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Part 37

Maan:geet, why u bring them to every place , u never come alone to found me while rolling eyes.

Geet: I am not bring them, they only follow me with irritating face..

Masti gang: oyie, Mr and Mrs MSK.we worried about u..so we follow u people..but u both thought we disturbing u with angry face.

Maaneet unison: u have any doubt, u all r Kabab mein haddi with teasing tone..

Masti gang: Kabab mein Haddi..with shocking face even their mouth jaws touched to ground..

Maaneet laughed seeing their face expression..

Maan: Geet, lets go from here before they come back from statue state..

Geet with big open eyes: yes with naughty face.

Sanskar smirked face: oyie, first we need go back farmhouse ,dadi worried about u ..

Maan remembering dadi as his body become stiffened and geet sensed their stiffed body..geet held his palm tightly and give little smile to him..maan reply weak smile to geet.

Geet: lets go maan..maan nods his head..

Farmhouse ..


Maaneet standing infront of farmhouse ..and maan cupped geet hand tightly while walking inside the house.maan leg forward each step as his heart have more pain like someone pinning thousand needle in his heart as heart bledding . Maan body start shivering seeing every corner in hall and his mind imagine , his father throw out his mother outside..maan eyes moist and geet know that what maan mind thinking and how much pain he handling seeing his past life in front of him..

Geet: Maan , closed ur eyes..(maan look at geet with moist eyes)...plz...maan closed his eyes

Geet: Maan, don't imagine ur bitter past , just imagine ur mother playing with u in ur childhood , just felt ur mother soul in air, just felt she talk with u, just feel only ur sweet memories with mother..she always with u..dont forgot...

Maan imagine anju talk with him and hearing anju lubbly voice & twisting his ear with scolding face ..maan lips crept little smile...maan open eyes look at geet with eyes guestered to thanks..


Geet placed her head in maan chest and cuddled hand to his stomach as maan one hand held her head and other hand placed her back

Maan: thanks geet..

Geet: maan, why u saying thanks to ur life..my happiness only around u..without u ,I cannot alive..plz don't run away from me..i cannot tolerate..with painful voice..

Maan cupped her cheeks: sorry mishty..

Geet: I love u so much..

Maan: I love u lot..with so much emotional running their face

Pinky choked insake of chips strucked in her throat..maaneet head turning to pinky side..

Maaneet eyes popped ..

Maan rolled his eyes : my crazy family, what is this..why everyone starring us..

Geet: why everyone sitting like u all r in threatre..with snacks hands..with fuming face

Yeah guys masti gang sitting in sofa as starring maaneet moments with snacks and cool drinks like seeing some movie in threathre..

Vicky with murmuring voice: Pinky bhabhi, because of u..they found out our daily entertainment..

Pinky: sorry..with puppy face.

Geet: what daily entertainment..

Choti hit Vicky head : hey duffer, shut ur mouth..

Maan: what s going on..if anyone explain me clearly..with fold his hand in chest..

Masti gang sheepish smile and thinking how to escape from maaneet

Sanskar: maan, dadi..waiting for u ..first see her..she worried about u so much..with sheepish face.

Maan glare to sanskar: I deal with u all later guys..and where is dadi..

Sanskar: downstairs left room..

Maan enter in dadi room and dadi sitting in rocking chairs as her eyes closed ..

Maan placed his head in dadi lap and dadi open her eyes as look at maan..dadi caring his hairs softly..

Dadi: maan beta..maan raise his face and his moist eyes look at dadi..

Dadi wiped his tears : maan, ..i hided about ur mother details from u but I did everything for ur wellness only..i did it for u ..forgive ur dadi..in guilty face..i am so..maan closed her mouth through his palm..

Maan: plz don't ask sorry .. plz forgive ur maan..i rudely talk with u..i am sorry..in my frustration only , I shout u..i am sorry dadi ..i am wrong with teary face.

Dadi: no , u never wrong beta, ur angry right..its my mistake , I hided about anju..

Maan cupped dadi palm : No dadi, u did it right otherwise, I never got any success in my life..u r my backbone dadi..u did everything for goodness only..u give me mother love..maan kissed dadi palm..

Dadi wiped her own tears: ok..forgot everything, u want see ur childhood photos and mom photos.

Maan eyes twinkling : mom photos , dadi..with excited voice.dadi kissed maan forhead and nods her head.

Maan stand up from kneel down and dadi got up from chairs..

Dadi: come with me..

Dadi walk out from room and maan walking behind her..

