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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaya...

Hi sanju...what a pleasant surprise...u r back...and really nice chap..and emotional too...but yaa im enjoying...and welcome back dear...we all missed u


i'm back..i'm back...haha..😆
gaane ka mann kar raha hai
shanayaaa...thankyou dear..😃😃.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb
Aman tried to kill Avni but Neela came in between
I hope she gets fine soon
Aman deserves severe punishment this time
Update soon


thankyou gurveen...glad u liked it...😃
will update shortly..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Haan weekend zyada lambi ho gayi but it's okay
Amol tried to kill Avni
What kind of fool he is
I want him to get punished for his crime
Poor Avni she cannot lose her mother again
Awesome update

haha..
i'm sorry for lambi weekend thing...😳
thankyou zenab...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyashah0110

Oohhhooo looks who is back😉

Welcome back swty...🤗
Nice update..

tanya...🤗
thankyouu😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

thankyouu so much😃
can i know your name?😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Yay u finally updated loved part 9a: omg aman tried to kill avni but neela pushed her away and .. Glad Ali saw it was aman in the car..,damn aman used a gun I hope Newland will be ok...when avni was renembering her moments wit hneela it also made me a little emotional...loved how Neil made avni have some coffee...avneil is not happy with aman and called him amol liked how u did that sanju it actualy shows that avni won't tolerate any injustice be it her own brother and she wants him to get punished...liked how Neil said amol will get punished and avni said before hneela gets conscious. Liked how he hugged her and kissed her forehead before going... Update next part soon really can't wait

preya dear...
thankyou soo much 😃😃
updating soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10

hello guys..sorry if u were expecting #9b...but u guys can imagine what wud have happened right...
so #10 is here...happy read...😊


After a month..
Avni just came back after a meeting .
Bebe: tu aagayi puttar...fresh ho ke neeche aajao...
Avni: ji bebe..
..
..
They all were sitting on the dining table. Avni was waiting for neil...
Bebe: neil kaha hai?
Prakash: pata nahi bebe..kuch bata ya nahi.
Avni: mai call karti hu...
Shweta: woh...aisa hi karta hai..humesha...
Avni's mobile beeped...
Bebe: neil ka hi message hoga..dhek lena..
Neil 8:30 : busy. Will be late...
Avni: busy hai...der hojayega..
Bebe: chalo theek hai...khana shuru karo sab..
~
Shweta: avni...beta utjao...
Avni slowly opened her eyes..
Shweta: yaha sofe pe kyu sogai ?
Avni: woh mom..neil ka wait kar rahi thi...pata nahi chala kab sogai
Shweta: nahi ya na..tillu bhi aisa hi karta hai humesha...ab pata nahi kitne din ke baad ayega..
Avni: din!?
Shweta: who kabi kabi 3-4 din kaam pe hi laga rehta hai..pata nahi kaha chal ja ta hai...
Avni: mai call karke dhekti hu ma..
She called him...but his mobile was switched off...
She waited for 5 mins..then decided to call DD..
DD: hello bhabhi..
Avni: DD..neil ghar nahi aaye...tumhe kuch pata hai kya?
DD: darasal bhabhi...sir ek mission pe hai...aaj subha hi Hyderabad keliye nikle...
Avni: kab wapas aayenge?
DD: pata nahi...par aap fikr matkijiye..
Avni: thankyou DD..
~~
After 5 days...
2:00AM
Avni called him again. His mobile was still switched off.
Avni: neend aane se toh nahi rahi..jake ek coffee hi banaleti hu..
she wasn't able to sleep properly ...since past 5 days shweta spotted her in different places of the house except her bedroom...one day she was on sofa..second day near pool, third day ..study ..other day...a bench on lawn..
avni decided to back to her room so that she'll not have to answer shweta ma next mrng..
walking out of the kitchen she sees a shadow on the wall near stairs. She decides to check. And then she sees her shadow covered by another shadow as she felt someone standing back of her
Avni: neil..
Neil: kaise pata chala
He said hugging her from back..placing his chin on her shoulder...she turned and hugged him back..
~
They were really tired. None of them had proper sleep . Neil crashed onto the bed soon they entered the room...avni pushed neil..
Neil: avni tum aaj uss taraf sojao na..
Avni: nahi..
she pushed him a bit...but h e didn't move...so she lie on top of him as she's too lazy to go to the other side...pulling the comforter over them..he wrapped his arms around her.
...
Bebe:avni kaha hai? .breakfast ke liye nahi ayi?
Shweta: neil aaya hai.. so rahe hai dono abhitak...maine uthaya nahi...
..
2:30PM
Avni was the first one to wakeup...she saw his face once and buried her head on his chest again..she felt great that she pulled the comforter over them last night...they are completely tangled...she felt neil pulling her closer...she looked at him again...he smiled at her...
Avni: good morning
He just kissed top of her nose ...
Avni: get me a big teddy bear ...
Neil: kyu?
Avni: mujeh theek se neend nahi aa rahi thi..aadat padgayi..aise sone ki...
Neil: acha?
avni: umm...
neil: hmm..miss kiya mujeh?
Avni: bilkul nahi...
She said hugging him tight..
Avni: aur tum..
Neil : bilkul nahi..
He replied touching her forehead with his...
And they burst out laughing...
" DIRECT DINNER S KOHI BAHAR AAOGE KYA? they heard shweta scream from the hall..
Avni looked at the wallclock...and her mouth formed a perfect O in shock as she realized the time...
Avni: neil uto...time dekho...
~

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Posted: 8 years ago
It was so cute...loved it .
Shweta Aisi Kyu nhi hai onscreen 😆 I love Shweta in ur random shots...I hope onscreen bhi aisi hi ban jaye
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

It was so cute...loved it .

Shweta Aisi Kyu nhi hai onscreen 😆 I love Shweta in ur random shots...I hope onscreen bhi aisi hi ban jaye

shweta aise nahi hosakti..show mein..
drama kaha se aayega phir?😆
kam se kam...itni jaldi toh nahi hosakti..
thankyou pri😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _SANJU

shweta aise nahi hosakti..show mein..
drama kaha se aayega phir?😆
kam se kam...itni jaldi toh nahi hosakti..
thankyou pri😃

hehehe yeh to hai 😆

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