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Part 9
Maan turned to Geet.
Geet - Maan I'm worried for you from morning kahaan the tum.
Maan - Geet you always say I'm a Angel then why all bad thing happen to me.
Geet look him she try to hold him but Maan move away from her.
Maan - no Geet don't come close to me.
Geet - Maan...
Tears fall from her eyes seeing him so broken.
Maan - nahin mujhse door raho tum,jo bhi mere paas aata hai wo mujhe door chala jata hai.
He don't know what he is talking.
Geet - no Maan nothing is like this.
She saw him taking step back from her.
Maan - why she did this to me.
He ask to himself and start walk away from Geet.
Geet - Maan listen to me...
She cry can't see him like this she run to him and come in front of him Maan saw her teary eyes.
Maan - she too cry like this.
Geet - Maan just stop it...
She yelled at him and hugged him tightly,he don't move back or even hold her back.
Maan - I know you too going to leave me like everyone.
Geet - you are wrong I'm not going anywhere away from you.
Geet feel a pain in her heart that she not even feel when her angel leave her,Maan pull his head away from her shoulder.
Maan - Sach nahi jayogi tum mujhse door.
He ask like he just want her to prove him wrong by saying yes, Geet can't believe that she can hurt him this much that he not even believing her,she hold his hand in her.
Geet - I promise...
She remember how she give same promise to her Angel but destiny break that promise but now she cannot even let destiny break this promise of hers,she hugged him again when Maan hug her back tired from yesterday with all the emotional fight inside him,he rest his head over her shoulder,geet feel like she get back something she have lost long back.
*************
Next day in college...
Geet look Yash with Ridhima all happily talking with her and she remember Maan his last night condition still haunting her and she know whatever she did is only because of this man,she walk to him n stand in front of Yash he smile seeing her but his smile soon die with Geet hard slap he hold his burning cheek n look Geet shockingly,all students turned to them after hearing Geet slap sound,Ridhima too is shock to see Geet slapping Yash like this.
Yash - you bloody..
Geet slap him again before he complete his sentence and this time with double force.
Ridhima - Geet what happen to you why you are slapping Yash.
Geet - ask him.
She yelled pushed him from bike in pour haters,she still want to slap him,Yash look around all students looking him.
Ridhima - Geet please what are you doing.
She hold Geet before she do something more,
Ridhima - what have you done to make Geet slap you like this.
She ask Yash and he don't know what to say he looked Geet.
Yash - I did nothing Ridhima believe me.
He lied to Ridhima.
Ridhima - then why is Geet angry on you she is not mad to slap you just like that.
Ridhima said angrily.
Yash - I don't know.
He look here n there nervously.
Ridhima - I'm sorry Geet whatever he have done I ask sorry from his side.
Geet not even look Ridhima she jerk Ridhima hands away and walk to her class,Yash look Geet angrier for insulting him in front of all,Ridhima too walk away not feel like talking to Yash now.
Yash - now you see Geet what I'm going to do with you,you have to pay for insulting me.
**************
After three days...
Pari is back to college and she see Maan different behavior he is not talking to anyone like before.
In locker room when pari taking her books out she feel two hands around her waist she look back n find Vicky she see around if there are anyone other then them but find non,she hold his hands there n look back,Vicky see her she not look fine.
Vicky - what happens sweetie.
He ask still in same position holding her she looked down at their hands sadly.
Pari - don't know what happens to Maan he is not talking to anyone properly.
Vicky turn her around.
Vicky - I will talk to him you don't worry hmm.
He kiss her forehead softly pari smile at him,he hugged her to himself,he too notice change in Maan but don't know the reason.
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Maan home...
When Gayatry cleaning Maan room she find his mobile and she think how he forget his mobile today,she notice Maan from two day he is not talking to her much but she think because she shout on him or he really busy with his studies or with job that's why he is not talking to her and she herself not talk with him because she know he will ask about piyush and why she deleted piyush number so she think he himself talk to her,she look mobile is switch off so when she turn on then see some call she without seeing take call.
Piyush - hello Maan why are you not taking my calls.
Gayatry - piyush sir.
Piyush - Gayatry.
He shocked to heard her voice.
Gayatry - please leave my Maan alone.
She cat the call in anger without waiting for his reply.
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After class Vicky come to meet maan saw him in class room and his friends are also there he say hi to everyone and move forward to talk with Maan he sat beside him n pari take her friends out of class so Vicky can talk with Maan n find what actually happen.
Vicky - hi Maan.
Maan look him and smile.
Vicky - is everything ok
Maan - yeah all fine.
He try to sound normal.
Vicky - you know pari is really worried for you.
Maan look him.
Maan - but why.
Vicky - they are your friends if anyone notice or not but our friends can see all change in us.
Maan look down he is trying his best to be again like before.
Maan - I'm trying to be like before.
Maan whisper to himself but Vicky heard and think there is some problem,when Maan was about to leave from class Vicky hold his hand.
Vicky - Maan you know everything happens for good.
Maan - wo mujhse door gayi isme kiska achha hua.
He said sadly and Geet heard what he said when she come to meet him she know this is good only for her.
Vicky - what are you saying.
Vicky ask confused he heard what Maan said but not get why he said like this.
Maan - kuch nahin pari kahaan hai.
He try to change topic Vicky hold his hand and take him to locker room when they reach there Maan saw pari there she look him.
Vicky - here is Maan ask him yourself.
Pari - Maan I'm seeing you from the day I come back you are looking lost somewhere.
Maan - kuch nahi hua hai.
Pari - ager aisa hai toh fir abtak tumne mujhe welcome back hug kyun nahi diya.
She said sadly making baby face Maan smile at her he know she can take anything but she hate it when someone ignore her,he pulled her into his arm she hug him happily.
Vicky - yaar I'm accepting today that I'm jealous of you and my girlfriend love you more then she love me.