Dadi stop infront of huge room and dadi pushed room door..

Dadi enter room and turn maan stand in door with moist eyes..

Dadi: maan beta, this is ur parents room even its ur room also..u never sleep alone .u sleep and cuddled with anju waist only..so u have no any separate room..

Maan: maa room ..with teary face..dadi nod her head...and maan enter in slow steps.

Maan eyes scanned whole room , one side wall full of maan childhood photos..maan hand touched his childhood photos..

Maan: dadi..its me with smiling face..

Dadi: yes, after u birth to till ur second birthday photos placed in this wall. Ur father not forgot capture ur single smile pictures.he always behind u through his camera as captured ur every naughtiness..he crazily love with u..

Maan close eyes while contol his anger about his father ..he wont hurt dadi once again..

Dadi pickup one photos from wall and show to Maan : see , anju dressed u to Little Krishna costume for Krishna janmashtami


Maan take his photo from dadi hand and gang enter in anju room..vicky snatched photos from maan hand..

Vicky: wow, u r so cute in little Krishna costume .u r smile ..omg geet bhabhi see ur hubby smiling face..

Geet take photos from Vicky hand and caring photos with lovely face..

Swara: geet bhabhi, we don't mind,if u want kiss ur hubby photos with teasing tone..

Geet blushed ..

Choti placed her arm in swara shoulder :even we don't mind, if u kiss maan jiju instead of his photos with smirked face.

Geet glare to choti and maan smirked look at geet..

Geet : acha ji..i kiss his photos only..see how much he cute in his photos but now he changed ravan..ten head ravan...

Maan confused face: who is ravan..even ten head ravan..how its is possible ten head ..

Geet chucking face: dadi, u r grandson don't know anything about epics..he asking who's ravan..plz I give good suggestion..plz change MD to our company ..its good for our company with dramatic way..with winked eyes to dadi without maan noticed her wink

Dadi smiled: yes, u saying right..

Maan grinned teeth: dadi..i am owner of KC not employee..

Geet :u just employee of KC not owner..i am right dadi...

Dadi: yes, Geet beta..u saying right..he just employee with calm way

Masti gang hard to control his laugh..

Maan: geet, u crossing ur limit..with raising his index finger in front of geet face..geet also did same with maan..

Dadi: Geet beta better, u become MD of KC..

Maan laughed loudly : what..Geet ..MD..omg I cannot control my laughter..she is woman, how she can handle KC...KC not any small company , its huge empire ..with laughing face without thinking anything maan said ..opps geet fuming seeing maan laughing and underestimate about woman power

Sanskar : yes, maan I am also accept, woman not handle KC..even he don't know how many branches in whole world with smirking face..sanskar added ghee in fire ..geet anger raised ..

Maan: Vicky u accept or not ..( Maan not noticed fuming geet and yeah other girls also)

Vicky seeing geet and other ladies fuming face: bhai..oh..i am..

Maan glare to Vicky: why u stammering..say yes or no..

Vicky : yes bhai..with fear face.

Maan look at geet face and geet glaring maan with hand in both waist as hiccup

Maan: I think , I cross my Border with murmuring voice.


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part 38


Maan look at geet face and geet glaring maan with hand in both waist as hiccup

Maan: I think , I cross my Border with murmuring voice.

Geet showing her index finger in front of maan : what u said, woman not handle to KC..u think woman is not stronger than man..

Maan nods his head randomly..

Choti: Geet di, They accept woman nothing infront of man right..Let them prove , they r great than us..with smirked face.

Vicky: u shut ur mouth , moti..

Geet glare to Vicky: u shut ur mouth Vickranth singh Khurana..u also ur bhai side right..

Vicky pout face: Bhabhi..

Swara: Bhabhi, how we can forgot Mr.maheswari said, we don't how many branches in KC..i am right na, Mr.maheswari with killing look to sanskar.

Sanskar gulped saliva : Shona darling..with slow voice..

Pinky : Arhhh, we all forgot one more person also..i am right Adi ji..with grinned teeth.

Adi sheepish face: what I did it even I am not open my mouth..with puppy face.

Pinky: yeah..that is ur mistake..u support maan jiju without open ur mouth...u not said anything against maan jiju words.

Geet: leave them guys..they said right..man r stronger and woman r weak person..today they doing whole mansion work without help of servant.Dadi , my decision right or wrong.

Dadi: My badi bahu always correct..they doing whatever we saying otherwise everyone throw out KC..

Sanskar smiled (mind) : Thank god, I escaped ..i am not KC employee like them.

