Pt 21 Updated Pg 146: Predator Turns Prey Advni FF - Page 20

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

Haye Chitra dil khush kard dita yeh FF update karke! So needed this after the news of the show going off air soon broke out. This chapter was a breeze of fresh air. Thank you love!

Accha is it strange that I also have kullad ki kulfi sitting in the freezer right now and I really want an Advay to fetch it for me and romance me while doing so? 😳

You queen of writing gasping-for-breath-waali-romance you! How do you do it?! I probably get more breathless than Chandni does while reading these dhak-dhak inducing chapters! Uff where's my imaginary fan?! I need some air.

I LOVE LOVE LOVED the dining table scene! So beautifully written. What an adorable little family. Except Leela Maasi. Uff problem kya hai uski?! Mausi ki supaari nikalwaani padegi lagta hai.

LET'S FINISH IT IN THE BEDROOM?! WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO?! Oh my frail heart. How am I going to handle the next chapter???

And you know that bit where Advay tastes the kulfi and the pain of his past engulfs him and he has tears in his eyes? That part was so well written. Barun would enact that bit so well.

Accha now find me a romantic boyfriend like the Advay in your FF ok? 😆

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

@red Seriously you think if i found someone like that i would give him to you 😆

Originally posted by: ..BONANZA..

chitz r u planning to make E.J. james jobless or what?equally FSOG ki takar ka hot steamy sensual seductive update yara...

U will always have takers for your story Chitra

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

Chits Effing HOT update this was ☺️ ☺️

Was riding high after high with FEELS

So much that my mind literally exploded with steam

Am as dumbstruck as Chandni right now🤪

My hearrt has forgetten how to calm itself

EFFF

Will keep reading this till these feeling of euphoria passes

How do you manage to write so purrfectly!!!

Lightheaded and 'Chitrified' = Chitra + Electricity

Reporting from Heaven

Please don't stop this torture For the love of GOD🤗

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

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PS please forgive any Typos, or grammar , as i have been typing these in super sonic speed, HAHA

Oh The fact that Advay is an insomniac, is an Idea that i Nicked from Juhi's incredible OS , So thank you Juhi mi Amor,

Those of you who haven't read Juhi's OS, ... OMG HOW DARE YOU ??? never mind, pls find below a link to Juhi's Penitance

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-3/4895841/adni-os-penitence

OMG an update rather 2 in progress
This is really my lucky day

Read both the updates
I am so over whelmed and emotional now
so much happened here
This is a real treat for me
I will give my comments tomorrow
Need time to gather my thoughts
U should have been in the CV team