Rikara ff humdard part 2 updated on page 2

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Omkara had just left gauri after marrying her and putting all accusations on her and without listening to her. That was the level of endurance gauri had. she broke down .finally when no tears was left in her eyes gauri went to her house changed her clothes and sat in a corner crying .
Omkara was waiting in the Railway Station for the train when he heard a sweet voice and turned to see a small boy smiling at him.
" thank you uncle for saving my Didi " said the boy.
omkara did not understand .when a elder lady came and boy said something in her ears. The elder lady had gratitude in her eyes and said " ur the same person who saved gauri betiya's life thank you so much. Poor gauri her uncle and aunt were so cruel that they scold her to that Kali thakur . Gauri refused to Kali thakur but because of her mother's life she had to agree . Even jhanvi thakurein was too guilty that she could not save gauri and did suicide in guilt. My son somehow with his gang made gauri escape Kali thakur's house but the villagers were made to believe gauri was responsible for jhanvi's suicide and tried to kill her and you saved her. God bless you beta. Keep our gauri happy. Me and my son are going to other place ". The elder lady went away with the boy leaving leaving omkara shattered. Omkara's suitcase fell from his hands in the shock. What had he done he misunderstood her? Hell he called her a gold digger and characterless no he married her left her and came all alone. Realization finally dawned on him he was too blinded in his mother's problem seeing jhanvi thakurein and Kali thakur he got remembered of his mother and father then came gauri he without clarifying he thought her as sveltana and he took out all his anger on sveltana on her. She had tried to tell him but he never believed. He had to go and gain her forgiveness yes. Omkara picked up suitcase and went towards the village.