Swara: Bhabhi, Mr.Maheswari thinking he escape house hold work because he is not in KC employee right with smirked look at sanskar

Geet: how can he escape , shona ..dadi, Mr Maheswari signed contract recently with KC right..if u cancel, that contract..after what happen..

Sanskar eyes popped and Other man giggling seeing sanskar face.

Maan: Mishty, stop ur playing..dadi never throw out us from KC and cancel contract also..with smiling face.

Dadi: Acha..maan beta..u think like that..u said woman not handle KC..how can u forgot after Dadaji in Paralysis and he died..that time I am one handled whole KC ..with angry face..after u finish ur studies , I handover whole company to U.its not mean I have no power in KC..i have full power ..i dismissed anyone in KC ..u too Maan singh Khurana..with Angry face..

Vicky murmur maan ears: bhai, u talked too much..surreder to Bhabhi legs otherwise no one escape from devils..

Maan : u think, MSK fallen to My mishty legs..never.i cannot with same murmuring voice

Vicky: then no one save us with crying face.

Geet: Pinky, plz type dismissed letter and contract cancel document..with bossy tone.

Pinky : yes, boss..

Geet: u r sound so cool, pinky..

Maan: Mishty..with puppy face.

Geet: u want ur dismiss letter or one day u all doing House hold work..

Maan look at every man : ok..we accept ..

Geet smirked : what for dismiss..

Maan: no..we do house hold work and what u all saying, we do..with grinned teeth.

Geet patted maan cheeks : Good Boy..go bring coffee for dadi and snacks for girls..i am hungry plz made any food for me.

Maan : yes..i am going..maan left the place with fuming face.

Geet : Girls, u all decide what work they do..girls smirked look at Boys.

Swara come infront Of sanskar : Mr.Maheswari, u mapping whole floor..go do it fast..later I tell u what u will do..

Sanskar fuming ..: I see u later with slow voice.

Pinky come to adi : Adi, u bring our luggage to our room and serve our food and snack to us.

Choti come infront of Vicky with smirked face: wow, what a great chance..u all made for us..thank u Monkey sorry Vicky..today, u dusting whole farmhouse and u r our entertainer piece..whenever we get boring u entertaining us..if we not satisfy ur entertainment. We give severe punishment .u do without asking anything..

Vicky mouth open widely : I cannot..with angry face.

Choti: Geet di..with dragging...voice..

Vicky: why u calling bhabhi..i will do..with angry face.

Choti: then ok..dusting whole farmhouse..if we get boring then we call u...

Girls enjoying movie in main hall while sitting and chatting with each other..

Sanskar mopping floor , Vicky dusting photo in wall, Adi serving snacks to Girls..Maan cooking food in kitchen..

Girls enjoying seeing their works..

Pinky : Adi, we need Hot samosa..bring it soon..

Adi murmur : now only I served tea and biscuit them..with in few minutes..they want samosa..and enter in kitchen..

Maan cooking pasta for geet and adi enter kitchen in murmuring way as put tray in table with heavy sound..

Maan: Adi, what happen..

Adi: they want Somasa with angry face..maan they doing so much..

Maan smiled : Adi cook samosa and I come back after give pasta to mishty..

Adi irritating face: but I don't know cooking ..

Maan: even I don't know..i cook only pasta...Adi try until u success ..left the kitchen as leave adi in shocked face.

Maan come to Geet room and geet look at maan childhood in Album and kissing every photos ..

Maan clear his throat and geet head turned as look at Maan while she hide album behind her back.

Maan come infront of geet and placed food in side table..

Geet : great MSK take more time cook for simple pasta ..too bad..with nod her negatively

Maan smiled : sorry mam..sorry for delay..let eat ur food with polite way

Geet : yeah sure..geet take plate from table and get spoon of pasta to near her mouth but she stopped in mid of air..

Maan: what happen mam..u need someone feed u..with smirked face..

Geet: why someone, I have my hubby and pulled maan hand and sit next with her and now feed me with smirked face.

Maan smiled and feed her through spoon..but geet stopped him..

Geet take spoon from maan and she tried to feed him..

Maan: Mishty, u r hungry..u eat first.

Geet: no, u eat, I know u did not eat last day itself..

Maan: no u..

Geet : ok..both eat randomly..first I feed u..maaneet feeding each other..

Maan : thank u.

Geet: why Maan..

