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Posted: 8 years ago


Awesome update rashmi 😊
Superb...
Abdul told everything to ajay... Thts great
Ohh God... This man argh... Ajay told so much he try to put sum Sense sum feelings but this man... Don't get anything
He try to put sum sense in him told him abut his family his parents n told him the pain he giving to Jo but no way... He don't get anything... Stupid
N this Tim I feel him very dangerous... He is nt telling lie to ajay only he lied to Abdul too... God only knows whts going in his mind... Fear fr Jo..
Lik Ajay n Jo convo... Lik I guess she nt angry with anyone... She just love them both so much so she hoping Veer n priya together but she nt understanding one thing Priya love one sided n her n veer hv Mutual feeling lik ajay said... He said right
Ohh thank God... Ajay still hv doubt on Ja... I was scared when in hospital Ja shows trust on him... Thank God
He is gud friend... He knows Ja in n out very well 😉 ... Let see wht play Ja ploting...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chap 22

Rashmi 🤗
Super update dear..
I love ajay part... A gud man... A gud human... Burring under his guilt.. I lik the battle between his heart n mind it seems both r correct on his place... Poor him
Y was ajay gt shock... Is he get any clue tht might b Jo can b his Real sis???
😆 Aww child Jo... Aww I nvr thought she would b tht naughty 😉 😆 cute conversation... Love it
Oh god... This Ja so scary rashmi...
He is getting pleasure remembering Jo helplessness... Jo fear Jo fear... so scary... God he so changed now... Reading tht prt I feel he bcm pure Devil.. Ther is no feeling in him... He get pleasure in sumone's pain whom he claim he love her... Lik seriously...
Hmm... So this is his plan... But but poor Ja.. He thinking ajay completely trust him but he is wrong he HD Doubt in him n fr gtting his trust he hv to work hard... N thinking to meet Jo... Chu chu poor man ur dream gonna shatter bcz m sure bfr his reaching ajay house Jo already left Frm ther... M sorry u gonna disappoint Jo 😉

U know rashmi reading Ja prt I gt so scared n thinking Hw u gonna move it... But now I know
JA plan to b gud in front of ajay n Jo n gt ther trust but he font know it will b no easy task he already Troubled them a lot n Jo nvr gonna trust him easily n fr tht he hv to play so hard... N u nvr know while playing maybe he strt changing 😉
He HD saw many bad things when he was gud man... N then he bcm evil n he saw he get whatever he Wants... But not one thing tht Jo... Her love her friendship nothing... But while when he was Acting hard to b guddy guddy n he get Jo friendship... When she will smile with him... I think he will Chang... Guess 😉 From strt he was thinking n listening only his mind lik ajay said So he is weak in Heart area... But m sure when will b acting guddy guddy... His Heart will get strong n nxt Tim when will b any battle... His Heart will win tht Tim... M sure
Now m very very excited fr nxt...
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago


Update nxt soon rashmi 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago


Sorry for the late replies... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago


BTW when did u updated last...??
Update nxt soon... Please 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
guys you all know that it is dark ff and here Jalal is gangster and reason you all know after reading this right so his devil mind and his torture are way to describe his character nothing more okay Nidhi you are very smart dear you are right I was just thinking about that way only but till reading all the chapter I am sure you know that I love to write twist so there will be one to and one more thing you guys don't need to apologize for commenting late you all have work to so I don't mind getting late comments okay and I will update next chapter tomorrow and thanks for comments .

and thanks for comments - Dellakdha , DivyaJA, Nidhi , sorathsheikh , sweety992, jass2227, Vrinda, Rosereraja1915 and everyone who like it and yes if anyone didn't like Jalal ruthless act then do tell me I will change it thank you once again guys and anyone have question regarding my ff do ask me to.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 23

(Kabir woke up and freshen up then goes out of the room but he get shocked to see Abdul in hall room sitting calmly and reading newspaper he get angry because he hate Jalal and his friend because of them his boss and there friend are suffering and the respect or love he have in his heart for Ajay he always hate the person who hurt him and Abdul is one of them so he in angry voice).

