Our secret marriage-a shivika story*new* Chapter 2 on pg 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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On a bright day a couple is shown sleeping in the middle of the jungle (guys imagine rumya after marriage scene) and suddenly the boy wakes up and sees a girl beside him and replays all the incidents that took place the other day and shouts
"No no no what have I done"
With the sudden highly pitched voice the girl wakes up and remembers all the about the previous day and says "phail gaya raita what have I done " saying this she looks at the mangalsutra and sindoor .Both turn to each other and shout "No this can't happen"

Well guys I'm writing this new story on shivika and hope you all liked the prologue and I am sorry If I copied anybody's storyline if so please let me know .I will give u the character sketch if u want me to proceed with this .

Thank u for sparing time for reading my story

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey annie. i am sure you must have guessed who it is. good to see you on india forums and i know you will rock it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lolololol

hey annie. i am sure you must have guessed who it is. good to see you on india forums and i know you will rock it..

Hey yaar shalu you found me .Just thought to update it on IF too as it has a good response from Wattpad😊and thanks yaar , don't know how will people respond here*fingers crossed*
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

interesting...waiting for the next update

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is the character Sketch:
Shivaay singh oberoi:A ruthless arrogant businessman and stone hearted for outsiders but for family, he is the great Wall of shivaay singh oberoi.

Omkara &Rudra : same as in the show

Annika :a sweet loving girl who works as a wedding planner at the oberoi's for shitia Shaadi

Tia Kapoor: behind shivaay for revenge but is not so cruel as her sister Svetlana. Married to Dushyant.

Daksh khurana : not entered yet but will be the main person in shivika's lives

All are the same from oberoi family .

Svetlana Kapoor :Tia's evil sister who is just like her mom Mrs Kapoor who forces tia to follow he orders.

So the story starts after Gayatri .murder case and karwa chauth .
Happy reading guys
Bye

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love it ,do continue with your first chapter soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys , thanks for the comments and here's the first chapter
After karwa chauth :

Annika comes to the OM and starts her work while thinking about Tia

suddenly Pinky comes shouting

P:OMM only few days are left for shitia marriage but nobody went to check the venue.

A: pinky aunty today only i will go and check the venue and come

p: but Annika how will u go alones waits[ you all know pinky's english] i will call somebody .

She asks everybody but nobody is ready to come as everybody has work so ab bacha only billu so pinky calls him and asks him to go with anika

S: but mom how can i go [thinks about previous night]i have lots of work

P: no ifs and buts u are going with anika

S: ok mom, come anika

...

Anika's POV

What should i do now pinky aunty told to go with billuji but how can i go after what all happened yesterday , shoul i tell him about Tia ...no no i must collect a proof and only tell him otherwise he wont believe me.

END OF ANNIKAS'S POV

...

Inside the car :

S: anika u were telling something to me yesterday night

A: in mind "phail gaya raita now what to do" ammm...ahhh..vo actually i was talking about the rituals to be done .

S:ohh... okay

A: bach gayi

s: did u say something?

A: no no nothing

Suddenly the car stops

A: what happened ?

S : I will see and come

he checks the car and does not understand anything and our khidikitod anika pours petrol on the car and burns it thinking it as water

S:are u mad , what have u done

A: sorry billuji i thought it was water

S:do u even know what have u done now how will we go back

A: arey billuji helicopter mangwalijiye na

S: anika first of all that's not helicopter its chopperand don't call me billu

A: ha ha same to same

S: chopper bulane ke liye phone chahiye na vo to car me tha [ to call a chopper a phone is needed and phone was in the car

A: HAWWW...my phone is at OM now what will we do in the middle of the highway!!

S: the only thing we can do is walk

A: ha chaliye

They walk and walk and walk and find a place so they decide to ask for help

they go inside and a old man comes and asks

O: beta you both came together

A: ha uncleji actually what happened is ... and starts coughing

old man asks someone to bring two glasses of drink

O: beta have it aur [towards shivaay]tum bhi beta

[guys from now on dialoges will be in hindi]

S:ANNIKA TUM ISSE KAISE PI RAHI HO ..ITS VERY UNHYGENIC

A: arey billuji kuch nahi bahot accha hai dekiye maine bhi pi li

S: PAR ..

A: bahot tadi marte hai na aap ki shivaay singh oberoi kuch bhi kar sakta par ek glass sharbat nahi pi sakta cheee..chee ..chee

S: tum mujhe challange kar rahi ho

A: ji haan pi sakte hai to pijiye

shivaay drinks the whole in one go and says

"dekha mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu"

both of them feel dizzy and act funny and laugh like mad people[yes it was bhaang...u all were thinking right]

A: billuji mujhe do do billuji dikh rahe hai

S: mujhe bhi do do anika dikh rahe hai

and laugh

the old uncle says " beta aap lo kapde badal lijiye "

both say" kapde! humare pas to koi kapde nahi hai"

O: koi baat nahi aap logo ko main de deta hoon ...arey koi hai in dono ko ek ek joda kapde de dena

A: par kapde kyu ?????

O: aap logo ko shaadi nahi karni[ Yes...Both of them get into samuhik vivah]

A&S:shaadi hum dono ki and laugh

they both go and change their dresses

shivaay comes out wearing a stunning sherwani and is waiting for anika

annika appers there wearing red and golden coloured lehenga and is looking beautiful

shivaay is staring at her with mouth open ,anika comes there and says

"billuji muh band kijiye makkhi gus jayegi

S: annika tum bahot khoobsurat lag rahi ho [ she blushes ]

A:aap bhi ekdum khidikitod lag rahe ho

OLD MAN : chalo baccho line mai khade ho jao

A; par kyu ?????

O:app ko shaadi karni hai na to khade ho jao

A: hum jaha khade hote hai wahi se line shuru hoti hai ...haina SSO

O: accha thik hai aao yaha, mandap mein betho

Billu &billi sit on the mandap and take pheras and shivaay ties mangalsutra and fills anika's maang with sindoor

Pandit : aap logo ki shaadi sampan hui

A&S: HUM LOGO KI SHAADI SAMPAN HUI AND LAUGHS

Both come out of the place and walk into the forest then anika says

A:shivaayyy... did we forget something

S: anika u called me by my name

A:aapko bura laga [ with a sad face]

S:nahi to mujhe bahot pasand aya

A:awww aap kitne cute hai by pulling his cheeks

S: par tum bahot sundar ho [she blushes]aur jab blush karti ho na to aur bhi sundar lagti ho and kisses her cheek

A:ye blush kya hota hai ?????

S: blush matlab [pulls her closer ] ye jo tum abhi kar rahi ho

Anika gets out of his hold and says mujhe pakad sakte ho to pakado and runs with Shivaay behind her.

They both get tired and sleep near a tree.

...SO HOW IS THE FIRST PART ..HOPE U ALL LIKED IT.

PLEASE DO COMMENT ,SHARE MY STORY.

BYEE...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri12

Sounds interesting...plz continue

Thanks😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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