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Fantastic, awsme chapters all are.firstly their cute romance & teasing session.jalal fitted camera on jodha room & he can see her.mirza choti part is nice.but what is connection between jodha & jalal family.why his step mother ayesha fear of pari.adham ruq all are devil.last part changed everything. jalal will doubt on her & will slap.poor jodja drunk poison.OMG.update soon.thanks for pm


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CHAPTER 21



Jalal enter Asad farmhouse with angry face and shout: Asad

Asad: Jalal

Jalal grabbed Asad shirt collar: Why u did it with angry face

Jodha heared Jalal voice come out of kitchen and seeing Jalal held Asad shirt collar with angry face

Jodha: Jalal with worried voice

Both stop ur fighting high pitch voice came from entrance of farmhouse

Jodha : Abdul jiju

( high pitch voice owner is Abdul )

Jalal: Abdul u don't know what he did it

Abdul: I know everything Jalal and remove ur hand with angry voice

Asad: Jalal what u did with my shirt , see my shirt spoiled with dramatic way

Jalal: Stop ur drama,stupid with Ruqze angrt tone

Abdul: First u both stop ur drama, iam not tolerate anymore

jodha: What s going on with irritating face

Jalal hug Asad and Asad also reciprocate his hug .

Abdul: Why u both irritating my Bhabhiji

Jalal: Jo, he is my best friend but his name is stupid with teasing face

Asad: Khadoos Mohammed

Jodha: Bhai with angry face

Asad: Ok baba,sry sweety, ur hubby not khaddos but my friend is khaddos with chuckling face

Abdul: Bhai with confused face

Jalal: Abdul , ur Bhabhi is stupid ka sister

Jodha: Anyone tell me what going on,Jalal how do u know , Asad bhai is my brother and u both r enemy right.i mean u thought asad bhai is ur enemy right

Jalal and Asad hi fi each other

Jalal: Everything our drama Jo, Shona( zoya) said me that Asad affairs with many girls and hotel incident ( Aaya flashback part 19) and that time i guessed Asad hide something from me

Flashback start

Jalal enter Asad room: Asad

Asad: What do u want Akbar .ur sis said everything is truth with angry face

Jalal hard slap to Asad cheeks and Asad not talk anything and his head bow to ground

Jalal: Look my eyes then say ur womanizer and u cheat ur Shona and then I trust ur word with hard voice

Asad look at his eyes : Sry Jalal I hurt her so much but I have no choice.

Asad narrated unknown man call and blackmailed everything ( part 20)

Jalal: So he did everything for Shona safety

Asad: That time I didnot think about anything , I just worried about my love (Zoya)

Jalal: U think he will touch my Shona easily and she is my baby sister. She is my jaan. If anyone try to harm my Shona , u think I will leave that person easily.

Asad: I know Jalal but he not normal blackmailer.he want ur suffer Jalal sirf ur suffer that only he chooses Zoya and me .he is very dangerous.he can do anything .we need be careful.

Jalal: First we will find out who want to play with me with angry face

Asad: Plz don't say anyone this matter even Zoya

Jalal:yeah she hurt but she not trust ur drama fully.he want play with me right.now iam also play with him.now onwards ur my enemy with smirked tone

Asad:hmm first everyone trust our drama then only easy for us.

Flashback end

Jodha: U thinking both are playing with stupid blackmailer but ur not, ur playing with Shona feeling.u know how much she broken down inside.u never understand women nature

Jalal and Asad: We did only for her safety with guilty voice

Jodha: U will find him or not with bossy tone

Jalal: No with slow voice

Jodha glare to Jalal : Bhai why u insult Jalal infront of Zoya

Jalal: Jo that is my idea then only Shona trust Asad word.i know she respect me like iam her father so Asad insulted me infront of her in sake only she trust our drama with slow voice

Jodha anger raised: U both are proudly saying ur are businessman tycoon.till now u not found out that culprit with hard angry voice

Jalal and Asad both are silent.they know very well sherni character.if she got angry as she will not control her anger soon

Abdul enjoyed both Jalal and Asad state

Asad smirked: sweety, why u angry me and Jalal only.ur Abdul jiju also included in our drama with smirked look at abdul

Jodha eyes shift to Abdul and Abdul gulped his saliva

Abdul: He heee ( favourite laugh with sheepish face)

Jodha smiled look at Abdul face and three of them relieved seeing her smile

Jalal: Time god u smiled Jo

Asad: Khaddoss ur never understand my sweety.she never angry with her lovable person

Jodha: Bhai I already told dont call him khaddos with warning tone

Jalal side hug to Jodha : Hey stupid see my Jo my side only with winning smile

Jodha remove his hug : Dont call my sweetu bhai to stupid

Jalal chuckled face: Jo he is not sweet , he is devil yaar

Abdul: Stop ur silly fight.how will u found out Jodha is Asad sister

Jalal: Mr Asad Ahmed khan think iam not found his truth.yesterday choti murmuring sleeping state to bhai.my detective already collected Jodha and her family details but he said she have no brother but choti scared face and shout bhai ,i understood something hide and I called him said that collect whole information about choti also.then I got information about three weeks before Jodha, Salima and Asad went Chennai in Asad flight.I confirmed Asad is Jodha rakki brother.u forgot Abdul in college days he told everytime talk about her sisters.each sentence he said my sweety and choti.

