Short Story (OS): Gale mein kharaash (Adi sir's bday special)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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July 21, 2001

Abhijeet woke up very late. The day before was very tiring as they had to catch prevent an insane suicide bomber from blowing up himself and a building at 6:48PM.

His phone rang. It was Daya.

Abhijeet picked up the phone and said "Hello" but his voice was hoarse, all that came our was a croak.

Daya: Hello...sir??

Abhijeet: H..heeloo...Ddaayya

Daya: Sir, kya hua?

Abhijeet left the phone and decided to drink some water.

Daya: Abhijeet sir??

Abhijeet: He..lloo..

Daya: Kya hua?

Abhijeet: Kuch nahi..

Realises that there's no point trying to talk and cuts the call.

He sends an SMS to Daya. 'Sore throat, because of all the shouting I did yesterday. Can't speak. see you in the bureau'.

Abhijeet went to freshen himself up and when he returned, he heard the bell ring. It was Daya.

Daya: Hello sir.

Abhijeet (with great difficulty): arey 😃 Tum yahan?

Daya: Toh, mujhe yahan nahi aana chahiye?

Abhijeet shows with action...'nahi, aisi koi baat nahi hai, baitho'.

Daya: Aapke gale ko kya hua?

Abhijeet(barely a whisper): Woh, kal...uss pagal aadmi se chilla chillakar baat karna pada na, isliye...

(refer to episode case of 6:48, aired July 20, 2001)

Daya: Sir, yeh lijiye main syrup lekar aaya hoon.

Abhijeet (whispers): Arey rehne do na...main adrak chai pee loonga.

Daya: Nahi sir, aaj aapka birthday hai...aise kaise chalega? (and gives Abhijeet the syrup)

Abhijeet: 😲 Mera birthday? Mujhe toh yaad bhi nahi tha.

Daya: Haan sir, happy birthday.(gives a shake hand) Aur happy anniversary. Do saal ho gaye CID mein waapas aakar.

Abhijeet: Haan, do saal...pata hi nahi chala...

Abhijeet went into flashback...2 years back he was standing at the bridge where he had been left by the kidnappers, when ACP and Daya came looking for him. He didn't realise he had completed 2 successful years in CID after he lost his memory. Time had flown.

Abhijeet(gets up): Main breakfast banaata hoon.

Daya: Nahi sir, aaj aap mat banaiyye. Freddie hum sab ke liye breakfast laa raha hai. Bhabhiji bana rahi hai.

Abhijeet, who was in no mood to cook got up and said 'theek hai, main ready hoke aata hoon'.

Abhijeetwent in to get ready. He opened his wardrobe and looks at his badge which read 'senior inspector'.

He watched Daya reading a paper in the hall. He had been with him these 2 years, treating him like a senior, though he (Abhijeet) had lost 2 precious years in CID. He had joined CID 2 years before Daya, but since he was away for 2 years, technically they should have been of the same rank. ACP had however, recommended a senior post for Abhijeet. Daya had never complained. Any other guy in his place would have had his ego hurt.

Abhijeet was already feeling better after he drank the syrup. He got dressed and went back to the hall.

Daya: Chaliye sir.

Abhijeet: Daya, ek request.

Daya: Kya hai sir?

Abhijeet: Mujhe 'sir' aur 'aap' mat kaho.

Daya: Kyon sir, achanak?

Abhijeet: Bas aise hi...main 2 saal CID mein nahi tha. ACP sir ne phir bhi mujhe promotion dilvaya. Lekin hum dono jaante hain ki humara experience equal hai.

Daya: Sir, aaj se sab kyon keh rahe hain?

Abhijeet: Bas, agar meri khushi chahte ho, toh aaj se mujhe Abhijeet hi kaho. Senior nahi, dost samjho mujhe.

Daya: Theek hai sir.

Abhijeet: phir se sir. 😒

Daya: Theek hai...Abhijeet. Ajeeb lag raha hai..thoda time lagega.

Abhijeet: Aur haan...thanks.

Daya: Agar aap (sorry tum) chahte ho ki main tumhe Abhijeet kahoon toh yeh thanks wanks mat kehna.

Abhijeet: hmmm...😃

Daya: Happy birthday Abhijeet. (and gives another handshake)


(*** I may be wrong with respect to the exact time when the transition took place. Take this as a work of fiction and forgive me ***)





Edited by visrom - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for first review 😛

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Lovely OS. I actually enjoyed a duo story after long.. The transition is sweet. Seriously, cough syrup? 😆 Nice birthday gift 😉 ..
Edited by ANGELICEYES - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just a reminiscing one...
I was desperate to read a story as Aditya sir's B'day special...
Thanks a lot for the story Vis di 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cough Syrup...🤣
Seriously Dii...😉😆
koi Gift bhi ly aaty, agr Birthday Yaad thi... pr Humaray Bhai, Sada ky Kanjus...
its really Nice and Sweet Blending of Memories...😳👏
gives a Reminder of that 6:48 Epi...😃
Good One Boss...👏👏
Thank alot...😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆

Cough syrup is not the main gift. That will be after the party happens in the bureau with Freddie's breakfast.

You can write that part 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Both went to Bureau after Daya Calling Freddie about Both Arrival News...😊

Abhijeet really Happy to find His all Team memebers with a Table rounded by them having Breakfast...😃

Duo joint found Some Unusual...😊

Abhijeet: Feddie, Nashta kahan hy.?😕😕

Freddie: Sir, ye (showing Desk table with) tou hy...😛

Daya: haan Abhijeet, darasal Tumhara Gala Kharab tha na tou Main ny Freddie ko Kaha kay Nashta thora Light rakkhy 😉, deko kitni Items hain, Tum kuch bhi Kha skty ho 😛... Chai aur Bread, Chai aur Rusk, Chai aur Biscuits, Chai aur Bun, Chai aur Cup Cake...

Abhijeet (angry): bas bas Daya 😡... itna bhi Gala Kharab Nahi tha...🤔

Daya: ohhh acha, pr Main ny tou...

Abhijeet: kya Main ny tou...😕

Asha (taking out few things with): Daya nay kaha tou Hum Log ye Gifts ly aayey ...😉😉

the Table Slowly fills with Strepsils, Cup a Soup Sachets, Lozenge, Gatrode really Biwild Abhijeet Eyes who really Sighing over His First Friend...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: visrom

😆

Cough syrup is not the main gift. That will be after the party happens in the bureau with Freddie's breakfast.

You can write that part 😉


I try...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Visrom..dear nice and sweet attempt. . Liked it. . Thank you so much. . 🤗
@GD..dear..nice continuation. . Hahaaa. . Bechaare abhijeet sir. .Bday vaale din sab chaii chaii ho gyaa. . . Hahaaa. . 🤣
And those gift...😆 hatke. . Heheee😆
Thank u so much😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww... GD, you're back with a bang...
Badly missing your written updates and funny stories...
Nice continuation... Poor Abhijeet sir... 😆🤣
Edited by swathi17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Vis di; That's sweet. Feeling kind of nostalgic! 😳
@GD; That's funny 🤣
Good combination of breakfast😆

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