SUKOR-We Had To make It Somehow..!!!

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"Main tamaam din ka thakaa hua,
Tu tamaam shab ka jagaa hua,
Zara thehar ja Isi mor par,
Tere saath shaam guzar jaaye"
( I have been tired for the whole day,you had been awake for the whole night,just be still with me here at this moment,and let my evening be spent with you)


And they both,my "Baaghi Ishaqzaade' finally made it some how,coz no mishaps,no amount of misunderstandings,no sorts of doubts,no conspiracies,nothing in this world could stop them from being together again,as they were meant yo be together,they had to meet,after all,they are Sukor,the soulful soulmates.


The celestial body,the skies,the heaven and earth,played their role to reunite them,and most importantly 'Chanduji',for he was the witness,
when they met and argued,when Chakor was sneaking in the haveli,and Suraj caught her.
when they broke,after suffering failure in their first tryst with love.
when they missed each other,when Suraj had left for Dubai.
when they confessed their love to each other in the moonlight.
when they married and became one.
and Chanduji,once again made them meet each other his full glory,as he once again became a silent witness to their reunion.


for days,they duo had been separated by distance,created rift between their relation,as they both were in a constant battle between their mind and hearts.And finally their heart won the battle.



"KAROGE KYA HUM SE JAWAABE-GUFT-GU LEKAR,
KAHE TOH DIYA,,,TERE HAIN,TERE HAIN,,,,,FAQAT TERE HAIN,,!!"
(What will you do after taking the answer of your questions,I have already said that I am yours,only yours and forever yours)


A girl,no matter whatever she achieves,no matter how much heights her success reaches,no matter,how high she soars,no matter how independent she becomes,at the end of the day,all she wishes IS TO LOVE SOMEONE CRAZILY AND BE LOVED BY HIM EQUALLY,this is more of a human need.
that was how our Chakor also,Chakor the free bird who has always soared higher and higher at the wings of hope,determined,and with an astounding determination and unputdownable faith on herself...
she had dedicated her life in the wellness of others,since childhood,and never shifted her focus anywhere else...
And finally,the IT moment of her life had arrived,as she had got that Man,who loved her the most in the world,totally,crazily,deeply,madly,unconditionally.And all she was doing in her life,is to LOVE that man,in an equal manner.As finally,she was going to be hitched with the love of her life,and dreaming a blissful marital life along with him,forever.
But one unfortunate day,all her dreams were brutally crashed and hopes crashed,as she arrived to the abode of her love,but was stabbed fatally to an obvious death,and pathetically thrown in the river.When she reagained conciousness,she found herself amidst complete strangers,and an unexpected good news,and very soon got the ultimate shock of her life,as she was informed that "her preserver had turned her destroyer",and when she herself witnessed him pointing a gun towards him,she ran for "the symbol of her love-her unborn baby",and not for her life.But still when she learnt about a conspiracy about her husband,who supposedly wants to kill her,she still fulfilled the duties of a wife,as she observed the karva chauth fast,and prayed for the life of her love,her husband.
when she turned and learnt that he was the one who saved her from the goon,a smile lingered on her lips,with a pearl drop falling off her eyes...as she saw her sun,after seeing the moon.
When he made her drink the water,and the veil was removed,the way she looked at him,as if she had gotten the solace of the century,how she always wanted something like this to happen,for this particular moment,she could have definitely died to rejoice it...but soon thye mind bugged her heart,and she was going away.She was the one who was supposed to question him,but in return got questioned instead,he could not belief that she was being accused of betrayal,of leaving him alone.She never left him alone,when she dud'nt used to love him.She did'nt left him,when her own life was at stake along with him.She did'nt left him,even when he himself told to do so.And today,she just could'nt believe it AS TO HOW SHE WAS BEING ACCUSED OF LEAVING HIM AND GO,ONE CAN DEFINITELY LEAVE MATERIALISTIC THINGS,AND PEOPLE AS WELL...BUT JUST HOW COULD A BODY LEAVE ITS SOUL AND GO.
She told her part of the story,as to how ,she was being wronged,and as she thought that she was proved innocent,another accusation fell upon her,"that she married another man".The woman who was observing a fast for her husband,who allegedly is her attempted murderer,JUST HOW COULD SHE MARRY ANOTHER MAN,THAT TOO IN SUCH A SMALL SPAN OF TIME.
but the woman within her was enraged,when the biggest accusation fell upon her,that too from the side of her husband,"that she is expecting someone's else child",and she took it as an abuse on her unborn baby.And became furious.But when her Suraj reacted in as manner,that she had expected initially,all her anger and frustration melted in one go...as she gave in the moment,announcing it to her love,that she is expecting the symbol of their love,nurturing it in her womb...and the woman got the ultimate peace of her life,as her husband,the one she loves,caressed her tummy,and cherished the moment along with her.
And she sat at his level,and held his face to sink in with the moment.
After all,she had loved,she had married,and now the symbol of her pure relation was about to come,and she hugged the love of her life tightly,with new dreams in her twinkling eyes,as the new arrival was to join her with her love,into a bond immortal.