Even u , rafeek and me irritated because of his sister leela

Jodha: What u said Mr Jalal Mohammed khan

Asad: sweety, I tell u ,what he said about u in our college time

Mohammed mansion

Ayesha room

Ayesha: Ruqz where is ur brother

Adham: Iam here bua

Ayesha:I said that collect all information about Jodha

Adham: I already finished my work.and Adham give Jodha biography file to Ayesha

Ayesha read file carefully and after read that file Ayesha tensed face became to smiling face

Ayesha: Jodha ur gone .tomorrow this time ur not in my mansion with smirked face

Ruqz: Bua u did it anything with happy even eagerly face

Ayesha: Iam not do anything to Jodha but he will do what ever we want with evilly laughing face

Ruqz: Who's u talk about bua with confuse voice

Ayesha smirked face: Adham booked our flight tickets to Hawaii.we will celebrate our success in Hawaii .( guys I don't want these evily gang coming 2 or 3 part in sake only I packed their luggage to Hawaii)

Ruqz: But I want see that Jodha will throw out in mohammed mansion

Ayesha: No Ruqz, tomorrow we not stay in mansion then only noone doubting us

Ruqz: Ok bua but I will miss that wonderful chance with sad face

Adham: Bua I need to say one more detail

Ayesha: Not know Adham , I need call to important person with evilly face.

Ruqz: Hawaii it is really awesome place for party

Adham mind voice: Hawaii,party and girls with Lusty thought but forgot inform them he saw about asad and jo together

Asad farm house

Jodha angry face: Jalal what u said , iam bhak bhak, crazy etc...( Jalal college flashback to some other time ok guys)

Asad: sweety

Jalal: Stupid shut up with killing gaze

Jodha look to Jalal: Why u scold my bhai and why u said this word to me

Jalal gulped his saliva: I don't know that time that girl ,its u

Asad: U know sweety, in whole college calling Jalal to Romeo with naughty face

Jodha: Romeo

Jalal nods his head negatively to Asad: Stupid, u shut ur mouth otherwise

Jodha: U shut ur mouth Jalal, bhai u tell me

Asad: In our college every girl ka dream boy is ur handsome husband.he is all rounder to study, sports, cultural , everything, he is the best.in cultural time he danced with one girl.it not just dance.after Dance everyone call him Romeo.

Jodha angry face: What type of dance ,u danced with that girl after everyone calling u Romeo with murder look

Asad: Sweety I show u cultural photos.

Asad show college photo album to Jodha

Jodha eyes poped seeing Jalal dance photo with girl ,it really passionate move pictures

Jodha: What is this Jalal with angry face

Jalal: Jo with slow voice

Asad: sweety, after dance even love purposal also happened

Jodha: Girl purposed Jalal right with irritating face

Asad nods his head negatively and Jalal face change to horrible one

Asad: Ur hubby purposed that girl

Jodha: Kya, Jalal purposed girl with angry glare to Jalal and went to inside

Jalal: Asad I will kill u with angry face and run behind his Jo

Abdul and Asad hi fi each other with laughing face

Jodha : Why u come behind me and go marry that girl

Jalal cupped her cheeks: Jo , yeh I proposed her but it just bet ( prank) not real purposal , u r my first and last love in my life, till my eternity I need u , I need ur love.I can't live without u with husky voice

Jodha: Jalal with slow voice

Jalal come close with Jodha and Abdul and Asad give fake cough

Abdul: Love birds we also here with teasing tone

Asad: Great JMK, u manoified my sister soon

Jalal: u both came in correct time with grinned teeth

Jodha: Jalal how u found out, iam here with bhai

Asad: ha ,Why u angry with me

Jalal show Adham sent photo to Asad and said in ur stupid decision now Jodha also danger if that mystery man seeing u both together , he will trouble Jodha also

Asad: sry yaar , I worried about choti really forgot this matter. Adham , u come behind my sweety , iam not leave u with angry voice

Jodha: Chimpanzee irritating me so much.i will handle him, bhai

...

Next day evening

Jalal come to mansion early and call to Jodha

Jodha: Jalal u arrived

Jalal: Jo I miss u and come to our place

Jodha: If anyone see Jalal

Jalal: Plz Jo

Jodha: Ok Jalal iam coming

Mansion garden - lovely and lonely place noone come that side

Jodha come to garden and Jalal pulled Jodha and she fallen on his chest.

Both are settled down swing in same position

Jalal: if Anyone seeing u come to our place

Jodha : No Jalal

( both dont know already full masti gang even Ram singh and chammpaa also sitting behind bush and watching love birds romance with chips, cool drinks and other snacks)

Whole Gang nods their heads gestured no one seeing ur romance

Jalal: my family is my big enemy, everyone snatched my Jo away from me . u not spend time with me.with puppy face

Jodha: our famiy Jalal but everyone teasing me with confused face

Jalal: If anyone found out our matter

Jodha: Hmm Dadi

Jalal: No Dadi , she is innocent and know only orphanage but such a drama queen character with chuckled face

Gang everyone looked to Dadi face and Dadi fuming

Abdul mindthought: Kya iam drama queen character and I know only orphanage wait and watch ,JMk how much iam Drama queen with smirked face

Jodha: no Dadi is my darling, then Mir

Jalal: He spending only time to flirting girl

Gang- Mir embarrassing in front of everyone

Mir mind voice: Iam not leave u bhai with grinned state

Jodha: No Mir is little bit flirty type but he is good hearted person then Zoya

Jalal: My Shona concentrate only her studies.she is book worm

Gang- Zoya mind voice: Iam book worm with angry face

Jodha smiled :she is not then Abdul jiju told to anyone

Jalal smiled: Abdul never said anyone because he know her well my angry

Gang- everyone angry glare to Abdul.

