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Innika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sue1o1
This is perfect! '

OMG, thank you ❤️

The new update is finally up, if you're interested!

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Innika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Rishiak47
Superb update

Thank you 😃

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Innika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jarir2010
read both chaps together,its really funny and i enjoyed it while reading,thanks.⭐️
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Glad you liked it! Thanks so much ❤️

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Innika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: farinaks
Nyc I lyk acp of ur story

Thanks! 😃

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

wow the second part is awesome

Poor om...shivaay would have break the door if he didn't opened...

o god is ranveer alive or Priyanka finished him...

its tooo hilarious

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

ok can anyone die of laughter because if yes i will be first case ..

hehe sitting in office and laughing like crazy

cant resist

haha loved rudy condition and shivaay impatience

haha om and gauri condition

hope ranveer is alive till now

please do continue

bye sumi

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Omg..that was amazing.

Now, never expected Om to do that. But shivru ka bhai hai.

Will eagerly wait for more.

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Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Superb..

Never in my dreams thought Om to do that 😲

Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Awesome

Looking forward to read more.

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

This was incredibly written- to an extent where the waiting was made worthwhile 😆 👏 in all honesty this was one piece of writing that I have been checking back on- incase I missed the update I'm not a fan of erotic fiction however the Om and Gauri's consummation was both tastefully and creatively written The confrontation thereafter with Om and Shivaay was hilarious- the prolonged embarrassment on the front of both parties and nonetheless they both dismissed the situation in order to make it a little less awkward 😆 And oh gosh ofcourse Rudy would say something like that to Soumya 🤣 All in all the update was absolutely fantastic- You're one of my favourite writers on the forum and I really do hope you update soon!!
Love
-Sam

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