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Posted: 8 years ago


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yes your thoughts are correct and as you know I love to give twist and turn so there will be one maybe good one or maybe bad but twist is on the way .


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Chapter 32
(seeing everything fine Ajay brought everyone India for Jalal family wish ands like every normal weekend they plan to have spend there time with each other so like in the morning Jalal and his family was having there breakfast when Ajay comes towards them and sit on his usual seat and started having his breakfast with them to when Mirza saw his neck has red mark so without thinking he in curious voice).
Mirza said : Buddy are you fine did you get hurt.

Ajay said : yes I am fine and I didn't get hurt to why you ask this.

Mirza said : come on your neck is red today looks like some insect bite you so I ask.

(listening this Ajay chocked on his food and because of that he started coughing and cover his neck with his Shirt collar and seeing him coughing Jalal rubbed his back and give him water after few minutes he get calm).

Jalal said : okay now.

Ajay said : yes I am okay now and thanks for water Dude.

Mirza said : you didn't answer my question Buddy.

Hamida said : how many times I told you Mirza don't talk when you are eating butyou never listen to me now have your food.

Bakshi said : but Mom Bhai was just asking nothing else.

Humayu said : for you all it was just concern full question but for Ajay it was no less Heart attack Right Ajay.

(listening Humayu teasing voice Ajay get up from his Seat and in Calm voice).

Ajay said : I need to go I have important Meeting to attend today so bye everyone.

Humayu said : but today is Sunday then.

(but without answering them he run from there to his car and after coming out he started blushing hard remembering his yesterday night which he spend With Ritu and other side Humayu started laughing his heart out and seeing him laughing everyone looked at him with curious expression and understanding there look).

Humayu said : he didn't com yesterday night here he was with Ritu and he didn't had any important meeting to her run from here because he was embarrass from my words.

(understanding his words and hidden meaning of that Mark everyone to started laughing after few minutes they calm them selves and finish there breakfast).

Bakshi said : now what we are going to do now.

Mirza said : let's go to watch movie.

Humayu said : then you all go what we will do there with you all.

Jalal said : it's long time Dad we didn't go to our house let's go there what say.

(listening this Humayu nodded his head in yes).

Bakshi said : yes it's great idea I am that home so much Bhai.

Mirza said : then let's go.

(after finishing there breakfast everyone left for there old house and other side in Sydney Jodha was sitting in garden and lost in the surrounding as today they all take a Day off from Hospital so there is nothing to do suddenly Priya come to her and sit besides he and In calm voice).

Priya said : what are you thinking.

Jodha said : nothing just enjoying the view of nature look how beautiful these flowers are and how much peace her is the smell is so good here and the sound of these birds are so lovely not is it.

Priya said : true very true but don't you think I will caught your Lie.

(listening her Jodha Hugged her tight and in calm voice).

Jodha said : I am scared it's three months now everything is fine now Veer to started feeling something from you more then friendship Ajay Bhai is fine to he told us that he is change now but why why why I can't forget him why his way of torturing me I can't forget why I still get scared from him why I am trying trying so hard to forget everything but still his rage filled eyes haunt me on my dreams why I just can't able to do anything lot of fun and getting love by you and Veer I still can't move on why I think he is not change Priya why.

(saying all this she started crying and seeing her like this Priya started rubbing her back and in Calm voice).

Priya said : s.h...shh... everything will be fine don't cry and don't get scared Jodha if he is not change then to we will not let him harm you okay.

Jodha said : but what if.

Priya said : no if and but just forget all that okay.

(they were talking when Veer come there and seeing them hugging each other he in calm voice)/

Veer said : what is this all the hug is only for you both and what about me whenever you both will be with each other you both forget me.

( listening him both looked at him then goes to him and hugged him to and in calm voice).

Jodha said : How can we forget you.

Priya said : yes if we will forget you then we will not be in peace right Jodha.

Jodha said : yes he will become devil then.

Veer said : what the hell here I come to you both so I can give you all good news and you both are making fun of me.

Priya said : good news what good news tell us.

Veer said : no you both have to guess.

Jodha said : I think bhai is coming here right.

Priya said : no I think we get promotion right.

Veer said : no no no you both are wrong neither Ajay is coming here neither we get Promotion its just that we all wanted to go back to India right so Ajay made arrangement's for us to go back to India and that to Shimla and I already packed everything are you both ready to go there.

(listening this both girls get happy and Again hugged each other).

Jodha said : it means we will be in our country oh my my how much I missed India and we are going to Shimla that means we will meet Father to I can't say this in words how happy I am now.

