Tit for tat vansh - saras saransh ff. Part 7 updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1
Vansh was very very angry. He was on his bike.Behna has decide to go back to her force fully married husband. That Uma shankar. Apparently she also believes in old age custom that marriage is for 7 lives. Looks like Uma shankar is influencing my sister with her gyan dhayan ki baatein or is she doing this to make bhabhi happy. Bhabho likes uma very much but she also has reservations for forced marriage. Is behna started loving uma? No it cannot happen even in Uma's dreams.
What should I do, vansh was thinking. I have to make this uma suffer. I should beat him up but how? behna is with him I cannot see her sad.

Then he got an idea.

Saras was gng to temple with Gabbasa .Shiv was mediating so he could not come. Suman was busy too. She doesn't have that much comfort with Palomi. And she didn't want to disturb newly -wed couple. She was thinking how Maasi sa said one very renowned family rishta has come for her. Maasi said they saw her at some event and liked her. She anyway was aware she is very very pretty. She was thinking and getting nervous only. She was gng inside. She asked Gabbasa to being flowers.

Then suddenly one hand came and took her away in maruti van.

She was being taken to some old place. There was mandap some priest was sitting . She realidad it's kanak bhabhi's brother. She asked whats happening. He said u will be aware of all this . You brother is expert in all this. Now same thing will happening to his sister. She was shocked. She tried to make him understand how kanak got misunderstanding and came to mandap and then suddenly she is saying she thought it's play and then ran. Uma bhai got angry and married her. And how they were almost meeting for so many days. How bhai was getting signals from God. He said mockingly I am also getting signals from Your God. You kNow who he is? "me". He took pheras with her
She was crying. He didn't brother. He applied sindoor and put mangla sutra. He took her with him.
They are in car. Saras was numb. They came to her house. She ran and started crying loudly. Vansh was all happy. Uma came and asked what happened. Kanak ,Maasi sa, Palomi, suman, shiv all came. Maa was bedridden but she started her bell continuously hearing saras cry.

Saras told everything. Vansh was sitting on sofa one leg over another leg. Uma got very angry and asked whats all this. Vansh said u should tell me . U started, I will end. Kanak got very angry and slapped vansh.
Vansh said whats this. This man will know the pain now. Uma sat on sofa lifelessly. He was looking at Saras , Vansh and kanak


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2
Kanak said bhaiya atleast in our relation love was there even if it was only uma's. He loved me. He was sure I was his soulmate. But in your case just for revenge you did this. And whats Saras 's fault in this? You should have taken on Uma
You just chose easy target.

Saras was crying.Uma went to her and asked her water. He asked servants to ready a room for Vanshji. Vansh asked why separate room . I will stay with Saras when we come for holidays. If u think u will keep your sister here and protect her and I will agree to stay here then Mr. US you are wrong. And if u want to keep your sister here u are welcome to do so. bye... He waived.Vansh was aware what kind of gal saras would be.
Saras got up and followed Vansh. Vansh smirked.

They were travelling to Pushkar. Saras was crying. Kanak had not phoned anyone .
So when Vansh reached with Saras everybody was shocked. He told everything . Saras sat on sofa. Ved said he will arrest him. Saras asked him to leave him. Seeing Saras condition Ved went to his room. Vansh started to go to his room. Saras followed him.

Meena chachi, rani prepared dinner... Saras came. She started eating and she literally vomitted as it was cooked with onion. Rani said she will bring something without onion. Vansh told my sister eats without onion now as per her husband rules.Saras started eating and Rani sat seeing that.
They retired to their room. Saras has already brushed 5 times to remove onion smell. Vansh was getting pleasure out of it.

Next update soon
.. it will contain their first night details.
Edited by weirdlynormal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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do continue. Although I don't want the force marriage to happen in this show, I do want Vansh and Saras to fall for each other.
Just a little too harsh for me. Pls don't make it a r*** 1st night.
Edited by Star_Wonder - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I hope vansh falls in love with Saras soon...a lot of us want to see those two together n you made it happen...thanks..
Can't wait for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Got bugged up with uma n Kanak ...seems like nothing new left in their story of their relationship...this ff on vansh n saras is really nice ...
Esp qhen saras followed without retaliating like Kanak
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Star_Wonder

do continue. Although I don't want the force marriage to happen in this show, I do want Vansh and Saras to fall for each other.

Just a little too harsh for me. Pls don't make it a r*** 1st night.


