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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Fantastic update Rashmi
They are planning to leave London..
Ajay and Jalal's accidental meet is shocking...
I love this plan of jalal and Ajay...If one is brainy and the other one is Smarty... They r rocking...
Now jalal is very mad...Waiting for his next move..whether she meet with jasmine?Waiting for next update Rashmi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Suprb chpr..
ajay is so smart
bt here jalal is doing wrong...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rashmi, this story really keeps us on our toes.

Surprises at every turn-👏

Akbar went undercover as Jalal to catch the underworld gangsters, so he is not a bad guy after all but his obsession with Jodha is quite worrying.

Ajay is always one step ahead of Jalal.

Let's see how they try to outwit each other!

Super story, Rashmi!⭐️👍🏼

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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Rashmi 🤗
Oh god rashmi super interesting update it was..
Dhamakedar 😉
God Hw mny feelings I was going through while reading chap..
Happy sad afraid n lastly relief...
I was agree with Jo decision tht thy should nt run one place to another.
Oh god when ajay n Ja face off n ajay didn't recognize Ja as gangster I really gt worried bcz he think him as his old friend akbar n he knew him as undercover cop so I thought God khin ye ussko batana DE help ke liye but thank God...
N when he talk to them all in hospital n Ja trying to gt information abut Jo n priya thn I thought myb now ajay will talk to him but No he told him a fake story n I gt confuse tht Y he saying this...
Ja was so devil ajay is his friend he done so much fr him fr his Parents n still he thought to tk advantage of him... Chi very bad... He really don't deserve ajay too... Jo is very far
Oh my god... I really don't believe this Ajay... He is smart man more than I cn think... Wow
He gt to know abut akbar real identity in hospital in front of all but thn Hw smartly he manage all... Well done... Way to smart
Wht??? Jo n priya r working nt only fake identify with fake face too 😲 Oh my god... Thn wht the problm
If is this so I think now thy should hv no need to run... Thy cn b here lik this n now when ajay already misguide Ja... So now I don't see any reason to leave London n run other place
Thy should hv to do is just sit quietly fr few days aftr JA leave with his family aftr tht thy cn live freely...
But obviously it's nt ur plan... This cnt b happn to move story forward thy will leave n in hurry thy will giv sum clue to Ja😉 right... Tbhi toh khanani aage badegi 😉.
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update nxt soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 16
(listening this everyone were shocked and then everyone hugged him then Veer break the hug and in curious voice).

Veer said : if they are using fake Id and face mask and you mislead him already then why we need to leave London now I mean we can just wait for him to left from here and till then we will not go out anywhere.

Ajay said : what do you think he is fool who will believe in my words no no no the time when I said lie to him that time he was disappointed and didn't think about my words but now he will thought about my words carefully and he will get some clue and Veer smart criminal to left some clue after doing some Crime and left some clue behind and that lead them to get caught by police and I am sure I to did some mistake and there is chance that can lead him to us that's why we have to leave get it now go and get ready.

Jodha said : now what about his family I mean before we were taking them with us but what now .

Ajay said : i was gone to hospital only for this purpose Angel but after Knowing they are his Family I can't take them with us and now they are fine so no need to worry about them and now i am going somewhere will be back okay but you all will not go anywhere;

(with that all goes to get ready. and on the other side when Abdul enter the hotel room of Jalal he find everything Broken and he get shocked he search for Jalal and saw him sitting on recliner and rush to him and in concern voice).

Abdul said : what happen Jalal are you okay you were gone to hospital to Meet your family and to know about those to Doctor right then what happen tell me Buddy why are you like this you are worrying me tell me.

Jalal said : they are not My baby girl and her friend and you know I was fool to think that Ajay was helping My Baby girl but know he is not he is searching for them to he to don't know anything About them.

(and with that he told Abdul everything about his Meeting With Ajay and listening this Abdul get Shocked but after sometime he compose himself and in calm voice).

Abdul said : I don't believe this what if he is misleading you Jalal Just think what if he know you are the one whom he is trying to protect his sister and he pretended to fake all the story because when you ask that why he is in London he said that he hired some detective to search about them right and he told them so he come here for search them But you know they didn't had this much money and Passport to then how will they come to London but they can come to London with some Private Jet or with the help of someone and that someone can be Ajay now tell me what do you think about this.

