Ye panaahe sajde mein tere jhuke # 3 pt 30 on pg 131 on 11/12 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
I hope there is no more jelousy betwen adi n shravu,..
Raman will make sharavu understand...
Update soon diii
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Emotional teaser
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emotional teaser di... shrvu is upset... continue soon di
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Nice teaser
Loved it
Shravu crying feeling lonely
Raman came to talk to him
Thanks 4 pm
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Superb teaser di
Poor shravu
continue soon
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Part 22
Awesome as always.
Beautiful update di.
Raman apologize to Ishita and promised her that he will never talk about his ex.
Ruhi is such a nautanki plus shaitaan.
She asked the beautician to make her ready just like Ishita and keep a check also.
Ish Ra don't have parents but their kids fulfilling that emptiness.
So Loving.
IshRa and Romika got engaged.
Loved it.
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends back with new update .

Part 23


Few more days passed,Ishra were fully engrossed in their marriage preparations and living their life happily with their three children's . Only few days were left for ishra marriage, when one day kids returned from school and called ishita .

S- (happily)- amma ,amma where are you.

I- coming Shravu ,arey Shravu you are looking so happy ,(looking to adi)- kya hua adi beta why are you looking sad .

Adi - mamma Shravu bhaiya got first prize in English Elocation but I didn't got anything ,Shravu bhaiya is nice boy but I m not na .

I(caressing his hairs)- nothing like that beta ,Shravu bhaiya got first prize because he is elder than you and can prepare well ,next time you prepare nicely and come first ,haina .

Adi nodded ,ishita hugged him then they started talking some random things actually she was talking anything to divert his mind , totally forgetting Shravu .He felt bad noticing that and walked inside his room heavy heartedly, unknown to him tears made way from his eyes ,he was wiping again and again, and these stubborn tears are filling again. He went near the window and spoke looking towards the sky as if talking to god " why god why ,why did you called my amma appa so soon , had you seen how amma i mean chitti was pecifying adi ,she loves adiru more than me because she is going to marry their father ,i m so unlucky atleast they have their father with them but i dont have anyone who loves me .I think this is not my place , I was good in my hostel ,let chitti and Raman uncle marriage happen ,then I will go back to hostel ".

[AUTHORS NOTE- Sharman bond scene was suggested by my buddy jakkula sirisha, hope I did justice to this]

He was lost in his grief talking to himself and was going on crying when Suddenly he felt some tug on his shoulder ,he shrug the hand in anger and spoke " adi go from here ,I don't want to talk ."

" mujhse bhi nahi " he heard Raman.

Shravu didn't answer him when he asked " Shravu at first we are friends than anything else ,so you can share your pain with me ".

Shravu was still silent when Raman asked " seems you have grown much that's why ,I became Raman uncle from papa and ishita became chitti from amma haina ".

Shravu was still standing silently while tears were flowing like river from his eyes ,they were tears of mixed feeling which he was going through ,they were tears of sorrow ,tears of fear that raman had listened everything and now how he will answer him ,tears of loneliness and also the tears of helplessness that though he wanted to show his anger but couldn't as for now he don't have anyone to tell his own. Raman held his hands took him to couch and make him sit then he went and bolted the door ,then came back and settled beside shravan. Raman wiped all his tears and then spoke " listen Shravu ,I know we are not your original parents and you very well know this truth because of which it is difficult for you to accept us as your real parent . But believe me beta ,non of us neighter ishita nor me ,make difference between our kids ,you adi and ruhi .I saw outside that you felt bad because ishita was pacifying adi instead of getting happy on your happiness and praising you ,yahi baat hai na ".

He asked to Shravu and Shravu nodded ,Raman pulled him and settled him in his lap .He rounded his arms around Shravu and spoke " achcha tell me if ruhi is crying and adi is happy then what we will do first ".

S- we will make ruhi stop crying .

R- haina .

Shravu nodded then Raman spoke " that's what ishita did at this time ,you were happy and adi was crying that's why she talked to him first ,got that ".

Shravu was silent listening to this when Raman spoke again " don't think that I m taking Ishita's side as I m going to marry her or I m taking adi side as he is my son but I saying this because I wanna make you understand that's you three are same for us .".

Shavan listened to raman and spoke wiping his tears " you want to tell that for you there is no difference between me and adi ".

R- exactly I want to tell you same but at the same time I want to say one thing more that ,I m saying that you are my son so in future you will blackmail saying this again .listen Shravu ,if we live give you our love and care to you then we have all the right to scold you if you will do something wrong . if you will agree for this then only you can accept us as your parents either you will not able to accept us .are you getting me .

Shravu nodded absent mindedly Raman spoke again " I know these are bit difficult for you but at the same time I know that its the perfect time for you to understand these things ,now I m going to call ishita and adiru ."

S- why ,don't tell this to chitti ,she will feel bad .

R- let her feel bad ,if after pretending to love you so much she is been called chitti then she deserve this only .

S- no unc...I mean papa please don't say that to mamma .

R- its necessary Shravu she should also know where she is wrong .

S- but...

R- you relax I m there to take care of her but before that I wanna talk to my three kids and their mother .So I'm calling them .

Saying so he was about to call adiru and ishita when they heard knock at the door and Ishita's voice " Shravu kanna open the door ,j know you are mad at me but listen to me for once ."

Raman and Shravu saw each other while Raman signalled towards the door and spoke " see champ I told you na that she don't differentiate rather we take care of our every kid .".

Saying so he opened the door ,she saw Raman and asked surprised " arey Raman aap yahaan when did you come ".

R- just then when you were pampering adi ignoring Shravu .

I(sadly ); nahi Raman I was not ignoring Shravu but adi was sad ,how can I...

