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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Welcome my dear Rabi!😛
Pleasure is all mine!😊

Too much of compliment(ice) is not good for my already cold body dear!😳
How can mind take rest when heart is in full swing, enjoyment will be there only when both are present.😉
There will be for sure one day when he is going to listen to his heart and not his mind and that day, you might think that he shouldn't have.
Let's see!


You said that line for the second time...🤔
Definitely something is cooking in your head😎
I guess,Suraj will listen to his heart in the most unusual situation
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Eatifi


Oh,my wishes are unstoppable.😳.but sweet lil baby Rabbi,never wishes for anything of THAT types.😉😆


Oh oh oh Baby Rabi is so so innocent that she doesn't even know what Suraj means LOL 😛
Wishes and Rabi are two best friends, I know, don't worry dear!😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Eatifi


You said that line for the second time...🤔
Definitely something is cooking in your head😎
I guess,Suraj will listen to his heart in the most unusual situation

Well I thought of a thing which might happen in between 6-10 parts, so don't know how you all will take it at that time.
Hope the best!
And it's not an unusual situation but a different kind one.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello buddies!

Here is the new Chap of TTW!
As said in the last part, from here on scenes will be moving a bit faster.
Hope you all like it!

Link for the previous part: Part 22 : Awkwardness

Happy reading!

*****

Part 23 : Garlands & Gauze

Getting up from the place where he was, he picked a glass of water and got his phone out of his pocket and talked to unconnected call as he exited from there.
"Hello!"
"Haan! Suraj is speaking!"
"Yeah! Hmm"
'Good job!' his brain praised him.
'Waste fellow!' his heart.
'Mind your words'

And seeing him go away, she left the breath she was holding unconsciously.

'He is really blizzard! Talking about my eyes and all! Something has happened to him! I need to be safe!'

She thought as she got up and made her way back to kitchen to see Girija.

The sisters spent time in getting used to the mansion, the brothers in settling back and Girja on her habitual works while KN started to makes calls for the wedding arrangements.
With everyone in their own thoughts, finished the dinner and settled in the hall with Chakor and Imli in two seaters, KN and Suraj in the middle and Vivaan alone, opposite to the girls.

"Decorators will be here tomorrow morning earlier!" KN said.
"I have called for priest Papa!" Suraj said.
"Ask him to be present here by 6 PM tomorrow, Son! So we can conduct the first ritual of the marriage." with a smiling face.
"Sure Dad!" he said with a nod as he smiled to his brother and future sister(SIL) but his eyes stopped when it landed on the pair of beautiful eyes but as she shifted her view to somewhere, he come back to his starting point.

'What was that? Why this awkwardness?' she questioned herself until she got called by KN.

"Dresses for every functions except marriage will be here by tomorrow morning, around 11 AM dears, you both select whatever you want!" he finished as he saw the sisters affectionately.
"Sure!" both the sisters said in unison.
"And as Vivaan and Imli can't go out after the first ritual, I want you" facing Chakor and turning towards Suraj "you to go after the haldi function in 2 days."

'Yipeee! Alone time!'
'You are never going to change!' his brain said tired of his arguments with his heart.
'I'm all good and lovely, so changed needed in me!'
'Oh really?'
'Of course yes!'

"Yeah! Sure Papa!" Suraj answered while Chakor nodded her head unsure of what to say as the flashes of the storeroom events crossed her mind with the air around her turning awkwardness.
"Okay! See you all! Be fresh!" KN got up and left from there.

'What is going on? Why am I not clear now?' Chakor questioned herself.

"Di!" gaining Chakor's attention, Imli started to talk about all the preparations they need to do.
And Vivaan being Vivaan, left from there while Suraj tried to escape from there but got caught by Imli.

"If she doesn't choose the dress matchingly, you should choose it for us." She said in her own way to Suraj.
"Sure" he assure with a smile plastered on his face as he got up and left from there with an unsure feeling ruling his mind and heart.

Speaking about whatever she wants, Imli made herself and her sister to get to their room to end the day.

"Bhaiya(Brother), this color will go well with that white flower!" Chakor said and turned to the other person who was gathering flower garlands "You take care of all the door around here Bhaiya, I will put on the first floor."
"But Madamji, Sir said to not let anyone to work!" he said.
"Don't worry Bhaiya, I will take care of it!" taking a bucket of fresh flower garland, she turned and went to start her work, one by one.

Starting from KN's room door, she arrived at the closed door of Suraj's room.

"Yes Pandit uncle! 6 PM today! Everything will be ready!" putting his metallic wrist watch, he opened the door in his one hand to see the ladder with Chakor trying to balance herself there as she was taking the support of the door until now, with garlands in one hand and knife in other.
"Be carefu" and there she lost her balance while he lost the balance of his phone, making it kiss the floor in 3 pieces as both Chakor and Suraj made one piece of element with Chakor landing on Suraj with garlands on them and knife from Chakor's hand landed near Suraj.

"Can't you open the door later?"
"How do I know that you were there?"
"You should have opened slowly!" she accused trying to get up.
"You shouldn't have tried to do works which are not for you!" helping her.
"Oh! I didn't see that it was written I shouldn't do this, this and that"
"Ouch!" Suraj as the tread of the flower garlands caressed the cut he got from the knife when he held Chakor.

