Akdha dark ff My Love My Possession Epilogue on page 88 - Page 5

Chapter 9

Jodha said : stop it guys and let's have our breakfast then you both can continue your fight.

Priya said : this monkey always tease me by calling Hitler to me Jodha and I hate him.

Ajay Said : and she to tease me by calling monkey to me but I love her.

Jodha said : fine then fight with each other I don't care okay.

(then both goes to Jodha and hugged her).

Veer said : if we didn't met with you then how we get out of this situation Ajay thank you so much dude for everything you are Doing for us .

Ajay Said : don't need to thank me whatever I did is all for my sister and if wasn't with you guys then to will be out of this problem because you all have great strength with you and that called unity love trust respect and with this strength you all can win any challenge now enough let's have our breakfast .

Veer said : but how did you guys met I mean you are businessman and they are Doctor then how .

Priya said : I met him on road one day I was going with my sweety some where and he hurt her with his car then I in rage broke his car headlights then we started fighting with each and that's when he called me Hitler .

Jodha said : it's when we have our first day on hospital in Mumbai this madam saw him there and she thought that he is stalking him and she without consulting him call the police to arrest him but after sometime when we got to know that he is the owner of the hospital she get unconscious because of shock .

Ajay Said : and that's where our bond started whenever I goes to hospital for my inspection we met and become friends to so now you get how we met .

Veer said : I understand Everything but one doubt who is your sweety Priya .

Jodha said : daughter her car who else.

(listening this everyone started laughing there heart out).

Ajay Said : now listen to me care fully I am leaving for India because if I Will not be there then he could doubt on us so you all are not going anywhere and you all will not I will call you all okay and one more Priya give those proof .

(then Priya goes to her room and bring that and give him and with that he left from there to India).

(and on the other side Jalal get up and goes to freshen up and then called Abdul)

Jalal said : did you get any information .

Abdul said : no .

Jalal said : then what are you doing dammit .

Abdul said : I am trying to search for her Jalal but without any clue where we will search them and how.

Jalal said : go to Shimla and Kidnapped the father of one orphanage where Jodha live her childhood .

Abdul said : but why Jalal I we have nothing to do with them .

Jalal said : just do as I said don't ask question get it .

(after this Abdul goes to Shimla and reach there in the evening and Kidnapped him and then called Jalal).

Abdul said : task is done now what I have to do .

Jalal said : make video and send me .

(Abdul did that after few minutes Jalal called Kabir).

Jalal said : you are smart Kabir but I am smart more then you now I am sending you an video see carefully then call your boss and tell him to give my baby girl to me or else the consequence Will not be good.

(and with that he cut the call and send him the video and seeing that Kabir started sweating but after few minutes composing himself he called the orphanage care taker and ask about it an got to know that is true that some one kidnapped father from orphanage suddenly his cell started ringing he check the caller ID and pick that).

Ajay Said : everything okay Kabir I am coming office today and now I am fine so don't worry .

Kabir said : sir yesterday Jalal come to my home and ask about you but I don't know why and today he send me an video of some orphanage Father kidnapping and told me to tell you that you give her his baby girl or consequence Will be not good I don't understand sir what to do .

Ajay Said : what he but whom he is talking about well leave it I don't have time to think about some useless things so you just make presentation of blue hotel construction okay .

Kabir said : okay sir as Your wish .

(with that they cut there call and Ajay break the mirror in his room in rage and thought you are really very smart Jalal no Doubt but I am no less what do you think you will tape Kabir call and Will hear our talk and get the clue about Jodha no way Jalal no way in hell I am letting you get her and that's my promise but what to do about father he kidnapped him and if I will make any move then he will get it that she is with me now what to do let's wait for sometime then I will do something).

(and on the other side Jalal get frustrated what he heard in Ajay and Kabir conversation in call and then he thought Kabir and Ajay really don't have her then where she is then after few minutes he call Abdul ).

Jalal said : leave him I don't have anything to do with him and come back now .