Priya said : me to I missed those kids and father so much Now we will meet them to let's go then.

Veer said : fine guys now come Ajay is on skype waiting for us to talk come.

(they very happily goes to talk Ajay and started talking with him).

Jodha said : how are you Bhai it's now one week we talk.

Priya said : you forget us right Monkey.

Veer said : yes Are you fine is there any news for us.

Jodha said : you look happy are you going to get married .

Ajay said : I am fine Angel and I was busy in work that's why didn't called you And Hitler I can never forget you all so stop dreaming that I will let you live in Peace Hitler and Ajay here everything is fine and you are right Angel I am going to get married to Ritu after one week and I want you all here with me.

Jodha said : congratulation Bhai I am so happy for you.

Priya said : you are really smart Monkey you want us there that's why you are letting us come there right anyway congratulation.

Veer said : well whatever the reason I don't care the main thing is you are going to get married and We all are happy for you congratulation.

Ajay said : thanks guys and Hitler don't you get tired complaining for no reason now leave all that and have your breakfast and come to India fast and I already make arrangement's for that okay.

Priya said : how dare you tease me again Monkey.

Jodha said : yes Veer told us about that don't worry we will be with you in your best moment of your life.

Veer said : yes we will be there for you.

Ajay said : Oh my Hitler you know I didn't get this much Peace when I get some big Project But teasing you I get so much pleasure what should I do Hitler and thanks guys I have important work now bye.

Priya said : I will see you when I will meet you Monkey now Bye.

Jodha said : bye Bhai hope to see you soon.

Veer said : take care Dude now bye.

(with that they cut goes to have there breakfast and other side Jalal and his family reach there old house and get shocked and emotional seeing everything is same like they left and everything is neat and clean to looks like they never left from there so they sit on sofa).

Hamida said : Jalal did you do this.

Jalal said : no mom I never come back here in fact I am to surprised like you all seeing this clean and fine.

Humayu said : then who did this.

(they were thinking when Ajay called them so they recievd his call and put on loud speaker so everyone can hear them).

Ajay said : so how was my surprise did you all like it.

Humayu said : so it's you who take care of our house.

Ajay said : what to do I always hope for best and I knew one day you all will come back here for sure so I make arrangements to maintain this and today was the day but you all didn't tell me that you all like it or not.

Hamida said : thank you my son it really mean so much to me this is the house where we started our life and now again after such a long time coming here is so good thank you very much for taking care of this.

Ajay said : oh come you call me your son then thank me to it's not fair.

Humayu said : so what should we do.

Ajay said : start making arrangements for my marriage.

Mirza said : what you are going to marry.

Ajay said : yes why not I already propose my lady love so I thought let get married to is there something wrong.

Bakshi said : so when are you going to marry.

Ajay said : after one week.

Humayu said : good so we should start preparation for that right.

Jalal said : I am happy for you buddy wish your dreams come true and you have happy married life With Ritu.

Ajay said : yes you all should start that and Thanks Dude for wishes now enjoy your time I have some work bye.

(when the call get disconnect Jalal and his family started planning about functions and Jalal goes to his room making excuse of tiredness and after reaching his room he closed the door and laid on his bed)

His heart said : I am happy with you to see everyone happy look how happy your family is now with you and your life is back to you because of your good decision.

His Mind said : but what about My baby is not here with me and I am angry with you for that come on don't take revenge at least do something to get her idiot I miss her.

His heart said : no no don't do anything stupid just wait for right time if your love is true then she will be your by her wish.

His mind said : shut up idiot stop your philosophy lecture and you now for heaven sake stop listening to your Idiot heart and do something to get her.

(after few minutes he get up and goest to dressing area and looked at his reflection in Mirror and smirk at himself and In cunning voice).

Jalal said : you are smart Ajay no doubt but like I said I am mastermind in these games so I won I made you fool Ajay you fell in my trap like I plan for you I knew it you are the only one who can make me free from Law and you did I knew it you are the only one who will make my family to forgive me and you did it you trust me now and because of you only I will meet my Baby girl and she will be with me now uff three months from faking three months I didn't saw her how painful these three months are for me and soon I will have her with Me come soon Baby girl I am waiting for you because I know you will come to Ajay wedding for sure come soon.

(saying all this he started laughing).



