Avneil FF: It was Night Stand... with Strings Attached (Part 1 UP!)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone! I have come with another story and this is the teaser/trailer/prologue for it. Pls. tell if you liked it or not.

When Avni had woken up, she was met with the biggest surprise in her life. This surprise was terrifying, yet pleasant to her heart. She had opened her eyes to stare at the sleeping man's face she had slowly started to fall in love with unknowingly. She realized what their position was; Neil's arms were possessively around her and Avni's hand rested on his nape, the other on his manh-- "Ahh!" she mentally screamed and withdrew her hand from the part of skin on Neil's body, which she had no right to touch. Only his wife would have that right.

And no way was it going to be Rhea, because she was somehow going to break their marriage. From this, she remembered today's date: Neil and Rhea's marriage date. She did not have enough time. She struggled to escape from his muscled arms and her own selfish desire to stay on the spot, staring at his innocent sleeping form. After using most of the strength she had after what deed she had done, She got up and dressed up in her rumpled clothes.

She looked back at him, amused and depressed seeing him mutter her nameno, not Avni, but Ananyain his sleep, him shifting on his left side and then on his right side, as if he was searching Avni on her side of the bed; beside Neil. Avni almost believed that Neil loved her seeing his unconscious form restless without her. Well, almost. Neil was in no way in love with her and will never be because there was no love in reality.

Before leaving, Avni gently kissed his forehead as an advanced good-bye to his life, promising him that she will never appear before his eyes after Dayawanti loses her game. She promised him that he will never ever see such a good-for-nothing girl like her ever again.

And anyways, they are meant to forget this encounter of theirs. After all, this was only a one-night stand (... with strings attached.)

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If you would like to suggest anything, feel free. I know that I haven't told much of the story through this, but what is your imagination for?

do check out drunk confessions and ae dil hai mushkil.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya hua hoga ki dono iss condition mein h?? Pata lagana hoga...
Well, Avni is falling for him and yet do not believe in love.. Ye ladki bhi na..
And Neil was searching for Ananya beside him.. Awww.. It will look so good onscreen.. I wish this type of scene by CVs...
And please update first part... Eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it just loved it i saw this on wattpad please do continue soon really cant wait for the next part... i wonder how avneil landing like this... and avni she is falling for neil..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The first part will be updated after I complete Ae dil Hai Mushkil on wattpad... Think so it's gonna be a long wait for everyone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You would come to Know of their Night stand as the story progresses as I will unfold it like a tablecloth. I just like the idea of keeping it a mystery and want to enjoy you being curious about what exactly had happened. Also, read every sentence carefully. You might get a spoiler for what is going to happen next in the story. Keyword: might. For all what God knows I might just change my mind and change the plot.

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Chapter 1 part-1

"Trust me, I will leave you alone as soon as I can. Avni handed over the mangalsutra to him. He stared at it, still not being able to digest what was happening. They had promised each other in their one-night stand that they would never see each other again and that this was the seal to their pact. However, here he was, having been unexpectedly married to her.


"You are not going not anywhere." He grabbed her shoulders and pushed her onto the bed. Avni thought that he was going to lash out on her for what she did to him, and started crying. Neil hadn't meant to be so harsh and hushed down his tone as he said, "There are many accusations on your head: fraud, Thievery etc. Yes, I have read your files. And I can put you in jail for that", Avni's eyes widened thinking of her future and more tears streamed down her face. Neil kneeled on one knee and cupped her face as he wiped her tears. He continued "if I had been corrupted. But I'm not. I'm honest, and I feel like that you are innocent. I will not bring you directly in court for this; I want to know why you did this, Avni."


"Yo-you know that I'm--" Avni was shocked to know that how he knew all this. She had thought that she had hidden her secret well, but it looked like Neil would always manage to dig it out.


"Shh..." he pressed his thumb against her lips, making him remember how many times he had kissed them in one night. He mentally scolded himself for remembering it. "Yes, I know what your name is, and I can clear you of those charges if you tell me everything that had happened to you in the past. He sat beside her and signaled to start.


