Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 63

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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Okay ji😉
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This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread. 

Cheers! 
Edited by orion23 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Straight from the heart! Loved the letter. Would love to read how the grown up knight and princess meet. 
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Overwhelming! !

Sun...Butterfly...cloud...Rains...Green...Fruits  !! Beautiful cycle of life! !
And when we have Nature giving us life lessons... this can't get any better! !
Everything has a reason and a season !!  Live the moment! !

Set in motion a life changing event...noted...😳

...Telling her this was her moment... i could feel it right here...😳

He saw little droplets come together and form a bigger drop only to slip away to merge into the window sill and lose it's integrity...  this line out stands for me for the reason unknown...😳

"Zindagi kya hai anasir mein zahur-e tarteeb,,
Maut kya hai ini ajza ka pareshan hona !! *

"Life, When elements become ordered, that's all,,
Death, But a moment when into chaos they fall

Sumo may have been his tormentor but she was also his peace. If it wasn't for her ushering him, he would have been archived... 

He heard paced breathing on the other end. He sensed the dull ache of his chest disappear. 

Her heart returning to it's pace while his sped up. 😳

If he wasn't any wiser he'd say they shared something deeper than friendship. But he was wiser... Can't wait to see a hotter, shayar and wiser SM 😉

A small tear made it's way down his face as Suman held the phone close recognising that timber of his voice. ❤️

You write exceptionally well... Had this been any other story/author I would read it,,liked it n went away! ! I am not capable of analysing writings like these! !

The couplet! !⭐️

There is a void is their lives. One doesn't have it and other is bearing the brunt of a broken family !! Someone who will always have your back. Your strength. Anchor of your life. When they are around not a dark thought trespasses... Your Safe Haven! !

The wound is the place where the Light enters you. Rumi !

This is where they meet... their souls connect! !

"And you won't.. I told you that already.." there I could see Zoya telling all the time ... I am not leaving the forum !! 😆

Something deep down assured him that this vow was to be the corner stone of their story... noted!! 😳

I hope their second chance lasts a lifetime !! 😳

The letter !!❤️

Samunder si wasee Zindagi se,,
Diya wo Qatra jo Moti ho jaaye !!

In those words there was hope !!

Princess and the Prince they are... They rule our hearts !! And So does your writings! ! 🤗

*credit... original writer ! !
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ressi ress🥳
****
Unres

Zealous si Zoya🤗
Am late again but its you ok!

Qatra...This is one of your best bro!
Not only of Alfaaz but of Orion's Ode...This is one of a kind!
I dont know what to say n how to say honestly. 
But aayi hu to bina bole to nahi jaaungi 😆


The starting...A moment of Impact for me! ❤️
It happened..more than once n I know how it feels.
A moment that lasts forever.That leaves a feeling so strong..hollow but filled with a heavy realization..N you cant help the shivers!
What a description Zoya...what a description👏
You described love n you described life... in such a subtle way...Just like that!
I cant help but live that moment again while just reading it!
I felt something so familiar!
Beyond beauty!
Killed it!

Sumo called Shravan to share.❤️
The very first person..the only one!

Shravan n his realization is another beauty!
What to say now...
That looking at the drops merging into one another n disappearing...#Moment #Familiarity #Love #Life

The tree leaves..the fight  for life..the survival ❤️
This is another moment of Impact!
One that provide you peace..that shakes you out of your bubble..that make you realize..the importance..the realization!
Your words, your feels makes it more impactful!
Am touched!

The call...
Shravan's reaction...The description, the emotions, the contemplation...n the relief!
Something Happened Shravan....Something happened Oreo...Something really happened!

What a thing to be so alive Zoya..What a thing to be so alive this moment!❤️

But he was wiser...Wow!
Ehsaas-e-muhabbat ke liye
bas itna hi kaafi hai,
Tere baghair bhi hum 
tere hi rehte hain...

You saved me Sumo...These words held much more love n admiration than I love you!
That couplet...Beautiful ❤️

I dont want to lose you...The biggest fear of Sumo. She said it to him...Now she is somewhat liberated, he is content and I am happy!
And you won't...Sumo needed the assurance from more than anything.You cant help but feel the way she is. This is human nature!

Ek baat puchoon?...I cant help but smile over there.You know why?
And just like that their world was fine again...Yes!!
Shravan needed to know his place in her life n Sumo needed his assurance that he'll be there forever.
A much needed convo...a heart to heart n just like that their world was fine again.

Raat ko keh do ki zara dheere se guzre;
Kaafi mannaton ke baad aaj dard so raha hai...

The letter...The story❤️
First of all I so damn loved Shravan's thoughts in between.It enhanced the beauty!
The whole letter was so touching bro!
Sumo in her true self...her true inner self.

Stories...#Moments

The thought of losing your parents at this tender age is too much to bear and Sumo lived that bitter reality. The insecurity of losing your close one,  the need to be noticed n loved came from the lack of parental love.Sumo wasn't wrong. It was life n its cruelty that made her the way she was.She needed love, attention...she craved to belong!

Sumo needed it...to accept her mistakes..to tell her side of story..n to let it all out!
N Shravan was the only one to listen...the only one she wanted to share with!

The ending...the question n the answer ❤️
Sumo will have her knight back!!
They are bound to be together n no matter what they will be together...someday...One day!!

One Night..One realization..One Call..A heart to heart..One Letter..One promise.
N ShraMan bade ho gaye...Sach mein bade ho gaye!

You know Zoya..
Why do I call you special always?
Coz you do what not many can...Coz you write life, coz you write love and you write emotions in the most beautiful way possible. It touches every time, with every line, with every word.

Whenever I read Your work...I see life in a more clear and beautiful way...I see love in its purest form...I live a life here.
Most importantly...I see myself.
I can understand myself...In a better way.
Thank you for that🤗

Qatra...Is ek qatre mein ek Zamaana hai..ek Zindagi hai Zoya.
Read last line again!

What a thing to be so alive!!

Keep writing...always!!
N I'll keep reading!

Thanks for everything!
Love you so much🤗




Edited by Nik03 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
👏👏 superbbb I like the story part and thanks to pm 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Straight from the heart! Loved the letter. Would love to read how the grown up knight and princess meet. 

Nuts!
It's so good to see You!
🤗
Thank you so very much!!
I'm waiting too😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
I would just say one thing...I salute you Zoya Di. ...!!!!!This was one of your bestest. .!!!! ...👏❤️ Edited by ZehriliChidiya - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

👏👏 superbbb I like the story part and thanks to pm 😊

Arey!
Here also!
Hello!
Thank you so much 🤗