Jalal said : you are right he is clever I know him from College days he is more smarter than me he is best student and he was cop to but left that because he don;t like that he have to wait for orders of Senior and he build business empire if people do my work because of fear then they do his work because of respect and my men can betray me for money but his employee can die for him but never betray Ajay and you are right he can be lie to me because the time when he hugged me it was full of happiness but when i was going back the way he shake hand with me that was full of some unknown emotion but that time I was busy in my thoughts to understand those emotions but now I think he is lying so let's go to his house to meet him i am sure they are in his house and if I am not wrong then He will leave London today let's go i can't wait to have her in my arms.

( with that both left for Ajay House and after some time they reach his house but guards stopped him so he in calm voice).

Jalal said : I am his friend and if you didn't let me meet him then you will loose your job .

One Guard said : sorry Sir but to tell you he left two hours back somewhere he is not in home .

Jalal Said : no issue we will wait for him .

Guard said : okay you can entered the house.

(when they entered the house Jalal Get shocked to see the house Because it was no less then Palace he get lost in the beauty of House and thought very soon i will to have like this house with my Family And my Baby girl and thinking about her he come out of his thought and enter the house With Abdul where servants ask some refreshment to them they didn't said anything and looked around then again In calm voice).

John said : sir what would you Like to have Water Coffee or some juice .

Adul Said : I would like to have coffee.

Jalal Said : Water .

John said : as your wish sir Make yourself comfortable on here Sir and we will back with your order .

(After few minutes some servants come with coffee and water and give them they started drinking when Ajay comes there and in pleasurable voice).

Ajay said : what a surprise you here when in the morning I ask you to come with me you said some other day and now you are here what happen is there something serious.

Jalal said : enough is enough Ajay I had enough of this hide and seek game tell me where is she or I will kill you and don't give me shocking look I know that you know about my real Identity then why don't you tell me where is she dammit you was my friend Ajay you don't know how much I love her please I beg you tell me about her were about please.

Ajay said : whom you are talking about Jalal and what identity you have I don't understand anything.

(Jalal then take gun and point on Ajay chest and in stern voice).

Jalal said : tell me about her or I will kill you .

Abdul said : leave him I think He don't know anything.

Ajay said : I didn't knew that the way i help you on your Bad time you will repay me like this kill me but still I will say the same thing that I don't know what are you talking about.

Jalal said : you think you are smart but bad thought you know I know who Destroyed My all illegal Business and I know who is telling you my all the secret still will you say that you don't know what I am talking About Raw officer most Bachelor handsome Sharp minded Businessmen of India .

Ajay said : what are you saying i

(but before he could say Jalal punch him and started beating Him but Ajay to no less He to give him Puynch and started beating him both were fighting like hungry Lions no one is less and they don't want to accept defeat from others after half hours both were getting tired but both are not leaving each other but then Kabir comes there with Ajay bodyguards and saw them fighting he stopped both of them both were Bleeding now but then somehow Ajay get calm Actually he was angry with himself that how ones whom he thaught as best friend is the only reason of his sister pain the way she get nightmare the way she was talking about suicide that all make him angry and he poured all his frustration on him by beating him and other side Jalal to is Angry on himself that how big fool he is how Ajay make his Baby girl escape under his nose and he didn't get clue he take his pain and loneliness irritation pour on him by fight to and now both are glaring at each other).

Jalal said : I don't want to kill you don't force me for that tell me where is she .

Ajay said : i will say the same i don't know whom you are talking about but leave that after this beating I will not tell you anything if I know anything to and you will kill me still my answer will be the same get that as you know I had no fear of death .

Jalal said : fine don't tell me but Kabir will tell me right after all he loves his mom and knowing that she is in my territory he will spill the Bean about my Baby girl .

Kabir said : you mean you are the one who kidnapped her but how when.

Jalal said : Before coming here i check the last message of Ajay which he get in the morning and i get my picture which was send by you to him on that time which we are in hospital and i order my men to kidnapped your mother and it get more easy for me when I got to know that you left India as per Ajay order and now you are here to so you will tell me or not .