Maan: u fight, punishment everything, u want distract my mind right..i am lucky got angel in my life

Geet avoid his eye contact: oh...not like that..emotional face not suitable for ur devil face..with smirked signed.

Maan raised his eye brow: I show what devil do..maan body leaning over to geet body..as geet tried move from him while her body backward to bed ..maan half body above her and geet tried to push him and maan held her hand to avoid her push..

Geet: Maan, leave my hand and get up from me..with slow face..

Maan : no I am not ..his hand teasing her neck to cheeks..

Geet moaning his name : maan...please..leave me..with closed eyes.

Sudden bang sound...maaneet jerkup their position and went outside the room..everyone stand in Kitchen with tensed face..

Maaneet enter in kitchen..and look at adi face ..

Geet laughed : Oh my god, what happen Adi jiju, why stand like statue ..

Pinky : geet, ur jiju even don't know how to handle pressure cooker.. after marriage how to handle me with grinned teeth..

Choti: geet di, Adi jiju..blast pressure cooker..with chuckling face.

Maan: Adi, what u did it with glaring eyes..

Adi pout face: u only said, try to cook..i just tried boil Potato in Pressure cooker suddenly it blast in air ..my heart beat one sec stopped hearing bang sound timegod I stay away from stove ..otherwise pressure cooker hit on my face only.

Geet: suddenly how cooker blast in air..Are u added less water in cooker?

Adi hit his forhead: I forgot add water in cooker..with sheepish face.

Pinky : hey bhaghan, dadi..what my fate ..he did not how to boil potato also..with puppy faces.

Dadi: hmm..so sad dear..with dramatic ways.

Swara: sanskar, now clean kitchen floor..after u go clean outside floor..

Sanskar glare to Adi : stupid Adi, because of u, she dominating me more..

Choti: ufff, everyone so tensed because of adi jiju adventures ..so Vickyji , come entertain us..with ur great talent with chuckling face.

Girls sitting in sofa and Vicky standing infront of Girls..

Vicky : yes mam, plz tell me what entertainment u want..with grinned teeth.

Choti smirked face : now I say tongue twister line..u repeat my tongue twister without breathe..hmm just three times u repeat this tongue twister continuously..ok listen.

Vicky looking choti curiously as waiting for her tongue twister..choti said tongue twister one go

Betty Botter bought some butter

But she said the butter's bitter

If I put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter

But a bit of better butter will make batter better

So twas better betty botter bought a bit of better butter

Choti : Now , ur turn..vicky Khurana..

Vicky eyes popped out: oh..say it once again..

Choti : why Vicky khurana , u accept girls not stronger person..now what happen to ur men power..with teasing tone.

Vicky : Geet Bhabhi..plz forgive ur devar..with innocent child face..

Geet: Today, u all cross ur limit..this is ur punishment..do what choti saying..with bossy tone.

Choti: Thanks di..ok once again..i am saying listen carefully.

Betty Botter bought some butter

But she said the butter's bitter

If I put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter

But a bit of better butter will make batter better

So twas better betty botter bought a bit of better butter

Vicky take long breathe : betty boter brought some bitter..

But ...vikcy stammering in second lines..

Vicky : I forgot ..with shame face.

Pinky:choti leave him..let watch new movie in TV..

Choti: yeah di, we waste our time to this monkey rather than we watch Movie..but punishment sure..u just run three round to whole farmhouse.

Vicky: what , three round.

Choti: less punishment right..i increase count Vicky with smirking face..

Vicky : No..i am going with cursing choti in murmur voice left outside for doing his punishment

In kitchen , sanskar cleaning floor and maan & adi cleaing stove slab..and Vicky enter in fuming face..

Vicky: bhai, because of u..they doing so much..i got insult from moti ..with angry face.

Vicky hit cupboard through his hand with angry face and flour box drop down to cupboards..every flour drop to four of them head..( everyone standing near to cupboard just imagine in scenary )

Maan shout : Vicky ..with grinned teeth..

Girls hearing maan shout as enter in kitchen..everyone blast their laughter seeing white flour spread in whole head ..their face covered with flour.

Whats going on..with heavy voice. Sound come from Girls behind..


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PART 39

Girls hearing maan shout as enter in kitchen..everyone blast their laughter seeing white flour spread in whole head ..their face covered with flour.

Whats going on..with heavy voice. Sound come from Girls behind..

Girls unison: now we r gone, Khurana boys saviours came...

Girls turned with innocent face : when u came mom,

Janu angry glare to girls: what happening yaar..why they standing in flour bath..