Abdul gulped his saliva and mind voice: Jalal, Why everytime u make me to scapegoat

Jodha: My jiju so sweet , its not a scare, its respect for u, Jalal

Jalal: Choti and Salima

Jodha:choti such a prankster , I really worry about her future husband what she will do with him and Salima concentrate only her food

Gang: Salima eating her favourite chips and heared Jodha voice about her. Salima mouth wided open , her chips fallen down.everyone giggled seeing Salima face. Salima look to everyone with puppy face

Choti mind voice: angel u think iam not found my jiju, in hospital itself I confirmed he is ur husband . I am waiting for u, but till now u did not open ur mouth . U said iam prankster but ur my guruji. I am also play with u with naughty face

Jalal: don't worry about my both saali , they are really sweet

Jodha: then ur Ram singh bhai and chammpaa with teasing tone

Jalal chuckled face: Jo don't said my Ram singh yaar but He only guts irriatate to great Akbar. Ram singh , chammpaa & others are loosu / foolish gang

Gang: Ram singh rise his collar heared about guts irriate to Jalal ,next second his happiness vanished heared about foolish gang.

Ram singh shout : iam not foolish

Jalal heared Ram singh voice : Jo I heared Ram singh voice

Gang alert everyone escaped to save their life like vanished in air.

Jodha: u have beautiful wife next to u but u think about Ram singh bhai. Hey kannaji why u give me this type of husband for ur lovely child with fake angry face.

...

Delhi airport

Rajaram and janaki come out of airport.

Both caught taxi . taxi asked about destination

Rajaram: Mohammed mansion with harsh voice

Janaki shocked heared Mohammed mansion name and mind voice:yesterday he said that packed our thing ,we need go to delhi with harsh voice. I understood something wrong. Even I asked him if i will inform to Jodha but he said don't inform to anyone that we are coming to delhi.

Janaki: ji why we going to mansion with worried voice

Rajaram: janaki don't ask anything now with angry voice

Janaki mindvoice: hey bhagvan plz save my family with worried face

Km ,hall

Dadi sitting in sofa which reAbdulng magazine and Mir & Zoya playing chess. Choti and Salima chit chat each other. Abdul doing his work with some file.

Jalal come to hall and asking Dadi about green office file

Abdul: Jalal beta, I know only orphanage , why u asking about ur file

Jalal confused then look to Mir: Mir where is my file

Zoya: bhai why u asking file to Mir bhai. He spent time only to flirting girl

Mir: ha shona, iam flirt type but ur boring person. u only concentrate ur studies like bookworm

Jalal mindvoice: I heared flirting girl, book worm words in some where

Jalal look to Salima: Salima

Jodha come to hall and seeing Jalal talk Salima but Salima not reply for him

Jodha: Salima ,Jalal sir speaking u but u not reply him

Choti: angel , if Jalal jiju give chips to Salima di .she heared Jalal jiju voice because Salima di concentrate only her food

Salima: ha iam comcentrate only my food but what about u . u such a prankster type. I don't know what u will do with ur future hubby

Jalal and jo looking each other and their understand everyone teasing them

Ram singh come to hall with angry face

Jodha asking Ram singh : why u angry Ram singh bhai

Ram singh: Jodha baby, see that chammpaa saying that iam foolish gang

chammpaa come behind Ram singh: no Jodha di he only said iam foolish gang.

Jalal clear throat and everyone look at Jalal

Jalal : I think everyone found out what relationship between me and my Jo. Now I say to everyone openly

Jalal held Jodha hand tightly:

first time I fallen love with one girl

no she is not ordinary girl ,she is my angel.

she make my life to colourful

her single smile make my day to light up

what can I say single word , she is priceless , my angel and my Jo .

she occupied my full heart

I incomplete without her

I love my Jo, my jaan

( sry for boring lines, really my top floor vacant now (my brain) i dont know how to write my hope next part )

Jodha starring Jalal and everyone not give any single reaction then concentrate their respective works

Jalal irriate seeing their behavior and Jodha puppy look to Jalal

Jalal shout : I talked u people but everyone doing ur stupid work

Dadi: why u shout Jalal , we r not dumb

Jalal : Dadi

Salima laughed: sry Dadi , iam not control anymore

Everyone laughed loudly and Dadi twisted Jalal ears

Dadi: what u said iam drama queen character . how is my drama

Choti hugged Jodha murmuring her ear: u hided that he is my jiju. I will deal with u later

Dadi leave his ears: iam so much happy. Finally I got my bAbdul bahu

Jalal: i want to say one more important thing also

She is my w ( not complete his word)

Jodha angry hard voice from mansion entrance

Everyone turned look to entrance

Jodha : papa with smiling face


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Chapter 22

Jodha hard voice from entrance

Everyone turned look at mansion entrance

Jodha: Papa with smiled face

Choti, Salima,Zoya and Jalal also happy seeing Rajarampapa and Janumaa

Dadi shocked seeing Jodha parents and others confused face

Jalal holds Jodha hand tightly and Jodha tried remove her hand but Jalal not allowed Jodha hand remove from his grip.

Rajaram come near Jodha and Janumaa come behind Rajaram with scared face

Rajaram: Jodha why u people stayed in Mohammed mansion with hard angry voice

Jodha, choti and Salima scared that hearing papa angry voice

Jalal: Uncle and maa I am happy to see once again .