" her husband will come and take her " said gauri's mother trying to stop the village people from entering the house. But everything went in vain as they pushed her and went inside the house to find gauri hugging her knees and crying. No one felt pity on her. They started throwing accusations on her.
" may be her husband came to know her true colors so he left her here and went " said one women.
" we warned that fellow to not marry her but he was too blinded by her. He did not listen " said another villager.
" she has black magic with her so only she trapped two rich man and killed the thakurein " said a old lady.
Gauri's mother tried to shut the people there but everything went in vain but what surprised her was that her daughter who usually fights was sitting and sobbing hearing this things.
" we should kill her otherwise she will destroy the village " said the old lady.
The villagers were going to approach gauri when a sound of someone entering distracted them and gauri ran inside her room but did not lock it. The villagers looked to find omkara there and were surprised. Gauri's mother was relieved.
" look her husband did not leave her. He went to arrange for them to leave in train. Now u people can leave " said gauri's mother.
The villagers left. Omkara did not know how to react. Should he apologize to gauri's mother for spoiling her daughters life?.
" gauri is inside the room? " said gauri's mother pointing towards the direction of the room.
Omkara went towards the room to find gauri crying and her tears were making him guilty.
" gauri " said omkara softly.
Gauri was shocked to see omkara.
" any more accusations were left that you came back " said gauri sarcastically controlling her tears.
" I'm sorry I did not know truth. Trust me. Please forgive me " said omkara lowering his eyes down he was too guilty to meet her eyes .
" ur sorry would not take back all the hurt u gave me owning to your misunderstanding . I tried you hint so much time that I'm in trouble u were too busy in judging me that you did not understand. Instead of finding the truth yoyou believed the lie which is in front of you. Ur sorry will never bring back my tears which I shed. So keep ur sorry with you and go away. " said gauri angrily.
Before omkara speaks
She holds his collar and says " why are you lowering ur eyes. U think I am so disgusting to meet my eyes also. Do you know what will it feels to be chained like animals I was chained in golden chains there and you was making fun of me. Do you know what it feels to get lustful glances? Do you think I was enjoying dancing and getting humiliated in front of everyone ? Do you even know I was going to get married to three men and was going to be treated commodity if that small children could have not saved me. " said gauri and left his collar and fell down on the ground crying.
" gauri listen " said omkara trying to convince her.
" leave " said gauri. Omkara did not move a bit.
" leave please otherwise I will do something to myself " said gauri.
" I'm leaving .please don't harm yourself " omkara said concerned about her.
" it's strange few hours ago you wished I died or I'm not worth living but now ur so much concerned " said gauri.
Omkara left the room understanding gauri would not hear him.
Omkara came in the hall and saw her mother and said " I'm sorry aunty. I have broken your daughter ".
" u have just become a last thing which broke her. My daughter started breaking at nine years age when she left her studies for taking care of my sickness when my husband died and her uncle and aunt refused to take care of us, she acted to be strong but I saw my daughter breaking inside. She broke everyday when her uncle and aunt taunted her for being my step daughter and burden. Kali thakur broke her further and I became her weakness. U broke her completely but thanks for saving my daughter from the villagers and marrying her . If you was not coming back the villagers were going to burn her believing she does black magic. " said gauri's mother.
Omkara was shocked to learn. Till now he thought his pain was worst but gauri faced the worse. at least shivaay was there to protect him but for gauri. He could never experience her pain.
" beta please be here for some days at least till the villagers cool down otherwise they will not spare gauri "
Said gauri's mother folding her hands in front of him.
Omkara could only nod his head. Gauri's mother went to arrange his room for time being leaving omkara alone in his guilt.
Guys I am not going to update for next two weeks. I have written it before some days and I had saved in draft and now I published. I have my exams. Sorry.
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Part one
Gauri came and had her dinner because she did not to give tension to her mother and worsen her health. She saw omkara having food , ignoring him and she had her part of food.
Omkara saw gauri acting like a mechanical machine.
"where was the girl who had dared to drive bulldozer on this car and challenged him, Who fought with him ".
Before omkara started a conversation with her, gauri quickly disappeared to her room which had only darkness Now. Though he did not have the guts to face her, omkara walked into her room which was surrounded by darkness. He saw her sitting in one corner holding a small girl bride toy in her hand with no emotions on her face.
He went and sat near her. She still did not show any movement in her body.
It was when he placed his hands on hers, she shrugged it off and looked furiously at him. But she still did not say a word Her silence was killing him. Why can't she shout at him like she did at morning?.
" gauri I'm sorry. Please talk to me. Let's just sort of things between us. Please speak to me " said omkara almost pleading her.
She rolled her eyes at him and took the small bride toy in her hand , showed to him.
She smiled sadly and said " you know my best friend gifted me this in childhood before she left the town when she saw me crying because my uncle and aunt again taunted me. She gave me telling that one day someone will come ,love me and take me to the other place where I will be showered with only love. I asked her when that person will come? She said when I will become big like my teacher Didi who is beautiful. U know I was so happy that day. I hoped to grow big soon. All my uncle's taunts did not break me I was living in a hope that it will end one day. As I grew up I understood that what my friend actually she had meant my marriage and that person who will take me to light will be my husband. I always used to see myself in the mirror to look if I'm beautiful enough for marriage. Will I look beautiful like this doll. But alas my last hope broke so did I "
Gauri left the doll and it broke into pieces on the floors. Wiping her teary eyes, gauri grew silent again.
Omkara could stare at her sadly. He never knew that he had broke her only dream. How could he ever mend his mistakes?.
" it's ok. You can leave now from this place I don't need your help Now. I will handle the villagers. What would they ever do they will just bury a person without soul " said gauri coldly.
Her voice has grown cold. She used to have friendliness, liveliness in her voice. She was ready to burn in fire than living. His heart was getting heavy with guilt.
" gauri please. Stop this " said omkara feeling helplessness. He can't bear to hear more pain of her.
" what happened Mr omkara singh oberoi? You could not handle this much lies right. For you I'm a gold digger who is still lying " said gauri angrily.
What was she? One time she is vulnerable other time she gets furious and angry . Will he ever be able to understand her thought omkara.
" it's just that last time I want to tell you this. If you don't believe it does not matter. I always dreamed of love not money, if I am offered world's all wealth to live with Kali thakur I would rather die than accepting it. " said gauri with tears welled up in her eyes.
Omkara's eyes turned moist hearing it. But what he saw in her eyes turned him fearful. Her eyes became cold, emotionless which no one could read. He could very well identify this change as he had went through it when his mother burned in front of his eyes.
" no he can't tell gauri to go through that. It will pain a lot. She is too fragile to handle it " screamed his heart.
But it was too late by then.
" by the way how did you realize that I'm innocent ?" asked gauri in her cold voice.
Back to being cold.
" that small child which saved you and his mother said. " said omkara remembering what actually happened.
Gauri was walking out of the room and when she turned and said
" oh you believed somethiething without evidence at last. Why did not you think that time that it would again be one of my trap. What if the people were fraud send by me to trap you again? "

" gauri I know you are innocent I can see that in your eyes " said omkara softly looking at her. He should handle her delicately
Deadly silence and darkness what the room was covered with for now.
Gauri was almost stepping out of the room and when she turned back to him locked her cold eyes with his guilty eyes. Gauri spoke her final words
" I hope you would have seen the innocence in my eyes before or read it before things would have been different. Anyway thanks for teaching me that fairy tales does not exist. Love does not exist in this world nor any other emotions. Thanks ".
Turning her back and not letting her tears flow, gauri slowly walked out of the room.
Tears escaped from omkara's eyes and he touched them. Finally he was back to his old form, the angry beast omkara who aroused seeing his mother burning in the fire because of his father was death seeing gauri's innocence and dreams burning in front of his eyes. The emotions which he thought will never come back to him came back but with a price of her innocence and world.
For everyone who saw gauri walking out of the dark room to the bright hall would be symbolism of her walking from darkness into the light but only he saw that she carried the darkness of this room with her that it could destroy every light which touched her. He saw the same change which almost destroyed his innocence chaining her and he could not do anything. He could just see her getting destroyed by it.
He saw her doll broken into pieces and he lifted every piece carefully .
As he lifted every piece of the doll. He promised himself he will not let gauri's innocence get destroyed . He had broken her but he will fix her back if it takes his whole life he does not care .
Ironically enough. It was women who had always influenced omkara's life.
Seeing his mother's marriage getting destroyed by his father he never wanted to marry. Riddhima's betrayal shattered him into pieces and ishana taught him to never trust anyone blindly. Sveltana destroyed his left innocence and his mother's suicide sowed the seeds of the beast omkara. But no one suffered it was him who suffered the most and it was gauri who paid the price for what influence this women did to him.
With strong promise to make gauri back to herself, omkara stood in her room waiting for her to come back if it takes infinity let it take. He was ready to wait for her till that time.



