SwaSan OS - His [Updated]

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Darling Harshu,

I will answer your PS now and about the story later.

PS 1 - even if the miscarriage happened at two and half months, once it happens the doctors would test the fetus (I use it for want of a better word despite sounding clinical and cold) to find out why the miscarriage happened, so yes they would know if they would have had a baby boy or a girl.

PS2 - even if it were Nyna I do not mind, sometimes we are so hurt that we transfer that pain to an illogical hatred. And Naina carried it for so long, around twenty years(???) before she blurted that to Swara. And she was so quick to realise how wrong she was, that needs a lot of courage - accepting one's wrongs and then seeking forgiveness needs a lot of strength, so even if this Naina was Nyna I would be proud😳

PS 3 - What were writing - a beautiful emotional piece

Just keep it up. Regarding titles, I work the other way round, I have to have a title in place, many an idea has fizzled out because I could not think of the title - the requiem I wrote is for one such tale😭

loads of love,

Nyna

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elsanna

@elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice os harshda 😳

Loved swasan bonding

Tani

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey harshada...

Awesome OS...you know I just love the fact that your story climax has ability to change everything...I remember your two stories in which sanky started pushing swara away...and in just single update u reveal the actual reason of his behaviour...just like that in this story till end I was hating shekhar and naina for being rude to swara but in the end ..u showed what they felt and reason for their behaviour...though swara being adopted..they still kept her..and were fighting their own emotions...truly loved it dear...swasan were love as usual...

Keep writing dear...n I wish u complete those stories which u left incomplete...I loved them...I wish u complete them soon...

Love

Talia

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

I'm so grateful that you posted it bcoz I really loved it!

So thank you for posting it & I'm waiting for your next :)

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful loved the simplicity of the story :)

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phoenix27

@phoenix27

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

It's lovely dear. Sometimes word hurt mote than we imagine them to hurt a person, it can break a person beyond repair and change them permanently into something they never were. Thank God swara had someone who will remain with her every single time.

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