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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Oh my..this was so damn beautiful

Life has it's share of ups and downs..but true love always remains the same.. Jai - Vennela were so dreamy ☺️

Thanks for the pm dear..u write really well 👍🏼

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sandhiya_1195

@sandhiya_1195

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

That was so beautiful 👏😳

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Thankyou guys fror such loving and encouraging words..i wasn't expecting such response at all =)) Would def write more on them😳

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Shear Beauty!

It was perfect, be it story-wise or dialogue-wise.

You've weaved the emotions so effortlessly that it felt real!

I'm a north Indian, so I loved that it had Hindi dialogues (easier for me to understand otherwise I always have to sit with Google Translate app😆)

I also loved that in the end he didn't revive his memory, like I had been expecting rather you gave a more fitting and realistic closure. That clearly meant that what if he had his memories stored in his brain, it was his heart that held love for her.

Do bring more and more stories on them.

Keep writing and I request you to please pm me whenever you update next.

Love,

Swarnima.