He made a fake sad face pari smile knowing he is acting,Maan smile at Vicky over acting and pulled Vicky too n hug him,pari n Vicky both feel happy that they are success in making Maan happy,Geet look three of them feel good that Maan have friends who care for him so much.
***************
Pari home...
she is checking Vicky FB profile when her eyes fell on Vicky birthday date.
Pari - oh my god Vicky ka birthday 4 din baad hai or usne mujhe bataya bhi nahi.
She angrily close her laptop.
Pari - Vicky sharma kal tumhari kheir nahi.
***************
Next day in Vicky class when all students moved out of class he see pari there with her friends he look her then her friends he think something is wrong.
Vicky - kya hua.
Pari - theen din baad kya hai.
Vicky think then he ask her.
Vicky - baby you don't tell me about your birthday.
She look him angrily.
Pari - you fool birthday mera nahin tumhara hai and you don't tell me.
She make baby sad face he come close to her.
Vicky - so you are giving me birthday party.
Pari - nahi mein kyun doon.
He look her confusedly.
Vicky - then why you are angry on me.
Pari - because I still not buy a new dress for your birthday.
He hold her hand and take out of class and her friends leave because they know now Vicky can handle their crazy pari,when they reach a lonely place he leave pari and stepped back.
Vicky - oh but I have already selected five dresses for my pari.
She look him with a big smile on her cute face.
Pari - really.
He laugh seeing her cute reaction n pulled her to himself.
Vicky - yes
She hugged him happily.
**************
After three day...
All are ready for Vicky birthday party and most excited is Pari, Vicky have invited almost whole college and his mom dad invite all knows personality in Mumbai and because Vicky father is friend with Geet father so Piyush too coming to Mumbai for party, Yash and Ridhima parents to coming after inviting them and Vicky is planning to introduces Pari to his parents,Meera ask Maan if he coming to party Vicky personally invite Maan but knowing Maan is not fine now a day so Meera again ask him and he said yes,after Maan knows that his different behavior making his friends sad so he is trying to be happy at least in front of them so he agree for party,on the other side Geet feel horrible knowing whatever Maan state is today only because of her and she don't know how to make everything like before because she have seen Maan trying to be happy but she know he is not fine,khushi have already leave for Bhopal for her engagement.
**************
In evening...
Geet call Maan and talk to him if he can pick her from her home Maan said ok and he inform Armaan that he is going with Geet to Vicky party and Armaan said then he will pick Meera from her hostel and Vicky sent car for Armaan,Meera,and Pari to Meera hostel.
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when Maan reach Geet home he hear some sound from inside he ask from watchmen who is there inside and get to know Yash here to meet Geet and Maan thinks what Yash doing here at this time and when he enter inside he heard Geet screams and without thinking he run to her room and when he pushed door open n he look Yash in disbelieve he is forcing himself on Geet,Maan pushed Yash from Geet he look Geet her dress is not on proper place he turn to Yash who himself is shocked he never think Maan can come here.
Maan - I never think you can stop so low.
Maan said feel disgusted by his cheap act and punched him hard on face,Geet call police and in no time police come to Geet home they arrested yash on Geet and Maan statement after police left Maan look Geet he know she is trying not to cry but he see tears in her eyes when he take step toward her she move away from him looking his feet moving to her direction after moving a little more back her back touched wall.
Maan - Geet.
She look up to his face her tears fell from her eyes and now she don't want to hide them from him.
Geet - he try to...
Maan keep his hand on her mouth.
Maan - shhh.
Geet pushed his hand and try to move away when maan pulled her to himself.
Geet - Maan.
She finally cry because she know he is there for her,Maan hugged her tightly to himself until she cried her heart out,after some time when Geet stop crying he picked her up in his arms and made her sat on couch and give her a glass of water she sip a little and again rest her head on Maan chest.
Maan - Geet.
She hold around his waist tightly.
Geet - he want to punish me for insulting him.
Maan hands around her tightened in protective manner she hide her face in his neck and close her eyes feel safe with him,after one hour Maan try to move away from a sleeping Geet she hold his hand in her sleep.
Geet - please don't leave me angel.
Maan look her she is still sleeping.
Maan - I'm not your angel.
He spoke touch her cheek she moved closer to his hand.
Geet - then why you always make me remember my angel.
Geet spoke opening her eyes look him,he look down at her face so close to him.
Maan - I think because somewhere you want me to be your angel.
Geet look him surprise she know if she accept or not but she really want her angel only like Maan.
Geet - why It's all so complicated.
Maan - I too think why our life is not simple.
Geet look him she know he is thinking about himself and khushi.
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7 Stars hotel...
Vicky birthday party...
Ridhima get call from Geet and Geet tell her what Yash done she said not to inform anyone about this because she don't want to spoil Vicky birthday party and she said Maan is with her and Geet ask to inform Maan friends that he is not coming to party,Ridhima cut the call is shock she know Yash like Geet but she never think he can stop so low that he can force himself on her she think some day he get over Geet,when Pari come to party then only Vicky cut birthday cake and he introduces Pari to his mom dad and they both liked Pari but Vicky can see they are somewhere not happy but he don't care anymore they all enjoy party and Ridhima get drank in think of Yash and on one side Armaan too take a hard drink by mistake when Armaan feel like he drunk some wrong drink he move to washroom to wash his face because that drink already start to effect his sense, Ridhima come out of washroom after crying in her drunken stat and come face to face with a already drunk Armaan he hold Ridhima before she fall back and find her crying can't even stand probably on her feet she hold Armaan.
Armaan - what happens.
Ridhima - everything is finished today.
She said crying and fall in Armaan arms still crying he somehow pick her up and move away he himself not sure where he is taking her he enter in a room he saw first and after what happens non of them going to accept.

