Shivika OS - Unknown Barriers

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Hello friends!!
This is Rusha here!😳 Some of you guys know me as a reader. Today am here to present you all a piece of work. The concept of this os is mine. But my dearest friend Riddhima penned it down. So all credit goes to her. This os is very close to my heart. I have decided to post this today because today is my birthday!😳 Every kind of chamelis will be accepted.😳 We are open for any kind of constructive critcism.😊

Ignore grammatical and spelling mistakes. Happy reading!❤️



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PART A



Character Description

Annika Sengupta: A topper, very much dedicated towards studies. Bubbly and chirpy girl who liked singing and dancing a lot. Very naughty and makes friends easily. A medical aspirant and taking coaching for the same in New Standard Coaching, Kolkata

Shivaay Singh Oberoi: A handsome boy. Very attractive. Girls drool over him. Flirty but serious in studies. A medical aspirant as well and taking coaching same as Annika in New Standard Coaching.

Nandini: Annika's bestie, her soulsister. Annika shares everything with her. She is a true friend. A medical aspirant with Annika in same coaching.

Prakhar: Shivaay's bestie. Shivaay shares everything with him. Good natured and not at all flirty. A medical aspirant too studying in same coaching as Shivaay.



"She was free in her wildness. She was a wandress, a drop of water. She belonged to no man & to no city." She was determined and focussed. Very ambitious. A type of girl who was everyone's favourite, cracking jokes and doing drama. She was our topper. Our Annika.

The 10th results were out and Annika had topped in the city. Her parents were proud of her and the city was praising her but yet she was on earth. She was happy inside but this happiness didnt made her overconfident. She knew the actual journey will now begin. The next 2 years will be the base of her future. With this thought and a determination in mind. She chose medical field as her career option and got into the best coaching in town, the new standard coaching institute who gave maximum selection in medicals that year. Annika entered in her new innings with a lot of motivation and enthusiasm to work hard. Distraction was far away from her life and LOVE? I guess that word was still not in her dictionary. She had many male friends but falling in love was not her cup of tea. But little did she knew that her life was going to be changed forever. Destiny had grabbed her seat with a bucket of popcorn ready to enjoy the show.

It was first day of the batch M5 in which Annika got admitted. She was little bit disappointed that she didnt get the same batch as her friends but never mind. She could meet them in break. She was sitting alone when a girl came to her

Girl(smiling) : Hi. Can I sit with you?

Annika(reciprocating the smile) : sure

Girl(sitting) : I am Nandini

Annika: Hey I am Annika. Friends?

Nandini: Friends.

They both shaked hands and started talking. Eventually by the end of the day they became besties.

Meanwhile a handsome boy entered in the class. He was a boy on whom every girl would drool and to some extent they did but Annika didn't noticed him as she was busy talking with Nandu. No prizes for guessing, he was our hero.. Our Shivaay Singh Oberoi.
He stood there and looked at the girl staring him

Shivaay(smirking and in flirty tone) : Hey beautiful!

Girl(shying): Hi handsome!

Shivaay(smirking): I must say the upcoming 2 years are going to be really fun.

The girl blushed hearing him. Though Shivaay was flirty but he was at the same time very serious regarding his studies...

Shivaay looked happy because all his friends were in the same batch specially his bestie Prakhar. The day passed on and Shivika didnt noticed each other.

Days passed and still Shivika didnt noticed each other. (Generally in these kinds of coachings 100+ students study in a batch. So even after the session ends. People dont knw each other.. Same was happening with shivika.)
Like this 4 months passed by...

Durga pooja came and they got a long one week vacation.

After the vacation...

It was their first day in coaching. Everyone was feeling relaxed after a break from the hectic schedule and were excitedly discussing about their vacation whereabouts. Strength was less as some hostlers had still not returned from their places. All the present students were sitting closely and chatting. Laughing and sharing high fives. Meanwhile Shivaay laughingly turned to his opposite direction and got freezed to his place. His eyes spotted an angel sitting in the next row and laughing wholeheartedly. Yes she was none other than Annika. In baby pink sleeveless simple top and jeans with her hairs tied in a pony. She looked breath taking. Annika turned to him but looked at him casually not noticing him much. Shivaay forgot to blink his eyes.The classes started but Shivaay was still stealing her glances every now nd then. This was noticed by a pair of eyes which were of Nandini. She found something fishy and decided to find out.

