Avneil Sweetest Love Story .chapter 3 on pg 4

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hello everyone. i am Samiksha. Call me Sami. Few of u know me here,vihu,sanju,sakshi and shalija and shibani.. i wanted to make friends with number of people here.i have made this new account. and shalija,vihu,sanju and sakshi ,this chap is dedicated to u. i will come up with other avneil stories which i already have written on wattpad and telly updates.to see check my wattpad account-Avlovesneil and Sweetgirl7 on telly updates or short form tu...and mehak4 and avneilfan this chap too is dedicated to u too
so here i am stopping my nonsense talks and begin with the story



chap 1 : New beginnings

Neela: Wow! My princess looks Amazing!
Avni: Of course, I'm Neela and Ayesha's daughter
Neela smiles!
Avni: Mom, why are you not coming to Saya's birthday?
Neela: You know..Avni! I have work to do.I have to go to Delhi.Live at Saya's house/ tell Saya to stay here with you!
Neela hugs and kisses Avni
Avni: Mom..I will miss you!
Neela: I'm only going for 2 days
Avni: Mom..I will miss you
Neela: I will miss you too beta! Noe hurry up and go, you might be late!
Avni leaves for her best friend Saya's party
At The Party...
Saya: Ahhh long time, time no see girl! Where have you been
Avni: You know, I'm applying for a job
Saya: Oh..cool
Avni: Yeah
Saya: Anyways, you already know everyone here, except for one, my cousin recently came from London, I will introduce him to you Saya takes Avni to her cousin brother.
Saya: This is my cousin brother...ok you guys talk, I'll get some snacks
Saya leaves
Neil: Hello, I'm Neil! Nice to meet you, Avni?
Avni smiles and says: Nice to meet you Neil, how do you know my name?
Neil: Because your stupid bff, keeps telling me that "Avni is my friend, "Avni is so cool.
Avni: Yes that's true..I am cool!! Wait!! What the hell you just said!! My bff Saya is stupid
Neil: yeah
Avni: I can't stand anyone who hates my bff
Neil: Avni man I'm just joking! Of course I love Saya, she is my sister
Avni smiles and says: Sorry, if you felt sad
Neil: No, anytime
Avni: Ok, I think, I should go and help Saya in the kitchen
Avni starts to walk away
Neil: Avni Wait
Avni turns around and looks at Neil
Avni: Neil..what happened?
Neil blushes
Neil: I'm new to India, I mean, I was born here but when I was young, I left for London. I'm back in my country now and I don't have many friends. Would you like to be my friend?
Avni smiles and says: sure, of course
Avni and Neil shake hands
Avni and Neil tell each other their phone number.
Avni: Ok..I will catch up with you later
Avni leaves
Neil stands there smiling

Karthik goes to Neil (Karthik is Neil's cousin brother, Saya's real brother and Avni's friend)
Karthik: Ooohh..why were you smiling at my friend, Avni?
Neil: oyy! For your kind information..she is my friend too
Karthik: Wow friends at the first day, kahani mein twist!
Neil smiles and leaves

Saya: Ok listen everyone!! So we will play a game! Everyone's name is in this box. This game is a treasure hunt, you will be given a map and the winners will get a gift card to a restaurant
Lisa: Winners?!?! So, there is no winner, winners! I'm guessing we will be in groups
(Lisa is Saya's sister, also Avni's friend)
Saya: No, not group but partners!
So the first partners with be...Avni and Neil
Karthik starts laughing hard
Everyone stares at Karthik.
Neil looks angrily at Karthik
Saya calls rest of the partners!
Lisa and me
Kartik is alone no partner for him ,if someone else was there then he would have a partner.

Precap: Neil and Avni, gets lost at the forest!
Hope you love it...




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Thesweetsoul thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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what yes?i couldn't understand

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hey Sami...welcome to forum..
Loved this part
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Hello Sami..
Awesome start.. Perfect as the title suggest Sweetest Avneil story.
My love this is really intriguing. Would love to read more chapters so do update them asap.
Lots of love
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Originally posted by: pri12

hey Sami...welcome to forum..

Loved this part


thx so much yaar, i need motivation..wont be able to update till next wednesday as exams.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey. I have read this story on telly updates .It's awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Sami
Nice chapter!
Exciting start to the story...waiting for more

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awesome start, I think I read it on wattspad too
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Heyyy, Thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to us...
New storyline.. Loved this..
And Neil blushes... Haayyyeee...
So, Tillu is not our Super Cop here??
And Jungle ka scene na aaye AvNeil k life mein to mazza kahan...
Update soon... will be waiting..
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Originally posted by: shikhsk

Hey. I have read this story on telly updates .It's awesome


thx yaar.thx sooo much.u can read other ones on wattpad.and can we be friends. best ones.

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