Kabir said : what are you doing here don't you have any shame after you and your friend hurt my boss and there friend and you are sitting here calmly like nothing happen, wait are you here to do something again then I am warning you don't you dare to think about that I will not let you do anything this time get it Mr Khan.

(listening him Abdul felt guilty so he get up from sofa and turned to Kabir and in calm voice).

Abdul said : I am really sorry for what My friend and I did to you all and I understand your emotions to Mr Kabir but trust me I am not here to hurt anyone actually Ajay called me here.

Kabir said : what Sir called you here but why .

Abdul said : I don't know why he called me here .

Kabir said : if he called you here then I am sorry for my words and Please sit now Actually I was angry on you and your friend Mr Khan that's why I said all this okay.

Abdul said : you Don't need to apologize for your words like I said before I understand your emotions okay but do you have any Idea why he called me here.

Kabir said : no I don't have any idea why he called you here in fact I got know about this from you now.

(they were talking all this but they don't know that Jodha saw them and run to Ajay room where he was sleeping peacefully seeing this Jodha shake him hard and because of that Ajay woke up with jerk and saw Jodha who were crying and looking very scared and seeing her state Ajay get shocked but within few seconds composing himself he hug her and in loving voice).

Ajay said : what happen Angel why are you crying and getting scared Angel did you saw any bad dream tell me and first stop crying.

Jodha said : h..e...is...he...is here...he w..i..ll...take ...me ...ag...ai...n...i...saw hi...m ...tal..k..in..g...to...K...ab...ir...

(Ajay didn't understand anything because of her continuously crying and stammering words so he make her sit on his bed and give her glass of water make her drink and wiped her tears).

Ajay said : Angel you know what is the thing I hate the most your tears but you always come to me with crying face and I get upset don't you trust me Angel I will not let anything happen to you now say clearly what you want to say without stammering and shedding tears okay.

Jodha said : Bhai he is here I saw him talking to Kabir he will take me again.

Ajay said : who is here and who will take you Angel Jalal can't come here he is in Hospital.

Jodha said : his his friend Bhai he can't come that's why he send his friend here to take me again Bhai please do something if he will saw me then then he will tell him about me.

(listening this Ajay get shocked that how much his angel is scared from Jalal and he mentally curse himself calling Abdul in his home then he again look at Jodha and in calm voice).

Ajay said : don't worry Angel He will not take you because I will not let him take you away from me okay you just sit here I will be back in sometime okay and don't come out of this room.

(listening him Jodha nodded her head in yes and seeing this Ajay kissed her forehead and goes to freshen up then in ten minutes he come out and then left from his room to meet Abdul and in few minutes he reach to him and in calm voice).

Ajay Said : you are on time Mr Khan.

Abdul Said: what to do the famous businessmen called me who is known for his temper so I have to be on time not is it.

Ajay Said : you are right Mr Khan and why you get up please sit and Kabir you can sit to.

(listening him both sit on sofa and Ajay to Sit on sofa and called his servant and order him to bring some snacks or coffee when the servants left from there Kabir in curious voice).

Kabir said : Sir why you called Mr Khan here.

Ajay said : because I am going to help Jalal in his business and he is his Best friend so I need help from him to after all he is the only one who know him in and out.

Abdul said : you are really going to help him but then what about Jodha will not be she hate you after knowing all this that the person who scared her torture her you are going to help him.

Ajay said : you don't have to worry about her okay she is my Angel and I can take care of her .

Kabir said : Sir then what are we going to do now.

Ajay said : first let me tell you guys I destroyed his illegal business not his legal business okay so now we are going to make his legal business stronger financially by investing some money and getting some deal okay.

Kabir said : But what about Law Sir as we all know that he is criminal and you are an Officer to and you have order to arrest him then how you are going to do that as no Businessmen will give any project to him or invest his money on it to .

