Tujhe teri dhadkan se pehchaan lunga#3,pt 21 on pg 134 updt on Sept 18 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser...
Omg finally ishra going to meet...
Continue soon..
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fabulous update Dii
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Part 16

Raksha a most fabulous update!!!
How do you do you do this - absolutely amazing!!!!
Flashback continues!!
Raman does not want to continue taking pictures so goes inside!!
Shagun wants to stay and take more pictures!!
No support or concern for her "husband"!!!
Raman realises that the doctor is also with Mr Bhalla!!
In the bedroom at the farmhouse Raman tries to smell her fragrance but everything smells of air freshner!!
Back in Delhi Raman stops Shagun from going to his room as that only belongs to his jaan!!
Shagun ko vrat rakhna padegaa??????!
Mihir was sent to a village so that he could not contact or help Raman in anyway!!!
Now together they are doing everything to try and look for Ishita but cannot find her anywhere!!
It was so heartbreaking when he had tears watching the wedding video where he can see her hand - she is supporting him all the time doing the pheras...!!!!
Sitting under the tree - he is missing her so much!!
Mihir comes to take him home - tells him to be strong for bhabhi!!!
I almost expected her to come from behind the tree when he was talking about her being his strength!!!!

Please please please let him find her soon and please please please don't let him miss out on her pregnancy please??????????
Eagerly awaiting the next update please please please!!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
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Yayyy finally u grant my wish..
Plzzz dii update..
Can't wait..
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Emotional update di
Media was clicking pics but raman was feeling suffocated without his jaan beside him
He wanted to go inside bhallas told shagun to take him inside but she refused nd started posing for pics
He went inside nd cried his heart out he even asked doctor abt ishu but he didn't tell
They went to farmhouse nd he reminded how she used to take care of him pamper him like her baby hw cried his heart out
I just don't know how come his parents r so money minded raman is living in he'll with those people
He tried every way to get ishu news but was not getting anything
Finally his detective gave ishus pic when she was 5 yrs
He was happy to see at least that pic nd started doing the drama with his family

Coming to teaser
I am eagerly waiting to read it
Oh god finally after a struggle of a month he was able to listen to her
Pls di update soon
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awsome teaser...

are we getting update today????
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PART 17


Mihir was driving while Raman was still sobbing. He wasn't not in his senses, not because he was drunk but because he was exhausted, exhausted of crying and trying. Mihir took him to his home and make him sit.

Then he went and brought two cups of coffee for themselves. He gave one to Raman and said -pilo bhai, u will feel good.

Raman -thoda saa zeher de do. I will be better. He said in almost devastated voice.

Mihir sat next to him and said -please bhai, himmat mat haro. Bhabhi jarur milegi.

Raman -kab milegi, it's more then a month. Do u even know how I am living without her.

Mihir -i understand bhai, main aapka dard samajh raha hoon.

Raman -nahi u can't understand, nobody can understand. Koi nahi samajh sakta meri takleef. Meri ishita ek mahine se mere paas nahi hai, usko kidnap kiya gaya hai, pata nahi kahan hai. Noone in the house talk about her, kisi ko koi fikar nahi hai uski, uski kya kisi ko meri bhi fikar nahi hai. All want us just to die without each other but main usse marne nahi dunga, I will find her and will protect her. Will love her like my baby, she is my baby only. Ishita kahan ho naa jao, mere paas please. He cried in pain.

Ishita got up from her sleep saying, raman.

She looked around and looking for him.

Ishita -pata nahi mujhe kyun lagaa ki raman ne mujhe bulaya. Par raman kaise bula sakte hai, woh toh mera naam bhi nahi jaante. Jarur sapna dekha hoga. She thought and got up to drink water. She had water and lay down on the bed to sleep but she was feeling restless.

She got up and said -pata nahi aaj itni bechaini kyun lag rahi hai, aaj garmi jyada hai kya. Ho sakta hai,yaa phir shayad pregnancy mein aisa hi lagta hoga. Haan ho sakta hai, waise bhi doctor has told me to drink lots of water to prevent dehydration. I think I should drink some more water. She thought and went to have a glass of water more. She had it but still she wasn't feeling at peace .she walked to the little balcony and start enjoying the cool breeze. She lovingly caressed her tummy and said -now r u feeling better. U know I am very happy, ki tum aa gaye. U know mumma was very alone. Papa bhi nahi hai, I was just dying out of loneliness. But ab joh tum aa gaye ho now I am fine, ab bas papa bhi aa jaayen toh we will be a happy family. She said and stand there for some more time. At last she went to sleep.