Girls: we did not anything mom..they only said that they doing whole house hold works ..we saying right, dadi.

Dadi: yes, janu beta..

Vicky shout :they saying Lie Janumaa..with crying face..Girls glare to vicky

Janu maa rolled her eyes and pointed to boys : u people go take shower ..girls come with me with angry face..janu left the place.

Mens winning smile to girls while girls fuming seeing their winning smile

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After everyone freshup come to Hall..and Girls already cleaned Kitchen mess did by Boys.

Both boys and girls stand infront of Janumaa..and dadi sit next with Janu.

Janu: few minutes, I come late, u all hungama in house..Girls , u did it so much with angry face.

Dadi : Janu beta, they only started, they said Girls weak person..so we did it..with supporting girl side.

Janu: Maa, u r elder to them but u also joined to my crazy Girls..and boys u all handling big companies..but u people dominating Girls strength..is it right?

Maan: sorry maa..with guilty face.

Sanskar, Vicky And adi: Sorry maa..with pout face.

Janu : They asked sorry right, now ur turn Girls..with little harsh tone.

Geet:why we ask sorry Maa..we cannot...they did wrong, we r not with stubborn face.

Janu rolled her eyes: Geet because of u , they also follow ur path..ur elder and u become roll model to them ,not spoiling them with ur naughtiness.

My princess not spoiling them (girls), they (girls) teach good lesson to ur lovely sons..

Girl tuned :Papa..with smiling face.

Janu: u r the main reason day by day , their naughtiness increase with angry face.

Raguram : what I did it..ok leave.. important person come to see u guys..raguram move away from side..

Girls and boys shout : Lakshu patti..with excited face..maaneet stand in slient ways.


Lakshmi chuckling face: don't call me Patti (granny ), just address me to Lakshu..

Girls hugged Lakshmi and boys take blessing from her..maaneet starring them..

Lakshmi infront of maaneet: u both not happy , I came to ur home with fake sad face.

Geet: no patti , not like that..geet gestured maan take blessing from granny..maaneet bend down touch granny foot ..

Lakshmi: pathinarum Petru peru vazhugu vazhuga .. maaneet stand in straight with smiling face.

Swara and choti with horror face: Lakshu, u blessed , 16 child for them..

Lakshu: No beta, its not meaning of my blessing..pathinaurum (16) I mention for boons. My blessing meaning live long life acquiring 16 boons..

Vicky: what 16 Boons , lakshu..

Lakshmi: fame, education,courage, success,progeny (child),daring, finance, Valued grain (abundance of food),well-being,enjoyments of pleasures,wisdom,beauty,unending honours,philanthropy,birth (lineage)and healthy long life.

Adi: omg, lot of blessing in single lines ..

Lakshu : yes ..Raguram, u talk with priest or not..

Raguram : I already talked with him..he come evening to farmhouse.


Choti: why priest Lakshu..

Lakshmi: evening , u know all know about his visit..let start our chatting , I don't anything about u all..

Without us, u start chatting session lakshu, with angry coarse voice

Lakshmi take breath: they come behind me..

Everyone turn look at entrance..four person standing in angry face ..

Lakshmi : why u all standing here.come inside..

Swara: lakshu, they r..


Girl : we intro ourself..iam Deepti, daughter of Sivaram and radha chakravarthy.. 20 yrs old , I am Pursing third year in college.


Next girl: iam ishana , daughter of sivaram and radha chakravarthy..iam 17 yrs..old..iam studying 12 std.


Next girl: Iam sara ..daughter of Jairam and Madhura chakravarthy. Iam 11 yrs old..yeah ofcousre iam youngest to all..so very pampering child to our elders.iam doing 6 th std.


Next boy : hi guys , this is ur bharath.son of Jairam and Madhura chakravarthy..iam 14 yrs old..i am studing 9 std ..i know karate, martial arts very well with attitude voice..yesterday itself, I thought, I am only boy in Varman chakravarthy..now I heared my aunty son came from delhi ..so I come to see him..where is that little boy..

Maan cleared his throat : I am ..with raised his eyes brow..

Bharath: I am not asking u, Young man..i asking about My aunty son..he only 10 yrs old .

Deepti chuckled face: Bharath, he is our bua son..

Bharath: but deeps, u said he only 10 yrs old but he ..

Deepti: yes , I just prank with u..with smirked facw

Bharath: u and ur stupid prank.with angry face ..hi with sheepish smile..

Vicky: our family going big one..with popped eyes..

Deepti come infront of Vicky: so u r maan jiju ka brother, Vicky.

