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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_


Thanks a lot dear!
For now Vivaan himself is confused about those eyes.
What do want? Will it be ok if Chakor hugged Suraj or not? According to the story?

Glad you loved it!

Love you too dear! Take care!

To me i don't want chakor to hug him..
Becoz if she hug him the imvan will do something to make them fall in love..
And also she was thinking him as her boss and her new friend..so how can she hug him..otherwise if he pushed her from tat hug then she will feel embrassed before them..
Its just my opinion di..
Bt whatever u write i just love it..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

To me i don't want chakor to hug him..
Becoz if she hug him the imvan will do something to make them fall in love..
And also she was thinking him as her boss and her new friend..so how can she hug him..otherwise if he pushed her from tat hug then she will feel embrassed before them..
Its just my opinion di..
Bt whatever u write i just love it..

Thanks for replying!
I'm happy that you are trusting me.
I hope I keep that.

I didn't thought about it yet.
May be the 1st hypothesis of your is possible if it happens but the second I don't think as he is battle within himself.

Will try to make the story go with the flow.
See you soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks for replying!
I'm happy that you are trusting me.
I hope I keep that.

I didn't thought about it yet.
May be the 1st hypothesis of your is possible if it happens but the second I don't think as he is battle within himself.

Will try to make the story go with the flow.
See you soon!

K sis..
I m waiting for ur update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Since I have followed TTW from the starting,so I'll not wait for it to be finished...😳
Read the last three parts in one go...
Omg...Suraj's imagination was sooo romantic,only he can think this way...😉
Why did it had to be an imagination...😒


I am really liking Suraj's battle between mind and heart...its so funny,waiting for the moment the heart will emerge victorious😎


I missed Suraj in the evening game,but we are going to get a Sukor hug in the next part...
I will be waiting for it just for Suraj's reaction...😃


Nice update Maithu👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KUTUR

Since I have followed TTW from the starting,so I'll not wait for it to be finished...😳

Read the last three parts in one go...
Omg...Suraj's imagination was sooo romantic,only he can think this way...😉
Why did it had to be an imagination...😒


I am really liking Suraj's battle between mind and heart...its so funny,waiting for the moment the heart will emerge victorious😎


I missed Suraj in the evening game,but we are going to get a Sukor hug in the next part...
I will be waiting for it just for Suraj's reaction...😃


Nice update Maithu👍🏼


I'm really happy to see you back on the TTW post!

Agree with you!
Only Suraj has the power to make his imagination feel like real.

Glad you are liking the battle.
And the battle will continue for a long time depending on Chakor.

The thing is I didn't want Suraj to be present in the evening game, so the story could be a bit interesting.

Thanks a lot dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_


I'm really happy to see you back on the TTW post!

Agree with you!
Only Suraj has the power to make his imagination feel like real.

Glad you are liking the battle.
And the battle will continue for a long time depending on Chakor.

The thing is I didn't want Suraj to be present in the evening game, so the story could be a bit interesting.

Thanks a lot dear!


I want the battle to continue...😉

Its good that Suraj wasn't present in the evening game,had he been present then,we wouldn't had got to see Chakor's dare...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KUTUR


I want the battle to continue...😉

Its good that Suraj wasn't present in the evening game,had he been present then,we wouldn't had got to see Chakor's dare...😛


Yep! Suraj would have given something easy for her!
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello,

As I couldn't get to you all with EMI, I came back with a new part of TTW!

Hope you all like it!

Link to previous part: Part 12 : Evening Game

Happy reading!

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Part 13 : Hug


"Suraj" Chakor whispered seeing the person getting out of the car but Imli and Vivaan heard and smiled at her thinking that the hug is just going to be a friendly hug.

Suraj turning towards Chakor's Block to see the trio with different different expressions.

Chakor climbed down from her block made her way towards Suraj thinking 'Never I will stop from doing what I said. And here it's hug! Hugging a person who is in the position of my boss is wrong but hugging a friend isn't a big deal.
Is he going to think wrong? Have to tell him it's a dare.'

'Why our siblings are watching the scenario as if watching a film? Chakor! What is she doing?' asked his mind.
'Coming to Welcome you! Smile.'
'May be to taunt you as a friend for being late.'
'No taunting, only '
The battle came to an end as they both were just a step distance away from eachother.

"What do you think about a friendly hug?" She asked.
'Hug! Wow! Are we getting one!' his heart.
'Just a friendly hug! So nothing wrong in it when your perverted mind doesn't intervene.'
"Just to show affection between two friends and" he didn't even finish when he felt her hands around his form and her head press against his chest and not shoulder due to hight differences.

'Lucky us!' his heart.
'She said it's a friendly hug. Remember!'

