TS : Roman Candles (Completed - 09/04) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello buddies!

Here is the SP!
As I got the idea for the SP, I wrote it immediately!
So next week there will be only one part of TTW and 1st part of Zarir.
Happy reading!

*****

Sneak-Peak


Seeing him after three years had no effect on me as the distance was not only in Kms but also in communications.
"How are you?" he asked.
"Good!" I said with a smile "Where is he?" I asked.
"In his room!" pointing towards the upstairs.
I smiled a simple smile and ran towards the stairs, feeling his stairs on my back.

***

"You are sweating!" he said as if I don't see my state.
What else can I do other than standing like this.
I did a mistake.
A big one.
"Do you want to talk about it?"
What can I say now?
I don't want talk about that uneventful night? Nope! He doesn't know anything about it.
You stayed away for three years, so stay away for the rest of my life too? It's too rude.

***

She didn't change.
She is still the same!
"When are you going back?" twisting few strands of her hair in her hand.
I smiled as I replied "Three years of exile wasn't enough that you want me to go away?" I know that it wasn't exactly a reply but it has been three years that I didn't meet her and I still feel the same vibe for her, so a playful talk is not a bad thing.

***

I want to ask her 1000s of questions but what can I do when the distance between us is unmeasurable.
"Are you alright?"
Her eyes are just going here and there but not lifting towards mine.
Has she found what really happened last night?
What is she thinking?
"Why are you here?" she questioned back.

*****

That's all for the SP!
Well it might be confusing who is who but when the story unfolds, you will get to know everything.
All your guess are welcomed!
And of course the SP is related to the title, do you get how? ;-)

- Maithili

(Please no quotes, only replies!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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looks very interesting di .But i am really very confused . waiting for the first part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sneak peak is interesting
But it was confusing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi sis..
Interesting sneak peak..
But as u said it was very confusing tat whom talks to whom?
So waiting to read the first part..sis
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pershial

looks very interesting di .But i am really very confused . waiting for the first part

Thanks a lot dear!
Hope the story too to be interesting.
Confused? Well coming with a tip in few seconds.
May be then you can answer to those questions.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Sneak peak is interesting

But it was confusing

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you liked the SP!
Clue is coming!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

Interesting sneak peak..
But as u said it was very confusing tat whom talks to whom?
So waiting to read the first part..sis

Hey dear!
Thank you so much dear!
Happy that you find it interesting!
Hmmm May be my next post will clear a bit of your doubt!
Let's see!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello!

I can see that you find it confusing!
Well! A small question!
In all the SP unto now, who will mostly speak? I mean the people who interact mainly there!
If you find out, it's the same people speaking here!
I mean only the name is same but not the characterisation!
Did you got who they are?
And the clue is there are only 2 people present in the whole SP!
I think I said a lot more than needed ;-)

Maithili
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting sneak peak.
I think Suraj just returned after 3 years absence and Chakor came to his family house. Was she inquiring about Vivaan?

Curious to know what happened that night. Are they both referring to the same night or are they two different nights?

Even at the beginning, there is tension between them.

Eagerly waiting for the first part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

Hello!

I can see that you find it confusing!
Well! A small question!
In all the SP unto now, who will mostly speak? I mean the people who interact mainly there!
If you find out, it's the same people speaking here!
I mean only the name is same but not the characterisation!
Did you got who they are?
And the clue is there are only 2 people present in the whole SP!
I think I said a lot more than needed ;-)

Maithili

This s more confusing than sp sis..😛

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