That day at night Annika and Nandini were chatting on whatsapp. That was the time when Nandu thought of bringing up the topic

Nandu: Annika What do you think about Shivaay?

Annika(confused) : Shivaay! Who Shivaay? I don't know any Shivaay.

Nandu(changing the topic): No. No one.

Annika didnt took the convo seriously and got busy in her studies. Days were passing and now it was Annika who noticed that Shivaay shamelessly stares her. She decided to confront him.

One day When Shivaay was busy in staring Annika. She went to him,

Annika: Hey why are you looking at me like that?

Shivaay(nervously) : No.. No u r mistaken.

Annika (angrily) : Oh hello I am noticing from many days. Dont act smart with me and dare not stare at me from now. Got it?

Shivaay simply nodes in agreement...

After a week..

Annika Nandini were waiting for a bus on bus stop when they spotted Shivaay and Prakhar standing on the opposite side of the road. Shivaay staring Anika. This was enough for her and she went upto him. Before he could understand anything. CHATAAK! A sound came which startled everyone. Annika had imprinted her fingers on Shivaay's cheek. He looked at her shockingly.

Annika(shouting) : Are you out of your mind or what? I gave you warning the other day na.. Dare not look at me dat way or I will complain...😡

Shivaay along with Prakhar fled from there. Prakhar from the past few days was observing every action of Shivaay but remained quite. But this evening gave him so much to absorb. He decided to do something. On the other side Nandu was also thinking the same. Prakhar and Nandu became friends on Facebook where Prakhar got to know that Annika is not at all interested in love stuff and sge hates Shivaay very much. Prakhar didnt tell this to Shivaay.

Days passed but Shivaay couldnt control himself staring her. He stared her with lots of love. He couldnt understand why he was being attracted to her so much. Annika was also deep down melting somewhere.

In the same section a boy named Siddharth had a huge crush on Annika. Shivaay was aware of it and used to hate Sid.

One day

Sid: Hey Annika! Can you help me in this problem? I am stuck in it since last night.

Annika: sure.. Show me.

Sid sat besides her and started discussing. In between they were laughing too.

All this was witnessed by Shivaay and he unknowingly fumed in jealousy. He went to Nandu.

Shivaay: Nandini ask Annika to stay away from Sid and not talk to him.

Nandini: May I know the reason behind such orders?

Shivaay: Because I dont like him.

Nandu(confused) : So?

Before Shivaay could say anything Annika came looking for Nandu and angrily looks at him,

Annika: Nandu What are you doing here with him??

Shivaay on remembering her slap kept his palm on his cheek and ran away. On seeing him running away in fear for the first time a curve appeared on her lips.

That evening Prakhar and Nandini were discussing about the same and they came on the conclusion that Shivaay is jealous of Annika Sid's closeness but the reason was still unknown to them which was making them confused over Shivaay's behaviour.

On the other hand Annika was thinking about Shivaay.

Annika's POV

I had slapped him so hard. He still looks at me the way he used to. I dont get one thing why I dont feel disgusted by his gaze? Maybe I am interpretting the things wrong. Maybe he is not that bad guy. I can have a friendship with him.

Annika's POV ends

Next day at coaching

Annika goes to Shivaay

Annika(smiling): Hi Shivaay!!!

Shivaay got shocked on seeing her and again puts his palm on his cheeks,

Shivaay(stammering): Annika.. I.. I.. Am sorry. I didnt looked at you with any evil intention. Please forgive me.

Annika laughs seeing him and he gets mesmerised seeing her laughing whole heartedly.

Annika: I know Shivaay. That is why I have come to you. I am sorry for getting you wrong. Can we be friends? (forwarding her hand)

Shivaay immediately takes it: Friends.

And they chatted for a while and went back to studies.