Rajaram: why u here with emotional and confused face

Jalal:this is my mansion. Iam Jalal Mohammed khan

Rajaram closed his eyes and hearing Jalal name

Janumaa: Ji, he is with emotional voice

Rajaram interpret: Shut up janaki.why Jodha u stay in mansion with angry tone

Jodha : ji.. stammering

Jalal: Uncle we love each other.plz don't angry with Jodha.i will explain everything to u.why Jodha stay in mansion with polite voice

Rajaram: Is it true Jodha.iam asking u with angry gaze

Jodha : Yes papa with slow voice

Thudd sound

Everyone shocked in their place.everyone speachless mainly Jodha..

Yes Rajaram slapped Jodha .poor Jodha shocked that her lovely father slapped her.even she not thinking in her dreams but today happened.

Jalal : Uncle why u slap Jodha with hard voice

Choti and Salima shivering saw papa angry face

Rajaram dragged Jodha : Lets go , u not stay in this mansion anymore.

Jodha starring papa face and Janumaa tears flowing in her eyes

Rajaram pulled Jodha hand but Jalal held her hand tightly

Dadi: Jalal leave her hand

Jalal : Dadi ..

Abdul hold Jalal other hand: I said leave her hand with hard voice

Jalal remove her hand and Jodha in shocking state

Rajaram moving outside with Jodha and stop look at choti and Salima

Rajaram: Choti and Salima , why u standing here and come with me with angry voice

Choti and Salima jerked one step back hearing his voice

Choti and Salima: Ji..papa with stammering voice

Rajaram dragged Jodha outside of mansion, janumaa, choti and Salima behind to papa

Jalal: Why u stopped me Dadi with emotional voice

Dadi: Jalal beta plz understand situation.

Jalal: why Dadi

Dadi: Jalal beta , now he is very angry. tomorrow, i will talk with Jodha father..everyone go to our room , u too Jalal with hard voice

Jalal: Iam not understand anything.plz Dadi tell me what is going on

Dadi: I will tell u Jalal but not now.first i will talk with Jodha parents

***

Jalal called Asad phone narrated everything

Asad:he really very angry .he scold me that I hided Jodha stay in mansion and Said booked flight ticket

Jalal:how is Jodha with worried tone

Asad:she is not speak to anyone.she really horrible state.even iam also shocked that papa never raise voice infront of his children.first time I saw his angry face and hearing his hard voice

Jalal: Iam coming

Asad: Dont take any stupid decision.I will talk with papa

Jalal: Give phone to Jodha.i need talk to her

Asad: Pls Jalal understood if papa seeing Jodha talk with u.it become more difficult and I will call u later and cut the call

Jalal shout : Jo

Otherside

Jodha sitting in bench alone and starring at sky

Janumaa sit next to Jodha and carrying Jodha hairs.Jodha placed her head on maa lap

Jodha tears flowing in her eyes and maa seeing her state , her eyes also moist

Jodha: Maa why papa slapped me with sobbing voice

Maa: Jodha beta

Jodha: I did anything wrong maa with crying face

Rajaram hearing everything

Rajaram closed his eyes with mind thought: My daughter never do any wrong thing but i don't want lose u.iam sry my princess, its good for u with heavy hearted.

***

Next morning

Dadi: Adbul where is Jodha parent staying

Abdul: Asad farm house

Dadi: What Asad farm house and tell me everything Abdul with hard voice

Abdul narrated everything except Akdha marriage

Dadi: u people remember, iam still alive with angry voice

Abdul: Sry Abdul

Dadi: Iam going to see Jodha parents

Abdul: Iam also come with u

Dadi: No need with hard voice

Abdul went out to Asad farmhouse

Dadi informed Jalal that Abdul went to Asad farm house

Jalal:ok Abdul, Iam also going to Asad farm house

***

Rajaram sitting in garden bench and Dadi car enter farmhouse and seeing Rajaram in garden

Dadi reached Rajaram place

Dadi: Beta

Rajaram look at Dadi: why u come here, I don't want talk anything with u

Dadi: Beta try to understand , Jalal and Jodha love each other.Jodha not happy without Jalal

Rajaram sad smiled: I don't know my daughter happy or not without Jalal but she will become alive that enough for me.i already lost one soul not anymore

Dadi : I understood why u said this word but that only accident

Rajaram shout: My Pari murdered that not accident.she died beacuse of Mohammed

Dadi shocked : Pari murdered, no it is not true.

Rajaram: It is true .my pari died that only, iam not allow any Mohammed shadow fallen to my daughters

Dadi: Why u punishing Jalal.

Rajaram: If Jalal know about pari.he also said what iam saying.tell me maaji, Jalal know everything about pari

Dadi: No he don't know anything

Jalal:Dadi

Abdul shocked seeing Jalal in farmhouse and also sacred if he heared anything

Jalal not heared anything about both their conversation

Jalal come infront of Rajaram: Uncle plz tell me why u angry with Jodha.u thinking iam not good person and iam not good life partner for ur Jodha

Rajaram: No beta.i know ur good hearted person but

Jalal: but What uncle.u thinking about status,religion. but my Jodha is priceless.

