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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update nxt soon 😉
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Thank Friends

I want to thank everyone to encourage me to write more and appreciate it and liking this and spend your precious time for reading and commenting for my ff it means so much to me thank you guys because when I thought to write this I was nervous because I read everyone ff to and they were mind blowing awesome and what to say I can't describe in words so I thought no one will going to like this but the comment of everyone surprise me and I want to thank best friend of mine and they are Vrinda di who didn't Even comment on my ff in fact she tell everyone to and then comes lovesPari, she always comment on this and very fast to and cute comments made my day and there are more like = Roulan15, AkdhaSaumya, SShreShtahA, sorathsheikh, DivyaJA, eshalli, dellakdha, Rosereaja1915, Kavya_P-, Duhasaad, dvyadaya13, kattylovestammy, avishimishra, aina111, harrystyolic, Devilow0405, and I am thankful to you all very much to you all people always comment on my ff I always wait for that now what you all like and what not and the most beautiful think is you all very patiently wait for another update to thank you once again love you guys and pleas take care of your health to and I am also thankful to = gurusree, Konica.arora.92, nadja_Love-91, Sandhyarnii, shaidmehmood, Farlon, Shaivani, shonali15, Dolly2358, Etaferahu.kassa, durgachintaada, Jodha23, IgnatiaAkdha11, Tehzeeb89, gagan1996, --cutemanasi--, srivarshni, abha22, Nejyanthi, sanasonu1, franz299, AkDhian, Insaneniyu, Konkalla, zynahsiddiqi956, malu690, Somaguha, jodhavni94, Prabjotdigpal, a.isha---, ashuparab, wanita. you all for like this thank you everyone and in evening I will update Chapter 17 on both of my ff love you everyone even I am glad that here I got so many friends who never met me but don't know me personally but still I can call some of you Di or friends and you all don't mind me to call you in fact you all are ready to help me on this site to and I am sure there is no end for this friendship thank you once again .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Such a Sweet gesture rashmi..
Your story is too gud
i always enjoyed while reading...
Cont with your innovative ideas..
Tnxx..😊
Edited by divyaJA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Wah Rashmi U r rocking in this story ya...Just wow...Many suspenses in each update...👏
More over Jalal Abdul and Ajay are very smart...
THEY are rocking with their smart ideas...
In this Jalal is lost of any idea and frustrated Abdul comes as his saviour..What a friendship...
I am surprised with the Past of Ajay...He is on a mission to arrest Jalal...This is the most surprising element here..well done Rashmi 👏
Think Jo is Ajay 's real Sister...
So now Jalal arrested and Jo is safe...What next?waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 17

(Ajay and Kabir reach the farm house but get shocked to see the scene there ten car were there and seeing this both entered the farmhouse with his men and stop dead in there track seeing Jalal there who was continuasly slapping Jodha and she is crying nonstop and because of slap her lips are bleeding her hair were messy his hand print is now easily can see on her cheeks Veer Priya are tied to chair and pleading to leave her and seeing all this Ajay roared like lion).

Ajay Said : Leave her you rascal how dare you touch her leave I said right now before I could do something wrong leave her.

(and saying this he tried to come towards him when Jalal one men fire his gun on Ajay two Times on his both leg and seeing this Jodha started crying more and seeing her crying).

Jalal said : you know baby same way I to cried for you but you didn't care about me do you look what you did because of you my men shot my best friend and by which hands I want to give you happiness I slapped you five times who is responsible you only and still you are not saying what ask you do you I think you don't love them right baby girl if you want me to leave everyone then say the thing which I ask you to say or else next time my men will shot someone else .


Jodha said : I am sorry I will never try to escape please leave them .

(Jalal one men shot Veer on his both leg).

Jodha said : please no no no don't do that please I will say please don't do that.

(Jalal then grab her hair and make her stand and in cunning voice).

Jalal said : you are very selfish baby girl you don't love them look for you Ajay your brother left his important meeting Priya your best friend never confess her love to Veer because of you Kabir left his mother in India and come here to help you but you selfish Little girl don't care right just for your happiness you are destroying there life don't you you can't say a simple words to me which I am asking you past half hour now say .