Hey what's r***
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Forced consummation . Would be a little too violent.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3

Saras and Vansh came to room. She went to washroom to change her clothes. Kanak bhabhi sa and maasisa has packed all her belongings . They had done all rituals for her. Uma has asked Vansh to take care of her forgetting all things. Vansh laughed it off. Kanak told him she wants to be with uma. So don't take out uma anger on Saras.

Saras was changing. She changed into pretty nice peach color salwar suit and came to sofa (3 seater) and sat there. Suddenly Vansh came to her and asked her to change into a night dress . It was a very hot one piece nightie. She went to washroom and was changing then suddenly Vansh said keep ur hair loose. I don't like tied hair. She remembered uma telling kanak not to keep her wet hair open in front of others. She came outside. On top of that she was wearing a shrug kind of thing. Vansh said what's this. I asked u to wear only nightie. She said I was feeling cold. He said ok let me give u warmth. She was shocked.
He came to her embraced her. She was shaking. He whispered that your brother would have tried , but my behna didn't give in, ans he agreed, but don't think I am like but brother. I will take full advantage.

He brought her to bed. He removed her shrug. He danced his fingers on her shoulders. He went to her neck nd kissed there. her cleavage was showing up. He went there and did light blowing. He smelled her hair. It was Saras s first time with anybody . She knew she was a beauty. But a boy taking so much interest in her she was confused. Did she give in to her husband or she got seduced by a boy/man?
He got her eyes while smelling herbhair.He praised her hair ... Which are very thick and voluminous. A little smile passed on her lips. He opened his eyes he said you cut them off .. I like gals in short hair. Tears flow down her eyes.She said no I cannot. I like my black thick hair. He smiled. He thought her tears are my victory. He said ok keep them loose then. He laid her down. He got over her. And started kissing on her forehead , cheeks, nose. She was crying and was pulling bedsheet on bed. He went her near to lips and then stopped and asked her to sleep. We will continue tomorrow.

She slept on sofa. He slept on bed.

He got up in Morning. Prayer sound was coming. Bhabho does prayers morning evening. But this was different. He guessed it right it was Saras.
She came to room wearing every married woman symbols and her lehanga like kanak wears in uma house. She was smiling. He asked her not to do pooja from tomorrow onwards and he will take her to shopping.

They went to shopping. He was thinking what a gal she doesn't know any movie, mobile any boy besides shiv and uma. How she lives !!!! He doesn't kNow he felt very happy that she doesn't know anybody besides her brothers.They went to western clothes shop. He asked her to try dresses like kanak wore on mooh dikhai by mistake with jackets over it, jeans-top, sleeveless kurti -jeans. he asked her to try. She went and came outsiDe.few boys/men were standing there and when she came out she was pretty nervous. They did lot of staring and commented what a beauty she might not even have get corrupted by any thought for boy till date.
Vansh got very angry and he asked boys to back off. He hold her hand and asked her to change into her suit and come back. She came .. he paid the bill. They went back home.
She was thinking what happened to him? Is it natural for boys to feel for their wives . Do they count them property like their vehicles ? That they get attached very soon.
Vansh was thinking I got angry aa she is my enemy I only can make her cry. But inside he knew he just got attached . So kanak was right? Attachment can happen with anyBody at anytime and if you are ethically correct your heart will always pursue it.

Anyways they came bhabho meena chachi were happy they are understanding each other. Ved being the idealistic one was not talking to Vansh at all. He has started calling saras bhabhi though.

They came to their room. She opened her bags. She kept them in almirah. He told her to wear dresses in front of him . And should wear only salwar, lehanga, saree outside. She nodded. Her hair were untied like he asked her at night. He asked her why these are untied now. Have I asked u? Or you have started to enjoy attention after coming out of jail? Tears passed her eyes. He went quiet. He said ur hair are too voluminous to keep them loose. Half tie them. She was smiling little at his confused state of mind...

4th part will be coming soon...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love...love...love...this FF...
I really wish story unfolds this way... I can not take the story of forced relation... US is... for forcing Kanak...in meaningless relation...a CRIMINAL
If Vansh does it with Saras's involvement in this...if it is pretend marriage to show...US ...what he did...on the name of so called dharma...will be fun to watch...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey, finally I got some interesting stuff..coz d show is getting too boring atm😕
Vansh n Saras r so cute together..I hv an idea, u can include d gaumutra thing..it'll be fun😆

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