On Track, Misunderstanding! RiKara OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello forum wasiyon... i am new to india-forums and definitely don't know much how it works... though not really new to fictions I have been wattpad writer but thought to post this OS here. i have been a ishqbaaaz viewer since start and dil boley oberoi too, i am crazy fan of Rikara (shivika too) and have written quite a fics on them (still on going on wattpad ) yeah i am not that good writer just exploring differents things and ideas ! do give try to this fiction.. also i don't really know how IF works so if i wont be able to reply advance sorry...
enough of my bakwas now (no proof read)


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sitting on the egde of his bed, waiting for his wife to come... eyes red-with-rage that scare almost the hell out of other person.

wait to get his questions answered was making him furious, he tap his foot deliberately! the door finally opened! she walked in to see him in mess,

a piece broken inside her seeing him in miserable condition unknown to reason.. just two steps she walked closing the door behind her!

she wanted to ask him the reason, but she was restricted, what HAQ she has on him? settling her belongings on the desk!

"kahan thi tum itni raat tak?" a bewildered voice came from behind!

she turned back to see him furiously looking at her! she walked pass him nt bothering to answer his question!

"kya hua jawab nahi hai dene k liye?" a sarcastic reply came, she turned her face to look at him! who slowly tilted his head to face her with disgust look!

her tired face, moist voice!...

"jaruri kaam tha ap ko bata kar gaye the" she sternly replied

"kya zaruri kaam tha mujhe bhi toh batao" taking her hand in his with mischivious furious eyes he looked into her!

her breath hitched with his touch, taking her hand away from him "hum apko batana jarori nahi samajhte" pretending to be stern she stoop back to turn!

"itna zarori kaam tha k tumhe apne bhaiya aur bhaujayi ki shaadi chorkar jana parha aur keh rahi ho mujhe nahi bata sakti, batao gauri mujhe janna hai?" his voice filled sarcastic anger.

she took a glance of him staring at her, but she ignored those red eyes!

"oh tumhe sharam arahi hai ab batane mein, jab yeh sab kar rahi thi toh sharam nahi ayi?" he accused her sitting on corner of bed placing his hands on either sides of bed to give him support!

she turned in shock to look at him with widen moist eyes!

"omkara ji! yeh kya bol rahe hain aap" her voice cracked..

"wahi jo tum sun rahi ho" he got up from crossing his arms around his chest with disgust in eyes..

she wiped her steathly eyes! not bothering to give an explanation in her defence turning her back to him...

seeing her cold behaviour omkara furiously turned her, tightly holding from shoulders his nails almost digging into her skin, making her hurt!

"kesi besharam aurat ho tum! tum mein zara bhi sharam hoti toh youn mujhe attitude na dikhati!" he said almost hurting her inside out!

"i cant believe k tum jesi aurat meri..." the word patni strucked in his throat again...

"apki kya, kya apki? bataiye! aur ap kis haq se humse pooch rahe hain k hum kahan jate hain kyun jate hain? haan jawab dijiye aur haan hum koi safaiye nahi denge hum thak chuke hain apko humari sachayi ka saboot dete dete" she fired back shrugging her shoulder to get rid of his sharp grip.

he clapped his hand " wow! kya speech di hai tumne, kya bola tumne sachayi ka saboot? tum jesi aurat kya sach bole gi jo apne ghar walon ko chorkar itna bara function chorkar, zaruri kaam ka bahana bana kar bahar aiyaashi karne gayi hui hai... tum kitni giri hui aurat ho gauri ke paison k liye kisi bhi mard k saath" before he could complete his sentence i tight slap came on his face.

his hand went on his cheek, it was hard, that hard that he never imagined... her eyes filled tears! she was looking at him with offensive eyes...

"bas bohot hogaya" she yelled at him at top of her voice..

"apka jo dil karta hai ap humein bolte rehte hain, lakin humein nahi pata tha k aap hamare bare mein itni ghatiya raii banaye ge, ap toh hum par bharosa karte the na phir ap hum par itna ghinhona ilzaam kese laga sakte hain" she yeld back at him with crack in her voice...

totally broken she gasped "ap humare charitra ko kyun bura sabit karna chahte hain, keh dijiye na k aap humein nahi rakhna chahte yahan, chale gaye the hum kyun roka humein, kyun rok rahein hain jb hum par bharosa hi nahi hai" tears flowed her eyes

"toh aur kya karun, tum aise kaam karti hi kyun ho" he yelled back

"bharosa kiya tha lakin tumne tordiya" he yelled with choked voice...

"apne hum par kabhi bharosa kiya hi nahi tha jabhi ap hamara peeche kar rahe the na?"

"Main toh bas fikar kar raha tha k tum kahan ho par tum toh kuch aur hi chee!!!" He accused her again!

"Apka koi haq nahi banta k ap hum par hngli uthayein" she deliberately said...

"Haan sahi kahan mera koi haq nahi, koi haq nahi banta na" yphe yelled the last sentence pinning her to the wall by her shoulders...

