you Jalal if we call you by your whole name then it's same as Akbar because his name was Jalaludhin Mohammad Akbar And Mirza Mohammad Hakim and Salima Sultan Begum Bakshi Banu.

Ritu said : they all were there sister Wives or Brother.

Mirza said : oh my my god don't tell it is our rebirth or something.

(listening this everyone started laughing there heart out).

Bakshi said : no way in hell I am going to keep this name I will ask Mom to change my name.

Salima said : yes me to will change my name.

(listening this everyone can't able to control there laugh and there stomach started aching with pain).

Kabir said : thank god My name is not like that but really it was funny isn't it Bakshi Banu.

(saying this he started laughing after few minutes).

Jalal said : Baadshah ki Behen ki shaan me gustaakhi iski saja milegi jaroor milegi

Kabir said : Hume maaf Kar dijiye aaj ke Baad hum aapki behen ki shaan me gustakhi nahin karege.

Mirza said : Nahin gunaah kiya hai toh Saja bhi milni cahiye warna hukumat kaise karenge.

(listening this Veer Ajay Ritu Priya Folded there hands and in Fearful voice).

Ritu Said : humaare...Namurad ...Dost...par ..reham ..Kare...

Ajay said : Badle me hum vaada karte hai ki is ummed ke saath ki aisa kbhi nahin hoga

Priya said : aur vaise bhi aap inhe saza nahin de sakte.

Jalal said : hum Baadshah hai hum kuch bhi kar skte hai Par phirbhi hum saza nahin de sakte inhen apke aisi soch ki wajah Jaroor Janna caahenge.

Veer said : Humaare dosrt Aapki Behen ki Mohabbat me giriftaar ho chuke hai aur woh bhi aise mein inhen saza de kar aap unki mohabbat ka Katal nahin kar skte.

Kabir said : Toh kya faisla hai Aapka.

Mirza said : hume lagta hai inko Maafh kar dena cahiye hum apni Behen ko takleefh me nahin dekh sakte.

Jalal said : vajah farmaaya Apne Hum Apni behen ko gam geen nahin dekh skte isliye hum is naamurad ko Maafh karte hai.

Ajay said : Sukriya Baadshah hum aapke is ehsaan ko nahin bhoolenge ki aapne humaare Bhai ko maafh kar diya bahut bahut shukriya.

Jalal said : hmm... aap ab Jaa sakte hai.

(after there small Play they all again started laughing and after few minutes all goes to see Elders and after ten minutes they all reach main hall and saw them sitting on royal Dinning area).

Daadi said : come and have lunch with us.

Ritu said : but where are kids we send them here to have lunch isn't it.

Dada said : they left to sleep we make them eat lunch now you all have lunch with us.

Priya said : why Daadi Mami and Chachi ji are standing did they have eaten lunch to.

Kabir said : and Mom Aunty you all are standing to why.
Chacha said : it's our tradition first men eat there lunch then ladies.

Kabir said : what rubbish is it.

Chachi said : how dare you call our custom as rubbish.

Kabir said : what wrong I said come on it's not 16 century it's 21'st century where women have equal right as men then what wrong will happen if they have lunch with us to.

Ajay said : in fact I heard no Pooja get complete without Ladies then why this injustice with eating food.

Ritu said : and when we all pray to Durga Maa Kaali Maa then how could we do this answer us.

(Listening this Kabir Mom Jalal Father Mother and orphanage Father Mama Maami smiled but Chacha Chachi and Dada Daadi get angry).

Dada said : there is nothing to talk with you all you all will do as you are pleas so why are you all arguing with us.

Ritu said : we are not arguing with you all we just asking you question nothing else we just want to know what is special special reason to following this custom.

Ajay said : no I don't wanna know anything let's eat food now all the ladies sit now and have lunch with us we love to eat with you all.

Kabir said : yes if ladies will not eat with us then we men will not eat lunch to.

(listening this Kabir mom and Hamida Maami sit with them but Daadi and Chaachi didn't seeing this Boys started going towards there room).
Daadi said : stop right there no need to go we all will have lunch together come and sit.

(listening this all sit on chair with there respective Partner and started having there lunch).

Mama said : well done boys you all made my day today I can have food properly.

Daadi said : what do you mean before you didn't had food properly.

Mama said : well Daadi ji I always told you it's wrong but you never listen so I always just to show you eat few bites and left from here then later eat food with My wife but never eatan food peacefully with you all.

Chach said : there is nothing new we all know you are slave of your wife isn't it.

Ajay said : loving your wife thinking about her emotion and always support her didn't make men slave Chacha Ji but you will not understand.

Ritu said : how will he Ajay after all he never learn to respect women.

Chachi said : how dare you to disrespect him who give you the right.

Kabir said : and who the hell give you the right to disrespect Mama Ji.

Chacha said : you just shut up.

Ajay said : don't you dare to disrespect My Brother or else no one is bad then me.

Dada said : enough is enough stop fighting and have lunch.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
if is there something you all didn't like which I write about Rajput or Mughal then I am sorry I didn't mean to hurt anyone it was not my intention hope you all understand once.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me First thanks dear
Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Suprb Chaptr...😊
sorry for not commenting..busy in diwali..😉😳

Belated Happy diwali😳

Tnx fr pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me First thanks dear

Awesome update

thanks for your first and fast comment dear.
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Originally posted by: divyaJA

Suprb Chaptr...😊

sorry for not commenting..busy in diwali..😉😳

Belated Happy diwali😳

Tnx fr pm

I know everyone are busy in festival now so I don't mind of not getting comment right now don't worry and yes thanks for wishes And happy Diwali dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy
How can they say that
I'm going to read the next one now

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