Steel Spines and Hard Heads

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kalam ki taakat has a whole new meaning ... kisi ke Haath me pen dedo and they feel all powerful .

Musings : I am the writer when I hold the pen( or use laptop whatever) I feel so powerful I can make break or destroy . I had a baby I nurtured it very delicately I rejoiced when it started crawling then jumped with joy when it started to walk ... then it all fell flat for me . It is walking already though it is just now getting its footing not a challenge enough for me anymore ... what do I do ??? I look for inspiration else where righttt ... rubbing my hands with anticipation n glee .

Oh my new born... do not want to go routine with you... no crawling then walking for you ... I will make you fly ... so what do I do to make it happen ??? I think n think hard ... bam it hits me ... paranormal .. witches n ice boxes ... cages n animals ... do not care about the fact that you still are not grown up enough ... you could be destroyed but still I think I can win with the power of pen again ...'sigh'

I watch you stumble n decide to get you together with my eldest to teach you walk again normally .( You never were meant to be separated in the first place)But here again I think this guy walks so try something new again what do I do ... I think hard ... then it hits me ... if I break the legs both of them will learn to walk again but I do not want it to be perfect so here again I destroy the spine of everyone involved .I want to teach you all how tough it is .

Here is where I loose it completely and continue to loose I am unable to make these two walk but I want a third one so I start with it just recycling and experimenting again and failing but still do not want to accept defeat so here is what I do :

I appeal to the people . Use big words which they will not be able to decipher until they Consult a dictionary... till they process all I am already on to my next arc /chapter/ what ever you want to call it . This is where I fly n fry you all.

By the powers bestowed upon me by the 'pen' ... I chose to destroy everything and anything . Divide you n rule . Start wars , hate groups . Kill your senses n emotions .i want to test your allegiance to me n my writing n I will do what ever it takes ...even break your spine n put you thru steel test. Hit you so hard that you will know if your heads n hearts are strong enough . You bought this on yourself the moment you decided to vest those powers in me n my Pen .

So get ready for the rollercoaster ride which I will be taking you thru now ...spine breaking, head spinning, sense loosing n logic blasting . Do you all have it in you to do this :-)


I am enjoying this so much that my pen n I are working overtime to fry you n your brains ... brace yourself you all for this turbulent ride where you will never know what is going to hit you from where at the end of all this you will all have ' Steel spines n Hard heads'.

From :

Yours sincerely 'I the writer'

PS:
Venting out not bashing ... if you decide to reply back keep it simple you all .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: yash2010

Kalam ki taakat has a whole new meaning ... kisi ke Haath me pen dedo and they feel all powerful .

Musings : I am the writer when I hold the pen( or use laptop whatever) I feel so powerful I can make break or destroy . I had a baby I nurtured it very delicately I rejoiced when it started crawling then jumped with joy when it started to walk ... then it all fell flat for me . It is walking already though it is just now getting its footing not a challenge enough for me anymore ... what do I do ??? I look for inspiration else where righttt ... rubbing my hands with anticipation n glee .

Oh my new born... do not want to go routine with you... no crawling then walking for you ... I will make you fly ... so what do I do to make it happen ??? I think n think hard ... bam it hits me ... paranormal .. witches n ice boxes ... cages n animals ... do not care about the fact that you still are not grown up enough ... you could be destroyed but still I think I can win the power of pen again ...'sigh'

I watch you stumble n decide to get you together with my eldest to teach you walk again normally .( You never were meant to be separated in the first place)But here again I think this guy walks so try something new again what do I do ... I think hard ... then it hits me ... if I break the legs both of them will learn to walk again but I do not want it to be perfect so here again I destroy the spine of everyone involved .I want to teach you all how tough it is .

Here is where I loose it completely and continue to loose I am unable to make these two walk but I want a third one so I start with it just recycling and experimenting again and failing but still do not want to accept defeat so here is what I do :

I appeal to the people . Use big words which they will not be able to decipher until they look into a dictionary... till they process all I am already on to my next arc /chapter/ what ever you want to call it . This is where I fly n fry you all.

By the powers bestowed upon me by the 'pen' ... I chose to destroy everything and anything . Divide you n rule . Start wars , hate groups . Kill your senses n emotions .i want to test your allegiance to me n my writing n I will do what ever it takes ...even break your spine n put you thru steel test. Hit you so hard that you will know if your heads n hearts are strong enough . You bought this on yourself the moment you decided to vest those powers in me n my Pen .

So get ready for the rollercoaster ride which I will be taking you thru now ...spine breaking, head spinning, sense loosing n logic blasting . Do you all have it in you to do this :-)


I am enjoying this so much that my pen n I are working overtime to fry you n your brains ... brace yourself you all for this turbulent ride where you will never know what is going to hit you from where at the end of all this you will all have ' Steel spines n Hard heads'.

From :

Yours sincerely 'I the writer

PS:
Venting out not bashing ... if you decide to reply back keep it simple you all .