On the other hand, Raman was feeling light after crying his heart out.

Raman -thanks mihir, for being with me always. Pata nahi tere bina mera kya hota. Shayad mar hi jaata apni jaan ke bina if I don't have u. Thanks for being with me when no one is with me. He said smiling.

Mihir-bhai why r u saying so, aapka saath nahi dunga toh kiska dunga, aapka saath toh dena hi hai mujhe hamesha, coz u r not only my friend but my guide and mentor too. He said smiling making Raman smile too.

Mihir -achcha boliye, would u like to have something, kuch khaya toh hoga nahi aapne.

Raman -nahi I am good, don't feel like eating anything.

Mihir -ok bhai, then u rest,mujhe kuch kaam hai, I will sleep after finishing my work.

Raman -dont feel like sleeping, come let me help u in ur work.

Mihir -arey nahi bhai, I am almost done. Joh Mumbai ke saamne village mein construction karwaya tha naa, ussi ki payment kar raha hoon. Aap rest Karo naa, I will complete it myself.

Raman -ab kahan rest hai zindagi mein. I can't sleep peacefully till I get my wife back. Kuch kaam hai de de, I will be busy. Kam se kam aankh bandh karke chain ki neend sone ka drama toh nahi karna hoga. He said and sat next to mihir. Mihir gave him the bill, which he has to settle. Both sat together to work, soon work was over but Raman was still not sleepy, so he start looking at the past projects and tender reports along with presentation.

He was reading the project held in the village where mihir was sent when mihir got a call. It was from the detective, mihir excused himself and went to talk as he don't want to sadden raman, as he got well after long.

Mihir went out and said -hello.

Dec-i got information about the girl. He said making mihir happy.

Mihir -kya u got info about her.

Dec-yes, when I was searching for her showing her pic, one of the truck driver recognised her. She got banged into his truck and he has dropped her to the nearby hospital. Then I go to the hospital and got to know that the girl was in the hospital for a week and later she was discharged. Then I start checking the routes by which she can go out of the city and got to know by one of the staff in bus stand that she went to Delhi,she stays in Delhi for one week, in a cottage and finally she is in Mumbai. Mumbai mein kahab hai, yeh abhi pata nahi chala hai but I have told my informers to find her, uski exact location milte hi bata di jayegi. It may take few days but will surely find her. Uski photo mil jaane se bahut madad mil gayi. It was so difficult to search her with any face.

Mihir got happy hearing this and said -thank u, will try to track her, jaise hi kuch pata chale call us.

Dec-sure sir, he said and hung the call.

Mihir was too happy that finally he knows where is his bhabhi.

He happily went inside and saw Raman who was busy in checking something.

Mihir -bhai, I have a great news for u. bhabhi ka pata chal gaya, she is in,

Mumbai, Raman didn't let him complete and said making mihir shocked.

Mihir -aapko kaise pata.

Raman -i just got to know, she is in Mumbai naa.

Mihir -yes, my detective is going to Mumbai, we will get to know shortly where she is on proper. But aapko kaise pata chala.

Raman -will tell u, but pehle tu bata how he got to know.

Mihir narrated him everything.

Raman -iska Matlab ishita ussi din unn sabke kabze se bhaag gayi thi. Iska matlab main bekar mein inn sabke saamne acting kar raha tha,papa ke paas thi hi nahi meri jaan toh woh usse kaise maar sakte the. Tabhi kisi ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya ishita ke baare mein even when they were not in their senses. Kyunki unhe khud hi kuch nahi pata tha. Main itne dino tadapta raha, I so wanted to shout on them but I couldn't just because I want to safeguard my jaan but aaj pata chal raha hai ki unke paas toh meri jaan thi hi nahi. Mera Ek mahine waste ho gaya, agar mujhe pehle pata hota ki ishita papa ko custody mein nahi hai toh I would have search for her freely, I wouldn't be so scared of them.

Mihir -ab joh beet gaya usse bhool jaiye, we can't return that time, but sochne wali baat yeh hai ki agar bhabhi gundon ke paas nahi thi toh aakhir aapke paas kyun nahi aayi. She should have come to u.

Raman looked at him trying to observe his words and said getting up-i had to reach her asap.

