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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 18: The Long Lost Truth

Karan p.o.v.

It had been a wonderful morning. He had been hugged, kissed, wished and treated to an exceptional breakfast at Shardha moms place before they had all packed into the car and started on their way home. This was the life, Karan thought. A dream wife, house and family. There was nothing he could ever have wanted to change. He hadn't known though that this happiness was only going to last till he reached the front doors of his home. His mum in tears lay dropped to the floor in a corner while on the other side stood his raging father, who was being stopped by dadaji. In the middle a very familiar figure stood. One he had wished he would never ever see again. Maasi maa.

He had unknowing run up to his mum and hugged her allowing her to sob against his chest. While his father walked to Kunal in a manner which Karan had never seen before. You are not my son? He questioned. Are you not my son, Kunal tell me? Yeah Aurat, he said as he pointed harshly at maasi maa, keh rahi hain ki tum uske bete ho, aur woh tumhe leke Jana chahthi hai. Karan huffed holding himself together as tears began tumbling down. He could feel Naina's hands grip hard on his shoulder as she sat down next to him. The words sank on him as iron needles piercing his heart. Bolo Kunal, bolo, shook his father.

Kunal staggered back, Meghna helped him stand up. Papa yeh aap kya keh rahe hain, he sobbed. Finally, Nirmala stepped up, and the words that came out of her mouth sent Karan's world dizzy. She started telling about their lives a long time ago and how Kunal was actually Maasi Maas son. Kunal breathed in deeply as she finished. Ab bolo Kunal said NK, kya is ek such Jan ke tum hum sab ko chord ke chale jaoge apne maa ke saath? Kunals eyes twitched from Maasi maa to Nirmala maa. He took a step forward. Nahi papa, nahi Jana chahtha hoon mein yeh aurat ke saath. Yeh aurat jisne mere bhai ko itna dukh de kar kush thi. Mein aapka hi bete hoon papa, sirf aapka, aapne mujhe sab kuch di hai aur aapne hi mujhe banaye hai papa. Mein kabhi aapka bina Reh nahi paonga.

Suna baoji, suna aapne. Yeh mera beta hai, sirf mera, replied NK with a grin. With that he pulled Kunal into a bear hug, as a smile broke on everyone's faces. Nahi, mein nahi hone doongi argued Sandhya, but before she could answer, Nirmala had slapped her. Us din jab mujhe bata chala ke tumne mere bete ke saath itna Bura kiya tha mein sirf isliye chup thi kyunki mein yeh sach chupake Kunal ko khush dekhna chahthi thi. Par ab nahi, tumne meri ek bache ki childhood bigad di aur ab meri doosri bete ke future bigadna chahthi ho. Nahi hone doongi mein aisa, replied Nirmala with a stern face. Aap bilkul teek keh rahi hain maa, supported Naina and Karan. Before anything could happen, the police had clasped down on Sandhyas hands as she screamed and was pulled away.

Karan had felt bad for Sandhya and released her from jail just a few days ago from his child torture case. After all, they all had once thought she was part of the family. But he regretted it now. She had used the days to come with another problem. This time he and Kunal would make sure she doesn't come back into their house ever again. As the police retreated away with her, Nirmala maa and the others took turns to hug Kunal.

Naina p.o.v.

As everyone's smile and happiness returned, Naina did notice the small look of anger from papa to maa. He was not happy. He must be angry that maa hid the truth she thought. As papa walked away, she decided that somehow with juju, di and Karan, she will set things right between them. She turned and joined into the convos and hugs around. She was so happy that the problem came and went. She hoped that all remained the same after this.

As she went up to her room in the evening. She noticed Karan immersed in thought on the bed. She went close to him and planted a small kiss on his forehead. Kya hua? He grinned and pulled her into his lap. Mein bas shock mein hoon Naina. Shock mein ki sab kuch teek hua hai. She smiled and took his face into her palms. Haan Karan, aaj meine dekha ki ek pita ka pyaar kitna bada ho saktha hai. Par Karan ek problem bhi hai, her brows furrowed slightly. Kya hua? asked Karan concerned. Woh papa maa par gussa hain, she replied. Kya? Asked Karan. Haan Karan, papa maa se bat nahi kar rahe hain. Hume kuch toh karna chahiye, she pleaded. Haan Naina hum zaroor kuch karenge. He grinned.