Suraj didn't react, he didn't know he should reciprocate the hug or not.

"It's a dare!" She said as she broke the small hug they shared.
'I will never play truth or dare in my life! And especially with siblings.' she thought.

'Dare?'
'You heard her right Mr. Teenager!' his mind mocked his heart.
'I just started building my castle!'
'Castle in water aren't strong.'

"Okay!" He said as he saw her move away from him.

'What am I thinking?
It's all Papa's fault!
He only put all this inside my head.' he told himself as his mind intervened 'Don't blame you father for your hormonal problems!'

"Bro! We waited for you but why were you taking all these time?"
"Went to meet our lawyer over few issues and then he forced me to have dinner!"
"Oh!" Chakor said disappointed.
"Sorry!" lightly pouting as he turned to face Chakor who was on his left "He is my Papa's friend, I can't say no to him!"
"We can understand Suraj bhaiya(brother but sometimes used to call brother-in-law too)." Imli said.
He smiled.
"Will you atleast have kheer?" Chakor asked.

"Sure!" As he moved towards her block, following his brother.

They all made their way inside and settled in hall, except Chakor who went to bring him a small bowl of kheer.

"Mango kheer?" Suraj said tasting it with a smile playing on his lips.
"I told you both that mango kheer is bro's favorite." Vivaan to the sister.
"And I told you that it my Maa's favourite!" Imli said to to her lover before turning to her sister and Chakor nodded as she is the one who knew the likes and dislikes of her parents more than Imli.

Suraj excused himself once again for not being here for dinner and the main discussion started.

"Papa is coming next week end to see you both." Suraj informed to the sisters who were seated side by side opposite to the brothers.
"Was he angry?" Chakor asked.
And the rest of the individuals were not getting what they are discussing while they just started to talk about the matter.
"He wasn't angry but he said he will speak to you and when I explained about their internship, plus staying arrangements, he thinks the same thing as us."

Vivaan getting the queue that it's about them they are speaking and their internship, he asked the first thing his brain thought
"What you two thought about our internship and staying arrangements?"
At this question of his, Imli concentrated on her sister's face to see what answer she is going to give.

"To get you both married!" Suraj exclaimed.
"What?" Imli shreiked while Vivann went in to the thought of why their siblings thought about this solution.
"Do you think that leaving under the same roof when you both aren't married is acceptable?" Chakor asked not understanding why her sister is questioning her when all she could think about is about her little sister's happy life.

"I don't care about what others think Didi, you matter to me more."
"Imlu listen, what they are saying isn't wrong."
"How can I marry before Didi?"
"We already talked about this morning Imli!" Chakor.
"But Di! I"
"Let me first finish." Suraj interrupted the war of words.

All nodded turning their full attention towards him.
"Vivaan and Imli, we, I mean your sister and myself, we discussed about your future. If you both want to do internship, we want you both to shift there as husband and wife and not girlfriend and boyfriend tag." Chakor nodded and added "If our parents were here, they would have done the same thing!"

"Papa too thinks as us and that's why he is coming here!'
'And to ask if Chakor is ready to marry me!' his hear added.
'You don't know when to do comedy!' his mind retorted.

"But Didi"
"Listen Imlu! If you want to go with Vivaan and stay under the same roof, you both have to get married before going there. Else you search an internship here and he can visit you whenever possible!" Chakor.

"Bro! What you answered to Papa when he asked about your marriage?" Vivaan concentrated on his brother's life.
"I never thought about it so I said we can now concentrate on yours as it's the important matter in our hand!"
"And what did he said?"
"Why are you asking these questions?"
"Just to know!"
"Hmmm"

"Didi! I want you to get married before me or along with me! Who is the person on whom you have crush? I will talk to him for you." Imli said with a puppy dog face.
While Suraj looked curiously at Chakor while Chakor was a bit taken aback by her sister's question.

Precap: KN and the sisters.

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Thanks a lot buddies!
Hope you all liked this part!
If you liked their friendly hug hit the LIKE button and COMMENT.

Next part: Part 14 : End of Discussion

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome di..
Chakor hugged him..but wat i thought of imvan was not happened..i m happy..
Loved suraj's war btw mind and heart..
Wat chakor going to say to her sis..wat suraj want to hear from her?
I m just picturizing the image of suraj looking curiously for her ans..it looks very funny..
Want to see more in ur writing for me to picturize them..lol
Eagerly waiting for the next update..
I loved tis part...
Luv u di...
Edited by Sania_suraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update👏
Loved sukor hug, it was not awkward😊
Loved the war within suraj😆
Waiting for chakor's reply to imli's question
Waiting for next

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