Finally in love..Karan..

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roheena_d

@roheena_d

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

wow...❤️ just wow! This was soo beautiful.

I could imagine all the scenes going through your writing.

Very beautiful ❤️

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Lovely piece ... 👏
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Waiting for their story to get on track 😉

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Angrita

@Angrita

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sofna
How aptly you've put together his thought process. I can completely imagine him going through this vicious cycle constantly with Preeta. The constant war raging between his mind and heart. You've captured them so well. It also shows how it could lead to a passionate and intense love. Wonderful. Do write more. How about one on Preeta?

Yeah i'll do try one on preeta..but for this we actually need to see some little sort of feelings development from preeta's side also..then it will be easy to imagine that..Hope the makers show it soon..