(seeing no other option Both looked at each other then Kabir in calm voice).

Kabir said : but still i don't get how did you kidnapped her I mean she left me to meet god two months before do you have connection with god to.

(listening this Abdul and Jalal get shocked then getting the nod from Jalal Abdul called his men to know about that but before they could proceed Ajay hit Both of there head by rod and they get fain then he order his men to tie them after few minutes he called someone and in officer mode).

Ajay said : Jai Hind Sir we got him and he is now under our Custody now what we have to do Sir .

His Boss Said :Jai Hind you got him good I am impressed but tell me about her is she alright .

Ajay said : yes sir she is fine.

Boss said : now you can come back to India your Mission is completed .

Ajay said : okay sir thank you very much.

( with that he cut the call and turn to his men and order him to take him to his Private Jet and send him to India and handover to Raw officer and then he turn to Kabir And in calm voice).

Ajay said What happen to my meeting which i left in India .

Kabir said : it's done sir .

Ajay said : really your Mother is.

Kabir Said : no sir She Is alive I said all this because I knew that he will Call his men and i already know about your Move so I play trick on him that's it nothing more leave it tell Me sir what actually you are and how this all you did and where are they now .

Ajay said : I was the only child of my parent and we are poor we lived in Srinagar i always crave for Sister and After two years my mother give birth to Girl and that time some how our Financial condition get better but you Know god was never so happy on me I loved my family so much they were my lifeline but one day everything got finished in one blast which was done by one Mumbai don And His name was Sultan but that time i was so small i had only my sister with me but i lost my parents because when the blast happen I was with my friend house with her and when i got back i l saw that everything was finished and that was the time when i got to know what poverty really mean to people I was shocked that My parents never let me sleep in empty stomach but they never had full meal and i had my sister to look and i was guilty as elder brother it was my responsibility to take care of her but i can't i beg to everyone to help me but nobody come forward so I stole some money from one temple and run from there with my sister and buy some food foer her and goes to railway station where i met one men looking at my condition he thought to help me and i thought to take his help but he was bad men he take me with him and sold me to some men and take my sister away from me and throw he on some garbage i cried for her but can't do anything like this one year passed the who own me always make me do work never give me proper food and when i was unable to do my task he beat me to one day he took me to Mumbai and there I ran away from him and goes to police and told them everything so one police officer helped me and he was the one whom I was talking right now Sunil Mishra he make me study give me shelter and food And i was smart in studies and work field so i get scholarship and after My study I become An officer but then seeing that all the officer always order by bloody Political leader I get angry and left that and make my business and thought the way I suffer I will help others so they will not suffer like me but one day Sunil sir called me and said that he have some mission for me and that was to caught this Jalal and kill Viraj the Smuggler And Sultan the Don And I play my cards like this way Because I knew that Jalal was behind those three and want to kill him and he was my friend but he get in wrong track to kill them he become smuggler to but i can't do anything because that time my main motive was to destroy weapon smuggling which was doing by one don and when I finished that and goes to arrest him Jalal killed him and he become the leader so i started to finish his business to then like this I destroyed the business of Viraj And Sultan to but killing part was done by him And last task was to arrest him and today I did that to and I send them to My farm house because I knew that if he get clue then he will come to me now you get your answer.

Kabir Said : One more doubt why you are so Fond of Jodha I mean the way you help her you can do that by some other way to .

Ajay said : because whenever i saw her I always thought If my sister will be alive she will be just like her and that thought make me to protect her Because i can't protect my Sister but i will not let anything happen to her.

Kabir said : but what now I mean now he is arrest and his Business is finished to .

Ajay said : no no no He is smart he have Connection in Police to And he will run away and tthis all will make him mad to so I am sure that if he get Jodha then surely he will torture her and i can't take risk on that.

Kabir said : but what i should call you Raw officer or businessmen.

Ajay said : call Me sir only And don't you dare to reveal My identity to anyone and my mission is complete so now I am Businessmen okay let's go and meet them.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally I am here with my comment on this suspense thriller...
which always ditch my imaginations...
while reading chapter I always thought next chapter will be like but before I can run my brain lil far there is a Twist...