Mihir -kya hua bhai.

Raman -usne mujhe aur Shagun ko saath dekha hoga. She must be thinking that I don't know about her. Tabhi nahi aayi woh, shit. I have always told her that I will recognise her even if I haven't seen her face but after seeing me with shagun, she must be broken. My baby must be crying. I have to reach her asap.

Mihir -but bhai, the detective couldn't trace her yet. He needs few days to trace her, tabhi hum jaa payenge bhabhi ke paas. We have to wait till he tells her exact location.

Raman -no need, I know who kahan hai. Just book my flight to Mumbai. I have to reach there asap.

Mihir -but kaise, yes I forgot to ask, how do u know, where is bhabhi.

Raman smiled and showed him something on his laptop.

Mihir read it and said -yeh toh bansal and sons ka presentation hai along with tender quotations to get next contract for delivering raw materials.

Raman -yeh presentation ishita ne banaya hai.

Mihir -how u r so sure.

Raman opened his phone and showed the mails and presentations sent to his clients and investors by ishita and said -yeh dono work pattern same hai, same style, same words, almost everything same.

Mihir read both and said -yeh toh sane hai, iska Matlab bhabhi is working for them.

Raman nodded in yes.

Mihir -but how, her record says she has studied only till five. Then how she knew all this,ek class five tak padhi ladki, how can she make such a perfect presentation. R u sure, that she is her only.

Raman nodded and said -i can never be wrong in recognising her.i don't know how she knows all this or how she got the job even being so less educated, I just know one thing that this is done by my ishita and I have to reach to her asap. U just do one thing, book my flight to Mumbai. I want to reach to her before she went somewhere else.

Mihir nodded while Raman went happily to freshen up.

After two hours, Raman and mihir was in the airport waiting for his flight to be announced.

Raman -thanks mihir, for being with me all time, tere bina main sach much bahut akela pad jaata.

Mihir-kya bhai, kitne baar thanks bolenge, aur mujhe kyun bol rahen hai. I am ur mihir, u can't thank me.

Raman smiled and both hugged each other.

Mihir -all the best bhai, now go and bring bhabhi home, main bhi milna chahta hoon unse. He said and Raman just nodded happily. Soon Raman board his flight and fly to Mumbai while mihir just prayed to the almighty to make raman meet ishita soon.

Soon Raman landed in Mumbai, he checked the address of the company on net and reached on the address, only to see the office was still locked. He looked at his watch and saw it was just seven in morning. He sat on the stairs waiting for someone to come and open the office.

Half an hour passed like this, nobody came. He went to the nearby tea stall to have tea. He washed his face and had tea with vada paav. He was very excited to meet his ishita after such a long time .he had his tea and went again to the office only to see it was open and the peon was cleaning it.

Peon saw raman and asked -kisse milna hai.

Raman -tumhare boss se.

Peon-sir aise kisi se nahi milte, appointment le kar aana.

Raman -call me and say Raman kumar bhalla came to meet him.

Poen look at from top to bottom and called his boss seeing his attitude.

His boss was shocked to hear who came to meet and said -unko baithao, chai pilao, I just come.

Poen nodded and make raman sit with respect, brought tea for him.

Raman -yahan employees kitne baje aate hai.

Peon-nau baje tak.

Raman -yahan koi ishita naam ki ladki kaam karti hai kya.

Peon thought for sometime and said -nahi toh. He said making Raman think, yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Nahi yeh ishita ki hai. I can never be wrong in recognising her, but then why he is saying that ishita don't work here. Aane do iske boss ko usse hi puchta hoon. He was thinking when the boss came and said looking at raman-sir Aap sach much mein the Raman bhalla, jinki company ke liye hum kaam karte hai, wahin raman bhalla.

Raman nodded and bansal smiled wholeheartedly. He welcomed raman to his cabin and make him sit.

Bansal-i am not understanding what to say lag raha hai mere ghar bhagwaan aa gaye hai. But still had to ask, humse koi galti hui kya sir, joh Aap yahan aaye.

Raman thought to ask directly about ishita but think what if he is wrong, so he think other way to ask. He took out the presentation and said -yeh jisne banaya hai, usse milna chahta hoon.

Bansal look at the presentation and asked -kyun sir.

Raman -bus aise hi, I want to know. Actually bahut achche se presentation banaya gaya hai, so I was thinking to meet her and tell her to try in my company.

Bansal-itna achcha lagaa kya aapko.

