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Posted: 8 years ago
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If Uma need to write poetry on Kanak,
May be like below:

Meri swasom mein mehek thi teri Mehak
Meri Ankhom mein chehakthi teri chamak
Meri khano mein gunjhthi teri kanak
Oh meri pyaari kanak
Kab avoghi meri thak.

Please share if you had any nice poetry from Uma to Kanak or Kanak to Uma.

May be Vansh to Uma too .

I know my one is little bit amateur so if you can make it better, I will feel very grateful.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great one Manasa.
However, u won't get a poetry from my side. I m terrible at rhyming and connecting lines. 😆

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