Vicky : yes , deeps with flirting tone.

Choti rolling her eyes: flirt ..with murmuring in angry face.

Everyone intro with each other...and lot of fun and chatting , teasing with each other..

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Evening..

Priest doing work with panchagam (astrological calendar)..

Bharath: priestji, how many times u count ur fingers ..with little mood off face.

Lakshmi: Bharat shut ur mouth, he doing his job.

Choti: Lakshu, why priest come to our home..

Dadi: for Di and Jiju marriage date fixing..

Geet shyly look at maan and maan smiled seeing his sherni in shy face.

Priest: this months last date good for marriage or after two months one date for marriage or after 6 months only two good date for marriage.

Choti: this month not fix the date. Next weeks I have exam..i need concentrate ..

Deepti, ishana also said same things..


Geet face fell down..

Priest: then after 2 month..we will fix their marriage..

Maan: no after 6 months, u will fix..

Geet mouth open widely even every one..everyone thought, he only urgent for marriage but he saying fix after 6 month for wedding..

Geet murmur: are u mad..6 month , maan...with almost crying face.

Maan: I know mishty..wait for few seconds..

Maan: priestji..say date for after 6 month ..

Priest: 14 and 22 sept ..

Maan : fix 22 sept ..

Geet : maan, why 22 sept..

Maan: don't say u forgot our Marriage day..our first meeting..Marriage at First Sight, u remember it or not..

Geet Blushing face: opps , how can I forgot our wonderful day...thanks maan for everything..both eyes caught..

Swara clear her throat: Love birds, we also here..with teasing tone

Masti gang: Bhai /maan why marriage date after 6 months..

Maan: because that day very special day for us..while starring geet blushing face.Maaneet eyes locked with somuch of love.

Mastigang: why..22- Sept -2017


Maaneet: our First anniversary..that day only, we got married in Pollachi..

Masti gang : then its very special day for u guys.

Lakshmi: so geet beta stay in chennai right till their marriage.with teasing tone

Maan : No..

Everyone laughed and geet blushing

Deepti: why jiju, u cannot stay away from di with teasing tone.

Maan: single minute, I cannot but 6 months, no way..with slow murmuring voice

Lakshmi: Raguram, This marriage will arrange very grandly..afterall this gerneration ka first marriage in Varman chakravarthy..

Dadi: Not all Chakravarthy family..and Khurana family also..this is first marriage in this generation..we have less time doing every work..

Choti , swara, deepti ,pinky, ishana and sara : yeah less time for shopping with sad puppy face.


Vicky : what 6 months time less for ur shopping..with teasing even shocking face.

Choti: yeah...shopping to select dress for every ritual, jewels and arrange beautian, we start rehearsal for sangeet dance, first we need select good song..we need choose game for teasing groom side .

Vicky: we also do same with bride side.

Deepti: we also bride side..now we r more members in bride side.

Vicky smirked: My Ghsp college member also come to Bhai marriage ..we also huge members than u all.

Raguram: both stop ur fighting..u all decide later..u have more time decide.



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PART 40


DELHI..

Pammi Room

Pammi sitting in bed while held picture frame in her hand.