Raman nodded in yes.

Bansal got happy and thought -agar main jhooth bol doon that I have made this presentation toh yeh mujhe job de denge. Kitna kamata hi hoon main iss company se, I will get huge salary from bhalla group of companies. Aur kaam ishita se karwa lunga, aur monthly salary 15000 dunga like the way I give. Wow this will be a nice idea, main laakhon mein free mein kamaunga, aur saara kaam ishita se karwaunga. Waise bhi she can't get job in such an esteemed company as she has no degree or qualification. Woh toh main tha joh uski pleadings ke kaaran aur uski practical knowledge ke kaaran usse job de diya. Bhallas thodi naa denge, Mr bhalla aise hi chale jayenge, so it's better if I lie to him. He was thinking when Raman asked -boliye, can I meet her.

Bansal-meet her nahi sir, him. Maine hi toh banaya hai yeh presentation. Infact saare presentations main hi banata hoon, waise toh meri company bahut achchi chal rahi hai and I don't need any job but as u personally came, I am ready to do job in ur firm. Aap mera interview ke sakte hai. He said making Raman's face fell.

Raman -aapne banaya hai, sach mein.

Bansal -ji sir, I made it.

Raman got sad hearing this, all his expectations to meet ishita came to a dead end. He was not understanding how he is so wrong but the work pattern was same, but keeping his thoughts aside he said -great I will send u letter to attend our interview.

Bansal -thank u so much sir.

Raman -ok, now I think I should go. He said and was going when bansal said -aise kaise, kam se kam breakfast to kar lijiye. He said and called someone and tell to come in.

Raman was sitting in the chair looking down and all lost when the door open and his nostrils got filled the same soothing fragrance and his heart start beating at a much faster pace. He closed his eyes taking the fragrance and it didn't took him a moment to recognise her, even without turning he smiled and said -ishita.

Ishita entered the cabin and asked -ji sir, u called me. She said while Raman felt at peace hearing her voice after such a long period while tears make way down his cheek.

Ishita took closed her eyes feeling his fragrance and murdered slowly but audible to him-raman.

He smiled in between his tears hearing his name from her mouth and turned to her. Ishita was surprised to see him infront of her after ages while Raman was just looking at her with love filled eyes. He was seeing her for the first time, so he looked at her from top to bottom. She was wearing a simple green Georgette saree, her hair were tied in a simple braid, she was wearing small studs along with her mangalsutra, a pinch of sindoor was adorning her forehead with a small red bindi in the centre.

Raman was just admiring her simple beauty while ishita too was looking at him without blinking her eyes, both were just looking at each other when bansal said -mrs bhalla, yeh Mr Raman Kumar bhalla hai, bahut bade business tycoon, please arrange some authentic punjabi breakfast for him.aap Punjabi breakfast lenge naa sir, yaa phir I arrange for u something continental. He was saying while ishra were just looking at each other without blinking their eyes.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Ps-200+ likes with long comments for next updt.



Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all thank u so much di, for this update.
U really made my day🤗
Awesome update.
Loved it totally.
Poor Raman was craving n crying out for her to come to him n ishita can feel his restlessness, how pure their love is.
Both can feel each other's pain even when they r miles apart.
Mihir got to know about ishita from detective n very excited to tell Raman but he already knows where his jaan is.
Finally he was able to find his jaan. He can recognise her by her working style n so sure it's ishita who prepared d presentation.
He also got d idea that she was hurt seeing him with Shagun n that's why never reached him.
He really want to meet her asp n asked Mihir to book his tickets.
Really Mihir is more than a family to him, he stood with Raman like a pillar n supported him through out his painful days.
Finally he reached her office n tried to get info from her boss by asking indirectly about d one who prepared presentation but that greedy Bansal he wants to take d credit of ishita hard work n lied to him.
Raman was disheartened listening to him but in d next minute when he listens to her voice, he felt at peace.
Finally ishra met n time stood still for them, bother r admiring n feeling each other after so long.
Eagerly waiting for the next part. Plz continue soon di..
Thanks for d pm di:)
Edited by arshifansiri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Why u finish update at such crucial point I want to see the Ishita reaction after seeing Raman in her office plss update next part as soon as possible...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsome
fabulous
lovly update
how lovly he recognize her with her fragnence
and she too
saw her first time
oh she is mrs bhalla
and he mr raman kumar bhalla
lovly
cont sooon

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