Tum mere aasma meri zameen ban gaye # 3 pt 25 on pg 137 on 7/1 - Page 15

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yashivid thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pooh if the last update ended at a cliff hanger then wat was this. This was even more of cliff hanger.
Wat n update pooh...it was just mind blowing. I loved it.

Simmi n ishus so called Amma irk me to no extent. They r so selfish n heart less.

Thank god Appa ke dil ke andar ka baap jaag utha. At least he fought for his daughter n helped her in eloping. Love Appa for this.

Raman was just too cute...moti Madrasan...fatty will kill me. But Raman was so hurt. He misses her so much.

Loved ishus POV. At least she accepted that she can't marry anyone other than him. Finally jaagi to sahi.

Both remembered the rented apt at the rite time n both have reached there now. Let's see wat happens.

Kya yaar pooh...darvaza khulte hi update khatam.

Pls update soon yaar. See its 208 likes now. Pls pls pls.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Ishitha's marriage fixed with an NRI... She felt something fishy and decided to talk to her appa
Here simmi tried to fix raman's marriage with her sister in law 😕... Raman didn't agree... She forced him so he let sweet stay there along with simmi
Mihir trying to bridge the gap between Ishra... RMan was stubborn to call her... Mihir send sweet pic to Ishu... Ishu replied wishing him and declared her marriage too
Raman got angry and decided to bring her back
Both are crazy... They lovee each other but ego stopping them to accept
Ishu talked with ... He asked her to run away because he too felt something wrong with the alliance
Appa talked with his wife but she was not care about Ishu... She wants money only😡😡😡
Ishu came out of her house and went to the rented house which she used to live with raman😊
Raman reached ishu's place Nd decided to go to ishu's flat... When he reached there the house owner told him that she is in her flat onlt😛... Raman rushed there and knocking the door... Ishu opened the door and shocked /surprised to see raman there 😉😉
Waiting for their confrontation... And confession 😉😉😉
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
More than 200 like
Plz update soon
It was awesum update
Raman found her
I want him to scold and apologise
Can't wait
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing updt di
Amma appa fixed Ishita's marriage with NRI boy rakesh...
Rakesh is ready to get married to ishita...he likes ishita...
Amma want to get ishita married soon as she want money in return...
She is destroying Ishita's life...
Ishita don't want to get married to rakesh..as she don't likes him...
Ishita is not able to forget raman...she don't want to marry anyone...
Ishita decided to talk with her appa..
Appa don't want ishita to get married with unknown boy...but amma ko paiso se Matlab hai
Raman also talked with sweety and said simmi that he don't want to marry her...he will never marry anyone...
Simmi said to give chance to sweety...
Ishra are missing each other...
Mihir is convincing raman to talk with ishita and bring her back... But raman is angry as she went leaving him...
Mihir sended sweety's pic to ishita saying raman is going to get engaged to her...ishita also said that she is going to marry NRI boy...
Raman decided to go back and bring ishita...as he can't let her marry anyone...
Ishita talked to appa that she don't want to marry...
Appa asked her elope before engagement..
Ishita went to live in her appt ...Raman reached Pune at Ishita's place...
He went to her appt...and waiting for ishra Milan
Do updt soon di
Thnx for pm
Edited by Amreen99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for their confrontation
Pls update sooon
You got 200+ likes
Pls pls pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
its super update
now want to see their reactions
pls pdate soon
cant wait now
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amezng suparb wonderful & fantastic update loved it continue soon and pm me next part when u update ir...
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update though teasing
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends as I m promised I m back with the update ,tried to update it before but was bit busy .Here's the next part .


Part 18


Ishita opened the door and shouted without looking at the person ," can't you wait for a while ".

In return she heard him " no I can't. "

Next moment they saw each other , Ishita was shocked to she him standing in front of him while he got emotional seeing her after whole ten day.He entered the house without her permission and bolted the door. Both saw each other without blinking their eyes for sometimes then Raman pulled her for a bone crushing hug ,both cried in each others embrace for sometimes then ishita asked between her cries" Raman aap yahaan ,aapko to shaadi ...

R- yes ,simmi wanted me to marry that sweety ,you know she is beautiful ,slim and sexy too but I couldn't marry her ,jaanti hai kyu ( you know why).

Ishita shook her head negatively.

R- kyoki mujhe ek pagal moti madrasan se shaadi karni hai ,thodi moti hai par chalegi ,thodi pagal hai phir bhi chalegi thodi kam sundar hai tab bhi chalegi but uske bina aur koi nahi chalegi .(she is lil fat but will manage ,she is Lil mad then also I will manage ,not so beautiful it will also do but don't want other than her) .

Ishita was looking at him with teary eyes when he clutched her hairs and spoke angrily " you told me that you can't marry me ,I was ok, you told that we have to stay away I didn't protest then how dare you come here without informing me ".

Ishita winced in pain and spoke moaning " aahh Raman its hurting ".

R(greeting his teeth)- let it hurt , this pain is much lesser than the pain I went through .I was guilty because of the happenings ,was broken when you rejected ,I needed you ,your support but what did you do ,you left me ,you ran away from there ,bol bhaag paayi mujhse .you came here with you parents then why the hell you are here ,you were marrying that NRI na ,then how come you are here ,usne bhi tujhse shaadi nahi ki kya .