"Agar mera haq nahi banta toh kis ka haq banta hai batao mujhe bataooo" he shouted at top of his voice, their faces inches apart...

"Humein dard horaha hai choriye" she winced

"Jawab do mujhe gauri, tum toh kehti thi main tumhara pati hun ab kya hua, koi aur paise wala mil gaya tumhe huh?"

"Haan" she shouted, "hum mante hain apko pati sirf apko hi lakin humare manne se ka hota hai, ap toh nahi mante na.. ka haq hai humara ap pr? Bataiye ? Is hi tarha apka bhi koi haq nahi hum par k aap hum ungli uthayein humare charitra ko galat sabit karein" she pushed him

"Ohhh!maahaan gauri... jab kahan thi yeh mahanta jab tum kisi aur k saath gulcharre uraa rahi thi" he mocked making her heart pierce...

"Bol liya ya aur kuch bolna baki hai?" She boldly replied hiding her broken feelings...

"Ek kaam kariye aaj apko jo bolna hai boliye hum sunne ko tyyar hain, taaki phir ap k dil mein kuch reh na jaye aur apko takleef na ho k gauri ne yeh kiya woh kiya" she sternly replied sitting on the couch!...

"lagaye, lagaye apko hum par aur kya ilzaam lagane hain, wese bhi apne humein itna tordiya hai k ab kuch tootne k liye bacha hi nahi hai" her tears almost fall when she wiped them...

Omkara didn't speak a word! Whole numb to her boldness...

"Boliye???" She shouted "acha chalo koi baat nahi apne poocha tha na hum kahan gaye the tph hum apko jawab dete sun payeingy?!" She accused herself for making him feel guilty...

Omkara turned his back not ready to listen her reply!...
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"Muh kyun pherliya, dekhiye idhar apko jawab chahiye tha... bina jawab k apne hum par itna ghinona ilzaam lagaya ab asliyat toh janne ki himat hogi na?!"

Omkara turned back to face her, some where his heart said to him his accusations was wrong, he didn't wanted her to be what he said... ready to listen her he stood in front of her...

"Sab se pehle toh thank you, apne humari itni dekh bhaal ki humein yahan rakha... lakin aaj gauri kumari SHarma ap se sirf itni pooche gi k aap kya chahte hain?" She stretched SH to make him understand it
"Acha humara sawal baad mein pehly apka jawab"

"Apko hum par itna hi shak hai na jaiye bade bhaiya se pooch lijiye hum kahan the kese tha kyun the kyun ke unhone he humein englis, ohh engliSHh seekhane k liye arjun sir k paas bheja tha"
"Aur acha hi hua k unhone humein bheja apko bina bataye akhir humein pata toh chala k jinhe hum hamara pati mante hain woh humare baare mein ka sochte hain..."

"Mil gaya jawab" she shouted...
"Ab humare sawal ka jawab dijiye" she clamly said...

Omkara stood numb, enable to digust what he just did...

"Aur kitna jhoot bolo gi gauri" he again accused her

She closed her eyes with his words... she stood up...
"Apko prablem kya hai? Apko sach bolo toh galatfehmi, na batao toh toh hona hi galatfehmi...! Ap chahte kya hain" he stood confuse by her revelation...

"Pata nahi" he said truly looking down...

"Pata nahi kya pata nahi, jawab dijiye ap ne aisa kyun kiya kyun ab baar baar hum par ilzaam lagate hain, kyun ap aisa karte hain ek baar hum par poori tarah se bharosa toh kariye" she almost cried...

He hugged her seeing her breaking down...
She composing herself, jerked him...
"Door rahiye" she shouted...
"Hum ek badchalan aurat hain na, mat aiye humare pass" she collapse on floor crying...

"Gauri gauri" he bend and held her shoulder...
"Main main... mujhe maaf kardo, maine tumhara aur arjun ka naam us ghatiya se hotel mein dekha toh mujhe laga k... i am sprt gauri" he tone was calm...

"Yahi toh masla hai apka, apko har cheez lagti hai... ap kyun ek baar sochte nahi kuch bhi bolne se pehle?" She weeped...

"Gauri please mujhe maaf kardo..." he cupped her face to make her look at him...

She looked deeply in his eyes, observing him...
"Chooriye humein" she stood up wiping her tears and freeing her face from his hold...

"Kis haq se ap maafi mang rahe hain aur kis haq se hum apko maaf karein bataiye" omkara face went pale with her sudden question which she might have been asking for long...

He stood up looking down not able to give her answer...

"Nahi hai na koi jawab toh theek hai" gauri walked towards the side where her unpacked bag was kept...

"Ja rahy hain hum aur humeim rokne ki jarurat nahi hai kyun k humara koi haq nahi hai apki zindagi mein or na hi is ghar kyun bahu pehle ek patni hoti hai... lakin hum toh patni hain hi nahi" she took her luggage and start walking towards room's exit...