Ab is kushi ke mauke par, he giggled as he lifted her in his arms and rushed off to the washroom. Karan, yeh Kya Karan she screamed as he shut the door and puller her into the tub filling it with water. Karan, she said shivering. Shhh... he said in her ear as he pulled her closer and they immersed in love. The water warm against their skins and his nose drawing lines down her neck. The slow dripping water, the tune of romance.


Edited by chandmeinchupi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys!
A little bit of a dramatic update but I have given my own twist to the story, I hope you like it. Pls do comment.

Rizka
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear
Loved ur update n you are totally different in dealing with all this as compared to show. You have been realistic here as Kunal was brought up by them n they cant simply forget everything n i loved the concept n timings in ur update. Karan is so loving hubby n best partner n i am happy u have maintained the beauty of characters. Loved the ending of update 😉
Loads of love n alwz looking forward to ur writings.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hi dear
Loved ur update n you are totally different in dealing with all this as compared to show. You have been realistic here as Kunal was brought up by them n they cant simply forget everything n i loved the concept n timings in ur update. Karan is so loving hubby n best partner n i am happy u have maintained the beauty of characters. Loved the ending of update 😉
Loads of love n alwz looking forward to ur writings.


Always a pleasure to read ur comments. It makes me feel so good. I would have loved to see the show deal the problem in this way. But they think drama is everything that makes a serial. Hehe put in the last part for all th missing romance in the last few weeks. I guess up next is the Vishal Khyati track too. But I'm taking a different approach. Hope u all will enjoy it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow, a completely opposite approach to the kunal truth!! Really liked this NK. Wish he was more like this in the show. Really hope he realises in the show soon that kunal means so much to him even tho hes not his blood. The rishta and love is still there. Karans romance at the end 😳, he just cant get enuf hahahaha!!!
Looking forward to the next one 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nawshi

Wow, a completely opposite approach to the kunal truth!! Really liked this NK. Wish he was more like this in the show. Really hope he realises in the show soon that kunal means so much to him even tho hes not his blood. The rishta and love is still there. Karans romance at the end 😳, he just cant get enuf hahahaha!!!

Looking forward to the next one 😊



Haha yes he can't get enough... glad u liked my twist.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Yes, well nairan havnt had any luck yet with romance part in the show so im glad they are getting loads in ur story 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 19: A Hidden Love

It was a few days after the big revelation of Kunals secret. Despite numerous efforts of the sisters, papa continued to be angry with maa. It was a nice morning and dadaji was reading his book in the hall. The men were off to work. While Kyathi was at college. A sudden ring at the door surprises everyone and the sisters are happy to see that it is none other than their Vishal bhaiyya. He takes blessings from dadaji and maa and tells about how he has got a job as a doctor in a good hospital and they sent him to train in Jaipur for a few weeks. He will be staying in a hostel for the time. Dadaji felt it wasn't right that he was staying at a hostel after all he was the one who helped cure Karan so he must stay here. Vishal nodded.

A little while later, Vishal had been allocated a room and was unpacking smiling, his plan worked just like he wanted to. He wanted to convince dadaji and stay in this house and the hostel did the trick. He was here for work but there was another reason as well. Khyati. He didn't know when or where but she was slowly stealing his heart to the point where he felt like he couldn't live without seeing her even for a day. He slowly kept peaking over the stairs to see. If she got home yet. The last time he had seen her was a the family picnic. His heart couldn't bear the distance any longer.

A while later, he saw her climbing up the stairs to her room and thought that it was now or never. He must go and tell her about how he feels. So he slowly crept up to her room and knocked on the door. She opened and her eyes widened. Tum yahan, she couldn't complete her sentence as he covered her mouth and pushed her inside the room, carefully slipping in himself. Pagal ho Kya, agar papa he tumhe yahan mere kamre mein dekhenge toh Kya hoga? She questioned. Dekho mein yahan tumse kuch kehne ke liye hi aaya hoon. Please meri baat suno aur unke bad mein chalo jaonga, he pleaded. Teek hai bolo, she said folding her hands over her chest.