@bold Hahahahahaha... 🤣... Loved it! 👏

I should vent out as well... but I'm already soo tired... defending characters... recalling previous tracks... trying to be objective..😆 So I'll keep it simple.. the writing did destroyed "everything" and continues to go on this path of destruction... and now the entire fandom just needs do this - "SAB BHOOL JAATE HAIN" 😆
Edited by blackorwhite - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@ blackorwhite : simple bcos you never know who's going to say what n when then infer into how n why n making this into a thread where the wars start n before you know it they shut it down ...experience teaches all LOL

😆

That said you can vent all you want ... I am with you thru n thru ... hope this fire we walk thru everyday ends soon . Never in my life did I feel that month of August is sooo longgg
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Word on all you say.
...the pen is mightier than the sword, and I want to use the sword yo cut that pen. So annoyed with the pen.
Definitely, that pen has become a pain for the fandom.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bworm

Word on all you say.

...the pen is mightier than the sword, and I want to use the sword yo cut that pen. So annoyed with the pen.
Definitely, that pen has become a pain for the fandom.




Welcome to the family ... you me n many others . Wish Sword would make the pen redundant again ...:-)
Edited by yash2010 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is by far the best read of the recent times.
Thank you for this.loved and agreed every word of it👏

" whoever said pen ia mightier than The sword, didnt know The power of automatic weapons"

Cvs You might have The mightier pen but have The gun!!
" Cvs please run"😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I remember this scene from the movie Guna, one of the classic movies made in Tamil. There is this scene where Guna (enacted by Kamalhassan) a psychoneurotic is all frenzied and cribs to his doctor during one of his therapy sessions about how unhappy he is about himself as a person by pacing round and round in a room. The way the scene is shot is so beautiful, the camera picks up dizzying speed just then the viewer's heart beats in tandem with the increasing speed of the camera and the scene comes to a sudden and abrupt end when he hurts himself by crashing on the room's door. Brilliantly enacted scene that is!!
Anyone who has chanced to watch the film can understand the mood. Watch from 2.30 till last here below.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxghADckpko[/YOUTUBE]

This show is also similar in more than one way. And this is exactly what the show lovers are experiencing in varied degrees of frustration


The writer keeps going round and round and round in circles, she keeps cribbing about the fandom who suggest, criticize or abuse and ultimately one day it's all going to come crashing down when she nosedives into her puddle of arcs.
W e the show lovers/fandom/well-wishers, whatsoever just like the camera here picks up pace along with the show hoping, wishing along, keep cribbing of lost opportunities for consistencies in the show and one fine day that would stop when the show comes crashing down ( read: low rating) and the channel pulls the plug.
That day isn't far. The lady really needs to have some reality check sooner than later. Now the show is nothing but STAREBAAAZ. In a 45 mins show, the actors don't have to do much. Shivay and Anika stare at each other for 15 mins, Om and Gauri stare at each other for the next 15 mins, then Rudra and OM's guest ACP stare at each other for the last 15 mins, the remaining characters continue staring into the camera with W*F expression all along.

Edited by _Avatarana_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Avatarana_



The writer keeps going round and round and round in circles, she keeps cribbing about the fandom who suggest, criticize or abuse and ultimately one day it's all going to come crashing down when she nosedives into her puddle of arcs.
W e the show lovers/fandom/well-wishers, whatsoever just like the camera here picks up pace along with the show hoping, wishing along, keep cribbing of lost opportunities for consistencies in the show and one fine day that would stop when the show comes crashing down ( read: low rating) and the channel pulls the plug.
That day isn't far. The lady really needs to have some reality check sooner than later. Now the show is nothing but STAREBAAAZ. In a 45 mins show, the actors don't have to do much. Shivay and Anika stare at each other for 15 mins, Om and Gauri stare at each other for the next 15 mins, then Rudra and OM's guest ACP stare at each other for the last 15 mins, the remaining characters continue staring into the camera with W*F expression all along.

You have said this so well...I totally agree with all you have said...awesome!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: yash2010

@ blackorwhite : simple bcos you never know who's going to say what n when then infer into how n why n making this into a thread where the wars start n before you know it they shut it down ...experience teaches all LOL

😆

That said you can vent all you want ... I am with you thru n thru ... hope this fire we walk thru everyday ends soon . Never in my life did I feel that month of August is sooo longgg


@bold LOL.. I have not been part of Shivaay-Anika discussion(or debates?/arguments?) where wars have stared YET...😛😆

Anyways, I don't know/care about this fire ending soon.. because I have QUIT.. 😆 I'm DONE!! I can proudly say I have not seen a single episode, since last week...😊

I can't tolerate 'these' inconsistent characters anymore - who do not respect their relationship at all and that is what these two are doing.. They are being disrespectful to everything that made them Shivaay-Anika.. and I did not sign up for this.. Both character have to redeem themselves in front of my eyes for me to take them seriously or respect them anymore! 😆
Edited by blackorwhite - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackorwhite



@bold LOL.. I have not been part of Shivaay-Anika discussion(or debates?/arguments?) where wars have stared YET...😛😆

Anyways, I don't know/care about this fire ending soon.. because I have QUIT..😆I'm DONE!! I can proudly say I have not seen a single episode, since last week...😊

I can't tolerate 'these' inconsistent characters anymore - who do not respect their relationship at all and that is what these two are doing.. They are being disrespectful to everything that made them Shivaay-Anika.. and I did not sign up for this..Both character have to redeem themselves in front of my eyes for me to take them seriously or respect them anymore!😆




Yeah ... me too ... except for 2 episodes not watched any since seperation...LOL btw I was talking about different kind of war(s) but am happy that you have not been recipient of any

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