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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Interesting story line dear

Loved all the updates

Geet is full of high spirited and perky demeanor.

Geet being dearest to her parents shares her thoughts with her mother and bestie Meera.

Maaneet's first meet made Geet shudder with his touch and his image was carved in geet's mind and distrubed her in form of nightmares.

Well her nightmare s came true and Geet was held captive by Maan

Seems like Maan's past is dark like his mysterious personality. Jenny is loyal and unwavering towards her master and with her words it seems like she has seen the world through her eyes and witnessed more pain and agony.

On other hand Maaneet were passionate with each other and Geet was irked with the way her body gives up to his touch and loathed herself .

Whilst Maan doesn't love her but wants her for himself. What does maan mean by his words!? Geet will not get pregnant!? Cliffhanger !?

Maan always carries his dark and bizarre mask around him .

Looking forward to the next update

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Note

In next part there some sadistic Sean on it. U will have so many questions about Maan. Why he is like that. But you have to wait for that. If you are light hearted person then don't read it😆😆😉

Read it on your own risk.😉

And don't question about Maan's behavior. Because this is way he is.😉

I will update very soon. Wait for me.😉

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: sonaly1234
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In next part there some sadistic Sean on it. U will have so many questions about Maan. Why he is like that. But you have to wait for that. If you are light hearted person then don't read it😆😆😉

Read it on your own risk.😉

And don't question about Maan's behavior. Because this is way he is.😉

I will update very soon. Wait for me.😉

Will be waiting dear ... Update soon 😊

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avem

@avem

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#224

No question asked plz just update

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Thanks for the note dear !

Looking forward to the update

:))

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Teaser

"Are you going to hurt me?" I don't know why I asked him. But I want to know. Maybe I was believing that he wouldn't hurt me. He will take care of me. But now I think I aspect from him little to much.

He is a kidnapper. How could I believe he will take care of me. I am just a slave for him. When he will get bored, he will through me out from his life.

I come out from my thoughts, when he said. "Sometimes, but you will used to it and then you will enjoy it."

He will hurt me and I am going to enjoy it. That's a joke of the year!!

"Why?" I don't know what am I asking.

"This is the way I am."

"Now no more questions. Strip for me and Get into the bed. "

I Hesitant but his next word leave no room for me.

"Do, it geet. Or it will be more painful for you."

I am so much afraid of pain. So I start to undress myself. He just watch lustfully. And my stupid body, it was getting arousal.

I get into the bed.

"Now lie down on your stomach." I do as he said. Then he is opening his belt. I thought he is going to undress himself but his next word terrified me.

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Wow...hot.

But the waits are unbearable.. pls ud soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#228

thanks 4 the teaser and note

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#229

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Maan is too much ... He is indeed a devil ... His punishment is soo deadly ... Geet is feeling sick of herself as she is enjoying his touch ... I dont understand this maan . Does he love geet ??? He even implant something in geets arm to stop birth control ?? 😲 he even said that he doesnt want baby now .. Does he have any plans to have a baby with geet ?? Will he marry geet ??? Hope geet finds answers to these questions .. He seems dangerous and top of it his possessiveness...i am feeling very bad for geet ... She is suffering a lot and she even apologized him without her mistake ... He consoles her ... Its too hard to understand him 😡 Waiting for next part ... Update soon

Edited by Roopaamrutha - 8 years ago