Abdul said : he is right how you are going to do that are you going to break law to help him.

Ajay said : Kabir you are right that no one will give deal or invest his money on His business because of his illegal work and that's why I decided that the business will be by Mirza name as you all know that he is clean character and young to so everyone will try to make partnership with him and in that way we can work on that right and about Jalal then I am going to arrest him for sure and by the law he have to get punish to but don't worry guys as he never killed Any innocent Person he he killed those gangsters and smuggler only so it will be easy for him to get less punishment to so now I think you both get your answer right and don't you dare to think Mr Khan that I will ditch my country law because of anyone get it .

Abdul said : but I don't think he will agree with all this.

Ajay Said : who is asking him I will do as I said .

Kabir said : Sir do you have idea that what punishment he will get by our law.

Ajay said : as he did smuggling of Drugs and killed people to so I think he have to live 14 years in Jail .

Abdul said : can't we do something to save him from Punishment Mr Singhaniya.

Ajay said : yes we can if we prove that he was in undercover mission or he is the one who geve us information of all the smuggling and because of him we were able to destroyed whole drug smuggling then there can be some relief for him by law but we can't be sure about that because he just want to take revenge nothing else so I don't know but let me assure you Mr Khan I will try my best to save him okay.

(listening all this Kabir and Abdul get shocked But they didn't said anything.)

Abdul pov : we can't save him from getting punish by law it's all because of me if I stopped him in past then there will not be any punishment for him oh god help my friend.

Kabir pov : you are really smart Sir you will make him punish and in that time you will send Jodha far away from him to and in that way you will help him to and save Jodha to wow you are best.

(before anyone could say servants come with coffee and snacks and give everyone after few minutes getting signal from Ajay they left from there and in few minutes Kabir in calm voice).

Kabir said : but what about his Parents Sir I mean they don't know about his illegal work will not they get hurt.

Ajay said : well we can't do anything in that they have to know about all this but we will try to help them can't we.

Abdul said : you are right Mr Singhaniya but I have an idea to save him from all this .

Kabir said : what idea you have .

Abdul said : if we tell everyone that he is died then the case will stop on it's own not is it.

Ajay said : care to explain how we are going to do that.

Abdul said : as we all know that nobody know Jalal by his face no one saw him as criminal right and in that case we can make fake news that you killed him Mr Singhaniya because he tried to escape and having no other option you shot him when you arrest him and rest you know what happen right.

Ajay said : but it is wrong I mean it is not truth he is alive we can't do that .

Abdul said : why not we are not doing anything wrong and by doing this we can save him to no is it Please guys you can do that Mr Singhania .

Ajay said : I need time to think about that now you may leave Mr Khan.

Abdul said : but please I mean you .

(listening his words Ajay get angry and get up from sofa in jerk and in angry voice).

Ajay said : I can't believe it Mr Khan that after listening everything you still can come with this disgusting idea I mean you don't care about law any more you just want to save him nothing more what do you think only you have mind I don't I to thought about this but I don't want to betray my Senior officer who trust me and given me this case I don't want to break there trust Mr Khan Just because I have money and Power you want me to misuse it like those criminal who use there connection and got save from our law you disgust me Mr Khan you know what now I think that I have to change my decision to help him Because I can't take risk now I hope you got your answer leave from here.

( seeing him angry both Kabir and Abdul started shivering in fear because he is now looking like Lion who is hungry for days and he will eat them alive his eyes which was soft and calm before now got red and dark but then composing himself Kabir in calm voice).

Kabir said : Sir calm down Mr Khan just give us idea and nothing else if you want to do then fine if not then fine to don't get angry Sir calm down and please sit to .

