You Belong With Me(ShivIka SS) updated part 4 on page 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: RushaSen

Lovely update..Excited for Pinky's OMM..šŸ˜› Update soon..Thanks for the pm..😳


Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Intetesting...cant wait for her omm...



Originally posted by: Mystrygirl152

Really awesome concept, very different from the current storyline of the serial! Loving it!🄱 And well, 'You belong with me' is one of my favourite songs!


Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome update
Shivay knows everything and loved how he extended his love and care to Mahi also
Eagerly waiting the pinky's downfall by Shivay himself
Please please update soon


Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow now i am waiiting for my khikitod shivika to band bajayong pinky.


Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Seriously can't wait for Pinky's OMM. šŸ˜†

Fantastic update. Thanks for the PM. :)



Thanks for reading It'll be updated soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62


Pt 4-Pinky exposed along with ViRag

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Story took 1 month leap. Everything was same as seriel except that fake fiancie was planted by Ragini as Anika and Shivaay planned it out and Ragini was mere a pawn in their game to expose Pinky who had executed their plan further.

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Shivaay was acting as the wedding planner for VikrAni wedding. He was trying to keep his cool but it was too difficult for him to keep his cool. He was arranging his ex-wife according to the world with his rival Vikramaditya Thappad. He can know feel how Dushyant felt when Tia was getting married to him. He want to bury that man down who gets a bit lovey-dovey with Anika. He wants to kill Vikram.

Anika had saved him the day before his entry in Oberoi Mansion in the market place. He was all latoo over Annika and had been passing her incoherent messages of love which irked Shivaay to no end. Anika being dense doesn't understand it. He has to keep in mind to teach her a lesson about if after this Pinky's OMM fiasco get over.

Well Daksh Lamboo version 2.0 is in their life . He has to guard his dearie Mrs Dense Singh Oberoi's safety. He saw Gauri coming with some ladoos in a plate in her hands.

He called her towards him. "Gauri go and give these ladoos to ViRag and come back."

As per as Bade Bhaiyaa's instrution, the chant chiraya Gauri went to ViRag and gave them the ladoos which they happily accepted.

Shivaay with his eyes instructed OmRu to guard AniVya from ViRag.

Vikram and Ragini were now intoxicated.

Ragini started doing a psycho dance around and was pushed by Gauri continuously when she tried to come near Shivaay.

Ragini started speaking in the intoxicated state.

"Shivaaay, I'm the real Mrs Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Ditch that roadside trash and come and have my hot body. When you married her, you got nothing. If you marry me, you'll get a 1K crore deal merger." Ragini offered.

Tej instantly agreed to it and was going to force Shivaay to marry Ragini and ditch Anika but a whack on his head from his mother stopped him and made him look like a kid who was reflecting a look similar to be caught while stealing cookies.

Ragini continued,"I heard you and Anika arguing over Anika's fake fiance and I asked Vikram to accompany me in the plan. Anika may be a roadside trash but idk why Vikram was so intersted in her? She was probably gonna be one of the girls who will be used by Vikram to satisfy his personal needs than having a wife to do it."

Vikram intoxicated confirmed it

"She is sexy and feisty and I liked it about her. I would marry her but not for real then after using her I'll remove her from this world."

Annika was having tears in her eyes and was feeling sad with the cheap words that the man had thoughts to do it with her. OmRu had shielded her like her Great Wall of Shivaay. Bhavya was hugging her tightly.

THAT'S IT. Tears in her eyes had made Shivaay flared with anger with a burning sense of jealousy. He punched Vikram blue and black while Ragini had tried to kiss him but had to serve Annika's chamelis touch on her lajwanti body.

They both got arrested by Bhavya and were taken for life imprisonment.(Law students forgive me and I'm not a law student)

ViRag had told that Pinky was the one who had planted both of them in their lives to separate them.

Shivaay was now angry.His chromatic blue eyes were now turned into stormy grey-green colour. This shade often appears when he is angry or Stone Singh Oberoi.

He eyed Pinky angrily. Pinky gulped.

"So Mo-- Mrs Oberoi, you know every tiny bit about all the happenings about the nook and corner of this house."Shivaay spoke to Pinky in anger lacing each syllable of his words in his tongue.

"I was never your son to be honest. I'm Shakti Singh Oberoi's illegitimate son. You two never cared about me only cared about my achievements. I was never given parents love but I was a trophy for you two to show off around. If anyone in this house truly loved me was my siblings and Bade papa and badi ma and dadi."

He continued,"I was blocking my heart's screams of you not loving me as your son. Blocking the thoughts of you loving money more than me. Putting barriers around my heart to not hear that you never loved me as your own."

He clapped his hands,"WAAH! WAAH! No comments."

Pinky in a shaking tone said,"Shivaay listen to me beta, you're my heera beta. Don't listen this downmarkets manhoos who is nothing but an attention gainer.She is a gold digger. Don't you remembers what she did?"

Shivaay stopped her from saying more.

"No words against my wife. Annika and I've never filed divorce. We're still legally married.As for 4 months ago, it was YOUUU who forced her to do this. I'm now tired of being a good son. I'm not your son from today onwards oh I forgot I never was. I'm leaving Oberoi Mansion from today with my wife." Shivaay announced.

Taking Annika's hand, he left Mumbai that night.They went to Delhi and started their own buisness there and soon got success and lived happily ever after.

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At last it's completed. Aur Likh nahin sakti. I'll be running out of ideas.

Hope you all like it and plz comment and vote and let me know your views about it.

@fernsangie14 I kept my promise.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
awesome update yar. really loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Awesome ending which it truly deserved. I hope OmRu too left home with their lives.
Thank u for the pm😳
But sad😭 that it ended
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
hey lovely story, I liked this plan
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Amazing! Finally Pinky exposed! And it was a nice ending!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
awesome update dear
loved itt soo much...
thanks alot for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Amazing update dear!!!
Loved it!!!
Pinky exposed with Virag... superb.
Awesome dear but story ended!!!
Loved it totally!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Nice end
Shivay was waiting for right moment
Ragini and Vikram are in jail and pinky got right punishment of not getting a child's love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
wow loved it
hehe rags and viks ki haalat was awesome

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