(then Abdul leave him and started his journey to Mumbai again and thought how much you are change Jalal we are best friend from childhood we both were best in every field wether is studies or sports arts or music you were best student of college every year and we are best cop to but after your parents left you left everything to why Jalal you hated criminal just like your father and now you become criminal yourself why Jalal why oh god please have some mercy on my friend give him peace for you I left my job to but now I can't recognize you as my friend come back my friend before it's too late come back please come back my friend).

then in the morning Abdul reach Jalal and get shocked to see the house condition everything broken flower vase curtains chairs mirror everything the room is looking like a disaster to him then he looked at his friend Jalal and when he saw him he run to Abdul and hugged him and started crying his heart out ).

Jalal said : I need her Abdul I really need her for myself I know I am being selfish and bloody jerk but I really need her for myself please buddy you always help me no matter what right please find her for me Abdul I promise I will leave all that please find her for me .

Abdul said : don't worry buddy we will find her soon but till then you have to be strong okay now stop crying like child .

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(after few minutes Jalal get calm and his servant clean the house then few minutes of waiting).

Jalal said : just because I am don she get scared of me right and don't want to be with me right so now finish this all let's destroy the drug business of Sultan & Viraj now .

(and listening this Abdul get shocked because he never thought Jalal will do like this and that to with Viraj & Sultan because they are there best client to and the biggest smuggler to but then he agreed and with that they goes with there men and told them about there plan).

(and on the other side Ajay got to know that Jalal left father without doing anything to him and he get relaxed and get busy with his business and like this one month passed but in one month many things happen first Viraj drugs business got destroyed and everyone got to know that his real face and coincidentally he died in car accident to and like him Sultan to get his punishment Because he to was partner of Viraj and like this police get so much success in there task to destroy the drug smuggling and caught lot of drugs smugglers but they don't know who is behind all of this they just get information and raid on place and get them and other side Veer Jodha and Priya started there doing job in London and they were happy in there life to but still Jodha scared of him that what if he got to know about her and come to get her and Priya is worried for her friend and always curse Jalal in her mind for condition of Jodha and Veer Always tried to cheer them up and in Mumbai Jalal is still searching for her to get her but he still don't have any clue Abdul to is helping him but he to didn't come with any information and they both are loosing there hope but in between Salima come to them and tried to console she just know that Jalal loves some one and she is not with him so she to tried her best to search her and makes joke to cheer them and she don't know about there real profession to and one day Salima come to Abdul where Jalal was to with him ).

Salima said : thank God you all are here now listen I am going to London for my music concert and you both are coming with me now pack your things we have evening flight go .

Jalal said : you both go I am not coming with you both I don't have interest to go there okay .

Abdul said : if Jalal is not coming then I to Will not coming .

Salima said : fine don't come .

(and with that she called her secretary).

Salima said : cancel my concert which is held in London I am not coming there okay .

(Jalal snatch the cell from Salima

JalalSaid :no don't need to do that she is coming and with that he cut the call).

Jalal said : what are you waiting Abdul go and pack your and my bag we are going to London go now .

(listening this Salima and Abdul hug him and then Abdul goes to pack his and Jalal bag then after half an hour they goes to mall for some shopping there they were talking about there London trip when someone hear there conversation and called someone and that is non either than Kabir he called Ajay from another cell ).

Kabir said : sir Jalal is going to London .

Ajay Said : what but why he is going.

Kabir said : no sir they are going there for some music concert .

Ajay Said : okay leave that come to office I have some work for you.

oh so jalal is no more gangster...

I am not getting comments so I am thinking to quit this ff

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

I am not getting comments so I am thinking to quit this ff

Rashmi, don't worry too much about comments and likes although writers do appreciate them.

As Vrinda said, not many readers are aware about the updates as they are not alerted through PMs but I am sure many do read them. Many more are also silent readers who may not even hit the like button.

The same in my case- I did not know that you had updated this story until Chapter 10 because my last reading was at Chapter 3.

Just continue your stories ,dear. There will always be readers of JA FF.

Finish the stories as per your plot and pursue your writing talent because it is a gift that only few people are blessed with.

I am actually finding this FF quite exciting and am enjoying it a lot. A lot of twists and turns that make it very interesting.

It portrays Jalal as a negative character ,who I am sure, will turn his life around all because of love.