Woh mein, woh , he mumbled. Woh woh Kya Vishal, dekho mere pass time nahi haris he said turning around and walking away. Mein tumse pyaar kartha hoon Kyathi, he said. She slowly turned round to see him kneeling. Mein tumse pyaar kartha hoon aur hamesha Kartha rahoonga. I love you, aur Mein tumse shadhi karna chahtha hoon, Kya tum bhi mujhse pyaar karthi ho? He said as he pulled out a small ring box. He watched as her eyes widened in shock. He bowed down.

He felt guilty. Maybe she didn't love him. Maybe she didn't like the marriage offer. He should have just told his love. A finger lifted up his chin as their eyes met. Vishal, tears streamed down her cheeks, I She sobbed, I love you. Then she hugged him hard and squished herself into his neck. He gripped around her waist and pulled her closer. After a while, they finally let go. She put out her hand and he understood. He slowly put the ring onto her finger. I'm sorry mein bohot costly wali nahi laa paya, he said. Nahi Vishal yahi bohot hai, is mein bohot pyaar hai Vishal, aur wo hi kaafi hai.

He slowly wiped her tears off and placed a small kiss on her forehead. Toh yeah baat hai, a sudden voice interrupted their romance and they jumped apart. Naina walked in with anger written over her face. Cheeku mein, she stopped Vishal, bhaiyya aap kuch na hi bolei toh accha hain. She walked towards Khyati and looked at her ring. Bhabhi woh, again Naina stopped her. Kab se ho raha hai yeah questioned. Then she laughed. A wave of relief spread over Vishal and Khyati. Kya bhai, aapne humme yeah baat pehle kyun nahi batai, she asked. Bhabhi aapke bhai ne toh abhi abhi hi humko yeah baat bataya, par bhabhi Kya dono family's is rishte ke liye haan kahenge. Haan woh toh mushkil hai Khyati par mein toh tum dono ke saath hoon. They all smiled.

Aur mein bhi, Naina turned around to see Meghna walking upto them. They all hugged each other and congratulated Vishal and Khyati. Vishal gave Khyatis hand a squeeze and left the room. She couldnt wait to tell Karan this news. The girl hugged once more and Naina left towards her room. Karan had just got home from work and he had his files open and sprawled over the bed. Naina went and closed all of them. Naina yeah tum Kya kar rahi ho? Karan argued. Subha se tum office mein hi the aur ab ghar aake bhi tum wahan ka kaam kar rahe ho, toh mujhe kab time doge, she said pulling on her sad face with puppy eyes. Karan heart melted.

Acha teek hain, Kya karein, cinema ho ayein? He asked. She loved the idea. Haan Karan yeah bohot ache plan hai. Kya hum di aur jiju ko bhi bula sakthe hain, she asked. Haan haan que nahi, aapne do unhe. Aur Kya Vishal bhaiyya aur Khyati bhi as sakthe hain? Vishal? Karan got confused. Naina then explained about how Vishal was going to stay here for a few weeks. He smiled, yeh toh bohot accha baat hain. Par agar woh dono humara saath ayenge toh hum Kaiserslautern romance kar sakthe hain? He asked. She smiled and laughed. Woh dono toh apne aap mein hi koye Rehte hain so koi problem nahi hoti, she replied. Kya? Karan scratched his head. Naina put her hand she on his cheek. Karan tumhari behen kisi ko chahthi hai, aur woh koi aur nahi balki Vishal bhaiyya hain.

Karan stood shocked for a moment. Then he burst out laughing. Yeh kabse Naina? He asked. Woh toh mujhe bhi pata nahi, she replied. Par hum saath denge na? Un dono ko milayenge na? Haan he replied zaroor milayenge. Tum fikar mat Karo. He pulled he into a tight hug and placed a small kiss on her forehead.
Edited by chandmeinchupi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi guys.
Firstly sorry for the late reply. Very busy at home with work so isn't getting time. Absolutely saddened by the news of our show shutting down but I have had requests asking me to continue the FF still and so I will. Hope you all like my future telling,

Rizka
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sweet update. Vishal and khyati seem very cute and adorable. And it was cute how naina was teasing them at first.
Yes im devastated about the news too but im glad u will be continuing the story so that it can get a good and proper ending, not rushed. I like the pace that you have written ur story. Will be looking forward to the next one 😊

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