Rajaram: I know my princess is priceless insake only I don't want lose my daughter with straight face

Jalal: Uncle iam not understand and plz tell me clearly

Rajaram: Jalal beta u love Jodha or not

Jalal: She is not only my love , she is my soul

Rajaram: If u want her alive.plz stay away from her with both felded hand infront of jalal

Jalal: uncle

Rajaram: If u love her then say to Jodha , stay away from u and move on her life.

Jalal: Why u did for us and what wrong we did it.

Rajaram: Jalal u didn't wrong anything but u birth in Mohammed .

Jalal: Dadi. What uncle saying

Dadi: Jalal beta , stay away from Jodha and said to her that move on her life.

Jalal: what happened with u. why I stay away from my Jo. I cannt live without her.

Dadi: I said everything for her goodsake only . its is good for her. If u love her truly, .stay away from her.

Jalal: Dadi

Jodha seeing Jalal in garden and running to his Jalal .

Jodha hugs Jalal tightly : I know Jalal u come for me.

Dadi carrying Jodha hairs and Jodha come out from hug. Jalal standing like statue

Dadi: Jodha beta plz forgot everything, move on ur life.

Jodha confused: Dadi, what I need to forgot .

Dadi: forgot Jalal and his love.

Jodha: Dadi,u think I will forgot my Jalal. He is my jaan Dadi. I cannt imagine single minute without him.

Jodha look at Jalal: Jalal why u silent. Ask to Dadi why she said I forget u

Jalal closed his eyes: stay away from me ,Jodha

Jodha grabbed his shirt collar: what u said iam not hear anything ,look my eyes and then say once again

Jalal look at her moist almond eyes and Jodha eyes saying Jalal u said not truth right.

Jalal cupped her cheeks: Jodha

Rajaram look to Jalal face gestured say to Jodha and Jalal nods his head

Jalal: Jodha ,stay away from me with moist eyes

Jodha: Jalal u really saying or doing any drama. Don't do this type of prank. I cannot tolerate .it really killing me with tears flowing in her eyes

Jalal: this is not drama Jodha. What uncle will saying u, u will do. Plz move on ur life and went out immediately

Jodha shout: Jalal and running to her room with crying face

Dadi: Rajaram beta now ur happy. U breaked both pure heart. U think both will become happy. They will never with taunting tone and went behind Jalal

Rajaram : i everything did it for my child safety with moist eyes

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Jalal room

Jalal break everything and his room became horrible state.

Jodha : Jalal why u did ur room mess with smiling face

Jalal smiled went to Jodha but she vanished in air.

Jalal seeing his white kurti and remember Jodha moments

Flashback start

Jodha room

Jodha in washroom and Jalal enter Jodha room as his eyes searching Jodha.

Jodha opened bathroom door lightly and scanning anyone here

Jalal: Jo

Jodha: what r doing here

Jalal: iam coming to see u

Jodha: Jalal get out my room

Jalal: why

Jodha: I forgot bring my dress and my dress in bed so plz go out I need to change dress.

Jalal smirked face: no problem Jo, I will give ur dress

Jodha: ok give me .and only her hand show to Jalal

Jalal remove his kurti and give to Jodha

Jodha closed the door and seeing Jalal kurti

Jodha : this is not my dress. Give my dress

Jalal: if u wears my dress otherwise don't come out bathroom.iam not going anywhwere

Jodha no choice and wears come out bathroom with shy face

Jalal hug Jodha back and Jodha blushing

Jodha turned look at Jalal and encircled her hand to his neck

Jalal: Jo this is my dress so bring back to me and he tried to remove his kurti

Jodha: no..Jalal

Door knocked sound and Jodha opened door and Jalal held Jodha waist side

Servant: Jodha didi , Dadi asking u

Jodha: I will come , u can go know

Servant: didi why u wore mens kurti with confused face

Jodha: oh...

Jalal pinched Jodha waist and Jodha shout : haa

Servant: di what happened

Jodha: mosquioto with angry face

Jodha close the door and Jalal removes his grip and went away from her.

Jodha: Jalal iam not leave u

Jalal running and Jodha chasing behind Jalal

Flashback end

Jalal throw out kurti with furstation

Jodha: Jalal see I bring ur food with smiling face

Jalal : Jodha

Once again Jodha vanished in air and Jalal looking everywhere . everside he seeing Jodha .

Jalal shout : Jo

****

Jodha: why Jalal u did for me. First papa slapped me and now u went away from me.

Two men important in my life.one bring me to earth and other one my soul.both broke my heart. Why babaji, why u punished ur child. Plz bababji give me one solution to remove my pain.

Geeet room Outside

Farm house keeper: u placed this pesticides bottle to next room

Other servant: ji kaka

Jodha : pesticides bottle

Jodha went to next room and get pesticides bottle and come back to her room.

Jodha look at Jalal photo : u want that I am stay away from u. so I move away from this world. Ur my world Jalal. Jodha kiss Jalal photo : I love u Jalal. Bye Jalal with teary eyes

Jodha drink pesticides and went to sleep in her bed with Jalal photo. She hugs Jalal photo tightly.

( guys. in emotional time dont take any decision. that decision really wrong one.)

****

Jalal seeing one box in his foot step and bring little box in his hand

Jalal: Jodha, what I did no...I am not go away from my Jodha.she is mine, .Jo I come back to u and placed box in his pant packet

Jalal run out mansion and drives his car forcelly to Asad farm house.

Abdul seeing Jalal went out and understand Jalal is going to farmhouse.

