One Shot -*Saavan Ki Rim-Jhim * Pinky-Shivika & Tej-Rikara - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Anni...
Love this update...You have portrait Tej's emotions so beautifully...
Really missing your stories a lot...
Best of luck for your exams...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it. Thanks a lot for the pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was mind blowing
Tej has come to realised his mistakes but pinky is yet to reach that phase
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow so beautiful
tej is coming back but pinky is not realizing where her hate is taking her
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res Anni

Unres

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Anni,
This was amazing..You were phenomenal in portraying Tej's emotions..And about Pinky..Well I think God is also helpless in her case..Loved reading it..

Thanks for the pm..

love,
Rusha
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bworm

Splendid my dear.

A different take altogether.
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Originally posted by: farinaks

Marvellous... Magical

Tq fr pm
Continue soon



Originally posted by: dafla

Lovely..tej ri bonding loved it the most..hope to see it onscreen too



Thank You Dear Readers.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update Anniii...

I always wished to see a tej like this...who had emotions deep inside in his heart and love for his son's.. the tej we had saw during the initial stages... the one who care about Omkara... but after seeing his psycho side in DBO i seriously didn't want to see him..
he even tried to kill his wife and son's... so I left that hope... everyone said that he is beyond redemption including me.. but i remember you had made a post once saying that may be it's tej's plan to expose svetlana once..i remember it... and i thought that you always saw things positively that's why... but when I saw yesterday's episode i remembered your post...
I seriously never thought to see this...yesterday it was too emotional yar...its clearly seen in his face that he started to realize his mistakes.. the way he held jhanvi's hand... the way he said about Omkara... the softness when he talked to shivaay...the way he bend to take blessings from dadi... the way he tried to talk with gauri... its clearly show how he needs his family..
and a big realization that..he family is standing by him in his tough time...he had a long way to go but still it's remarkable...
About pinky...she is not even worth to talk about...
she is proving herself again and again that she can't never change...
you beautifully portrayed the different versions anniii
it's fantastic


O my God Aparna! Such a heart-warming comment!

@ Bold
You did! 😃 Even I was like "ye real mein ho raha hai!"

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Exactly. jab humse kuch cheen liya jata hai naa tab humein ehsaas hota hai!

tej and Pinky were my khidkitod fav seniors but CVs decided to spoil them. Pinky could be shown in much better way. Anyway i see her redemption ...

If Shivaay took so long then Pinky would take even longer- to get rid off NKK, for that they would have to go into her past.
Honestly I feel Shakti hides much. He would have never respected her or loved her that's y she became like this.

Thank You So Much Aparna..🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Rhea-

This is so different. Absolutely loved it. It was amazing. Beautifully written. ❤️

Thanks for the PM. 😳


Thank you Rhea 😳

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