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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Alisha306

I like the first episodes of your ff to great extent.
As it was already said earlier, Ranveer's journey of love has started. Hopefully it will be successful. Oh, so many wonderful episodes are waiting for us. Thank you for giving us one more ff.
😛😛😛


Hi Alisha
thanks for the comment
glad you liked the first episode
yes finally Ranveer's love journey started
wish that he succeed in that
hmm let us see how other episodes are going to be
thanks for reading my ff dear
keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Ishveer45

Wonderful episode.
Ranveer associates rain with his Ishaani. Thank you for including Harshad in your story. I have always liked his character because he used to treat Ranveer like his son.
Update soon.😛😛


hi Amritha
thanks for the comment
glad you liked the episode and Ranveer associating rain with his ishani
and the way Harshad came in the picture
hmm even I too like his character so much he treated Ranveer like his son
ya let me update it dear keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Neha522

Awesome episode, darling
Waiting for the next.


Hi Neha
thanks for the comment
glad you liked the episode
ya let me update the next
keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: anaptiras

Great update
Update the next episode asap.


hi Anaptiras
thanks for the comment
glad you liked the update
ya let me update the next
keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
its agreat feeling to read it from the start.. their love..Ranveer's story..
oh god..how much i miss him...
i m feeling sorry thaat RUF is finished..
but really i m loving u started writing again..
love u so much.. <3
waiting for next :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: o_gudiya

its agreat feeling to read it from the start.. their love..Ranveer's story..

oh god..how much i miss him...
i m feeling sorry thaat RUF is finished..
but really i m loving u started writing again..
love u so much.. <3
waiting for next :)


Hi Gudiya behan
thanks for the comment
was missing you a lot my dear
happy that see your comment again in my update
glad you liked to read the story from the start their love and Ranveer's story
yes dear we are terribly missing our Ranveer a lot
actually I finished my MBA and even resigned my part time job and got my
full time job so I thought I cannot write so only I finished RUF but
all our friends wanted me to continue so I will trying my best to write in my
free time
glad you liked the way I started to write again
love you too dear
ya let me update the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Sakshi. So this is it 2nd story. But you didn't pm me about this 😕
I am sad for that. But anyway I came to read this and this is fabulous. Again, we got to read such sweet story from u
Ranveer and Ishani's early part was such a bliss and we got it from you now
Expecting to read the next part soon.
Hope you Vl pm me for that at least...
Keep smiling and take care 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Sakshi. So this is it 2nd story. But you didn't pm me about this 😕
I am sad for that. But anyway I came to read this and this is fabulous. Again, we got to read such sweet story from u
Ranveer and Ishani's early part was such a bliss and we got it from you now
Expecting to read the next part soon.
Hope you Vl pm me for that at least...
Keep smiling and take care 😊