Abdul and Dadi go behind to Jalal

Jalal enter Asad farmhouse shout: Jo

Rajaram: Jalal beta. I already told don't come back to Jodha with polite voice

Jalal not care anything shout: Jodha..Jo.

Abdul and Dadi enter farmhouse and seeing Jalal state.

Dadi: Jalal beta lets go our mansion.

Jalal: Abdul iam not coming anywhere without my Jodha.

Rajaram: she not come with u with angry voice

Jalal gragged Rajaram collar: why u not understand my pain. She is mine. She stay with me only with hard voice

Dadi: Jalal I understand u love her. its not means u have full right with her.

Jalal shout: I have full right with her more than anyone.she is my wife. Everyone hearing she is my wife. We already married.

Everyone shocked and choti shout : jiju ,angel don't open the door.

Jalal run to Jodha room and knock the door

Jalal: Jo open the door.ur Jalal is here.

No response from other side. Everyone scared

Jalal broke the door and Jodha sleeping in bed. Jalal shaking Jodha but she not wake up .

Choti: jiju she have blood in her mouth with shivering voice

Jalal noticed she have blood in her lips as hugging his photo.

Jalal scopped Jodha in his arm and patted her cheeks

Jalal : Jo wake up. Don't play with me ,Dadi see she not look at me with scared face

Abdul: Jalal pickup Jodha in ur arms. We need go to hospital.

Jalal pickup Jodha in his arm and runout and others follow in crying face,

****

Hospital

Jalal placed Jodha in stetcher but not leave her hand. Abdul remove Jalal hand.

Jodha admitted in icu and Jalal teary eyes seeing his soul in icu.

Choti call Asad: bhai with chocked crying voice

Asad: choti why u crying with worried face

Choti: bhai.Jodha di in hospital. She drank poison and narrates everything.plz bhai come to hospital.iam scared with chocked voice

Asad: iam coming with tensed face

*****

Everyone reached hospital know about Jodha in hospital

Zoya, Mir,Salima and Asad one by one reached hospital.

Asad enter hospital and choti run to Asad and hug him tightly.

Choti: bhai, my angel with crying face

Asad carrying her hair: nothing happened our Jodha. She is alright soon with moist eyes

Choti: I need my angel. if anything happened to her , iam not live bhai.

Asad: calm down where is Jalal

Choti show Jalal side and Asad seeing Jalal state

Jalal collapsed in sofa and tears flowing in his eyes.

Dadi touched Jalal shoulder and Jalal looking Abdul face and Rajaram ,janaki next to them with moist eyes

Jalal : if everyone happy right. My Jodha in hospital. I already said everyone. She cannot live without me. Now everyone snatched my happiness away from me.

Dadi: Jalal beta

Jalal hugs Dadi and crying like baby

Jalal: why she take this decision. She think I live without her with really broken voice

Zoya and Mir come to hospital

Zoya hugs Salima and choti tears flowing in their eyes.

Asad tried console janaki maa and Jalal sitting like lifeless body.

PART END


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🤣CHAPTER 23


Hospital

Everyone remember Jodha moments with them.specially Jalal breakdown or shattered looking Jodha in icu.

Jalal walking in hospital like lifeless body but his thinking fully Jo only his jaan.in mind only one scene rolling to his jaan in serious condition.if something happen to her , then what he will do next.definitely he will not alive without her.

Jalal: Why Jodha ,I never imagined in my lifetime with u , why u taken this type of decision.

Jalal bumped someone and little box fell down from his packet. Jalal open little box.

Flashback start

Jodha: Hey babaji. Why u give me stupid husband , I miss him so much.this days he stayed in mansion and he not allow me away from him .now he went to office.he forgot his wife no no beautiful & brilliant wife with proudly and pout face

Jalal hearing her complaint about him with her babaji.

Jalal hugs Jodha with smiling face and Jodha with fake angry face.

Jalal: Jo I missed u so much

Jodha: Don't lie , I know u never missed me whenever u stayed in ur second wife .u never miss me

Jalal turn Jodha with little angry face: Jo I have only one wife.

Jodha smiled and pinched his both cheeks.

Jodha: Ha i said truth .u have second wife.

Jalal: Jo, u r my wife.ur only my wife with pout face.

Jodha: Then what about ur office, business.I think iam wrong.i am ur second wife not ur business.

Jalal chuckled face: Now understood my Jo missed me so much with tried to hug her and Jodha push him

Jodha: Don't try manofiy me.i waited for ur single call but u not call me.u have no time spent with single call. u entered in ur office.u never remember me.how many time I called u but u not pickup my call with angry face.

Jalal: Long back I went to office.full day I have meeting with our foreign clients.

Jodha: I already changed ur every appointment with foreign client.then why u have meeting today with doubting face

Jalal: Oh...with stammering voice.

Jodha: Iam waiting with bossy tone

Jalal: I only changed my appointment with clients.u know it is very important meeting.if it rescheduled it is not good.

Jodha: So u not consider my decision.ok today onwards u will do what u thinking with hurt face & went to sit her bed.

Jalal kneel down in front of her and held both ears through his index and thumb

Jalal: Sry Jo.i know I did it it wrong but it is important for our company.

Jodha: But ur health more important for me. few days before only u came back to hospital but u never take care for ur health.

Jalal touch his forehead : Haaa..

Jodha : What happens Jalal with worried face

Jalal: Headache Jo ( acting )

Jalal placed his head in Jodha lap and Jodha caring his hairs softly.