I hate u Anju,I hate u so much. because of u ,he not look at me..i never thought i broke his trust from u easily .he said that he love u more than his life but in midnight time,he throw out his love through his own hand because of me..everything happened u( anju) because of me and My brother (sam and Brji father).first Rano father fix his marriage with me..i left London with bhai..after I come back..Rana already married with u , even u both have child also..u think..i leave u peacefully and blessing u..whereever u happily love with ur love..i rentry in ur life insake of Ur maan birthday..i heared ur word , u trust ur hubby so much ..so I did not play with u but I played with him..first we used ur stupid groom( who anju Parents selected groom for anju ) ..he very angry with u and Rana. We brainwashed his mind..he did it what we saying through his men..first we spread gossip u r characterless person then we send men as talk with u closely..but ur foolish hubby.trust his eyes more than his love..yes, I killed u..anju..we record rana voice in his angry time.he shout I want kill u anju..how many times I hearing his angry voice..u don't know...My heart got peace hearing his voice everytime through Taperecorder. My Bhai men hitted u through car but u not died even I want ur dead big painful one..my bhai snapped u though knife in ur stomach..after u r died only I knew that u r Three pregnant also.so sad..we killed ur child in ur womb itself.and bhai played rana voice infront of u..but still u trust ur hubby..wow what a love. Ur bhai raguram tried to save u but we also in Hospital, how we can allowed save u.we already managed doctor and said don't say anything to anyone but u said everything to ur Bhai..time god , god with us only..after u r death, he went away from village with his family..after few days I enter in Km mansion with innocent face..i acted as I caring and loving to ur son..but when in his childhood age , how much smartness..he never mingled with me..rana parents saw my fake love with ur manu ..they decided rana second marriage with me..but idiots rana denied as said he love anju only in his life time.how can I leave him..bhai mix drugs his drink..he drank state , he misbehaved with me. After rana parents knew about he misbehaved with me..they trust my fake tears..parents orders him and marry to me..after marriage , he drank more .after few months I faints..doctor confirmed iam pregnant..i want kill his child ..because this child not mine..in that night also..he saw ur face in my face..he thought he love making with u..how can I think..they r my children..i want abort in my womb itself but my stupid bhai stopped me ..my womb child thrumb card for Khurana property..so I accepted his decision. After I delivered Twins children..i never feel they r my children..i hate them like Maan. I don't know why they r my blood but they attached more with Maan.even Maan sentimental Idiots, he also unconditional love with my Twins.. Rana rejected everytime...my revenge increased more because of rana rejection...rana run out mansion, I thought Now I am ruler whole empire..but clear old couple.that rana father write every property in maan name and Savitri become guardian of maan..even he did not write single penny to my children..i planned if maan marry my niece , whole property come under my name..no no..once again my plan failed because of ur neice, Geetanjali..she already married with maan without know anyone..i tried many time kill her but every time Maan saved her .u think I will allow , ur niece happily married life with ur son..no ..its never happen in their dreams..they deciding their Marriage right..before Their marriage I separated them like I did separated u from rana..wait and watch in heaven..how ur Niece and ur son get torturing by me and Ur son throw out ur Niece in my mansion..it will be happen before their marriage otherwise I will kill her through my hand..with evily and angry face..

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Maan room

Sanskar: Maan, why tensed ..and any other reason , u postponed ur marriage after 6 months.

Maan : yes, sanskar..i postponed marriage because..with tensed face..

Adi: what maan..why tensed so much..

Maan take one parcel and give to Adi..

Adi opened and after he shocked ..: she ...

Sanskar snatched parcel from adi hand..and after seeing parcel things ..sanskar give same reaction..

Sanskar : who send her photo with shocked face..

Maan: even I confused, our college day ufff..with pushing his hairs to backward ..

Sanskar: I think that mystery man related to her..insake only he doing everything with us..

Maan: me too thinking same way like u..if he harm my mishty and my family..what we will do..then only I postponed my marriage date..we have less time ,we need to capture mystery man before marriage date..

Adi: maan, increase security with ladies more..

Maan: hmmm..

Part end

part 41 to 44-pg 54


Next parts teaser Continues

Man: Maan singh Khurana and sanskar u both play with me..not bad guys..Maan , nowdays u r very happy with ur lady love..only few days ,how much u want happy.u happy with ur lady love after u just cry.No one with u wipe ur tears.u snatched my life ka two important person from me..everyday I crying for them but u happy with ur family .u think I leave u soon..i will make ur life to hell..u beg for ur die infront of me..iam coming maan...😲😲😲

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Dadi :U both not romance in office and both not stay in lonely place also..geet stay in Outhouse but maan never enter outhouse even he not look at outhouse side also until urs official marriage.

Maan: if I am not accept ur condition with attitude voice.

Dadi: simple, I transferred geet to Chennai branch..nahi, i dismissed her from office.with same attitude face.

Geet pout look at maan..

Maan : dadi with grinned teeth..

Dadi patted his cheek: don't for got iam ur dadi..

Mastigang: u both deserve it with laughing voice.😆

Back to delhi..more office work pending and Maaneet Office room romance also pending .. ( yeah dadi put condition but maaneet follow dadi condition..is it possible for maaneet mainly maan..😛😛😛)

New persons entries..

Sasha eye popped seeing something..😆

Guys, if u want next parts with in two days or ..some other day..😉😉😉

If anyone mind stricked out why I splited into four parts .its just only more than 5000 words post.. ..ok guessing. Let see who saying correct guess😛😛😛

Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Hi dearies, sorry for late comment dearies..i comment every stories soon ..forgive me yaar..i busy with my wok and my first story MFS ka first anniversary ..After maaneet marriage I become free ..so plz understand yaar.. I will comment soon..thanks for pm..