Hi Maya
its my next story dear
sorry dear I would have missed it by mistake only dear nothing intentional
dear
I will PM for the next update for sure
sorry to make you sad dear
happy that you read the story
happy that its a sweet story to you
yes Ishveer early part are bliss and happy that you liked it from me
ya let me update the next part dear
surely I will PM dear
keep smiling
take care 😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Episode 3
As Harshad said Ranveer to arrange and organize everything in the hall Ranveer shook his head as okay with a smile to Harshad and he turned to walk to the entrance of the room were that was the moment his legs stopped from walking immediately seeing a beautiful woman standing in the entrance of the room were she was looking more beautiful that day were she was completely ready for the day wearing a Net Saree over her body and wearing Back less blouse and wearing Diamond bangles in her both the hands and she was having a light smile in her lips.
Ranveer(seeing the lady with a smile):Jai Shree Krishna Falguni Maa..
Falguni(with a smile):Jai Shree Krishna Ranveer. I was searching for you in the complete corridor but you are here with your Mota Babuji..
Ranveer:Haan Mota Babuji called me so I came here Maa. Why you were seeing for me Maa? Do you want anything?
Falguni:(came inside the room and went to the sofa and then took a Saree that was laying in the sofa in her hand and then she came back to Ranveer and seeing Ranveer):Wanted to drop this Saree in the clothes basket in the hall that will be take by laundry man. For this only I was looking up for you.
Ranveer(with a smile got the Saree from Falguni's hand and then smiling):Let me drop it for Laundry Maa...
Falguni shook her head as okay to Ranveer were Ranveer having the Saree of Falguni in his hand and he started to walk towards the entrance of the room were when he went to the entrance of the room..
Harshad:Ranveer..
Ranveer(stopped himself in the entrance of the room and he turned and saw Harshad with a smile):Haan Mota Babuji...
Harshad:Make everything ready in the hall and then give me a call then let me come down..
Ranveer:Haan okay Mota Babuji..
Harshad:And then Ranveer have you given coffee too everyone in the house today?
Ranveer:Nahi Mota Babuji not yet. After giving the vegetables to Gopal Bhaiya and then only I came up to see you. Gopal Bhaiya would have started to do the breakfast. Now need to go down and get the coffee cups from Neela Didi and then need to serve the coffee to everyone.
Harshad:Tk today alone don't give coffee to my first daughter. Today after you call me that everything is ready in the hall let me and my wife go and wake her up and then after she gets ready let us come down to the hall with her.
Ranveer(shook his head as yes): hmm okay Mota Babuji..(telling it he started to walk out of the room having the Saree in his hand were walking in the corridor seeing the Camera):The person you all saw now is Mota Babuji's wife and her name is Falguni Parekh. Mota Babuji loves her so much and Mota Babuji used to tell me that his love for his wife is more than enough for both of them. Their marriage was a love marriage and till today they are living a happy life. (telling it with a smile he walked in the corridor and then he got down in the stairs to go to the hall).
Harshad(seeing Falguni):Today is a special day in our life Falguni.
Falguni(seeing him with a smile):hmm our daughter's birthday.As usual like all her birthday you have arranged for the celebration know?
Harshad:hmm Ranveer only has done what I said him to do. He will make the hall ready and then call me that time let us go and wake up our daughter and make her ready and let us take her down to the hall.
Falguni:hmm wish that everything goes well today.
Harshad:(seeing her with a smile):Falguni trust me and my love on you I will protect you and our daughters so well whatever problem comes.
Falguni(shook her head as okay):I trust you so much Harshadji and your love is the thing which you gave me as a boon in my life.
Harshad with a smile showed his hand to her were Falguni with a smile side hugged him were Harshad hugged her with his one hand with a smile in his face.
Ranveer came down to the hall and then he walked to the corner of the hall to see for the clothes bag that is kept for the laundry were he then went to the corner of the hall and then spotting out the clothes bag and then he dropped Falguni's saree in the clothes bag and then he turned from there and started to walk to the kitchen were he walked like a fastest train and then he went to the kitchen were as everyday schedule servant lady Neela was ready with the coffee cups in the tray were Ranveer went to her with a smile.
Ranveer:Good morning Didi...
Neela(seeing Ranveer with a smile):Hmm good morning take the coffee and give it to everyone.
Ranveer: hmm okay let me(he took the tray from the slap and then holding the tray with his both the hands he started to walk out of the kitchen were he walked in the hall and then he got in the stairs and then he came to the corridor and then he started to walk in the corridor and then seeing the camera):May till now you all would have not got to know about the family well but in the time span I serve coffee to all you will all get to know about everyone in this house..let me introduce them to you all(telling it giving a smile to us he walked in the corridor and then seeing the camera):Now I am going to Mota Babuji room only to give coffee to him and Falguni Maa.you all saw their introduction and I too told about them to you so let me silently give the coffee to both of them and then see the other characters(telling it seeing us he gave a cute smile).