Days were passing happily. They were enjoying each other's company alot. They had literally became besties and shared each and every secret with each other. It was starting of love where things are not under your control, feelings not yet realised and you think about your unusual actions later on. Same was happening with our Shivika. They used to think about each other but then they brush away those thoughts. Prakhar and Nandu were happy that the tension between Shivika was over and they could clearly see love for each other in their eyes but Prakhar being the closest to Shivaay was not sure about his feelings. Shivaay was day by day growing protective over Annika.

They were one day roaming in mall. A guy was continuously staring Annika making her uncomfortable. She held Shivaay's hand tightly and he noticed the guy. Shivaay warned him not to do so

Shivaay: Oye you stay away from her.😡

Guy(flirty): How can I be away from such a beauty?

He tried touching her but Shivaay in anger held him by his collar and was going to punch him but Annika stopped him.

Annika(stopping him): Shivaay! what are you doing? Leave him. Don't create a scene here.

Shivaay(anger): No Annika.. I am not going to leave him. How dare he flirt with you?

Annika: let it be Shivaay. Don't make yourself dirty by touching such creep creatures.

And they left from there

That was the day when Annika for the first time felt his protectiveness over herself.. She was feeling special under his care and potectiveness. her mind was flooded with unknown emotions.

She was day by day geting attracted towards him. Psychologically it is said that girls are more mature by mind than boys being in the same age. I guess that was what happening with Annika. Realisation.. but still she was not able to get her feelings.

One Day..

Annika came to coaching wearing a blue crop top with denim 3/4th. She was loooking cute. Shivaay was lost in her but what he heard make him hell angry.

Prakhar(joking): Hey Annika! You are looking hot!😉

Annika laughs: Thank you Prakhar

Shivaay boiled in jealousy. He got hold of Prakhar's collar and strangled him.

Shivaay: Is this the way to talk to girls? Dont do that again.

Everyone was shocked. Infact Shivaay too was shocked. He didnt know why he did that when he clearly knew that it was a joke. He went from there leaving Prakhar. Annika stood their speechless but soon she smiled thinking about his jealousy but still she could not make out the reason behind his actions. Prakhar was not in state to utter a word but he got his answers... He went to Shivaay

Prakhar(placing a hand on his shoulder): Shivaay

Shivaay looks towards him and bows his head down: I am sorry Prakhar. I should not have over reacted.

Prakhar: Thats ok. I didnt mind. But dude whats up with Annika?

Shivaay: I dont know Prakhar.. I have not felt for anyone like this before.When that Sid comes to talk to her I feel like punching him. That was the reason I strangled u today. I just couldnt take anyone flirting with her. That day in mall also i feel like killing that guy who was ogling her. I feel so happy with her..

Prakhar: Dude are u in love with her?

Shivaay was stunned listening this

Shivaay: No.. How can you say this!! Love is just a waste of time.. I cant be in love..

Prakhar: You are not realising that you love her. Go home today and think over the matter you will get your answers.

Shivaay went home and thought about it over nd over again. When he closes his eyes it was Annika's smiling face which comes infront of him. Finally realisation hits Shivaay. On the other hand same happened with Annika and she realised her love for him.




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PART B(Last Part)


Next day

Shivaay was dancing like mad in the class. Prakhar was shocked seeing him.

Prakhar(confused) : You had tequila shots in ur breakfast?

Shivaay stops listening to him nd glares

Prakhar: Dont stare at me like that. You are behaving as if you are drunk. What happened why are you dancing like a crazy creep?

Shivaay(smiling) : Because I am sooo happy Prakhar. I realised last night that I have fallen in head over heels in love with her. Oh god. I cant believe SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI is in love.

Prakhar was happy for him and he hugged Him

Shivaay: I want to propose her.

Prakhar: Did you forget that chataak? After so much of struggle she has become your friend or rather a bestie but dont you think proposing her will get your friendship in trouble? Moreover we dont know what she thinks about you.

Shivaay(with attitude): No one can resist Shivaay's charm. You just wait and watch.

Prakhar(closing his eyes) : Ye to gaya aaj.