Jodha: I apply oil message .u pain will be reduced with worried face

Jalal: No need oil message.if I place my head in ur lap that is enough to reduce my pain with puppy face

Jodha kiss his forehead: Now ok , ur pain reduced.

Jalal smirked: Jo, I have headache u kissed my forehead and if have pain in my lips.what will u do

Jodha : I kiss ur li...( stop realised and looking Jalal with blushing face and Jalal reply to naughty look)

Jalal: Ha finish ur sentence Jo with naughty face.

Jodha blushed: Jalal..

Jalal wake up in her lap and hold Jodha hand: In ur blushing face I will give anything to u.what do u want.till now u not ask me anything.

Jodha placed her head to his shoulder: U already give ur love that enough for me.

Jalal: No Jo plz ...with puppy face.

Jodha: Hmm I need toes rings Jalal.

Jalal: Toes ring but I thought u ask me big gift from me like bungalow or our honeymoon trip with naughty face.

Gee blushing face: Definitely we will go our honeymoon.but now I need my toes ring from u.

Jalal: Why toes ring u need it with confused face.

Jodha: In our south side every married women wore toes ring in their foot fingers.it is symbol of good sign for married women

Jalal: But married women only wore , why u want wore with teasing face.

Jodha angry face: Jalal, u forgot we already married, iam ur wife.

Jalal: in angry face also ur so cute

Jodha: Jalal Mohammed khan ,u teasing me .iam not leave u.

Jalal come out of flashback and seeing toes ring in his hand.

Doctor come out to icu and everyone with worried face looking to doctor.

Doctor:she is unconsious..next morning only know that poison affect her brain or not.if she conscious before morning and she will become normal otherwise she will go to coma state.( sry iam not doctor )

Jalal: Nothing happened to my Jo.u got my word with angry high pitch tone

Jalal enter icu: Shout everyone go out.

Jalal: Jo wake up, u played with me so much not anymore.see I bought ur gift.Jalal kneel down in front of Jodha foot. Jalal wore toes ring to her foot fingers and kiss her foot with crying face.

Jalal: plz wake up soon,Jo

Janumaa touch Jalal shoulder and Jalal headup seeing to Janu maa

Jalal: Maa see my Jo not wake up.she not talk with me with crying voice

Janumaa caring his hairs: She not go away from u.she is birth for only for u beta.

***

Outside

Mir: Choti dont cry .nothing happened to our Jodha Bhabhi with moist eyes.

Choti: No Mir i scared.

Zoya:even iam also scared bhai.

Asad: everyone stopped ur crying nothing happened to my sweety.she come back to us.

Zoya mindvoice: Asad why he saying gudiya di to my Sweety.what relationship between Asad and gudiya di.

Choti: bhai why she did it .she know very well.i cannot live without her. She is my angel.

Asad hugs choti: stop ur crying, see mom and papa already broken and we only consoled them.

Choti: but I cannot digest Jodha di decision.

Zoya (mind voice) : bhai,how Asad become to choti bhai.i will ask him later.now I need my gudiya di recover soon.

****

Rajaram: janaki, once again history repeat and I feared thing only happened.

Janaki: ji no one change fate.Jodha birth for Jalal . U feared forgot that we gave promise to our Pari.but their fate not forgot that thing.they already married. Plz don't confuse present life to past life.u thinking about our pari death insake of only ur separate our children life.i understood ur scaring but in ur decision my child become serious condition. don't separate our children.they cannot live without each other with tear eyes.

Rajaram: hmm their fate not leave them.i don't want to separated them but i feared about her life.if something happen to her like our pari happened

Janaki:plz trust god ,he will make everthing good.

******

Later few hours

Doctor: she alright now and but she depressed condition.dont give any stress .and give liquid food only. ... doctor left to cabin

Jalal enter room and others waiting outside. Everyone know Jalal need her mostly than them

Jalal sit next to bed and hold her hand : Jo

Jodha open her eyes with emotionless face looking Jalal.

Jodha sitting in bed and remove her hand from his grip: what r doing in hospital, mr Mohammed with taunting tone.

Jalal: don't talk much ,that is not good for health with caring voice

Jodha: good what good u talked about.if I die that good for me.why u save me.i want to die.i want to free from my pain.noone with me.u want go away from u na, if I die or alive whats ur problem.

Jalal already control his angry because consider her health condition but she once again think about to die .now his controlled vanished in air.poor Jodha...

Jalal grabbed her hand harshly: what u said ,u want to die.u thinking ur life only for u.that is mine.ur life is mine.ur not away from me.even ur babaji not separated from me. Ur not my sherni ,my sherni is brave.she against wrong thing.but ur braveless person.even ur not my Jo.my Jo never take this type of decision.she know very well her Jalal not alive without her. u only saw ur Jalal not JMK that only u taken brave decision right.this minutes itself u face Akbar not ur Jalal.obviously yesterday u killed ur Jalal . u remind my word mrs Jodha Jalal Mohammed khan with angry & Painful voice & went out quickly

Jodha eyes rolling in her tears and Dadi hug Jodha .

Dadi: Plz don't angry with Jalal.he said everything because of us.he lost precious things in his life.u only his happiness.he don't want lose u beta.

Dadi kissed Jodha forehead .

Jodha mind : Iam sry Jalal and I am angry with u like stupid.

*****

Choti: Bhai give juice to Jodha di

Jodha: Choti...

Choti: Bhai I said give to her with angry face.

