In Return For Love: An AmarSena Poem

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello people! The following is a poem on AmarSena I had previously posted on my poetry thread in Writers' Corner but I thought I would post it here. This follows Devasena as she reflects on situations and fate as the two are banished from the palace. Feedback is much appreciated!


In Return For Love

A robbed roof and a mother whose affection stood dismissed,
Yet oh bow to the arrow of my soul, why aren't you pissed?
To the spurt of love from the spring of your eyes,
What have i put forth in return, save hurt and cries?

Snatching your all including your candidature to the throne,
Something rightfully yours that rests in another's possession cause you are prone,
To the slightest attempt at maligning the honour of this ill-fated one,
Whom you chose to love in all the reverence that leaves me stunned.

Subjugated by destiny, i walk as you hold my hand,
Never have i seen your face rile up in expressing your inability in taking a stand,
Everything for a word, a symbol of love, a heart?
How do i silently behold your world that is falling apart?

Reassuringly you let your lips twitch into a smile,
Wordlessly stating you peerlessly care a pile,
My lord, you are the source of my indefinite pride,
I hope to repay your love as time strides.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Elara for posting this.
This is so beautiful. Am sure these questions must have been running through her head and heart as she witnessed things unfold.

Pl do post some more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You did it, you did it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks you so much Elara for posting this.
Love it. It is so hypnotizing takes into her mind and world.
Plz post some more.
Keep writing
Loved it.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Elara for posting this.

This is so beautiful. Am sure these questions must have been running through her head and heart as she witnessed things unfold.

Pl do post some more.


Thank you dear! You can call me Ramya. (No, i'm not sivagami 😛 )
I can write more but you need to help me with ideas. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you! Really means a lot!
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Originally posted by: shreyj7

Thanks you so much Elara for posting this.

Love it. It is so hypnotizing takes into her mind and world.
Plz post some more.
Keep writing
Loved it.❤️


Thank you so much Shreya!(i hope that is your name) And yes, i'm Ramya. 😊
Let me know if you have ideas for more poems on AmarSena and i promise to try and write them for you. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic poem Ramya👏
You potrayed Devsena's thoughts very beautifully❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">Fantastic poem Ramya👏</font></font>

<font size="3" color="#ff0000">You potrayed Devsena's thoughts very beautifully❤️</font>


Thanks Nonie!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This a so deep! 😳 I just Iove these rhythmic poems, and Devasena's thoughts here are perfect and the words are wonderfully woven! ⭐️
Fantastic job, Ramya! 🤗

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