Shivaay went towards Annika but suddenly remembered the slap. He held his cheeks nd shouted just near Annika's ear

Shivaay(holding his cheek nd imagining Annika slapping him again) : Nooo
Annika got shocked nd turned around. She held her ears

Annika(irritated) : Shivaay you monkey.. You donkey.. Are you in your senses.? Why are you shouting?😡

Shivaay(stammering) :umm.. No.. Nothing Annika. And ran from there

Annika(smiled) : pagal.😆

It is rightly said. The more you hide your feelings,the more you fell for them.. Same was happening with Shivika.. The fear of losing friendship was somewhere stopping them from confessing.

Everything was going good but still there was a person who was not satisfied with Shivaay's behaviour. He was Prakhar.He clearly knew about his flirting nature nd couldnt digest the fact that he fell in love so easily. But he brushed away his thoughts seeing them happy together..

One day

The class was free so everyone was playing truth and dare. Sid got a dare to sing a song for his loved one. He looked towards Annika and sang CHAHUN MAIN YA NA. Shivaay boiled in jealousy but Prakhar signalled him to calm down.Next wen Shivaay's turn came Prakhar grabbed the opportunity and asked him to sing a song. Nobody knew that Shivaay was an awsome singer other than Prakhar. Shivaay sat infront of Annika and sang TUM HI HO. Annika was just awstruck listening his melodious voice and blushed after he finished.

The unconfessed mutual love is something worth adoring.
Both of them were getting an idea that the other one has fallen for them.. Jealousy was most prominent in their relationship which led others to notice them as a cute couple. Its not that only Shivaay gets jealous our Annika was also no less.

One day when Annika entered class she saw Tia is feeding Shivaay. Though it was friendly but cutie got hell jealous.

Shivaay passed a smile to her but she ignored him and went away.

Shivaay(monologue) :Aaj to main gaya.😭

She was sitting with a cute pout on her face and her nose had turned red due to anger.

Shivaay came infront of her and tried pacifying her but she was in no mood. Then he did something unexpected.. He sat on his knees infront of her and said

"Ruth jao kitna bhi mana lenge,
Dur jao kitna bhi bula lenge
Dil aakhir dil hai sagar ki ret to nhi
Ki naam likh kar usse mita denge..!"
(Shivaay the shayar😆)

Everyone was surprised seeing this side of Shivaay. Anika smiled and he felt relieved.

Exams were coming and Annika decided to confess her love to him after that as she was now sure that he too loves her...
Aww.. Everything seems perfect na... But do u think everytime what we think.. That happens?

Exams started and Annika noticed a change in Shivaay's behaviour. He started ignoring her. Annika thought maybe because of exam pressure he is behaving like that.

After exams they were sitting in coaching and discussing paper.. Annika was trying to talk to Shivaay but he was ignoring her. Suddenly his phone rang and on seeing the caller id he rushed outside. Annika was shocked seeing him in such a hurry and decided to follow him. He went in the backyard which is quite isolated. After sometime Annika reached there. She could hear some giggles from the back of the hut in backyard. She went to look there and the scene there took away the floor from beneath her foot

Shivaay was smooching Tia and she was giggling. Annika with teary eyes managed to speak

Annika(choked voice) : Shi.. Shivaay!

Shivaay looked at her and smiled. Held Tia from her waist and said

Shivaay: Hey Annika Meet my girlfriend,Tia.

Annika froze to her spot on listening girlfriend. It appeared to her as if her world crashed

Annika: Girlfriend? But Shivaay u love me

Shivaay gave out an evil laugh

Shivaay: What? Love and with you? Come out from your dreamworld.. No ways.. Love is just waste of time.. And I cant make a nerdy like u my girlfriend... I just wanted some time pass.. You very well knw that I am a flirt. How can you think that I can love anyone?

By that time Prakhar nd Nandini also reached there and witnessed everything.. They were shocked.. Annika was not in state of speaking anything... Nandini supported her and gave a tight slap to Shivaay and goes from there taking her away. Shivaay was unaffected..

Prakhar was in his own world. He was feeling bad for Annika. His doubts on Shivaay that he cant love anyone turned out to be true. He was looking at Shivaay with disgust while he was flirting with Tia unaware of the loss he just experienced.