Asad get juice from choti hand and give to Jodha but Jodha denied

Jodha:choti talk with me..plz baby with pleasing tone

Choti side hug to Asad: Bhai said her, iam noone to her.i thought she is my soul but she not consider me as iam her sister ,why I talk with her.if one sec think about me..she never taken this decision.she is not my angel.she is not angel with crying face

Jodha bring down to bed and tried to stand but her weakness not help her..she hit to ground before choti hold her.

Choti: What do u want .everytime u want to hurt me with shout voice

Jodha hug choti tightly: Sry bachaa.plz forgive ur angel with moist eyes.

Choti hug more tightly: Ur my angel di, I will die without u.dont talk with me.

Zoya , Mir, Salima and everyone angry with Jodha but her single puppy face enough melted their heart except Jalal.

After 2 days. Jodha come back to Asad farrmhouse..everytime Jalal with her but he not look at her face.

Jodha: Jalal ..with painful voice.

Jalal: Dadi ...i have important meeting and I need go now and Jalal went out

Jodha pout face: He showing his attitude.i tried to talk with him.but he not look at my face.

Janumaa: Jodha beta , he love u so much.give him some more time.he anger vanish soon.

Mir: Maa , Jalal bhai anger never vanish soon

Jodha nods her head as accept mir comment and other side Jalal not controlled his anger.he hurt himself through his martial arts.

Dadi: Jalal beta, talk with Jodha.she need u.

Jalal went out without reply Dadi word.

*****

Orphanage

Janumaa,Salima , choti and Asad come to Orphanage to donate money .

Asad : maa,u go inside, I will come later

Janumaa: come soon

Janumaa,Salima and choti went inside and standing in reception place.

Lady touched choti shoulder and choti turned look at lady

Lady: beta u alright now.why u fainted in mall after saw me with worried voice

Choti hand shivering and janu maa noticed choti body shivering seeing that lady

lady: beta what happened why shivering

Janumaa:

Dilshad: ji meri naam Dilshad ( Asad's mom)

Janumaa shocked hearing name and understood why choti scared: oh ji we need go now with fear face

Choti hold janumaa hand tightly:maa with stammering voice

Asad: maa

Dilshad and janumaa turned seeing Asad.

Choti run to hug Asad tightly and sobbing in his shoulder

Asad rubbing choti back: Sam,kiddo, don't cry my bachaa.

Dilshad tears flowing in her eyes: Asad beta,she is my..

Asad show his hand to gesture stop: she is not urs with angry face. janumaa come with me .i will drop to everyone.

Janumaa caring choti hairs: choti chello beta

Dilshad: Samira beta with moist eyes.iam ur maa with painful voice

Janumaa: no Dilshad ji ,she is my daughter and mine only ..with anger and moist eyes.

Dilshad: no ..plz try u understand.

Janumaa: enough ji choti come beta...dragged choti hand and went outside.

Asad: plz stay away from my sister. she is very happy in that heaven.plz don't try to shatter her happiness.

Dilshad: Asad,she is my daughter,how I think worse to my child with painful voice

Asad:today u remember she is ur daughter.that consent where went that day. in her childhood,ur husband throw out in her own house..no no u people only joined her in orphanage with taunting tone. U know what she faced in that orphanage. That time my Jodha and her family not saved her otherwise she die that hell.u never against ur husband word that sake only u forgot ur children happiness.ur good wife but not good mother. My princess faced more problem because of u and ur husband.u know what meaning of mother.

everyone said there is no one substitute of mother place. if woman give birth to child.she is not mother.whose woman take care of that child,happiness,caring even that woman sacrifice her life to her child safety.she is mother. my janumaa is my princess mother.my janumaa give love to my princess more than her own daughter.my Jodha is really angel to my princess.she share her mother love to my choti.my princess got wonderful maa,sister and father. in her childhood ur husband never spend single minute to with my princess.because she is girl chlld.but she got father love in their place.

Asad both hand folded in front of his maa: plz don't come behind my princess.

( next part , I will reveal why choti own parents joined her to orphan and how Jodha saved her in that hell)

*****

Mir : Jodha bhabhi u not tell me u already married with bhai. With fake angry face

Jodha: sry Mir

Zoya: everyone want u become Jalal bhai s wife .we planned more thing to close with u and Jalal bhai but u people fooled everyone ..u both already married.we missed seeing our Jalal bhai marriage

Dadi:Abdul told me everything about how Jalal married to u.so I think we will arrange proper wedding for Jalal and Jodha marriage.

Jodha: Dadi,Jalal already angry with me with pout face even he not talk with me with moist eyes.

Dadi: leave it khadoos Mohammed.he will come back to u..

Mir : exculsive videos anyone want to see ...

Zoya: what video bhai.

Mir connected his phone to laptop: hospital videos.

Dadi: how u got this videos

Mir: Abdul bhai said collect every hospital footage videos and if videos leaked to any media,we faced more problem.today morning I collected every footage

Jodha watching Jalal shattered,cried because of her and Jodha eyes tears flowing in her cheeks..

Jodha hearing Jalal voice outside.

OUTSIDE

Jodha run out outside and hug Jalal tightly...

Jodha: Jalal ,iam sry..plz forgive me

CHAPTER END😉


PART 17,18,19,20- pg 92

PRECAP:

jalal showing angry to jo and jo pout face look at everyone😛

Rajaram: Jodha not stay in mohammed manison😲

Jalal jealous 😆

someone try molest to choti

Asad hell angry with his parents why..🤔

Akdha ahem ahem☺️

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