(listening this everyone get shocked that ).

Ajay Said : how cunning you are Jalal you are manipulating her don't do that Jodha don't loose please.

Veer pov - what the hell Priya love me and we never knew about this oh god now she will left me for sure no love please don't stop your fight please.

Priya pov - oh my god I never thought my truth can come out like this please god give her strength don't let her loose please.

(Jodha get shocked and then she looked at everyone for some second then turn to him and in crying and stammering voice).

Jodha said : I...lo...v...e...yo...u...I...will never...try ...es...cape...f...rom...you.

Jalal said : don't test my patience and stop stammering and say clearly now baby girl or no one will save you from me and I will kill them for sure then don't blame me later .

Jodha said : I love you and I will never try to escape from you now please leave them.

Jalal said : swear on your brother Ajay that you will never try to escape from me .

Jodha said : I swear on him I will never try to escape from you .

Jalal said : that's like my girl leave it Ajay don't you wanna know how I get here well before coming to your house I already get the information about your farm house and when your men take me to there car I was awake and then make them unconscious and drive there car here and my men follow me here to and I get her rest you know buddy now baby girl say bye to your family because you are not going to see them again .

(Ajay take his gun out and tried to hit him but his one men hit on his head and he get fainted and seeing this Jalal laughed his heart out and with Jodha he left from there and make her sit on the car and then sit besides her to and hugged her very tight).

Jalal said : you make me torture to much and now you will for every pain of mine forget escaping I will not let you see the sunlight you will see the worst of me now .




Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
O God..why jalal is so cruel to her...
He goes to such an extent to get her...
I know he loves her but he behaves like a cruel men to a girl...that too he love that girl...
He is very possesive towards her that make him behave like this. ..
Going to any extent to get his love...
But one good thing Now Jo comes to know that priya Loves Veer..Sure she will leave Veer but will she love jalal...
Poor Jo..felt bad for her...
Hope Abdul give him some piece of advice...
So finally the bird is in the cage..
This time Jalal is ten times faster than Ajay...for his Baby girl...
NOW waiting for the next move of the smart men...
Partly painful Update Rashmi...
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Chapter 18

(after sometime they reach the house Jalal then come out from car and then take her out to and again hugged her)

Jalal said : this is going to be our temporary house because soon we will go back to India okay baby girl now come with me.

(he take her in side the house and then pushed her on hard floor then in roaring voice).

Jalal said : now tell me what punishment I should give you because you did lot of mistakes don't you .

(Jodha is really scared from him and seeing him coming towards her she Started to go back side and tried to speak something but nothing comes out of her mouth).

Jalal said : you wanna say something say baby girl I want to hear what you have to say but you are scared right and because of that you can't say anything right but let me guess what will you say yes you wanna meet Ajay right but I will not let you meet him get it now let me tell you some rules of mine okay = first you will not try to escape from me . =second you will do as I say always. = third you will never tell anyone that I am forcing you . = fourth whenever I will ask something you answer me okay and you will never disrespect me by anything get that .

Jodha said : yes .

Jalal said : now answer my question that did Veer ever touch you or kissed you and where he touch you I want to know tell me or else.

Jodha said : yes he hugged me and kissed me to on my forehead always.

(Jalal comes towards her and grab her by her waist and take her to his room then entered in bathroom with her poured cold water on her and it was really very cold and because of that she started shivering and after few minutes he take her out and give her some clothes).

Jalal said : change it I am going out and when you are done then tell me okay.

(saying this Jalal goes out and Jodha take the dress and again goes to bathroom and started crying her heart out she is scared worried for Ajay and her friends suddenly she heard Jalal Voice).

Jalal said : it's now going to half hour are you changing the dress making it change fast and come out or else I will comes there and make you wear that get it .

(listening this she hurriedly wear the dress and comes out and saw him laying on bed and looking at her and his one look is enough to make her more scared so she started looking everywhere except him).

Jalal said : come here and sit besides me come.

(slowly slowly she goes to him and sit besides him but maintain the distance between them but Jalal is Jalal after one month he got her how will he let away from him so he in few seconds grabbed her by side pull her towards himself because of that she fell on him they looked at each other one has love concern rage jealousy and what not other has fear worries and hurt when suddenly Jodha winch in pain and looked down to see Jalal is cleaning her wound).