"I don't care if I'm accused of charges that I didn't commit." she still didn't trust him enough to narrate him her personal past. Neil just raised his eyebrows. She gave in for a reason she didn't know. That reason was that her subconscious knew that whatever he would do would be right. "Fine. From where do I have to start? What do I have to tell?


"How and why you did this? Neela ma had told me that how you were going to shoot Dayawanti if she hadn't been there to stop you (A/N: in my story Neela ma tells Neil all this when he comes to her after the wedding (when she tells him that she gave money to pandit to do real marriage)) What relationship do you share with her? Neil started his rant and asked question on questions.


"Neil, she's my grandmother. She cut him off. She really didn't want to tell him much about her past, yet she wanted to tell him everything and cry on his shoulder to vent out all the emotions she bottled up inside her. She stared at Neil, who patiently waited for her to continue. She didn't know why she was feeling so moody, she didn't have the strength to speak much. She assumed that it was because of how many events had taken place today. She could only muster to speak four words before breaking down in his arms, "She killed my mother. She didn't know why she was being such a crybaby, so out of character.


Neil somehow understood that Avni must have loved her mother a lot and that there was more to her story, which he should probablyask later. He hugged her back, "Shh... Avni... maybe I shouldn't have asked this question... I'm sorry."


"Don't be." She pulled away, "It is your duty as a police officer to ask questions. You had said it yourself." Neil couldn't help but smile thinking that this girl would always remember small things he had said in the past. He was again pulled into a trance of only thinking about her when Avni's yawn brought him back to reality.


"Looks like someone is sleep--" He was interrupted by his own yawn. He looked at the small clock that hung by the wall to read that it was 10:38 pm.


"Looks like both of us are sleepy." He stood up, "If you had been planning to marry me, then why didn't you bring your clothes for Suhagraat? Ohh wait, I got it." He felt the need to lighten the mood and mock-realized, "You were planning to have s*x with me so that you wouldn't have to bother about wearing night clothes. Right?


Avni's eyes widened and she hit his arm, "Have you gone mad? yes, mad for you His subconscious answered.


"No, you have." She was again going to raise her hand before he changed the topic and said, "By the way, what are your plans? Are you going to sleep in that heavy saree?


"I don't know. I had thought that you would throw me out."

"Avni," Her name easily rolled off his tongue like it had when he used to call her Ananya, which meant that he had accepted who she was, "We have been friends for 3-4 months--well, we had been friends with benefits--" Cue the glaring from Avni "for one night, and you still don't know the gentleman I truly am. I'm disappointed.


"Just ignore what I said. Just drop me off Neela ma's and we're done."


"You know, the last two words you said sounds like you were breaking up with me." Neil now had his flirting mode on a level higher than it had ever gone before. "Baby, I'm sorry but I'm addicted to you and won't be able to let go." Seeing Avni's red face, he started laughing--partially to hide the fact that he had called her baby' unintentionally and partially because he loved seeing this cute angry avatar of Avni.


"Jokes apart, I have my mother's clothes which you can wear for tonight. And I can't drop you off, I'm a little too tired you see," and another yawn escaped his mouth. He immediately took out the clothes for Avni and him to change, "You take the bathroom. If I take it, I may come out of it at the wrong time and do things we might regret afterwards." Avni was hell-shocked seeing this side of Neil. He had never been so flirty and suggestive before.


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I didn't really have much time so couldn't update and broke this down in two parts.

I don't know why, but I have a feeling that you wouldn't like this. Was this too OOC? Did it not meet your expectations?

Edited by Avneilfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it actually...
Its so nice reading something different and that AvNeil are not awkward for what they did..
And loved this Neil, all flirty and so in love with Avni that he himself don't know...
Please continue..
And update soon but only when you can..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kshailja

Loved it actually...

Its so nice reading something different and that AvNeil are not awkward for what they did..
And loved this Neil, all flirty and so in love with Avni that he himself don't know...
Please continue..
And update soon but only when you can..

I'll try to update as soon as I can.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I agree it's different... Waiting to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing...Neil is in love with Avni...
Things havent changed between them due to one night stand..
This is so refreshing..plz continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb...!! Totally loving the story line and especially Neil...!!
Try n update soon...

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