My dear sweethearts,

I send more pm but I got less response only..this update only I send pm to everyone .in futher update , I am not send pm to all..who follower of MFS that person get pm from me..i know everyone not read my MFS but u read my other stories..this month fully I update MFS only so Mfs follower will be get pm and decided maaneet marriage or say my mfs anniversary part in my blog only..so who comments and likes that person only get PW for maaneet marriage others not dearies..plz reply me u don't want pm for MFS update..this month I don't want my mood off because of less response..i want write more update before maaneet marriage ..plz understand my suitation.that day very special day for me...who want pm for my stories plz..hit comment and likes dearies..atleast hit like guys...if u did not likes my stories and plz inform me..if my words hurts u , I am sorry..

upcoming parts scenes








Thank u dearies


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Loved All Updates 😛 ❤️ Complete package of Fun Romance Emotions Evilness 😛

Poor MaaneetKaRomance 😆
Uske kabaab m haddi nahi haddiyan h that too big oness 🤣
Sho shooo everyone 😆 leave my Maaneet Alone 😉
🤣 Maaneet r daily entertainment for Masti Gang 🤣 Ha ha
Free show at home 😆 sitting on sofa with snacks n drinks 🤣 🤣
Maan thinking abt past n tensed 😕
bt geet tell to forget painful memories n remember only happy tyms 😛
Maan emotional n happy seeing Anju' room n his childhood photos with Anju 😊
He he Masti gang is too much 😛 I just love all of them n their masti 😆 🤣 To kiss maan instead of Maan photo 😳 Yup!! Geetu
Tell Media ... Maan not knew abt Ravan 😆 Thn see wht they do 🤣
Yes! Mr. Maan Singh Khurana u crossed ur border.. thinking girls r less than boys 😡 Be ready for consequences 😃
Hehe now bear all the consequences boyss 😆 Dadi too on girls side 😛
Do all house chores 🤣 thn u all understand wht girls do 😆 😆
everyone opened their big mouths sohad to do all this 😃
Adi bechaara ... bina kuch khe phas gya 🤣 🤣
Hehe maan now mishty mishty will not work 😉 Bear it 🤣
Cooking serving cleaning dusting entertaining 🤣 🤣
Maanna pdega girls 😃 nd choti's punishment was hilarious 😆 🤣
NOw girls tym to watch theatre 😃 😆
Maan said Try until u succeed 😆 is it his buisness deal 😃 🤣
Ahem ahem ... Maaneet alone 😉 😳 feeding food 😊
Awee chooo sweet Geet dis all this to divert Maan 😳 😳 😛
Aww Maan about to 😳 😳 nd BANG 🤣 🤣 one more kabab m haddi 🤣
Ha ha Adi ... cooker blast 😆
What a toungue twister 😆 poor vickyy 🤣
Ha ha ha didu 4 white bhoots came here 🤣 call someone 😆 🤣
Oopss Boys saviour Jaanumaa came 😲 😊
Don't worry girlsss 😃 Raguappa n dadimaa h naa 😉 😃
Lakshuu came 😉 hehe all in one aashirvaad 😃 16 boons 😲
Yuppp ! More familyyy members 😛 population bhadti jaa rhi h 😆
Umm ... flirtingg with Deepti 😃 Someone is Jelousss 😉 One more relationship gonna ahead soon 😳
Chota packet bharath 😆 came to see chotu Maanu 🤣
Hehe all shocked 😲 when Maan approved Most last date for marriage 😛 Aakhir 1st Anniversary h isse jyaada special kaise hogi 😉 😉
Crazy Girlsss 🤣 shopping ki deewani
Invitation onlyyy for groom side 😲 Girls ne kya bigaad diyaa di 🤣
Devil Pammi 😡 n her bro 😡
Hate them so so much 😡 koi kisi ko itna torture kaise kr skta h ... wo b is had tk until that person die 😡
Anju was pregnant too 😭
Wht gonna happen Maan came to know this 😡 he ll kill her .. umm killing is actually not a solution ... she must need to bear much much more than Anju 😡
What kinda lady she is ... She even hate her own childsss 😡
Thnk god .. Maan was their for them 😛 for showing love care n all 😛 😊
Pammi brij sam n especially that mysetryyy man 😡
Parcel girl photos cllg Let's see next wht gonna happen
Edited by Angel.Pooja - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



I already finished but ..some problem yaar



Problem wht's that 😕 okkk take ur tym then
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Originally posted by: Angel.Pooja



Problem wht's that 😕 okkk take ur tym then


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