He walked in the corridor and went to Harshad room and then he stood in front of the room and then knocked the door that was already open were Harshad who was now reading a magazine sitting in the sofa raised his head from the magazine and seeing Ranveer in the entrance of the room gave a smile to him and signed him to come in were Ranveer too giving a smile to him and then he entered the room and then he came to Harshad and showed the coffee tray to him were Harshad keeping the magazine in the tea poi and then he took a coffee cup from the tray were Ranveer then saw Falguni who was sitting in the sofa next to Harshad and was watching TV were he went to Falguni and then showed the coffee tray to her were Falguni too saw Ranveer a glance and then took the coffee cup from the tray.
Ranveer(seeing Falguni): I dropped your Saree in the clothes bag Maa..
Falguni hearing it seeing Ranveer shook her head as okay were Ranveer too smiling to her and then with the coffee cups tray he walked out of the room and then he came out of the room and started to walk in the corridor were he then walked for a while and then he stood in front of the room were the room's door was closed were Ranveer holding the tray carefully in his hand and then he knocked the door with his one hand. He was kept on knocking it for almost 4 times were the door does not seem to open..
Ranveer(seeing the camera):What happen you are all shocked that the door is not opening yet?But for me its not a shock because this door will open late only everyday morning. Do you want to know who is inside this room?Let me tell the person inside this room is My Mota Babuji's second Daughter. haan Mota Babuji has two daughter and the person inside this room is the second one. Her name is Disha Parekh.
As he said her name that was the moment the door was opened were as the door was opened the camera showed a normal looking girl were she was in her sleep only yet were she stood in front of Ranveer with a sleepy face and then she raised her hands above her head and she relaxed herself and then slowly opened her eyes and saw Ranveer in front of her.
Disha(seeing Ranveer and with a irritated face):Why are you daily disturbing my sleep like this?
Ranveer(seeing her a calm look):Everyday to everyone by this time only I am giving coffee. If you don't want coffee means from tomorrow I won't disturb you..
Disha(with a attitude):Dekho you are this house servant and you can't talk to me like this.
Ranveer:Arrey I didn't tell anything wrong Disha madam just told you that this time I will bring coffee and If you want coffee means how to give without knocking your room door?
Disha(seeing Ranveer a up and down look):Tk tk (she with a attitude took a coffee cup in her hand from the tray and seeing Ranveer):go away from here..
Ranveer giving a smile to her shook his head as okay and then he started to walk from there were Disha with the coffee cup turned and entered her room and then she went and sat in the bed and she started to sip the coffee..
Ranveer(seeing the camera with a smile):Disha is doing her second year B.sc. From small I know Disha. She is good by heart but some what short tempered that is why she behaved like that to me. But for me I got used to her behaviors towards me.(he smiled telling it and he was walking in the corridor).
Ranveer walking in the corridor and then he went to a room and he stood in front of that room were the room door was locked inside were he held the tray carefully and then he knocked the door were in the second knock the door was opened were as the door was opened a bubbly middle aged person opened the door with a smiling face were seeing Ranveer his smile was so much increasing in his lips..
Ranveer(smiling to the person and showed the coffee tray to him):Mithesh Kaka take the coffee...
Mithesh(with a smile took the coffee cup in his hand and smiling to Ranveer):Thank you Ranveer..
Ranveer:you are welcome Kaka.Where is your young wife?(he asked with a smiling face).
Mithesh(with a cute disappointed face):Ranveer please you too don't call her young and make her go crazy then she will not leave even a single person in the house. She will go to everyone and tell that Ranveer called me young..
Ranveer(laughed a bit):Tk tk let me go and give the coffee cup to Kaki and then leave silently okay?
Mithesh:hmm okay...
Ranveer(with the coffee tray entered the room were he saw a middle aged lady sitting in the stool of dressing table and seeing the mirror were he went and stood behind her with a smile):Kaki..
Hearing his voice the lady turned and saw Ranveer were Ranveer bit got scared and went two steps back as he saw the lady having the face full of facial pack were that bit scared him.
Chaitali(with a smile):After taking this face pack from my face I will be looking rocking.Chaitali will be rockings...
Ranveer(managing himself):Haan ofcourse Kaki(he showed the coffee tray to her).
Chaitali:Ranveer todays...yous tells ours servants to makes Pizzaz for mes...
Ranveer(getting her different way of speaking English):you want Pizza today?Tk tk let me inform to Neela didi..
Chiatali:hmm okays..(she took a coffee cup in her hand).
Ranveer as soon as Chaitali took the coffee cup he started to walk with the tray in his hand and he saw Mithesh who was sitting in the sofa and was sipping the coffee were Mithesh saw Ranveer and shook his head as okay to him were Ranveer too giving a smile to Mithesh came out of the room were he started to walk in the corridor.
Ranveer(seeing the camera):The person we saw now is Mota Babuji's younger brother and his name is Mithesh Parekh and he is a person to love sweets a lot and he is a kind and sweet person too. And the lady we saw with face pack was Mithesh Kaka's wife and her name is Chaitali Parekh. The woman who wishes that she is young always and used to speak English in her own way.
