OS-||Dil Raazi Hai, Par Ishqbaazi Baaki Hai|| - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
I really don't know how you manage to write this awesomely. ..I just lived it...never wanted it to end...
Why don't you consider turning it into an FF...
Loved your story. ..👏
AMRUTHA. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Anika...I am very sorry for this terribly late reply...😭😔

Coming to the OS, it is Fantabulous...👏👍🏼

Shivaay's declaration---("Anika Meri Biwi Hai..! Uski maang mein Maine sindhoor baraha hai...hum dono ne saath sphere liye hai ek doosre ke saatg...uske gale mein mera naam ka mangalsutra hai... Anika Meri Biwi Hai..! She is Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi..!")---- This was awesome...he declared it to the world...😊 I hate Daksh, but good that he came back & made this happen...😉😃

Om's old shayari & the exact meaningful hints to the present situation...that was superb...👍🏼😎

Anika was sad seeing Shivaay in pain, while Shivaay was in pain seeing the sorrowful tears in Anika's eyes...😔 ShivIka are sooo emotionally attached to each other...
Shivaay took Anika to her house...& Khanna like always helped them in getting away from media & OM...😊

ShivIka are both broken & in angst...feeling extremely painful in each other's distress...yet they supported each other so touchingly...😊

Shivaay apologised genuinely & Anika hugged him to ease him pain...🤗

Shivaay revealed to Anika that he never signed those divorce papers...& he also said he accepts that she is his wife & he will never let her go...😊

Anika confessed her feelings to him...but Shivaay said that there is more than love between them...the scene was penned down so nicely, Anika...👏😊

Here comes the funny part..Shivaay thought Anika will through water at him like always..😆

Anika' forehead kiss to Shivaay & again Shivaay remembering Om's words...amazing...😊

Now comes the intense portion...starting from Shivaay back hugging Anika while she came looking for him after changing into light clothes...& those heavy touching words by Anika...she wanting to stand by him always was awesome as well...

Shivaay was irritated that Anika wasn't possessive & Anika made him feel like Dairy Milk chocolate...😛😉

ShivIka's passionate & intense romance started...😳😳
OmRu kabab mein haddi bann gaye...bichare ShivIka apna romance ka mood chhodna padha...😛😉
OmRu the teasing team...koi mauka nhi chhodte ShivIka ko tease karne ka...but again, they r the biggest cupids too...😉
The last scene was soo beautiful...😃😃

Thnkxxx for pm...😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
WOW anni...
what an OS..
literally i am speechless...
so beautiful..
its just...PERFECT👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Wow!!!
This was so emotional turning romantic...
Was crying then suddenly started blushing
& My mom thinks I grew mad once again😉😆

Beautifully written
Plz.keep writing
& Don't forget to pm me wen u update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Annii its so beautiful OS!!! 😃 👏 It made me go "Awww!!!!" Was crying with happiness then again blushing ten again grinning like a fool! 😳 😆 Loved reading it. ❤️

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