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Posted: 8 years ago
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Episode 1MUMBAI..

The beautiful Mumbai were the roads of it was wet as due to the continuous rainfall on the previous night were even still there was drizzling from the sky were the tiny drops of rain were hitting the roads and was not allowing the roads to get dried even in morning were this climate was making Mumbai people feel Lazy to catch up their routine.It was exactly 6.30 were the vegetable vendor,Milk vendor and other shop owners without anyway opened their shops in the market area were in that market they had many shops were the shops too started to operate as time moved were the drizzling too was stopped after a few minutes. The market was getting back to its routine of selling vegetables, milk and other grocery items. In a vegetable shop were woman were buying vegetable in that shop were the vegetable vendor was seeing the weight of the vegetables and was getting the amount according to it and putting it in his draw and packed the vegetables in a cover and was giving it back to them were the women were keeping on coming and buying vegetable and going in that shop were when it was exactly 7.15 that was the moment a man walked in to that shop having two baskets in his both the hands and then he stood opposite to vendor and gave a smile to him were the vegetable vendor too smiled happily to him.

Man(seeing vegetable vendor):Tk Bhaiya today (keeping the basket over the vegetable without crushing the vegetable and seeing the vegetable vendor):Get me 5 kg of Tomato and 5 kg of Bhindi in each basket.

Vegetable vendor shook his head as okay and then he took the weighting machine and he started to wait the vegetables were weighting it itself he saw the man who is standing opposite to him were the man was kept on smiling to himself were seeing itself weighting the vegetables and finally he kept 5 kg of tomato in one basket and then 5 kg of Bhindi in another basket and he took the baskets in his hands and he gave that baskets to the man. The man with a smile took the money from his shirt pocket and kept the money over the tomatoes in the table and then got the baskets in his both the hands and saw the vegetable vendor and again giving a smile in his lips he turned and started to walk were Vegetable vendor without able to get the meaning for the constant smile in that man's face took the money with a confused face and dropped it in the draw and then without able to get why the man is smiling this much and unable to control his curiosity he saw the back of the man who was now walking with two baskets in his both the hands.

Vegetable vendor(in a bit loud tone):Dikhra..

The man was walking without turning..

Vegetable vendor(even more louder):Dikhra...

The man hearing this word without knowing who is calling he turned and saw the back and seeing here and there his eyes went to the vegetable vendor were he seeing vegetable vendor with a not understanding face..

Man:you are calling me?

Vegetable vendor(with a smile shook his head as yes): Haan you only I called come here for a while..

Man(with a not understanding face came to vegetable vendor and stood facing him):Kya hua Bhaiya?

Vegetable vendor:For past two weeks only you are getting vegetables from my shop and those..(before he could tell).

Man:Bhaiya I was buying in your opposite shop only but cooking that vegetables and once everyone eat in the family they are getting disappointed with taste and they are scolding me only. That vegetable vendor is keeping the vegetables in the fridge for 3 days and then selling it to everyone I think so only I stopped buying from him and all the ladies were speaking that your shop vegetables are fresh so only I started to buy from you.

Vegetable vendor:(shook his head as okay):Tk tk you buy in my shop If you like. But I didn't call to ask you about this?

Man:Then?

Vegetable vendor:I am seeing you for the past two weeks. All the other day you will be coming with two or three bags in your hands and then ask the vegetables to me and then having the baskets in your hands you will run like anything and your face too will have work tension to reach to home soon but today you are smiling so much. I am seeing you smiling today only. What happen to you?

Man saw the vegetable vendor with a cute face were again he had smile in his lips were the vegetable vendor seeing the man smiling again.

vegetable vendor:Sorry If I have asked something wrong to you.

But as you used to be in a hurry bury daily and today seeing you smiling this much I was curious to know what happen to you? I was not able to control my curiosity so only..If you want to tell you can or else (before he could tell the next word).

Man:Nahi Bhaiya you can ask me anything you wish. More than the relatives who are so distance from us and to whom we can't share all our feeling we can share it to the people who we see daily. Because people we see daily will be always be in close touch to us.

Vegetable vendor(smiling at the sportive nature of the man):Tk tell me what happen to you today?Why are you smiling this much?

Man(with a cute smile):Kyunki aaj meri Saans ka Janm Din hain.

Vegetable vendor(with a not understanding face):Saans ka Janm din matlab?

Man(with a smile):Matlab today is the birthday of the person who I think as my breath.

Vegetable vendor(still with a not understanding face):you will think another person as your breath?

Man(with a cute smile again):Haan

Vegetable vendor:But how?