"When?" She took his hand in hers as she sat with garlands around them.
"Let's first get out of this mess then you can!" he said as he saw she was going to tear her dupatta to treat his wound in his left hand.
"But!"
"It will be easier!"
"Hmm" she nodded.
Holding her shoulder "Get up at the same time as me!"
Getting her nod, both got up and got easily out of the garland.

"First aid box in my room!" he said immediately as she took his hand.

Putting the antiseptic and cotton on the wound, she rolled the small gauze around his ring finger as there was no Band-Aid in the box.
"Sorry! I didn't know it was the knife!" she said.
"It's not your fault!" and he smiled and changed immediately his face "Cut what if it hurt gravely?"
"I'm Sorry!" in a sad tone.
"Heey I was just pulling your legs!" and the smile appeared again "Nothing would have happened as you are not aiming to kill me for now!" as he got up followed by her.
"You are"

"Di!" and Imli interrupted their conversation with a stressed face.
"Haan(Yes) Imli!" turning towards her sister who was analyzing the flower near the doorway.
"Wohh(That) Tina di and Adi" Chakor face crossed 1000s of emotions which didn't went unnoticed by Suraj.

'Who are they?' his mind and heart questioned at the same time.

*****

Thanks a lot for reading!
Did you find it strange that they didn't feel awkward during their moment of falling down and treating his hand?
Let me know it through COMMENTS buddies!
Finally his mind and heart said something similar, did you like it? In case you like it, LIKE this part too! LOL

I don't know if this part is the last part before my departure.
If I get to write a new part, I will tell it trough a post here!

Ok dearies!
This is it for today!
See you few of you in MIB!

Sneak-Peak to fill the gap!
Part 24 : Past & Present

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update👏
The garland part was nice, sukor were not awkward there😆
So suraj's mind & heart agreed on something😊
Chakor is now feeling awkward around sukor
Adi & tina is back, let's see how sukor got affected by this
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..it was amazing sis..
Both r always trying to escape from each other..lol
Suraj heart s more cute than his mind..
Garland scene was so cute..eventhough she didn't inform him tat she s standing outside she s shouting at him for opening the door..poor suraj but he didn't accuse her..
I want suraj to hear his heart rather than his bloody mind..it always putting break to his feelings..
No doubt sis..tis sukor na always forget about everything when they start to fight..same thing happened to tis awkwardness too..
Oh god wat abt tis adi and tina..poor chakor s she going to suffer a heart ache when she see him..bt 1 thing s clear suraj ll be jealous seeing them..
Eagerly waiting for next update sis..
Happy journey sis..tc
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update.
Chakor is occupied trying to figure out why she's feeling awkward around Suraj now.
Will we get to see Suraj choosing a dress for Chakor?
Loved the garland scene, it's lucky for Chakor that Suraj loves her or he would've got angry with her.
It was sweet how Chakor tended to his wound and tied the gauze around his ring finger.
Adi's arrival has already achieved a miracle uniting Suraj's heart and mind, looking forward to Suraj's reaction when he sees him around Chakor.
I hope Chakor realizes that she no longer has feelings for Adi.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Enjoy your holiday in India.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic Chapter

Oh both always trying to get away from each other , Suraj heart and mind and sometimes
I'm left dumbfounded as which one is the better the heart or the mind
the garland scene was beautiful


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

As this ff will be updated in November only, thought to add a SP to the story!
As always a confusing one but all guesses are welcomed!
Happy reading!


Sneak-Peak


"Please don't move child!" The nurse who was inside the room told her as she saw her move.
"Hospital?" words flew out of her mouth.
"You are here since 2 weeks dear!"
"2 weeks? What date?"
"It's your husband who took good care of you! You are really lucky! He is so in love with you." she said.
"Hus...Husband!"

***

"Are you feeling better?" he asked her.
She sees him as if seeing him for the first time.
...
"Should I call you by your name orrr" as a shy smile passed on her lips while he was standing there stressed and exhausted as he tries to smile but sadness still reigns his eyes.

***

Putting her head on his shoulder and taking his hand in hers as she felt his tremble in hers.

'Why he is not comfortable with me?' she questioned herself.

He on the other side faced the window with guilt lingering all over his face.
"Driver" he called as he saw the university pass "Stop the car! Drop her safely at home and come to University campus!" he said as the car stopped and he immediately pulled away his hand from her while she sit back on her place with a question to ask him "Take rest! See you there!" he said not letting her speak as he opened the car door to get down.

***


That's all for the SP!
So how is the SP?
Let all your guess fly so I can get future ideas LOL!
See you all!

Part 24 : Past & Present

- Maithili

(Please no quotes, only replies!)
Edited by maithu_ - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks maithu!

What happened to Chakor? and why is Suraj so sad and why is he avoiding her?
On a positive note, Chakor is happy to be close to Suraj and she's behaving with him as if they're more than just friends.
Did they really get married?

So many questions, and I think I won't get the answers in the next update or two.

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