Jalal said : you are mine only mine and only i have a right to touch you love you see you kiss make you happy or give you or gift you get it and if I hurt you then I will be the only one who will make it up for that okay and I will not share you with others now your I treat your wound let's eat these medicines it will help you to get over with the pain eat it.

(Jodha eat the medicine without saying anything because she didn't had any strength to fight or say she is so much tired to do anything and within a second she fainted on his arms he looked at her then he make her lay on bed and cover her with blanket).

Jalal said : I am sorry baby girl I never want to hurt you but you really make me so mad with your continuasly crying please forgive me .

(saying this he kissed on her forehead and goes out of the room and saw Abdul sitting on couch waiting for him and seeing him he rush to him and in desperate voice).

Abdul said : where is she and what you did tell me now ... Jalal why don't you understand dammit she is human she can't take it you are doing wrong to force her the way you manipulate her today it was really wrong you have sister to think what if someday some one force her like you are doing to Jodha then what will you do think buddy please .


Jalal said : done with your lecture now leave and got your girl friend and let me live with my baby girl good night .

(and with that Jalal come back to his room and saw her then he to laid besides her and slept Hugging her and other side Ajay and Veer are in operation theatre after few hours doctor comes out and saw Priya and Kabir there and in calm voice).

Doctor said : don't worry they are out of danger and you both can see them in an hour okay .

(saying this doctor left from there and Kabir and Priya stand out the other and saw them by glass door).

Kabir said : don't worry everything will be fine stay strong okay .

Priya said : how will I meet them how I talk to them now they will hate me now because of my brother and my emotion they lost everything I don't have any right to live now I should die yes there is nothing reason for me to live now.

Kabir said : really then do that who is stopping you but before doing that think about Jodha she left with that men to save you all she left her heart and life with you Priya her heart is Veer and her life is Ajay and her strength is you but you are talking to finished yourself then do it breaks the trust of Jodha go finished yourself go .

Priya said : then what should I do .

Kabir said : support them Priya they are broken now and they lost there hope to and you have to give them strength get it and I am with you now stay here I am coming in few minutes okay .

(after few minutes Kabir come with some food and in concern voice).

Kabir said : and for making them strong you have to be strong to and for that you have to eat food now eat this don't say no have it then we will see them to okay.

(after having there food ten minutes they goes to see them and sit besides them and looking at them they slept there to).

(next morning Jodha open her eyes and looked around and get shocked to see herself in another room she tried to get up when she heard his voice).

Jalal said : what are you doing baby girl let me sleep I am tired don't tried to get up okay now close your eyes and Sleep with me.

(seeing herself in his arms and that to on sleeping form she get teary but didn't let her tears com out and she again tried to get up and her struggle make him angry and he woke up and in angry voice ).

Jalal said : can't you listen to me in one words why did you wake up tell me .

(listening his angry voice she started shivering in fear but then in low voice).

Jodha said : I want to go washroom please.

Jalal Said : okay go now but next time if you dare to disobey me then you better be ready for punishment okay .

Jodha said : yes .


Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Chapter 19

(Ajay open his eyes and looked around and find himself in hospital and then get up with jerk on hospital bed and in fearful voice ).

Ajay Said : angel angel where are you .

(listening his voice Kabir who was sleeping on sofa woke up and comes to him and in Calm voice).

Kabir said : calm down sir you need rest please .

Ajay Said : where is she her brother is in hospital and she is not here .

(Kabir looked at him but didn't said anything suddenly Ajay remember everything and tears come out from his eyes and seeing him like this Kabir hugged him and in loving voice).

Kabir said : don't worry sir everything will be fine we will find her and I am sure about this.

Ajay Said : where is Priya is she fine or not I hope she didn't do anything stupid right and what about Veer is he fine to or not.

Kabir said : she thought about to finish her life but I stopped her and Veer operation is done and he is fine to but please you take rest please.

Ajay Said : I want to see them take me to them now and don't you dare to disobey me .

Kabir said : okay come with me .

