TS || Cake [Author's Note +CII Pt.I Updated] - Page 5

Originally posted by: sue1o1

This is perfect! '

Originally posted by: jarir2010

read both chaps together,its really funny and i enjoyed it while reading,thanks.⭐️

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Originally posted by: farinaks

Nyc I lyk acp of ur story

wow the second part is awesome

ok can anyone die of laughter because if yes i will be first case ..

Omg..that was amazing.

Superb..

Awesome

This was incredibly written- to an extent where the waiting was made worthwhile 😆 👏 in all honesty this was one piece of writing that I have been checking back on- incase I missed the update I'm not a fan of erotic fiction however the Om and Gauri's consummation was both tastefully and creatively written The confrontation thereafter with Om and Shivaay was hilarious- the prolonged embarrassment on the front of both parties and nonetheless they both dismissed the situation in order to make it a little less awkward 😆 And oh gosh ofcourse Rudy would say something like that to Soumya 🤣 All in all the update was absolutely fantastic- You're one of my favourite writers on the forum and I really do hope you update soon!!
Love
-Sam