She was yet to complete her sentence when her eyes fell on Shravu whose face was red with continuous cries ,she almost ran to him and asked touching his forehead " Shravu kanna ,what happened to you ,tabiyat to theek hai na tumhari ".

Shravu nodded with teary eyes ,the tears which were of the guilt that he had doubted ishita . He was looking at ishita while she hugged him right and asked " why kanna why are you crying ."

R- ishita we need to talk .

Ishita looked at him with questioning eyes while he nodded and spoke " yes we need to talk ,we mean we all me ,you and kids ".

I- kya hua ,is something wrong .

R- humm .

I- please tell me what happened.

R- telling you ,Shravu go and call adi ruhi too .

Shravan nodded and went while ishita got tense ,Raman called her and side hugged her .She asked " bolo na Raman kya hua ".

R- telling na ,let them come .

They were waiting for kids when romi too come searching for them ,Raman signalled him too to sit .He too settled beside ishra when the kids came running to them .Raman told all of them to settle ,then he asked ruhi to address everybody ,she called him papa ,ishita mamma ,romi chachu and shravadi as bhaiya . Then he asked same to adi ,he too told same then he told ishita to address everybody ,she called him his would be husband ,romi as his bil and shradiru as their kids ,romi too called ishra bhaiya bhabhi and shradiru as kids ,Raman then spoke looking at Shravu " dekha ,no one differentiate between you three ".

shravan nodded ,he then called him and spoke " I think now you will never hesitate in calling us amma papa and adiru you siblings ,never ever address yourself as orphan it pricks .".

S(crying )- sorry appa .

R- no need to say this .

I- Raman will you please tell me what's wrong .

Raman then narrated everything to ishita she felt bad and tried to apologize with Shravu but he himself told sorry to everybody ,then Raman told the kids about them being siblings and also told warned them that no one will now talk about this again .All kids nodded obediently .Then Raman told Shravu you are elder than then your responsibilities are more you have to take care of adiru and also help them in learning good things ,likewise adi you are elder than ruhi its your responsibility to take care of her and rooh if the new baby will come it will be your response...

He was yet to complete when ruhi asked " ek aul baby aane wala hai ..kab aayega papa ".

R- not now after my and mamma ,and chachu chachi marriage .

Ru- ohh ,lekin aap log itne saale babies che kya kaloge .

All elders got embarrassed listening to her while Raman asked " why you don't like babies ".

Ru- mujhe bahut pasand hai ,meli fliend ki mamma ke pass hai ,to kya hamaali mamma bhi laayegi babu .

R- humm .

Ru- but naye baby ki kya zaloolat hai main hoon na mumma ka baby .

Ishita signalled Raman to leave the topic and spoke " of course you are my baby and will remain one".

Saying so she picked ruhi in her arms while she pecked on her cheek ,soon all got busy in their work but ishita was in deep thought ,she was cutting veggies and was lost ,she was about to chop her finger when Shravu took knief from her and spoke " I m so sorry amma ,I know you are thinking about me ".

I-(with teary eyes )- Shravu kanna aren't you happy with this marriage, don't you want me to marry raman ,if it so please tell me now only I will deny for marriage.

S- no amma nothing like that ,it was my fault ,see earlier we were only you and me but now we have our whole family .

I- you are happy na .

S- yeah k happy but I felt bad when you ignored me ,later appa made me understand.

Ishita and Shravu talked for sometimes and then all had their dinner ,then everybody retired to their room .Ishita was patting ruhi when Raman entered Ishita's room ,he saw her lost and went near her ,rested her head on his shoulder and spoke wounding his arms around her " ishita don't think much everything is alright ,they are kids they will behave like this only and we have to make them understand ".

I- we are doing right na by marrying .

R- of course , we are I and you and our kids were adi ruhi and shravan, adiru only had their father while Shravu has his chitti only ,now I and you are we ,adi ruhi shravan are shravdiru and we are a complete family of two boys and a girl, next will be also girl only .

I(blushing )- dhatt raman what was the need of talking about baby in front of kids .

R- kyun ,they should also be prepared for baby na .

I- I think ruhi was right we already had three then...

R- but you had not given birth to anyone na .

Ishita saw deep into Raman's eyes while he spoke " its not that there is any difference between them but I want you also to experience the pregnancy, you mood swings ,the happiness when you will head babies first heartbeat ,when you will feel her first kick ,these are some precious moments which a lady always wants to experience and I don't want you to be deprived of this happiness ,got that .now no more talks on kids ,every time kids kids ,arey we also have some life ,you are going to be bride ,you should take card of yourself , you are getting a husband at least take care of him a bit .

Ishita smiled a bit and asked " what care do you want ".

R- just wanna spend some time with you and that can only happen when these shaitaans are sleeljbg so stop talking about the world and talk about us .

I- what should I talk .

R- about your likes and dislikes ,about your love or crush if you had any ,tell me when you realized that you love me .

Ishita thought and spoke " ok we had much to talk na ".

R- humm.

She made place beside her and both lays on bed side by side and started talking .

That's all for now friends ,hope you like this enjoy reading and do comment.

PS - 200+ likes and long comments for next update.

Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsm update
Shravu felt ignore wen ishita consoling adi
Loved how Raman handled him made him understand trio kids r equal for them
He even talked to everyone n cleared everything
Ishita felt bad n tried to apologize she even thought if sharavu is not happy with their marriage
Shravu apologized n told he is happy
Putter wants one more baby he wants her to experience every phase they got time to talk abt each other
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update.shravu felt lonely raman makes him understand
Raman calls all hus family anf talk with them
Shrauv gets the point
Ruhi and ever cute talk
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its beautiful update.
Raman make understand sharavu.
Which is so nice.
Raman taking about ishra baby.
Emotional and beautiful update.
Thanks for updating

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