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It's something different..we always saw Gauri who helped Om to come out of the darkness..but here it's his turn to heal her and mend her broken heart...continue soon..
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Hello there,
Have you written this on tellyupdates?
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Chapter 2

After picking each piece of the broken doll. Omkara sat on the floor waiting for gauri to come back to the room. Omkara did not know when he slept waiting for gauri.
Gauri entered her room thinking that omkara could have left the room. When she entered the room, she found omkara sleeping on the floor. Maybe he slept waiting for her.
Gauri stared at the sleeping figure of omkara, he looked so innocent. She put blanket over him. Gauri slept on the bed shivering in the cold but omkara had a peaceful sleep because of the warmth the blanket gave.

"omkara beta wake up " cried gauri's mother.
Omkara woke up and then realized someone has put blanket over him. He wondered if it was gauri? But gauri's mother cries distracted him .
" what happened aunty? " asked omkara seeing her cry.
" beta. The village people came morning unexpectedly. Don't know what happened to them. They again started to cruse gauri and dragged her to burn her alive screaming that she is a witch . I tried to stop them but they did not listen. Save her beta " said gauri's mother in between her sobs.
" where have they taken gauri? " asked omkara sensing the situation.
" to the temple. " said gauri's mother.
" aunty don't cry I will protect gauri. " said omkara assuring gauri's mother.
Omkara was going towards the temple hurriedly. His vehicle got repaired so he was walking fast.
Someone bumped upon omkara. Omkara looked up to see gauri , bumped on him. He was finally relieved by all the scary thoughts which surrounded him. She is safe.
" there she is. " said one of the man.
Omkara looked up to see the village people coming towards gauri. He noticed gauri's sacred expression. Shocking gauri and the villagers, omkara stood in front of gauri as her shield. Omkara gave a dangerous glance to the villager who was approaching towards gauri to which the villager took back steps getting frightened .
Omkara looked back at gauri to see if she is fine. They shared a eye block. It broke because of villagers shouting.
" she is a witch. Why are you saving her. Let her die. U will be freed by her " said a old lady standing in the crowd.
" that's why you married her other wise who would marry a bad luck like her and s**t like her " said another woman.
Tear fell upon omkara's shirt from gauri's eyes. Omkara lost his temper .
How dare they make her cry? He was trying to make her alright but they again started to break her.
" stop it " omkara roared at the villagers .The whole village went silent hearing his roar.
" how dare you try to kill my wife? Kill her is far thought,How dare you people speak against her? . Do you people even know you tried to kill oberoi family's daughter in law?. I'm warning you people last time stay far away from my wife. Otherwise I will not spare anyone. My one phone call ur whole village will get destroyed " said omkara gritting his teeth.
The villagers gulped with fear hearing him .
He holds gauri's wrist and drages her .
" leave my hand. " said gauri trying to free herself from his grip.
After reaching near her house he left her hand. Finally getting freedom from his grip on her hand ,she looked at me furiously.
"Thanks for saving me but it does not mean that you make it a chance to touch me " said gauri angrily.
Omkara looked at her furiously. Did she just accuse him of lusting on her?.He wanted to answer her back or punish for telling this things to him. But he became clam, he stood silently hearing her accusations.

Gauri looked at him shockingly . He was not giving any reaction for her words she excepted him to answer her back, manhandle her but nothing of that sort happened. She went inside her house feeling defeated of trying to raise the same beast from omkara who always accuse her , she was feeling weak with his new side and fighting with it was difficult . So she tried to wake up the beast in him but nothing of that sort happened. He was furious at her for telling him the words, she was almost sure he would try to manhandle her but he stopped himself. Why did he stop himself or what made him stop? .

Omkara stared as gauri went inside the house. He really felt hurt by her words, he actually wanted to shout at her but then he saw her eyes which was actually excepting this reaction from me. He stopped because he understood the reason for her telling the bitter words. Gauri could not handle his change of behavior towards her, she was ready to get hurt but was not ready to break. is gauri falling weak fighting with him now ? Then it is a good indication but first he had to take her out of this village. This village will always remind her of the bitter past, the villagers will not let her leave peacefully. To start a new beginning gauri has to move to a new place. She will never agree , but he had to convince her.
Omkara walked inside the house thinking of ways to convince gauri.

Precap : omkara and Kali thakur face off. Will omkara be able to convince gauri?

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