Annika lost her smile from the next day.. She drowned herself completely in studies. Trying hard to be away from Shivaay's memories. Nandini and Prakhar were her constant support. Prakhar had stopped talking to Shivaay and Shivaay! Ah.. It is said when mind blocks,it totally blocks. He didnt cared for Annika and when Prakhar left,he even didnt cared for him. All were busy in studies as less time was left for entrance. Annika became the one she was. Focussed.. Determined but the only difference was.. She lost her smile.

Entrance held and results were out soon. Annika was 3rd in west bengal and bagged the seat in the top government college. Shivaay also got selected but in different college.

2 years leap

The life is back on track. Annika managed to get over from Shivaay. She was back to her bubbly nature. Prakhar and Nandu were still her besties but Prakhar didnt forgive Shivaay and cut his all ties with him.

One day

Tring tring
Annika's phone rang

Annika(taking the Call) : Hello
Other side: Annika

Annika froze to her spot listening to the voice of known stranger.. Her eyes filled with tears...

"Shivaay" Annika murmered choked

"Hmm Annika. " Shivaay replied.

Annika: What do you want? Why have you called?

Shivaay: Annika am sorry.. am really very sorry. I took so much time to realise my love for you that I lost you..I really love you Annika.. Not from today from that day when I first noticed u. Tia was a mere attraction for me but you were my life.. You are my life and You will be my life. My lady love.. My life..Everything..Please come back.. Am nothing without you.I will do whatever you will ask me to do.. beat me,slap me,abuse me..but please come back.."

But this time Annika was a hard nut to crack... Once trust is gone.. Its gone forever.

Annika: Shivaay I dont want to talk to you... Please stay away from me.. (cuts the call)

She burst into tears.. She had feelings for him afterall he was her first love... But she had self respect. A girl is very sensitive regarding her love but when her self respect is hurt she cant stand by it.. So was Annika. She decided not to forgive him.

One day Annika went to mall with Nandini and Adi(her new friend) . Shivaay saw them there and tried talking to Annika but she held Adi's hand and went away.. Nandini gave a deadly glare to him and scolded him like hell and went from there.. Seeing Annika going with someone else pained him alot

Shivaay tried talking to her many times and regretted badly for the loss of his love. He became a drunkard being in thoughts of Annika... But Annika had moved on keeping her past behind.


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Phew!! That was long!! Kindly read the A/N below!😳


Edited by -Tadibaaaz- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N :
Hello guys! This is first time am posting something on forum other than replies.😆 So am very much nervous..😳 I know many of you will not be happy as we have given sad ending to this. But dearies,this is a real story. Same happened with my friend. Now she has moved on and happy in her life. I feel she has done right by moving on. What do you think friends?? Do let me know.😳

If you have come this far,so please do hit like button and comment a few words about it. Chamelis are also welcomed.My no is 7.😉 We both will be waiting for your precious reviews.😊

-Cheers,
Rusha & Riddhima!❤️
Edited by -Tadibaaaz- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aw, I didn't like that ending, why did he play with her heart by pretending to be in love with Tia? Either way, it was well written.
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Fantastic os
Totally loved it
Plzz write some more stories 😳
Annika did the right thing 👏
Shivaay deserves this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy Birthday Dear Rusha!
It's been great knowing you, the little that I know you..!

Have a wonderful day!
May God Bless You With Happiness Love and Togetherness Of Your Loved ones.

🤗


Will catch up with this after exams or this weekend.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved the story.
But why he cheated her when he loved her?
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happiest Birthday to you Rusha!From the little communication we've had, I've figured you're an AMAZING person.Hope you get whatever you want on this day❤️
Coming to the OS, your friend has written it beautifully, and the plot itself is amazing, hats off to you. I wish it had a happy ending, but what Shivaay did wasn't worth forgiving, so I'm glad you've kept it that way.

Anyway, happy birthday once again.Keep coming up with such khidkitod stories love!

PS are you from Kolkata?
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Happy Birthday Rusha!
May your coming year gives you sweet memories to cherish forever :)
Sad ending for Shivika but beautifully written ❤️
Do write more!

BTW Are you a Bengali?

Edited by Apu_915 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you!😊

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