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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Amazing
Om and Gauri are such a passionate couple
Shivay had a wrong timing
Rudra and Soumya are the cutest couple ever with their not so serious banters
And what must the plight of Ranveer
Update soon

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

hahaha!!! I LOVE the way you write Omkara! I don't think anyone has done it quite as brilliantly as you do. The dynamics between Gauri and Omkara in the studio was pure awesomesauce. I think I squealed a bit when she threw him the fresh kurta and he caught it with such nonchalance. I want more of this couple from you! If you have been writing anything on them,please keep me informed. In fact, it doesn't really matter what fandom you are writing on, let me know. I want to read anything and everything that you come up with.

Anyway, coming back to this part, the heat and passion was incredible. And with a clueless Shivay knocking at the gates, it just took the whole scene to a whole new level of epicness! The detail about Rudra and Soumya's relationship was also perfect! I can very well see those two babies getting up to something like that! Your story really captures the fun and drama that is a part of the Oberoi household as we had once imagined it.

Shivay being scared to face Prinku on his own was too good! Can't wait to see what you make of the Randhawa household.

BTW I got reports on the development of Ranveer's character in the show and boy am I glad I stopped watching when I did!

Anyway, I totally understand that the studies will have kept you real busy,but am super happy to see an update nonetheless.

Hopefully you will be able to return to this story sooner rather than later.

Also, read your response to my last comment,and am already excited about the story you are working on.

Lots of love,

Twerps.

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982548

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Innika, my love!

Sorry for putting this off for so long and I cannot even begin to describe how much I hate myself for not reading this sooner! Beyond perfect is what this was and oh, how I wish I'd gotten to it sooner!

But better later then never yes?!

I can't even begin to tell you how much loved this!

And not just the heat factor - though I am still fanning myself, cuz whoa! - this update was beyond epicness! I love love love your version of Rikara! It was so perfect! Love the serious yet playful dynamic between them as well as the comfort and easy. I have always loved your version of Om and this just made me love him more. Zulfi SinghOberoi has become quiet a brazen hottie, ravishing his wife with his brother standing out the door!

And oh man I haven't stopped laughing at Shivaay's clueless-ness! "What mmm?" And "Well, anytime now!"? Hahahahah! Like, Shivaay, seriously? Are you for real? Just what did he think was happening being a closed door with voices like that?!

And then the RuMya dynamic! Hahahahah! Oh man, my stomach hurts! Soumya setting fire to his clothes is something I can actually see happening - sadly, not anymore because GK has no sense of continuity. But, oh, that was epic!

And the cherry on top is of course, Shivaay being scared of his Prinku Pehlwaan! Cannot wait for that to enfold!

Thank you so much for this yummilicious goodness!

Cannot wait for more!

Update soon! I wana see the havoc wreaked in Radhawa household!

Love,

A.C.

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cestlavie

@cestlavie

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Omg! Absolutely loved this!! Can't wait for the next😊

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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Innikaaa,

So, I am incredibly late to this party. Eeps.

But can I just say how much I adored these two chapters?? Like, seriously. They were perfect!!

You got me hooked the moment you started the chapter with PriVeer, that too with so much of cuteness I just can't even. I had just a huge, silly smile on my face. Adorableee.

And then Shivika, RiKara, and RumYa, uff ❤️ The two chapters were a perfect blend of cute, passion, and humour! I loved, LOVED them both.

I cannot wait for the new part. Please update soon! And thank you so much for the PM!