Ajay Said : what the hell Kabir you are calming me down didn't you hear what he said you know why they become criminal because they didn't get justice by our law they tried to punish those criminal but didn't get success so they go against law thinking every officer is greedy dishonest they only know how to misuse there power and now what he is trying to do first they themselves do wrong then misuse law for there own benefit and then they say that Indian law can't give justice like really it is some type of joke to blame others when we our self are wrong tell me Kabir I am saying wrong tell me .

Abdul said : you are right Mr Singhaniya but I just wanted to help Jalal nothing else trust me I didn't wanted to hurt you I just .

Ajya said : help him then what I was doing didn't I am helping him to Mr Khan you know what it will be really difficult to prove him criminal to because he never left any clue then there will be chance that he will not get punish to but no you just know how to make people fool you don't want to help him you are supporting him in his wrong doing nothing else Mr Khan and you really hurt me enough now just leave or else I don't know what I am going to do .

Abdul said : I am sorry I really didn't had idea that you will get hurt by my words I am really sorry Please forgive me Mr Singhaniya.

Ajay said : didn't you heard me leave from here now.

(listening his words Abdul left from there Ajay calm down and sit on sofa to Kabir looked at him sadly and then in calm voice).

Kabir said : are you fine Sir.

Ajy said : I can't slept in night because of my guilt that I break the law and shot him and here he is saying saying all this you know what Kabir they think all the pain are in there life only but why they don't understand that in this world no one is happy everyone have sorrows and pain in there life everyone have to struggle in there life not is it but no they don't understand anything look they don't have guts to take there punishment but they do have guts to hurt others by which right they killed others you answer for my question Kabir.

Kabir said : Sir I can't say anything about this but you are right Sir and Please leave all that and think what are we going to do now .

Ajay said : we will do only what I told you both and I am not going to change my decision get it .

Kabir said : okay sir.

(saying this Kabir left for hospital to meet Jalal family and in few minutes Ajay left to his room and saw Jodha sitting on his bed waiting for him he goes to her and sit besides her Jodha looked at him and in fearful voice).

Jodha said : is he gone he is not going to take me right I am save right .

Ajay said : yes he is gone and no he is not going to take you to and yes you are save to now go and get ready you are going to meet Veer and Priya .

Jodha said : no I don't want to can't I stay here for some days Bhai.

Ajay Said : you can stay here for lifetime Angel but what I am going to do now it is risky and I can't let you stay here Angel so you have to go there and I promise soon you will be with me okay.

Jodha said okay but promise me that you will take care of yourself Bhai I can't see you getting hurt okay.

Ajay said : yes I promise I will take care of myself now go and get ready.

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Posted: 8 years ago


Awesome update rashmi 😊
Kabir nt just a employee a true friend...
Oh god... Poor Jo gt much she gt scared even seeing Abdul... It all bcz Ja fear... All bcz of Ja... Devil
Ajay n Jo prt... I always love ther prt... It always so sweet 😊 Love ther Bond...
Hmm... So finally Ajay guilt win nhi decide to help Ja... OK but I just hope Ajay always stay alert n nt trust Ja easily... Thts all
Ajay plan was gud... In tht way he punished Ja fr his misdeeds n help him to relief Frm his guilt... A perfect plan... But
Abdul... I seriously didn't expct this Frm him... Still he us just worrying abut him... Myb Ja nvr killed innocent people but He do troubled n torcherd n mny people suffered bcz of him...
but Abdul ge just worried abut him... N if he was so worried thn y didn't he stop him going wrong path...
I agree to Ajay words... Thes people... " thy nvr hv guts to face the punishment but thy guts to hurt others" superb Rashmi.. U hv very well penned down this part👏... I just love whole part
I seriously admire Ajay... He is doing all his duty... As a honest police officer he is nt betraying his country N as a gud friend n gud human he is Helping him to nt only him but his whole Family.. A true man...
Finally Jo gt ready to meet Veer n priya... 😊
M really very excited fr nxt rashmi
Update nxt soon 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago


Update soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update sis! 😃 Poor jodha Jodha sis is worried 😳 Continue soon and thanks for pm.

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