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Pragnya Kiran

@CrzyPulviophile

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Horror is my genre
You won't believe when I'm tensed or depressed I read horror stories then your romcoms and then go to sleep.
All the tension goes away in air. Horror stories are best tension reliever for me. Sometimes to clear my mind and sleep well I read this genre. Haha probably the odd comment you have ever received.
Write more in this genre.
PM me if you write again on this genre.
In Wattpad, there is a horror story on ShivIka called Raaz. There is a bhootni there.
You know I request to see BhootnIka(Bhootni +Anika)scenes rather than ShivIka scenes. I love BhootnIka more than Shivaay as I want troll that bhootni for her appearance. XD
Haha I'm horror story addict and so avoid to read it too much because I'll start ignoring everything if I read on that genre.

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bworm

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I'll say it was very well written and interesting.

Muje samaj nahi aya.. alag baat hai.

Keep up the good work dear, your stories are always hatke.

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Sine the most of you dint understand. To give you all a little insight...

This can be read in three ways. The hints are scattered oddly here and there.

To clarify..this an Alternative Universe.

The first take that comes easily is he had died and she still awaits him, longs for him and isn't over the fact that he is gone. So all that was happening was her illusion. Its her mind telling her that this world thinks he is gone, the harsh weather is symbolism of the cruel world's thoughts and how the world is now a torture for her to live in and in the end she knows he will always be there ! Here are the indicative sentences.

Just, as lonely as her.
Her eyes awaiting HIS shine and soul HIS warmth
She was extremely cold and was now also growing pale, with every minute as the merciless weather grew torturous, but she stood there adamant.
she remained unaware and oblivious of the missing moons.
Love was Eternal?

The second, take.

He cheated her. A part of her knows that and a part chooses to ignore. The indicative sentences:

The shawl around her did nothing to keep her warm
The bungalow secluded from the busy world which made them feel at home now felt eerie.( Home no longer provided warm. Symbolising that he was no longer the same warm heart home only to her)
She had grown used to the emptiness of the place, his long hours of absence and unusually late arrivals. She of course always showed him how much she dint like it in one way or another not directly though, knowing somewhere down he had other desires too.
The candles had perhaps been blown away by the wind or maybe the time, there was no one to tell. (Candle here symbolising their love.)
the last moon on her bracelet broke, but she remained unaware and oblivious of the missing moons. (The moon going away from her leaving her in darkness)
. She lowered her gaze to the floor to find her forgotten shawl. Quickly picking it up she wrapped it around herself, deciding to move back to the room upstairs. (She decides to remain oblivious to the fact that he cheated.)

Its her realisation that he cheated her making her feel helpless and surrounded by danger and darkness. Until he returns home late. He has loved her and a part of him still cant leave her despite the fact that he cheats on her. The reason why she sees him in the eerie manner is because she knows its wrong he cant cheat her but she cant let him go or question him directly She loves him too much to separate from him. She is willing to face everything (darkness and harshness of the world) for him.

The third, is a fictional take.

He turned a vampire that night. The strange emotions she went through were an indication that he was in trouble. That's why she was so troubled.

He wasn't going to come back as a vampire. But he changed his mind. Because he knew she couldnt live without him just like he couldn't live without her.!

He smiled gently, no matter what he couldn't stay away from her. After all he had fallen for her irrevocably. He smiles mysteriously and his eyes shone with a new gleam as her scent hit his nostrils pleasantly and he felt her warmth against his cold-frozen heart.

Love was Eternal?

There you go Readers,

I decoded it as briefly as I could.

Lemme know which one did you like😆