Ranveer telling it with a smile started to walk in the corridor towards the next room were he went to a room and then he saw the door already open were Ranveer knocked the door were a young voice came from the room as come in...
Ranveer hearing the come in entered the room were he saw a young man wearing his shoes in his legs sitting in the sofa were the young man was looking handsome and he was having his four day unshaven beard and mustache and he was wearing his shoes were finishing wearing his shoes he raised his head and saw were now Ranveer was standing near him.
Ranveer(with a smile):Good morning Sharman Bhaiya..
Sharman(with a smile got up from the sofa and seeing Ranveer):Ranveer come on call me Sharman don't want to call me Bhaiya and all.
Ranveer:But also Bhaiya..
Sharman:Arrey only one year I am elder than you so nothing wrong in calling me by my name.you are good friend to me so come on Call me Sharman.
Ranveer(smiling to him):Tk Sharman(showing the coffee tray):Coffee
Sharman giving a smile to Ranveer and then he took the coffee cup from the tray and shook his head as okay were Ranveer too shook his head as okay to Sharman and then he started to walk to the entrance of the room were he came out of the room and he started to walk in the corridor.
Ranveer(seeing the camera):Sharman Parekh is the first son of Mithesh Kaka and chaitali Kaki. He has finished his law in united states and he came to India last week only. He is a nice person to be friend with. As he is kind of my age I used to get well with him.
Telling it having a smile and walking in the corridor and then Ranveer came to another room were the room door was open but a loud music from the music system was heard in the room were Ranveer slowly entered the room were he saw a young lad dancing standing in the bed.The way he was dancing clearly told that he is the trademark wealthy family boy. Ranveer seeing the lad dancing well in the bed..
Ranveer(seeing the camera):He is Devarsh Parekh second son of Mithesh Kaka and Chaitali Kaki and he is doing his MBA first year in collage. fun loving guy and used to grab any young girl attention towards him and a good person to be friend with. (seeing Devarsh):Devarsh...
Devarsh(who was dancing stopping himself in the bed hearing Ranveer's voice and seeing Ranveer and giving a smile and he jumped from the bed and stood in the floor and seeing Ranveer):Good morning Ranveer..
Ranveer(showing the coffee tray):Good morning...(he gave a smile to Devarsh).
Devarsh took a coffee cup in his hand and then he started to sip it were Ranveer giving a smile to him and then turned and started to walk to the entrance of the room were he came to the entrance of the room and then he came out of the room and started to walk to the next room were in the next few seconds he was in front of the next room were the next room door was too open and he slowly entered the room were he saw a fat boy sitting in the bed and was having potato chips in that morning were Ranveer seeing him and giving a impossible head shake..
Ranveer(seeing the camera):He is Pratik Parekh third son of Mithesh Kaka and Chaitali Kaki he is doing his second year B.com. He loves food, food and only food. But very kind heart person by heart(seeing Pratik):Pratik...
Pratik(swallowing the potato chips and seeing Ranveer):Ranveer brought coffee come come...
Ranveer walked and went near the bed and showed the coffee tray to Pratik were Pratik with a smile immediately took the coffee cup in his hand and then having chips packet in other hand now started to sip the coffee were Ranveer giving a impossible head shake with a smile turned and started to walk towards the entrance of the room and then he went to the entrance of the room and Ranveer came out of the room and then he saw the tray now were the tray had only one cup of coffee were he walked in the corridor slowly and then he stopped at a room were the room door was closed were he went near the door and saw the room with a silent face.
Ranveer(seeing the room and the coffee cup in the tray and in thoughts): Neela Didi gave coffee as usual so only one coffee is extra. (seeing the camera with a silent face):you all want to know who is in this room?(with a emotional face):hmm My Saans is sleeping inside the room.Daily I will only wake her up but today I can't. Mota Babuji said to me know?that today he will wake up his first daughter up as today its her birthday so today I lost the boon of waking up a angel. (smiling to us): hmm she is angel only. you all will see her soon know?then you all will yourself tell me that she is angel only.yes I love that angel only (seeing the camera with a cute face): Hmmm I can hear all your questions? you all are asking me that we were thinking you would love a normal girl but are you loving your own master's daughter?(shook his head as yes):Haan I love Mota Babuji's first daughter. I know she can never be mine in my whole life. And I know my love won't succeed too. I tried my best to not love her but what to do?She is my Saans hain na so how to be without breathing?(he said it with a smile).
Ranveer with a love feel turned and saw the room that was locked were he then saw the coffee tray and seeing the coffee cup in the tray and then giving a impossible head shake to himself with a love smile in his lips and he started to walk from there with the single coffee cup in the tray.
To be continued 😉
Edited by sakshi5050 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
So nice introduction of all Parekh's family members. Ranveer has showed us his unsaid feelings.
Very nice beginning of the story.
Waiting for the next.

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