Ab last chapter ko hi dekh lo...
Ajay turned out to be an officer 😲😲
mujhe toh laga Jalal bhi koi officer hi na ho 🤣
but till now he is Gangster only...

After reading prologue I thought they will marry and Jalal will act over possessive making them fall in love deep...But again a turn...

Then Jo run away and I thought she will collide with Jalal's car but it turn out Ajay...phir se turn...

I thought Vijay will be a big Villain but he is dead already...good thing 😆

So smart Ajay...Many a time I thought his plan is caught but phir se turn Kita smart banda hai 😆

Jalal k parents k bare mai sun k laga he will change and when Ajay meet Akbar like so close I thought Jalal finally find Jodha but again...😆😆

Finally Jalal in Ajay's custody and now I am waiting for new turn...
But one thing is confirm in all this Jodha is Ajay's real sis 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Finally I am here with my comment on this suspense thriller...

which always ditch my imaginations...
while reading chapter I always thought next chapter will be like but before I can run my brain lil far there is a Twist...

Ab last chapter ko hi dekh lo...
Ajay turned out to be an officer 😲😲
mujhe toh laga Jalal bhi koi officer hi na ho 🤣
but till now he is Gangster only...

After reading prologue I thought they will marry and Jalal will act over possessive making them fall in love deep...But again a turn...

Then Jo run away and I thought she will collide with Jalal's car but it turn out Ajay...phir se turn...

I thought Vijay will be a big Villain but he is dead already...good thing 😆

So smart Ajay...Many a time I thought his plan is caught but phir se turn Kita smart banda hai 😆

Jalal k parents k bare mai sun k laga he will change and when Ajay meet Akbar like so close I thought Jalal finally find Jodha but again...😆😆

Finally Jalal in Ajay's custody and now I am waiting for new turn...
But one thing is confirm in all this Jodha is Ajay's real sis 😉

Sorry for being so late...

But can you tell me if in this story will we see JOJA together or not??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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one more thing if you read your reader's comment then do reply to them or thanks them in start of your update for the comments...otherwise they will stop replying to you and always try to send PM...More you will post on IF more you will restriction free...this way you will have more fun here...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rashmi 🤗
My my wht an update dear... Mind blowing
Full of twist n turns 👏 well done
Hmm... So away is very smart he knows he manage tht Tim by lieing him but he knows he did any mistake n giv him any clue by chance n he knows Ja too very smart to crack his lie in some time... N lik he thought he did
Now Ja sure away is helping thm... Woah he reach his house God I cnt tell u Hw much I gt scared fr Jo tht Tim... But phew nothing bad happen... Jo safe 😊
What the 😲 Ajay is cop too 😲 r u kidding me... Hw mny surprise u hv rashmi 🤔
But whtever it was a super surprise n I truely loved it 😊
N Ja knew tht but kabir who work under him don't hv any idea abut it 😆 Waah..
Waise I thought only Ajay smart but here kabir is no less haan... Hw smartly n innocently he said lie tht smart Don lik Ja gt trick... Smart haan but still nt very tbhi toh Ajay ke baare m kbhi jaan nhi paaya 😉
Ajay... His story very tragic n painful... Wht a coincidence Ajay n Ja both lost his family... Still Ja NY fully lost but Ajay Lost them Forever n both set out to tk Revenge but wht irony the one who lost his family nt actually lost fr Revenge tk Wrong path n bcm Don n smugglers n the one Who actually Really lost his family n hv one painful childhood n lost her one last live relative his Sister even aftr all this he to set out to tk Revenge but didn't lost his path n now he hv all he took his Revenge, he HD respectable Job, n he has money n fame too... Both r in almost same circumstances but it was ther Choice only wher thy r now...
Hmm... So Finally Ja n Abdul r in police custody but lik Ajay doubt I too tht thy will escape Frm ther custody 😉 abhi toh bhaut Kuch bakki h aise Kaise jail chala Jayega 😆
Waise rashmi y do I feel Jo is Ajay real Sister 😉 but I think he will nt to gt abut it soon... But Hw will 😊
Hmm... Let see wht nxt
Waiting fr nxt update 😊

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