"TUJHE YAKEEN KYUN NAHI HOTA,MERE WAFAA PAR,,,,???
KIS,KIS KO NAHI CHHODA TUJHE PAANE KE LIYE...!!!"
(Why don't you believe at my love,how to explain you that I have left so much,just to be with you)


I dont know really what a man needs or yearns his life,but this man had been closely observed by me,since a year,and that is all I could feel for him
Suraj Rajvanshi,he was the man,built of ambitions,for whom relations,family ties,love,compassion,humanity,never hold any meaning altogether,,,all that he used to crave for was power and money.
But no one knew,that since childhood,all that this man used to crave for was a small little happy family,that could fulfill him,and make him more whole.
But one day,a beautiful angel,the bird of strong hopes came flying in his life,who taught him the meaning of all that beautiful virtues,and imbibed them within him,and brought out his inner hidden side in front of everyone...she made him to realize "that he was not FIRE,he is meant to be LIGHT"...and in return,she start doting upon her,with all the resources contained within him,and worshiped her like some goddess...the man on whom,none could ever emerge victorious,willfully bowed hie head,his heart,in front of this lady,his love,his life,his wife,his Chakor.
Finally his dreams were going to turn into a reality,as he was going to marry the girl of his dreams...But on that unfortunate day,all his hopes came crashing,as he waited for hours impatiently for her arrival,and all that he got was the shock of his life,that she left him and went away.,,,,,Tis was not enough to give upon his love.As he waited for her return for their fixed marriage,but she did'nt.He then spent a month searching for her like some madman,seeking strangers with her photograph.
Day by day,things started to worsen in his family,he even went to benaras,to seek her,only to witness his biggest insecurity turned alive..."As he saw Chakor with some another man,and he even got evidence,that she indeed left him,and married another man".He did'nt composed himself,when he was again left shaken as he learnt that his wife.his life,his love was expecting someone else's child...HIS LOVE WAS NURTURING HIS DREAMS,BUT EYES WERE OF SOMEONE ELSE...but all these could'nt do one thing,all this just could'nt make him hate her,or let himto give upon his love for her.As he paved his own way to reach her.
And finally,he got her,her life was about to faint,when he caught her,and made her drink water...the veil was removed,and his dreams were alive in front of his eyes...as she,his Chakor was standing in front of him.
before,he could sink in,,,she started to walk off,once again,,,but this time,even she was'nt allowed to let go off him,,,,and he grabbed her and puller her closer,and asked the most innocent question ever,that had been haunting him from so long..."Kiya Kya hai Humne???"...in the most pathetic tone,and he was accused of the biggest lie ever,that even the gods from the seven skies,could never make a right..."That he wanted to kill his wife,his life,his love,his Chakor".
he was the one who without giving a second thought consumed poison for this very lady,and today he is being accused of being behind her life,that too from her side.Can life love and life be more cruel than this???To prove his innocence,all that he could do was to hold her face closer to him,and ask the same question to her goddess...of what she thinks.
things got sorted and his side of misunderstanding was still left to be cleared...and when he came to know the biggest truth,he just freezed.
At that moment he behaved some madman,as he was just unable to come to terms to things that unfolded this way in his life...he was unable to believe that in just matter of few moments,how can life be so showerig upon him,on that fateful day and moment,he got the LOVE of his life along with its GIFT.
and all that he could do was,to sit down on his knees,touch her tummy,and feel the life that was breathed within him,after days of choking.He could not believe that someone was to come and call him "Papa",a word that Suraj never could address himself,as his father has given him the biggest pains of his life.
People say this,that what we crave,but could never get it,we dream it for our children to live that for us.
All his life,this man called someone as 'Papa',and craved,yearned for his unconditional love,a boy just wanted to be loved by his father,and wanted to live a small happy life,along with his parents...but his wishes never fulfilled...
He wanted to give his child,what he never got.A FATHER'S LOVE...he could never really call him Papa but someone was arriving to call him as Papa,the gift of their pious love,,,,,
and to cherish that gift,he just hugged his wife,his love with new aspirations in his teary pink eyes.


Pal do pal ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Is pyaar ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
to khuda se maang loon
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

[Why is the life just a moment or two,
for this love, centuries aren't enough..
So let me ask God
for some more time, anew,
I have to live just here,
I have not to go away from you..
Now that you are there to share my pain,
Now that you share my pain,
Every pain is beautiful,
Now that you share my pain..]

[Hamdard means someone who shares you pain.without you asking,your sympathizer.]

Teri muskurahatein hain taakat meri
Mujh ko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
In mein hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagaani badi khoobsoorat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

[Your smiles are my strength,
I got hope from them only.
Whatever atrocity the world does to me,
in them [these smiles] is my safety..
My life became very beautiful,
now where else would heaven be..]

Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Teri dhadkanon se hai zindagi meri
Khwaahishein teri ab duaayein meri
Kitna anokhaa bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lautoonga yahaan tere paas main haan
Vaada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

[My life is from your heartbeats,
your wishes are my prayers now..
what a unique bond it is,
that your and my life have become one..
I'll come back to you only..
It's my promise, even if I die..]

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai




They both were sitting-as If Chakor was lying in the most comfortable couch ever,and Suraj was the king of the world with his life embraced in his arms...
The moment was a feeling,which no words can do justice,that could only be felt by the two souls...all could Suraj say that he loves Chakor more than anything,and that his love cannot be described in words,and all that he said was a sorry to both his wife and his child,but did'nt forgot to acknowledge Chanduji...as he watched the two crazy lovers in silence basking in in his full light.
wished the moments just stood still with time,,,and stayed a lil longer.
as Chakor had to go,leaving Suraj's hands,and his expressions were saying..."Abhi na jaao chhodkar,ke dil abhi bharaa nahi..!!!"

dil bharta nahi
aankhein rajti nahi
chaahe kitna bhi dekhti jaaoon
waqt jaaye main rok na paaoon

[the heart is not fulfilled,
the eyse aren't satisfied,
however much I keep looking at you,
time passes and I'm not able to stop it.]

tu thodi der aur Theher ja sohneya
tu thodi der aur Theher ja
tu thodi der aur Theher ja zaalima
tu thodi der aur Theher ja...

stay a little longer, O beloved,
stay a little longer.
stay for a little more time, O cruel one,
stay a little longer...with me


"But let their be,spaces between our togetherness,and let the winds of the the heavens dance between us...Love one another,but make not a bond of love,let it rather be a moving sea between shore of our souls...!!!"
-Khalil Gibran.



But this analysis was written by Rabbi.😳



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Eatifi thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So this was it Guys,my analysis on Sukor reunion...❤️
extremely sorry for making it sooo long.😳

and this one is especially written for Ruby and Sumi...🤗hope I did'nt disappointed both of you.😳
Edited by Eatifi - 7 years ago
SilverLove. thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing post di i just loved it .👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eatifi

So this was it Guys,my analysis on Sukor reunion...❤️

extremely sorry for making it sooo long.😳

and this one is especially written for Ruby and Sumi...🤗hope I did'nt disappointed both of you.😳



Wow la jawaab

Am not sukor for a single tear drop but have tears down

What a scintillating feeling

Thanks rabia..

I just froze...

Loads of love and thanks for the lovely lines with translation

Can i ask you more

Just quenching more and more



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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is outstanding rabia. You have summed up sukor reunion so beautifully.
Thanks so much for posting this. Your writing moves me and it's so good to read your analysis.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its long because you never planned it to be..Your love for SuKor can never be crisp..Let it flow more Rabia.. 😳
Undoubtedly enjoyed reading and loved the analysis..But this time I want to appreciate your writing..I actually forgot that I've watched it already and you've written the same thing..It looked like Im reading something new and something more..The depth in emotions, innocence in love, poetic in between..Just Beautiful 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@Pershi
Thanks for it😊


@Sumi
No need to thanks dear and of course you can ask for more🤗


@Ruby
Glad that my writing moved you.😃


@Divya
Thanks for those lovely words dear😳
Edited by Eatifi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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As usual you excelled in your writings dear Rabi!
Just got to swim in the river of love with Sukor through your writings!
You should become an analyst writer or journalist/reporter! You would for sure make goody things.

Enough of your praises else you will grow your two horns! ;-)

The Moon as witness for each and every steps of their love is just the speciality of this couple!

Their life is just the one everyone wishes for in the matter of love but when it comes to the battle they went through, we just wish that it doesn't happen in real for anyone as it's pain but pain along with love is something which gets us to another blissful world and that's the world where Sukor bring us with their magic!

Applause to you for this beautiful piece of your writings! :-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

As usual you excelled in your writings dear Rabi!
Just got to swim in the river of love with Sukor through your writings!
You should become an analyst writer or journalist/reporter! You would for sure make goody things.

Enough of your praises else you will grow your two horns! ;-)

hee...heee they are already grown😛😆

The Moon as witness for each and every steps of their love is just the speciality of this couple!

Their life is just the one everyone wishes for in the matter of love but when it comes to the battle they went through, we just wish that it doesn't happen in real for anyone as it's pain but pain along with love is something which gets us to another blissful world and that's the world where Sukor bring us with their magic!

Applause to you for this beautiful piece of your writings! :-)


applause to that beautiful lines,,,,,so very true.
love is the sweetest pain,that anyone wishes for in their lives😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eatifi


applause to that beautiful lines,,,,,so very true.
love is the sweetest pain,that anyone wishes for in their lives😳

Aww
Applause for applause!
Not good yaar!

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