He got a tight slap for this ,but in return he again pulled her in hug and spoke " sirf main ,only me ,you are just mine , koi tujhse shaadi nahi karega samjhi , only I will marry you because I love you ,as are ,I love not only this body but your soul . what did you asked that day , if I love you or not then listen if being restless without you is love then I love you ,if missing you like hell is love then I love you ,if reaching here from my house in just three hours to meet you is love then I love you,if breathing became difficult without you is love then I love you ,if dying a little with every passing minute without you is love then I love you damn it .if it was not love then what was that ,do you think I m a playboy and spend nights with any girls .chup kyu hai bol na."

She shook her head negatively, he came more closer to her and asked " ek baat sachchi sachchi bolna ,didn't you liked that ."

She nodded with tearful eyes ,he then spoke again " then why only me ,why only I was at fault ,why only I was questioned that if I love you or not why didn't you asked yourself,just a min. did you loved me from earlier , tell me."

Saying so he looked at her with questioning eyes while she spoke composing herself " nothing like that ,its just you are so rich and I m ..."

R- ( putting finger on her mouth)- thappad maroonga,agar iske aage ek shabd bhi bola hai to (will slap you if you say further ) when did our status come between us ,when did I differentiated between you and me ,and if it was so then why did you let me love you .

Ishita down casted her eyes don't know what to say more when he spoke again " idiot madrasan ,har kuch bolegi ,yahaan wahaan ,aise waise but I love you nahi bolegi ,mat bol I don't even need it ,chal ab ."
(idiot madrasan will tell everything here there ,this that but will not say I love you ,don't say I don't even need it ,now come ).

That's when she hugged him tight and declared between her tears " I love you ,I love you idiot ".

R- idiot main ya tu .

I- you ,you understand things so late .

R- so you will leave me like this ,you know na I had forget living without you .

I- I don't know you never told me .

R- maar daalunga tab pata chalega ( when I will kill you then you will know )

I- kill me then I will see who will know ,me or you .

Raman (engulfing her in his arms )- dekh kitni moti ho gayi hai ,haath mein bhi nahi aa rahi ( see how fat you have became ,can't even embrace you in my arms .

I(hiding herself in him )- chup .


Both remain in the hug for sometimes then ishita spoke " actually it was all your fault ,can't you tell I love you on that day ."

R- I would had surely said that if I would had known ,I m not like you to sit with a weighting scale and measure everything ,I m rich ,you should also be rich ,I m slim you should aslo be slim , you I handsome you should also be beautiful ,it does not happen in love ye to tab hota hai when we do a business deal and you know na ,pyaar mein sauda nahi , O saaiba pyaar mein sauda nahi . Moreiver I think I have given you that much right on me that if you say something I cannot go beyond it .

I- matlab.

R- matlab ye ki you have all the right on me ,even if we wouldn't had spend that night then also if you would had told me to marry you ,I never would had denied because you are the only person in my life who is with me for me ,not because we had blood relationship, not for any professional work ,not for money but only for me . I just don't have say how and why I love you ,I have so many reasons to love you .

Ishita was overwhelmed listening to him when he spoke " bad hasti hi rahegi ya kuch bolegi bhi ".

I(still looking at him)- at first let me admire you ,you look so adorable when you are angry .

R-(getting irritated)- and when I will kill you then I think you will be able to speak something .

Ishita came closer to him ,he saw her from top to bottom but before he can say something she tiptoed and pressed her lips on his ,at first his eyes widened in shock them he slowly closed them enjoying her soft touch ,he pulled her close by her waist and held her face by the free hand while ishita was still chewing his lower lips not going further ,he guided her hands around his neck and spoke taking the charge " you need training for this " ,sating so he bite her lower lip she opened her mouth wincing in pain while he entered her mouth getting the chance, and explored her mouth relishing her flavors, soon they parted in need of air. Ishita rested her head on his chest while he raised her face and made her look at him ,she saw him and then down casted her eyes ,he smiled fully and asked" where had you hided this bold ishita ".

She didn't answered him rather only turned red due to blushing.He hugged her more into him and spoke" but I liked it. now can you please make me nice tea ,dus din se achchi chai bhi nahi mili".

I- seems you will not get now also .

R- why .

I- because nothing is there in this house .

R- then how come you were living here .

I- I came just few hours ago .

R- till now where were you .

I- I was with my parents.

R- arey haan you were also getting married na.

I- humm but I eloped .

R- (laughing)- tu wahan se bhi bhaag gayi .( you ran from there also).

I- haan to kya us NRI se shaadi kar leti .
(hamm then what should I had done, married that NRI )

R- if I would had let you married then na .

I- then what you would have done .

R- I would had kidnapped you ,it would had been bit difficult but I would had managed .

Both giggled together , then Raman spoke " come we will go to market like that day ".

I- you rest I will be bring it ,you mist be tired na .

R- nope I m good ,I m always good with you .chal .

Saying so both went to buy necessary things as the house didn't had anything,they had a content smile of their face .

tere sang yaara

Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yara
Khush rang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganvara

Maine chhode hai baki saare rastein
Bas aaya hun tere paas re
Meri ankhon me tera naam hai
Pehchaan le..

Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Yeh jaane le..


That's all for now friends ,hope you like this .Some of you may say that why raman is calling ishita fatty and moti but its how friends talk casually .Enjoy reading and do comment.

PS - 200+ likes and lovely comments for next update .
Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
liked this very much
their reactions are lovely
chotu romance all awesome

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