"Ruko" he said calmly...
"Kyun" he got replied instantly...
"Mujhe kehna hai" he said...
"Jaldi boliye" she kept stern tone...

Omkara held her hand from back and twirled her... she hit his chest... his hand wrapped around her petite frame...

"Choriye humein, apka koi haq nahi hai" she said protesting to free herself ...
"Toh haq mango na" he said with small smile on side of his lips...

"Aur kis haq se haq mange?" She fired back with questions...

He pinned her to wall unable to keep her under his control because of her constant protest!...
His body pressed her, his bond hands pinning her hands to wall...

"Mujhe maaf kardo please" he apologised again...
"Hum kon hai maaf karne wale" she kept stubborn...

Omkara leaned to her ear and whispered "tum omkara singh oberoi ki patni ho please mrs gauri omkara singh oberoi apne pati ko maaf kardo"

She looked startled "ap aaj humein yeh bol rahe hain kal ohir hum par koi ilzaam laga kar humein jane ko bol denge " she spoke truly...

Their faces inches she spoke on her lips "gauri, mujhe maaf kardo, main insexure hogaya tha k main tumhe kho dunga, par mujhe samajh agaya hai k tumhari meri zindagi mein kya ahmiyat hai! Tum kya mayeine rakhti ho mere liye! "

"Haath choriye aur door hatiye " gauri's tone was calm but stern...
"Nahi tum mujhe chorkar chali jaogi" he pouted...
"Nahi jayeingy ap hatiye" she tried to push!... her voice was still hurt..

He stoop back to give her space...
She looked at him with sad face...
Her hands started hitting him on chest she cried hitting him... his hand wrapped around her understanding her state... she hid her face into his chest after hitting him alot for making her hurt... he patted on her back muttering "i am sorry" her legs went weak and they both sat on floor she was almost in his lap...
His hand moved to her cheeks wiping her tears with his thumb...
He cupped her to make her look into his eyes which was now wet seeing her state...
"Ab toh mujhe maaf kardo" he once again a apologise...
"Omkara ji hum ne apko maaf kardiya par ap hum se wada karein ke ab hum par is tarah se shak nahi kareingy, aur agar kabhi koi baat ho toh humse poochiye lakin is tarah humein ghunehgaar na mana karein" her tears was still flowing but now he was weeping along with her...

"Kabhi bhi nahi gauri " he bending his head on her...
"Humein bhi maaf kardein" she said breathing on her lips...
"Kyun" he asked parting their head
Gauri's hand moved to his cheek where she slapped him he understood and chuckled... "ap has kyun rahe hain" she pouted...

"I deserved this gauri" he held her hand which was on his cheek!... squeezing it "mujhe bohot pachtawa hai mene jo bhi kiya uske liye" her index sushed his lips...
A sensation went on their bodies omkara held her finger from other hand kissed it lovingly... moving his hand to her nape his lips met her! She softly sucked her lips, she closed her eyes in pleasure! He parted after a while. Making her turn crimson red... she tried to move away from when he pulled her back on his lap...
"Biwi ho tum meri haq hai mera" he smirked when she became shy and playfully hit him his chest hiding her shyness into his chest she hugged him again...

"Wese biwi ji! "
"Hmm"
"Apne thappar bohot zor se mara tha" he place her hand along with his on cheek making environment light...
She looked at him guilty, caressing his cheek "sss,,, aur zor se marna chahiye tha na" she mocked and they laughed...
He pulled her back in warm embrace! While she mumbled "omkara ji humein bhi maaf kar dijiye "
"Tumne kya kiya" he asked mockingly...
"Hum ap par kitna chillaye na uske k liye aur apko kitna mara bhi" caressing his chest she said...
To which omkara laughed and made her chukle too...

"Ab biwi ho toh iska bhi haq banta hai tumhara"
They both laughed and stayed in same for position for sometime and talked about random stuff...
Their laugh echoed in room!...
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Done done done...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such an intriguing story!
I liked it very much :D
Well done <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one dear...
Happy to see you here too. ...
Welcome to forum dear...
Enjoy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ahaan..!! Finally you joined IF..welcome...I read your Wattpad stories..and they're just amazing...no need to say you made a grand entry in this forum with this beautiful OS..the best of this OS is you made them talk...all the misunderstanding is created between them just because of the communication gap..but they talked here and solved their problems..loved it...do write more on RiKara..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ahaan..!! Finally you joined IF..welcome...I read your Wattpad stories..and they're just amazing...no need to say you made a grand entry in this forum with this beautiful OS..the best of this OS is you made them talk...all the misunderstanding is created between them just because of the communication gap..but they talked here and solved their problems..loved it...do write more on RiKara..


ahan thank ya! good have somebody from WP! and yeah i always wanted them fight and spoke to each other, shout and have a bit of violence too! so i penned this! and even i loved writing this 😉
Edited by Rahat_Naeem - 8 years ago

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