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Anju.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Girls I did not participate in this thread as I'm not good at writing so sorry😭

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Joy_C

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow Superb writing by everyone.. 👏

Why u guys have stopped... 😆
Continue na...

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Bhawna_28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Keep playing guys...please don't stop writing such beautiful stories.

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

arrey bhai yahan toh chupe kalakaar bhare huye hai👏

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ASHERI

@ASHERI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Okay... I'll write the next part... One or the other has to start na... 😉

"return gift?"... She asked herself..Amla felt nervous,especially due to his naughty smile..

" There's no need for a gift" she said even without looking at him.

"but I wanna give...will you accept it?"

Amla didn't knw what to say,bt she was bit curious what could it be...

She looked at him and smiled playfully..

" hmm...okay then..give it to me" saying she forwarded her hand..

Abeer winked at her again..

" No,It cannot be given like this"...saying he took a step towards Amla...

" what do you mean?"

" I mean to say it cannot be given to ur hand" he continued to step forward and with each step amla took a step backward until kitchen counter blocked her way... Abeer was so close to her...He leaned towards her face... She couldn't take this closeness and involuntarily she closed her eyes... She could feel his breath against her left cheek...her heart was racing..cheeks were turning red...She wanted to push him..but her hands were not obeying her ,instead there were clutched onto the counter... Abeer looked at nervous yet blushing Amla, and he smiled at her innocence...

though she was startled with Abeer's action she was anticipating his touch on her cheeks...but nothing happened... Instead she heard Abeer whispering into her ear..."

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I couldn't think of a gift.So, i add one more twist to the tale.nw

it's upto next person to think both what he whispered in her ear and the gift...😆 🤣

Edited by ASHERI - 8 years ago

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Priyanka Bhagat

@Im_Priyana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Conclusion Scene:

Abeer looked at nervous yet blushing Amla, and he smiled at her innocence...
though she was startled with Abeer's action she was anticipating his touch on her cheeks...but nothing happened... Instead she heard Abeer whispering into her ear.
"whenever u blushed , no matter for what reason, my heart falls for you again..there are many other ways to say thank ...but mine is different and I damn sure u will love it.. At night, after 11.30pm, waiting for u."
Hearing this, amla freezes on the spot...She don't even look at Abeer who was staring at her..

"Amla,Amla? "
Again the same "Amla, kaha khoi ho...Dyan kaha hai tumhara?"
Amla hearing voice again comes to her sense..It takes a minute for her to figure out what happened actually. She was dreaming. ... She was all dreaming about abeer. ..

"Amla,im asking something? "
"hunnn... nthing... u were saying something naa? kuch dena chahte the? what's it?"

"Dena to bohot kuch chahta hu...but filhal issi se kaam chala lo" he said.

"kuch kaha tumne?"

"Nthing..I have bought something for u..But close ur eyes first. "

"Nooo.. I won't. ... aankhe band karo to bade atrangi khayal aate hai".

"whatt? konse khyal?" he asked.

"Dekho Abeer, I have lots of work to do..jo dena hai jaldi do"..she looked tensed..still guessing what abeer bought for her.
"Okk..here it is"...

Amla take it.Atfer a moment Both Abeer and amla bursts into laughter. ... "Pura market ghum aaye, aur laaye kya? PEPPER SPRAY? Koi apni wife ko pepper spray deta hai bhala..."

"Okkk.no need to laugh.I know gift thoda ajeeb hai.but bohot kaam ka hai.I promised myself that i wont let anything happen to u.Ab ye jaruri to nahi ke har pal tumhare pass reh pau...Soo. meri jagah ye pepper spray tumhari help(raksha) karega..."

"Aww..that's so cute. Aagar aisi baat hai to muze to pepper spray se hi shaadi kar leni chahiye thi.." she said this while kissing that pepper spray bottle.

"Aisa Sochna bhi mat.it is just helping tool. Not my replacement ..."he smile .He was about to go, but amla stopped him holding his hand. .

"Abeer, tum unique ho..No one can replace u..Market me pepper spray mil sakta hai.Par tum nahi... my journey with you starts with hatred, but as time passes that hatred turns into faith..Khud se jyada bharosa karti hu tum par..Mera bharosa kabhi nahi todoge na tum?" she said while looking in abeer's eyes.

"Are, Gamle tod dunga, uss Evan ki haddiyaan tod dunga...par tumahara bharosa...usse bachakar rakhunga." he said.
(but my personal favorite was "Are,Gamle tod dunga, mando ke daant tod dunga...par tumhara bharosa...usse bachakar rakhunga..." 🤣 ).

"Amla, dont trust him..same dialogue muze ye Dharmshala me chipkata thaaa.." Masso enters in kitchen. ..

"Masso, kya aap bhi... aap to ek din meri naiyaan dubo dengi..." Abeer says this making puppy face..and amla laugh badly...

"kya masso, pehle bahar jakar dekh, tuzse koi milne aaya hai, oops sorry ..aayi hai..."

"Aayi hai, kaun?" he questioned.

"wahi, studio wali. .. Jiska photo-shoot assignment tha...wahi... jakar dekh..."Masso teased abeer. ...

Sorry for bad writing. ..but chalta hai... I know u Guys wont judge me over my writing skills. .. 🤣

Next one...complete the story. .pati, patni aur wo? suggest nice name for wo...
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