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Rashmiii...
I knew it.. I knew it.. He was Faking 😡
I knew it he cnt change this soon this easily... Argh I knew it.
I always said I hv doubt I nvr convince myself tht he all changed... God😡
Frm all the Tim he was Faking... Remmber in night whn he restless n tk med tht Tim too i doubt n I told too... N tht kabir who listening his all talks tht Tim to he knew tht kabir keep on eye n I told tht it impossible man lik Ja didn't feel tht someone evasedropping in his room someone keeping eye on him... I knew it... He nvr change atleast this much n this soon... NEVER 😡
But... Hats off to u rashmi u has written so well tht almost u mk me belive but ther always something who didn't let me believe tht he change... N see i was RIGHT he didn't change...
But u know what rashmi... Now i Hate Ja most.. More than before bcz now he totally changed to Devil... Bfr he was just Cheating on his both Friends one who always stay with him in His think n thin who almost Destroy his life behind him fr him Abdul he with him destroy his Career n life n bcm partner of his crime who didn't think abut him once... He cheated him.
N scnd Ajay who gt so much hurts pains wounds betrayals fr him still he help him his Whole family... Tk care of all of them... Mk him free Frm all crime he done.. Save his Name n reputation n everything... He created tht Friend
But mostly I Hate bcz Now he HD no problems to Cheating his Family his parents Trust Love... Care everything... he mk fun of all things of ther Emotion... Everything
He all the way using Ajay... I told him tht help him b always alert don't Trust him always check him ... But Ajay he is kind heart person n pure soul thts y he didn't able to think Tht Low tht much he HD Gone...
He uses Ajay to set up his Business so tht too bcm Powerful lik Ajay n later he cn use his power against him.. Right??
See everyone believe him... But ther one who didn't n it's Jo... She knew it her heart didn't believe tht he changed n it was Right he didn't...
I just hope... Lik this she don't believe him n fall in his Trap aftr meeting him n be always Alert... But wht m saying is nt going to happen I know frst she will nt believe but lik the Master Faker he is she too fall in his Trap... Sooner or later... Right 😉
Let see...
Waiting for nxt 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago


Rashmi...
Oh m so eager to read further chaps... 😛
Update soon..
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Rashmiii...
I knew it.. I knew it.. He was Faking😡
I knew it he cnt change this soon this easily... Argh I knew it.
I always said I hv doubt I nvr convince myself tht he all changed... God😡
Frm all the Tim he was Faking... Remmber in night whn he restless n tk med tht Tim too i doubt n I told too... N tht kabir who listening his all talks tht Tim to he knew tht kabir keep on eye n I told tht it impossible man lik Ja didn't feel tht someone evasedropping in his room someone keeping eye on him... I knew it... He nvr change atleast this much n this soon... NEVER😡
But... Hats off to u rashmi u has written so well tht almost u mk me belive but ther always something who didn't let me believe tht he change... N see i was RIGHT he didn't change...
But u know what rashmi... Now i Hate Ja most.. More than before bcz now he totally changed to Devil... Bfr he was just Cheating on his both Friends one who always stay with him in His think n thin who almost Destroy his life behind him fr him Abdul he with him destroy his Career n life n bcm partner of his crime who didn't think abut him once... He cheated him.
N scnd Ajay who gt so much hurts pains wounds betrayals fr him still he help him his Whole family... Tk care of all of them... Mk him free Frm all crime he done.. Save his Name n reputation n everything... He created tht Friend
But mostly I Hate bcz Now he HD no problems to Cheating his Family his parents Trust Love... Care everything... he mk fun of all things of ther Emotion... Everything
He all the way using Ajay... I told him tht help him b always alert don't Trust him always check him ... But Ajay he is kind heart person n pure soul thts y he didn't able to think Tht Low tht much he HD Gone...
He uses Ajay to set up his Business so tht too bcm Powerful lik Ajay n later he cn use his power against him.. Right??
See everyone believe him... But ther one who didn't n it's Jo... She knew it her heart didn't believe tht he changed n it was Right he didn't...
I just hope... Lik this she don't believe him n fall in his Trap aftr meeting him n be always Alert... But wht m saying is nt going to happen I know frst she will nt believe but lik the Master Faker he is she too fall in his Trap... Sooner or later... Right 😉
Let see...
Waiting for nxt 😊

oh my my my Nidhi you are so smart dammit you always caught my thoughts before I write the chapter good and wonderful comment loved it and yes you were right I don't want to change Jalal this soon after all he is main villain of this story and it's dark ff to and like I wrote about him on character sketch that he is selfish devil who only care about himself no one so here is the result but to tell you the truth my Jodha is smart so she will not fall in his trap this easily okay. and thanks for lovely comment Nidhi love you for this.
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hey you don't have to wait so much I will update tomorrow till then you have to wait.
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AMAZING CHAPPY
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JO IS DAMN SMART TO FALL IN HIS TRAP

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