Edited by SoniyaLovesGc - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome and Emotional too

Maan is so broken about his and Khushi's separation and I think Geet feels bad now to see in what state she has put Maan into , I had just thought that Maan liked Khushi had no idea his feelings were so deep as now his behaviour is changed and it actually sad that he is going through this while forcing himself to smile and be happy in front of his friends
Geet sees Yash happily with Riddima and remembers Maan state and she slaps Yash making Yash angry at her and vowing to revenge her for his insult
Yash comes to her house and forces himself on Geet and fortuately Maan also comes there saves Geet from further humiliation and stays with her at her home
Armaan and Riddihma both drunk while Vicky has introduced Pari to his parents and he also knows they are not happy with his choice
Piyush calls Maan phone and Gaythri answers the call she tells him to stay away from Maan
Geet telling Maan he is her angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deep002

Amazing, shocking update dear

Thankuu dear😊
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Awesome and Emotional too

Maan is so broken about his and Khushi's separation and I think Geet feels bad now to see in what state she has put Maan into , I had just thought that Maan liked Khushi had no idea his feelings were so deep as now his behaviour is changed and it actually sad that he is going through this while forcing himself to smile and be happy in front of his friends
Geet sees Yash happily with Riddima and remembers Maan state and she slaps Yash making Yash angry at her and vowing to revenge her for his insult
Yash comes to her house and forces himself on Geet and fortuately Maan also comes there saves Geet from further humiliation and stays with her at her home
Armaan and Riddihma both drunk while Vicky has introduced Pari to his parents and he also knows they are not happy with his choice
Piyush calls Maan phone and Gaythri answers the call she tells him to stay away from Maan
Geet telling Maan he is her angel
Thank you very much for wonderful comment 😊

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Nice update..
Maan came on time and saved geet..
Waiting for next update..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thankuu dear
yes he save her
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Kya shocking update tha yaar 😲
Maan is so sad chalo acha hua he spoke to geet and he was a bit comfortable and she was able to calm him down.
Geet is repenting for her deed after seeing maan's aloof behaviour 😔
Yash deserves that slap from geet.
Aww pyaari pari she can make anyone smile with her cuteness and she proved it by making maan smile 😊
Can't believe yash stooped so low 😡
Thankgod maan came in time and saved geet.
This entire incident shook her to the core and maan was there for the support 😊
She wishes maan to be her angel unaware of the fact he is indeed him only.
Edited by Khushibloom - 8 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dear 😊
Eagerly waiting for next part .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much khushi for your lovely comment 😊
Edited by SoniyaLovesGc - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update! well written! thanks 4 da pm! Maan shattered! he really liked Khushi! Geet feels bad! Geet slaps Yash! he is livid n vow revenge! he tries 2 force himself on her bt Maan saves her! Piyush calls Maan bt his mom answers! she tells him 2 stay away from Maan! Geet shocked after wt happened! She calls Maan her Angel! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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