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This was absolutely marvelous! Loved it! The way you brought out Shivay's desire to explain himself to Anika, her rage and humiliation, their passion breaking though those barriers they had placed between them and finally the marriage being called off! This was the slow burn of pleasurable pain! Simply superb! Do continue if possible! Maybe a sequel where Shivay finally woos her!
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