Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 54

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Originally posted by: orion23

@Cap Smiling you should be!

And bharosa hai bro, kaafi...

Tu bhi kar le thoda, khud pe😃

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

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Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much hon!!

zoyi... 🤗
kaise ho...
read all three updates in.one go..
like always marvelous and amazing.. 👏
titles aww beautiful.. 👏

Eric ..aww poor guy but finally.he is better.now..
he is such a sweet heart like pushkar.. 😃

Eric shra and amanda..love the trio...

shra and Amanda on prom and now sumo knows this..cant wait 😆

ramnath and nimmo..first time ramnath ki Sari baartein achi lgi.mujhe..divorce ..poor shra will be heartbroken..

sumo and shra convo..

shra's surprise plan for sumo and pushkar.so.cute..😳

most important things diary and shyari seriously that was awesome.. 👏

loved all updates... ❤️

loads of hugs and love.. 🤗

Shravan & Eric scene was nice bromance. All they landed in swimming pool & Shravan's excuse how they landed in water was funny. Sumo topped that's great actually all credit goes to Shravan. Surprise party from Shravan through Pushkar was worth watching. Sumo was very happy like a small child after seeing jhula and all.

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

zoyi... 🤗

Ranju🤗
kaise ho...

Chal raha hai...
read all three updates in.one go..

Arey wah!
like always marvelous and amazing.. 👏

Thank you ya!
titles aww beautiful.. 👏
Shukriya...
Eric ..aww poor guy but finally.he is better.now..
he is such a sweet heart like pushkar.. 😃

I agree!
Eric shra and amanda..love the trio...
Yeyyy...
shra and Amanda on prom and now sumo knows this..cant wait 😆
Hahaha...
ramnath and nimmo..first time ramnath ki Sari baartein achi lgi.mujhe..divorce ..poor shra will be heartbroken..
We shall see...
sumo and shra convo..
Love❤️
shra's surprise plan for sumo and pushkar.so.cute..😳
Haina!
most important things diary and shyari seriously that was awesome.. 👏
Shukriya!
loved all updates... ❤️
I'm glad you liked them😃
loads of hugs and love.. 🤗

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shravan & Eric scene was nice bromance.

Thank you!

All they landed in swimming pool & Shravan's excuse how they landed in water was funny.

:D

Sumo topped that's great actually all credit goes to Shravan. Surprise party from Shravan through Pushkar was worth watching. Sumo was very happy like a small child after seeing jhula and all.

She deserved happiness...

Wow Sumo feeling jealous after watxhing video of Amanda & Shravan. Shravan ko zaroor galiyan milne wali hai once he wake from sleep. Sumo is not going to be sleep all night think about video.

We shall see about that😆

I m sorry I m very very late

That's alright hon.. No issues...

I know next chap also updated let me read then I comment again

Sure!!!

Thanks for PM Zoya

You're welcome...

Vinu

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Zo 🤗
Lehja ❤️
Poor Shravan he is loaded with lots of assignments and sumo must be thinking he is busy with Amanda 😕
Now he broke his arm too ...that would lead to more misunderstandings
Amanda ne sumo ka phone uthaya




Jealous or not , Sumo was too rude .
I'm happy Shravan gave her back .
The chess part is my fav one from this update .
It's shows your depth and maturity
Beautifully penned 👏
Nanu is such a darling ❤️
Sumo is now dying in guilt ..good for her . The girl doesn't have a filter in her mouth.
Awesome one 👏 👏 👏
Loved It and love you...you know that?
Take care Zo 🤗

My spot

Finally unress.
Ohhh title is so good.
Green monster is slowly engulfing Sumo.I just love Sumo not because she is hurting Shravan but she is so realistic here.She was rude which is definitely a bad thing but aren't we all at some point of time.And off course she is born without a filter on her mouth,there is absolutely no wall between her brain and mouth.What she thinks she speaks

Poor Shravan ,ek to assignments ka maara and now broken arm too and that will unknowingly fuel Sumo's green monster more.Amanda and Eric are so cute.And that Hindi part🤣.I can just imagine that.

And Nanu is such a darling.Haan.

Beautiful update Zoi.This story is so meaningful and just wow.