(saying this Kabir make him sit on wheelchair and take him to Veer where Priya is sleeping and Veer is look at table lamp and silent tears are flowing from his eyes like waterfall and seeing this Ajay tried to compose himself then goes to Veer and take his hand in his and in Calm voice).

Ajay Said : don't worry everything will be fine.

Veer said : you are right everything will be fine but not for me now she will never love me and I am sure about this because she loves Priya more than me and she can do anything for her but I love her Ajay I can't leave her I can't .

Ajay Said : you said that one day if she want to leave you then you will let her go right and now you are saying you can't why.

Veer said : yes I said that but I never said letting her go by my life then I will move on in my life did I .

Ajay Said : so you want her to feel guilty for you that because of her you all are broken .

Veer said : no never I never want that .

Ajay Said : then what you want .

Veer said : that she will Happy in her life but with the person she is never make her happy .

Ajay Said : do you trust me .

Veer said : yes is there any doubt.

Ajay Said : no I don't have doubt on that but let me tell you one thing I will find her and very soon she will be with us and that's my promise to you okay now take rest .

(saying this Ajay turn to go when he saw Priya is awake and listening there talks).

Ajay Said : don't worry I will make everything all right okay and don't feel guilty about all this and take rest to.

Priya said : after all this happen still you are not very angry with me how can you forgive me.


Ajay Said : you are right how can I forgive you for the stunt you think to kill your life Hitler.

Priya said : I am not talking about that .

Ajay Said : I know and I don't want to talk about that okay because the most important thing is there is no fault of your in all this now go and take rest .

(saying this he left from there with Kabir and take his cell and call someone and in Calm voice).

Ajay Said : where he is .

person said : in his house of London.

Ajay Said : fine keep your eyes on him okay.

person said : okay.

(and with that they disconnect the call and turn to Kabir and in ordering voice).

Ajay Said : send Veer and Priya to Australia right now by my private jet okay and I don't want to have any mistakes this time get it .

Kabir said : okay sir as you say but what about you sir .

Ajay Said : I want to finish this game now it's enough .

(on the other side Abdul comes to Jalal house with Salima and saw him sitting on sofa reading newspaper he looked around for Jodha but didn't find her any where so he in calm voice).

Abdul said : where is she .

Jalal said : she is getting ready in my room and she will be here in sometime .

Salima said : wow beautiful what a girl she looking at her the super model to get faint I saw her in pics but she is more beautiful than those pics what do you think Abdul.

(both looked at Salima then looked Back at upstairs from where Jodha was coming downstairs and seeing her Abdul thought I never want her to be in this hell but I think her destiny is this hell only oh god please give some mind to my buddy please hear me one more and Jalal looking at her smiled slyly and goes to her till the she comes downstairs and seeing him coming towards her she was about to take step back when he grabbed her by waist and take her to Abdul and Salima and in smiling voice).

Jalal said : meet my baby girl my love my life my everything .

Abdul said : I know there is nothing to introduce Jalal .

Salima said : but I need to introduce myself hey I am Salima and Abdul girlfriend.

(Jodha didn't said and seeing this Jalal tight his grip on her waist then she looked at him and seeing His glare she get scared and then turn to Salima and).

Jodha said : his I know you and he told me about you .

(seeing all this Abdul understand everything so he in calm voice).

Abdul said : I am hungry Jalal will you starve us today where is breakfast.

Jalal said : breakfast is on table let's go now .

(listening this everyone goes to dinning table and when Jalal is going there he found Jodha is grabbing his hand in her hand he looked at her).

Jalal said : what .

Jodha said : can I ... can ... I... talk to Bhai please just once please .

Jalal said : no you are not going to talk to him get it now come with me and had breakfast with us and one more thing you will not tell Salima anything get it .

Jodha said : but I just want to talk to him once please I want to know he is fine or not please .

Jalal said : didn't you hear what I said you really love to test my patience right .

Jodha said : no no I just .

Jalal said : enough of all this now come with me or else the consequence Will be bad get it now come.


Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update sis! 😃 Jallu bhai is so cruel He pushed her on the hard floor Continue soon and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I hate this jalal.😡
he is not human..😭
poor jo...really feeling bad for her..😭
abdul is right..

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