Man:(with a cute face):Bhaiya I think you have not felt that moment in your life. When a person makes your breath stop at the moment they come in front of us and when that person comes and talk to us making us take a deep breath and when that person move from us and we breath out and feel lifeless that person will be surely our breath.

Vegetable vendor(hearing it saw the man):Are you in love?

Man(hearing it and with a what to tell face with a emotional face):Anyone can love anybody but whether we will succeed in that love or not is not in our hand.To succeed in our love too we need to be lucky enough.I know I will fail in my love But also my love will always be my breath.

Vegetable vendor saw the man with a smile were the man was looking like a package of love to his eyes were the man smiling again to the vegetable vendor.

Man:Tk Bhaiya leaving now because in home they will be waiting for the vegetables..(again giving a smile to the vegetable vendor he started to walk having the two baskets in his both the hands).

Vegetable vendor(who was touched by that man's love philosophy seeing his back):Dikhra..

Man(again hearing this word and now getting its vegetable vendor and he turned and saw the vegetable vendor):Haan Bhaiya..

Vegetable vendor:Really you are nice person. Till today I never know your name too. What is your name?

Man(with a cute innocent smile):RANVEER VAGHELA

To be continued😉😉😉

Edited by sakshi5050 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really touched by the intro didu...I'm almost tearing up...the way Ranveer described his aashiqui to the vegetable vendor was really awesome... It's heart melting... Eagerly waiting for the nxt...be safe & stay healthy didu...& a big bigger biggest thanks that u r starting another new ff...& do check my pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start dear.. & congrats for new story...Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really wonder whether , your cute friend who asked for this ff , may cry still ...out of happiness or...proud of her dii...or ...may smile , laugh ...dance on her bed ...or on terrace ..hall crazily !

Coming to my point ,
1st sorry dii , I should not have hurted u ...I know my comments may have hurted u ... I am sooo sorry , ...
If we all didn't talk like that na... We might have missed this epi too na ...dii , so only !
Whatever u say , without ur ff ... That too RUF , this forum is 90 dead one ! So to safe ishveer and my specimen only I did that ... But I am sooo sorry dii


But , for this update , let me 1st read it dii , pls grand me 5 mins...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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No..no...I get my sorries back dii ...
Did u know , how this update is ??...but for u ...u will think its short ...but...its beyond words !
For the 1st , I say u dii ... Update it in this length itself , its sooo sweet than long ones.
How can u think , people won't watch ur shows when it is just as blissful as the first rain drop from sky ? OMG...no words ... Any one can writea story , but none can get ur creation ...starting the story from a vege vendor in a rainy atmosphere is awesome ...no way its coping matsh ... Loved it from my core of heart !
The way Ranvi explained his feeling , the words are truely amazing ...i am again and reading it , i almost teared up ...ur update may be irregular , but it will be awesome until it makes my heart to beat irregular , like now ...
People may cry out of joy too dii ... Like Ranvi , even I am constantly smiling throughout the epi and even now . its ishu bday ... ! Waiting 4 the next eagerly ...but no hurry burry dii , update slowly when u have time ! Also ... Don't get much work tension and all ... Be free and do ur job , I am sure u can snatch anyone's heart dii ... If ur boss , says something ..show ur ffs , that's it ... U will get one more like and happy com... How is the idea ??

If u don't have time , don't reply back dii , just hit like ...that's enough ..I am serious ..its more than enough .
Again sorry dii ... I should not have scolded u ...but to change u only I did that , also I may say I like them to all , but I scold only few and ... It means I love them a lot !
But , still whatever I say , I should not have done it. So sorry dii ..But onething dii , this ff is so heartwhemling...I love this ff , more than anyother ff and more than everyonrw...even u ! It's sooo special for me That no other ff can hold its place ! ... And U perfectly CREaAtED the essence of Matsh dii... Love..love..aloaaat .
Now , have a candy day and chocolate work !!!
Byeee... Take care !

Edited by RookeyRookers - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 wooow nyc start I'm curiously waiting for next episode di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, a great start ...
Congratulations on the beginning of a new history!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii Sakshi
It's an amazing and wonderful starting dear . Thank you so much for This.
I want to read ur ff for my entire life. Once again thank you. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Sakshi
How are you? Hope you are fine. Thanks for pm.
Thank you for fullfilling our wishes and requests. Very nice beginning of ff.
But please don't forget about Ranveer's ubsaid feelings. We miss Ishveer cute family moments and cutie pie.
Update the next episode of a new ff.
Update soon.👏👏

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